Date: 02/25/12 01:10 am Title: No More Waiting
First, if you'd done any better, the gods themselves would've been amazed. Except with your grammar. The smut was amazing, but the grammar... you need to work on your grammar. I'd get a beta reader =) I have one, and she's really helped me with my grammar. I used to be SUUUUUUUUUUPER comma-happy, but she mostly cured me of it ^-^ Anyway, good job so far, and I can't wait to see what Gran does XD I hope she tells Simone and convinces her that it's not that bad... that'd be perfect XD
Date: 10/15/11 07:48 am Title: No More Waiting
this was a good chapter!
i cant wait for the next chapter!
Date: 10/04/11 06:28 pm Title: Dinner-table Secrets
Talking about awkward situations on dinner table? :).
That was fun to read.
Date: 10/04/11 06:21 pm Title: The Slip Up
"Wrestling".... I can see twins doing that a lot, oh yes. XD
Date: 10/02/11 11:24 am Title: Dinner-table Secrets
O_O It's Gran, isn't it?
Date: 10/02/11 10:34 am Title: Dinner-table Secrets
this sound like a really good story!!
an i cant wait tell u post the next chapter!
Date: 10/02/11 02:02 am Title: Dinner-table Secrets
Poor Tomi, but this chapter was funny!I bet Gran knew!
Date: 10/02/11 01:52 am Title: Dinner-table Secrets
i wonder who it is :)
Date: 08/29/11 12:11 pm Title: The Slip Up
soo excited for the next part :)
Author's Response: I'm glad you liked it, thanks for the review. ^^
Date: 08/29/11 04:31 am Title: The Slip Up
What? No. It can't be over so soon, this chapter was just getting real good. Please write more, it was great to read.
Author's Response: Lol had to keep yah guessing. xP I was going to make it a two shot, but I'm thinking of making it a bit longer. I'm glad you like it and thanks for the review.