Date: 02/20/15 12:05 am Title: Fucking, Functions, and Fear
I'm so distracted because Hilf mir fliegen *.* most beautiful TH song ever.
Date: 02/19/15 11:22 pm Title: Bawling, Bathing, and Bewilderment
Okay, this has me so interested already and i am praying that Tom is actually alive and he comes back because otherwise i think Bill is just gonna be so sad he might just die.. :(
Date: 11/07/11 09:07 pm Title: Suffering, Surviving, and Saviors
Hallo!
I do not know much English, perhaps nothing. But your story has caught me, I love Billshido. I write one too, but in THF Spanish. And I think it's worth keep reading even though cust me, lol.
It is very good. You must follow, because I read it.
Greetings and a thousand kisses for you.
Date: 11/02/11 11:26 am Title: The Question
Aww yay :D I had a feeling that was gonna happen! Are you gonna write a sequel?
Author's Response: There will be two sequels "Four Becomes One" and "Another Precious One".
Date: 11/02/11 10:56 am Title: The Flashback, The Future and The Thoroughly Fucked
Yeah, it was kind of predictable but cute nevertheless. Seems Bill was the only one who didn't see that coming. But what will his answer be? Can't wait to find out.
Author's Response: Yeah my Bill is a little bit clueless! Thanks for reviewing and reading!
Date: 11/02/11 12:56 am Title: The Question
Oh my.... will be anxiously waiting for the next update!
Author's Response: I'm almost done with the first chapter of the sequel "Four Becomes One"!
Date: 11/01/11 11:29 pm Title: The Question
Well, I must say yes, it was incredibly obvious what was coming seeing as you asked in the chapter notes "Will Bill say yes?" Not too many questions you would ask both "Was it obvious?" and "Will (blank) say yes"
Nonetheless, it was a nice story. The proposal was a little...typical? And Bill's reaction was a touch over the top, but it got the job done. Well done!! I look forward to seeing the sequel. If it wouldn't be too much trouble, would you mind sending me an email at apri89@comcast.net when you post it? *hugs* Keep up the lovely work!
Author's Response: Yeah I know it was pretty obvious and I guess you've already figured out what "Four Becomes One" will be about, you smart cookie! There's a reason for Bill's over the top reaction which will be revealed in the sequel. Of course I'll e-mail you. I'm almost done with the first chapter. *hugs back* Thank you for all your lovely reviews and reading!
Date: 10/26/11 08:32 am Title: The Flashback, The Future and The Thoroughly Fucked
Can't wait to see how the story is resolved. Please update soon.
Author's Response: Will do!
Date: 10/26/11 03:51 am Title: Quarrel, Qualms and a Quaint Resolution
too childish
Author's Response: To each their own.
Date: 10/25/11 10:19 pm Title: Quarrel, Qualms and a Quaint Resolution
Yes I will be looking forward to the next storied in this series. Please don't make us wait too long for them after this comes to its concusion? *puppy eyes*
I am so mad at Bushido for telling Bill and setting Tom up like that. I really wanted to like Bushido in this...but if this shiz keep up, I'm not going to be able to.
Also, how did the police get involved to detain them, if the fight was in Bushido's house? I can't really see a staff member calling the cops when the Master of the House was involved, and probably in the upper position. After all, he had to be restrained too and is much bigger and muscle-ier than Tom is. If it looked like Bushido was losing, sure, but I doubt it would look like that, know what I mean?
Other than that, and its brevity, I really liked this chapter. Keep up the good work! I can't wait to see more!
Author's Response: I won't make you wait too long! Yeah, but Bushido gets better in the next story. I promise. I'm sorry for not clarifying that but Bushido and Tom got into another fight in the hallway of the hospital. That's where they got arrested for it. Thanks so much for the review!
Date: 10/14/11 10:27 am Title: Revenge and Pleasure All Wrapped Up In Four
Wow. Didn't really see that coming but it was awesome!! Thanks for the update :)
Author's Response: Yay! I surprised you! Thanks for the review!
Date: 10/14/11 04:51 am Title: The Flashback, The Future and The Thoroughly Fucked
Another awesome chapter. It was great that Tom got his own back on David, a bit yuk that he raped him but I guess that's payback. I wonder what will happen when Bill finds out they're keeping David locked in the cellar. The foursome was so hot,and I love that Tom gets turned on by Bill and Andi being together (who wouldn't?). And now Bushido is all jealous again, and how the hell will Tom react when he proposes to Bill? My fave line was "Bushido is my Master and protector, Tomi is my brother and my other half, and you are my sweetheart.” So cute. Really looking forward to your next chapter.
Author's Response: Something else will come up about that rape but I can't say too much or I'll spoil the next chapter! I love that line too! It was one of my favorites to write! Thanks so much. The next chapter will be up soon!
Date: 10/13/11 11:25 pm Title: Revenge and Pleasure All Wrapped Up In Four
uh, the gren eyed monster is rearing its ugly head again...Keep up the wonderful work! I'm looking forward to seeing more!
Author's Response: Why yes it is! I told you it would happen! Thank you so much for the review and the compliments!
Date: 10/10/11 10:50 am Title: The Flashback, The Future and The Thoroughly Fucked
That was hot and sweet. Great sex but also so much love and tenderness. Now I'm wondering how Tom's feeling and what he's going to do next.
Date: 10/09/11 07:05 pm Title: Dressing up for the Down and Dirty
mmhhmmm....four orgasms, each? Really? I think BU might be getting a bit old for that don't you?...but either way. This was a really nice chapter. I look forward to seeing more soon!
Author's Response: Yeah I know but this is my fantasy world so =P at age and the human body!
Date: 10/01/11 11:45 pm Title: Give Me Therapy
Oh boys *huggles*
Such sad events in this chapter. And also with stupid DAs and shit. You can't make someone talk if they don't want to, and holding someone in prison for contempt of court, who is a victim, makes you look like the asshole.
But oh my gosh, so cute the mental twin talk. I love it so much. Can't get ebough of it.
Wonderful chapter. Keep up the good work! Can't wait for more!
Date: 09/30/11 09:34 pm Title: Give Me Therapy
Wow that was heart wrenching, beautiful chapter. Where is Bushido?
Author's Response: He's coming up in the next chapter. We'll find out where he's been.
Date: 09/27/11 09:54 am Title: Bawling, Bathing, and Bewilderment
comment1: 'headboy'? wtf?
comment2: if he only spanks them he must have all but ripped the boys ass off by the sounds of how much blood there was.
comment3:“Now let's get you out of that clothing! It's awful. Did the people you used to be with have any style?” i dont know weather to laugh or be angry at this- 'style' was the least of bills worries at his old house.
comment4: their in the tub together?
comment5: aaaaand andis talking about scented shampoos... bill has to be thinking 'this guy is nuts!' lol
comment6:"“We've had some pretty epic tickle wars around here." this made me laugh. How old is bill? Cause andi sounds like he's about 6 or 12
comment9:iv actually herd of an enema and have no clue what it is... im too scared to Google it.
comment10:"“Come here, little one” Bushido called crooking his finger." this made me smile- which is pretty bad seeing how i have a feeling something not good is about to happen...i have a sick head.
comment11:"“Don't be afraid to look at me ever. " awwww this seems really sweet
comment12:"I'm going to mark you tonight.' aaaaand that would be the bad thing i knew was going to happen lol
Author's Response: 1) It just means he's in charge of all the boys basically. He looks after everyone. 2) Where are you getting blood? Canes don't always inflict bloody wounds if wielded correctly. 3) Andi was trying to lighten the mood. 4) Yes, they are. 5) I think Bill is too shocked. He's spent 5 years in hell with an inability to make decisions. I know that when you are freed from that kind of slavery any choice you are given once out is a huge thing. 6) Andi is like 16 and Bill is about 19. Andi just seems childish now because his childhood was taken away at a very young age. His parents were killed and he is now stuck in a childish manner. He'll grow up in future chapters. 9) Ememas really aren't scary. It's just water sometimes soapy inserted into the rectum. It washes your colon and body out. It does hurt a little bit, but you feel so much better after. 10) Nope something good is going to happen. 12) No, it's not a bad thing. Bushido gives Bill a choice, remember? Bill chooses to be marked. And it's not a painful mark or anything. It's just a hickey.
Date: 09/26/11 12:36 pm Title: The Flashback, The Future and The Thoroughly Fucked
WARNING:I do comments instead of 'reviews'. They tend to be rather long, so if they bother you tell me and ill stop...
comment1:"kicking, biting, and punching until he connected with his captor’s precious jewels." It toke me reading this twice to figure out what you meant- at first i thought he had like robbed a jewelry store or something...silly me
comment2:OH GOD...did they kill tom?
comment3: -chokes- their all NAKED?! good grief- its like land ofthe flies or something(which is a really boring story about a bunch or underage boys that crash on an island and just run around naked if you dont know)
comment4: marco?
comment5:did her kill him while he was sleeping with him..? im so confused over here! lol
comment6: i think i may be able to guess who this person is...!- the one that wants to buy bill i mean. lets see if im right or not.
comment7:"The other man was the opposite; he was tall with dark skin and a large tattoo on the side of his neck. With one look Bill knew this man was bad news." (whispers smug like") called it...
comment8:“Don’t make me remind you why you own me David.”...?
comment9:ok- this just went from 10 to 100 in the blink of an eye...poor bill must be traumatized.
comment10:awwww he did kill poor tom ='(
comment11: again 'poor bill' 0_o
Author's Response: I don't mind your reviews at all! Here's my answer to your comments: 1) Sorry if that was kind of confusing. 2) Read on to find out! 3)I really hope this isn't as boring as Lord of the Flies! 4) Polo! 5) Keep reading to help your confusion! 6) & 7) Yup you were right! 8) That was a typo. I meant "I own you". 9) Yeah I did that on purpose 10) Keep reading! 11) Yeah there's a lot of poor Bill in this story!
Date: 09/24/11 12:11 pm Title: Suffering, Surviving, and Saviors
I'm still here :)
I feel conbfused of how I should feel: like about what the twins are going through at David's place (because it's kind of hot *blush*) or fgeel disgusted, because I feel both.
Anyway, surprise turn again there. Well, well, where this will lead?
P.s. I could use some sex between twins and Kay. Just saying. :P
Author's Response: I'm happy you're still here! It means so much to me. I was hoping to confuse someone with this chapter so mission accomplished! You'll see where this chapter leads in the next chapter! No sex between the twins and Kay unfortunately, but there will be a side story about Kay and someone.