Date: 09/23/11 08:04 am Title: Suffering, Surviving, and Saviors
Hey, I'm so sorry for not writting a review earlier. I should have. But I'm somehow not in review-mode. So I do read this story and you write as good as ever. And I hope the banner shows you I really care about the story even if I'm not writing an extra long review. Thanks for writing
Author's Response: It's okay. I know you care because of your totally awesome banner! Thanks for the review though. I love Teresa reviews even if they aren't super long!
Date: 09/23/11 05:26 am Title: The Flashback, The Future and The Thoroughly Fucked
What a horrible start to the chapter, but so lovely with how protctive Tom was. But then the amazing ending...Bushido arranging their rescue. Safe at last...I hope for good, although I don't want your story to end.
Author's Response: This story won't be ending any time soon. I'm in this for the long haul, but updates might be slow because I'm in school.
Date: 09/22/11 10:22 pm Title: Suffering, Surviving, and Saviors
Yay!!! *flutter claps, does happy jig and sings* He sent someone to saaaave them he sent someone to saaaave them!! I hope that gunshot was at David the bastard.
Good chapter, but you did make a small mistake, You had a bold One Month Later, and then shortly after it you said something like "after months of hearing it Bill was finally starting to believe it". You should probably change it to "after weeks of hearing it" or something. Other thsn that, very nice work. I look forward to seeing more.
Author's Response: Yup he did! And I'm so happy you liked it! *flutter claps too* I just noticed that mistake! Thanks for pointing it out.
Date: 09/22/11 06:00 pm Title: Suffering, Surviving, and Saviors
Aw this was sweet, I really can't wait for more :3
Author's Response: More is on the way!
Date: 09/22/11 05:34 pm Title: Suffering, Surviving, and Saviors
there safe!!! :DDD cant wait to see what happens next
Author's Response: Yes. . .for now!
Date: 09/21/11 05:42 pm Title: Fire
Woah, that was unexpected. Interesting to see where this leads.
Author's Response: Yay for unexpectedness!
Date: 09/16/11 03:12 pm Title: Visits, Victims, and Violation
*gasp*
Bu-but *wibbles* Bushido gives them a choice, and he doesn't rent them out...does he?...
Oh my damn. This was a heart pounding chapter. I hope Bushido does rescue them.
*chews nails* Oh god *moans* whats gonna happen? Are they gonna be ok? I hope they're gonna be ok. They gotta be okay.
I really hope you update soon. Keep up the amazing work!
Author's Response: The answer to your questions will be answered in the next chapter. I'm so happy you liked it! I'll try to keep up the good work! Thanks for the review!
Date: 09/16/11 11:42 am Title: The Flashback, The Future and The Thoroughly Fucked
OMG! David is so evil. And now he has Tom as well. I'm really hoping Bushido will come riding to the rescue and kick David's arse so hard. But maybe as he's jealous of Tom he'd just rescue Bill and leave Tom there. And what will poor Simone do when she finds out both her babies have been kidnapped...damn! A really good chapter. Can't wait for the next one.
Author's Response: Yup, he's an evil little jerk! You'll have to wait to see who comes to rescue the twins. Will it be the cops or will it be Bu exacting his own revenge? Bill would never let Tom stay there even if Bu didn't want to take him. Hang on tight for the next chapter!
Date: 09/13/11 07:50 pm Title: Fire
I've really enjoyed reading your story. It's full of action and emotion. Looking forward to updates.
Author's Response: Aaww thank you so much!
Date: 09/13/11 06:42 pm Title: Fire
Ah hell!! Bu don't like this haha. Thanks for the update can't wait more :)
Author's Response: Not one bit! More is on the way!
Date: 09/13/11 06:04 pm Title: Fire
Uh-oh, the grren eyed monster is rearing its ugly head.
This chapter was very deceptive. Incredibly important, despite it being so short.
Ican't believe Simone would try to burn the house down to kill herself, with Tom in it no less. That is one very broken and effed up woman. I hope they get her the help she obviously needs...and that she realizes sahe needs it (cuz therapy dn't work unless you want to get better)
Adorable twin time moment! We should've gotten a warning for that. I love when they talk to eachother without saying anything. Its great.
This was really good. I feel like we might actually be getting somewhere now. Keep up the great work! I can't wait to see more!
Author's Response: Yes it is!rn
rnYeah I know. It's my favorite one yet!rn
rnYeah well she's been through a lot. In my mind she didn't even think about Tom being there. She was so lost and obviously wasn't thinking clearly.rn
rnI should make a warning! I think I will! rn
rnThank you very much. Just wait for the next chapter. The twins are about to find themselves in a lot of trouble. There is a lot of drama in the next chapter and I'm not even halfway through!
Date: 09/12/11 02:09 pm Title: Agitation, Angst, and Anis
Can't help but think that Biull is getting a bit too much good, all the positive sides, in this deal :). I feel bad for Tom as it must be really hard for him to be rejected like that, because that it is eventually. Yes, tricky situation.
Author's Response: Oh trust me, things are about to get worse for Bill. Fights are going to break out, someone is going to come back into the picture, and hell even I don't know what else. Things won't be sunshine for long though; I promise. The situation is about to get even trickier. I just uploaded another chapter. Look for it soon! And thanks for the review.
Date: 09/10/11 09:07 pm Title: Agitation, Angst, and Anis
I love Simone in this story! XD bushido is so cute with bill haha
Author's Response: Aaww thanks! I hope you still like Simone after the chapter I just posted! And I love the Bushido/Bill in this one too.
Date: 09/05/11 10:54 pm Title: Agitation, Angst, and Anis
ooohh pretty banner *is enthralled*...
This was a slightly confusing(in a rushed way) but good chapter! I'm surprised at how well Simone took Bill leaving again and everything. Keep up the good work! I can't wait to see more!!
Author's Response: Dang it! You caught me! I was rushing in this chapter because I'm so excited to get to my new idea. Simone took it well on the outside remember. And plus in this story I see her as a very broken woman. I mean she thought her son was dead unlike Tom who knew Bill lived. Not to mention how guilty she must feel because she could have been there to save them both. The way I see it she just got her dead son back so any time with him is amazing for her. She is also dealing with her own demons. That you will find out about in the next chapter. Tom's fury was about all I could handle in one chapter too. If I tried to add in Simone's heart break I felt as if I would be over crowding the chapter. If anything was too confusing just let me know. I hope I explained anything that confused you.
Date: 09/04/11 01:18 pm Title: Hope at Home
Oh... Woah! That muist have been somerthing to think about? I hope Tom will end up to a tright decision and it will not be too simple. The situation is - anyway - very much of complicated and shocking anyway. So, here begins the love triangle?
Author's Response: You'll have to keep reading to see what decision Tom makes! And trust me, it's not simple at all! It's more like a love squareish thing because Andreas is in there too!
Date: 09/04/11 01:05 pm Title: Fucking, Functions, and Fear
Aww, Hilf mir fliegen! :)
And yup, sexual bombarding indeed. It's interesting how you've managed to built a plot that carries on even if the story is saturated with so much sexuality. Usually it's either way, but not both at the same time. So, who is the man? I guess I have to go on to find out.
Author's Response: Mindless smut is nice, but I prefer reading plotted smut. And so that's usually what I write. The man is never actually revealed I realized. He's actually just one of the men Tom hired to search for his brother. He's no one important to the plot.
Date: 09/04/11 12:51 pm Title: Bawling, Bathing, and Bewilderment
This is really interesting. Something I haven't read in a while, so I'm curious. Diving into this alternate universe with odd, almost embarrassing to admit, sexual tension is nice. I want to know how this will go on and somehow I'm certain Tom will be part of this in a future. RIGHT? :)
Oh, and enema! I missed reading one. *grin*
Author's Response: I'm happy this is something different for you to read! I love being unique. Of course Tom will be a part of it! He just has to because I love writing twincest and it adds lots of drama! I've been looking to slip an enema somewhere in one of my stories and I finally found one! Yes! I'm happy someone appreciated it!
Date: 08/31/11 11:18 pm Title: Hope at Home
Yay! Answers!!! *jumps for joy*...but yea...That was pretty ...presmptuous thinkingh Tom could slash would want to go to Bu's. I am kind of hoping that Tom was just saing that to pacify Bill and is going to talk to his parents and convince Bill to not go back...even if it means poor Andi gets left...maybe they could report BU, and take Andi in once he gos to jail?
Wonderful work! I can't wat for more!
Author's Response: Yes, I gave you answers! Bill just got really excited and he had learned to love his life at Bu's so he wants to share it with his twin. More is on the way!
Date: 08/31/11 04:01 pm Title: The Flashback, The Future and The Thoroughly Fucked
This is not what I expected from the summary! Can't wait for the next chapter!! ^^
Author's Response: I'm terrible at summaries so thanks for reading anyway! I'm so glad you liked it!
Date: 08/31/11 12:28 pm Title: Fucking, Functions, and Fear
Oooh...interesting....I have a feeling Bushido is gonna get pissed knowing Andi and Bill shared a kiss. Can't wait to read more!
Author's Response: Nope, your feeling is wrong actually. Bushido encourages his boys to get together, but his jealousy will rear it's ugly head in later chapters.