Date: 09/07/11 04:22 am Title: Chapter 16
wait what they are together but Tom has a girlfriend..... I am confused
Author's Response: It's a flashback/dream!
Date: 09/06/11 02:18 pm Title: Chapter 15
I thought it was going to be Nicole, I don't know why xD
Date: 09/06/11 08:00 am Title: Chapter 14
anyone but ricky? well, I hope he/she would be Ricky, well that's cool hahaha Ricky as crew or...TOm's ex-GF? well I dunno! It's your story....YOUR MIND...OUR REACTIONS AND EMOTIONS...and love! I LOVE YOU! #no joke
Date: 09/06/11 07:52 am Title: Chapter 13
the last lines "Tom groaned in annoyance when Kylie straddled him. He hated being on the bottom, he liked to have control, dominance, over the girl. But having Kylie grind into him while their tongues clashed made him forget about his pride and just enjoy the feeling of his fantasies coming true." WAS HOT! jeez! I love this! Y'know I wonder how people like you get to be so imaginative! I also love how fast you update! I LOVE YOU! I LOVE YOUR WORK! I LOVE EVERYTHING! :))) lovelots :) mwah
Author's Response: Ha ha! Thank you so so so so much!!!! This is seriously the nicest review i've gotten so far!!! And I'm my most imaginative at night so I always have to proof read once or twice because there are NUMEROUS spelling and grammar mistakes. Thank you again! I love that you actually like my story! x
Date: 09/06/11 03:39 am Title: Chapter 1
Just a tad :D
There wasn't really any other characters that would have shocked her so much and it connects with the email that he sent her xD
Date: 09/06/11 02:02 am Title: Chapter 14
I have to know who it is!!! Suspense is killing me. :D hahaha
Date: 09/06/11 01:59 am Title: Chapter 14
It's Ricky isn't it?? :O
Author's Response: Yep :) Kinda obvious wasn't it xD
Date: 09/04/11 07:55 pm Title: Chapter 12
Kylie is pretty clever, Tom got a good one. Awesome chapter
Date: 09/04/11 07:50 pm Title: Chapter 11
Hmm, well Gusti has a point but then again, Tom really does love her. I guess we'll just have to see.
Date: 09/04/11 05:15 pm Title: Chapter 12
Hahaha, D'awww, they're so cute, I liked the dramatic bed flop bit xD
Date: 09/04/11 01:44 pm Title: Chapter 12
AAAAAAAAAAAAAWSOME!!!!!!!!!
MORE PLEASE :)
Date: 09/04/11 06:17 am Title: Chapter 12
CAUSE I LOVE THE WAY YOU WRITE... :)
Author's Response: Ha Ha Thank you so much! ;)
Date: 09/03/11 02:30 am Title: Chapter 10
Aww why do I feel like Kylie lied about those feelings. Hmm
Date: 09/03/11 02:25 am Title: Chapter 9
Love love love love :)
Date: 09/03/11 02:20 am Title: Chapter 8
Oh shit! I hope she stays.