Date: 01/04/26 08:14 pm Title: Chocolate Chip - The Overused Plot
This is gross, especially knowing how much the twin loves each other irl
Date: 01/04/26 08:14 pm Title: Chocolate Chip - The Overused Plot
This is gross, especially knowing how much the twin loves each other irl
Date: 01/04/26 08:13 pm Title: Chocolate Chip - The Overused Plot
This is gross, especially knowing how much the twin loves each other irl
Date: 11/08/15 03:34 pm Title: Chocolate Chip - The Overused Plot
Please update!!! 😥 i want to know more.
Date: 02/16/12 08:21 pm Title: Chocolate Chip - The Overused Plot
How come i havenŽt read this?? Do you now how much i like reading rape?? Hahahahaha I love when Bill is a wimp *nothinglikereallife* Hahahaha IŽll be looking forward to the next one, definitely :)
Date: 08/23/11 01:40 pm Title: Chocolate Chip - The Overused Plot
Oh...my god.-Totally floored; not many fanfics can do that- I'm waiting patiently for the next chapter. You're a great writer. Sick and twisted scenarios. Keep up the good work! ^^
Date: 08/16/11 06:42 pm Title: Chocolate Chip - The Overused Plot
This is what I like in your writing: you can create such twisted, sick scenarios, but still somehow fit love in them. Often unheatlty, but inevitably thyere. It's morally challenging every time.
Date: 08/14/11 11:17 am Title: Chocolate Chip - The Overused Plot
I don't know who I should feel more sorry for, Tom or Bill? Anyway this was very well written! *waiting for next chapter*
Author's Response: Thanks for your review! Next chapter... yeah I view it more as a next installment since I won't be revisiting chocolate chip anytime soon
Date: 08/13/11 09:30 am Title: Chocolate Chip - The Overused Plot
Oh Bill, I know its never the victim's fault...but you handled this situation really badly.
I'm not sure who I feel worse for actually. Is that a bad thing? I mean, Tom was drunk and confused and shit, and Bill was calling him horrid names...NOt that it makes what he did right, but Bill definitely could've handled the whole 'I love you' thing a bit better. One thing he could've done was went with it, but told Tom that he didn't want thei first time to be while Tom was drunk, or he could've calmly approached it was an 'I love you too Tom, I always will. But I think us being together so much, becuse of the touring has gotten you a bit mixed up." Or something like that.
This was a really good fic. I feel so sick, saying I can't wait for more... So I'm not going to say it. *gives you a knowing look*
Author's Response: YESSS!!!
It's always a big deal in my fics for my readers to be confused as to who they should sympathize with. So very glad that you're torn over the subject. It's always a bit of a challenge in writing to make your readers like the "bad guy" so I thought instead of making this random drunken act (as it normally is in other versions of this plot) I'd make Tom have a motive.
Glad you enjoyed it!
Date: 08/12/11 10:48 am Title: Chocolate Chip - The Overused Plot
Oops! The Bill Rape Fic :D that's what I really like, especially from you :X
Author's Response: >;)
Date: 08/11/11 08:50 pm Title: Chocolate Chip - The Overused Plot
HA! Nevermind. My bad. I see it's not over yet. LOL
I thought it was a one shot.
Author's Response: No, no, no, no. I'm not exactly sure how many chapters this will be as I'll just continue updating whenever I feel like writing a rape scene
Date: 08/11/11 08:49 pm Title: Chocolate Chip - The Overused Plot
You should totally turn this into a longer story, at least a few more chapters. It ends like it should be continued.
Date: 08/11/11 07:53 pm Title: Chocolate Chip - The Overused Plot
when i read the chapter notes, i don't kniow why i didn't click away from this story. it's so heart breaking. and i don't know why i read it. i don't know why i'm adding this to my favorites. and i don't know why i'm going to read the next chapter.
this is so wrong.
Author's Response: Yes, it's so wrong... but that's what makes it so right
Date: 08/11/11 06:30 pm Title: Chocolate Chip - The Overused Plot
Lol, the way you did the numbering, I thought this was going to be in the "Just Another" universe, since you listed it as number 1.
Anyway, I thought you did really well with the "cliche" plot :3
Is Tom going to regret it?
Author's Response: There WILL be a scene from Just Another sometime as the chapter numbers goes up. I have a few others ideas that I wanted to write first but there will be a scene. I'm not sure at this point if I'll make from "Just Another Face in the Crowd" or during Tom's adventures off on his own in "Just Another Happy Couple"... probably the first since the sequel was very emotional
Date: 08/11/11 05:27 pm Title: Chocolate Chip - The Overused Plot
I felt sad for both twins. Tom's love is so twisted he thinks he can force Bill to feel the same way. And poor Bill being violated by his own twin. Very well written.
Author's Response: Thank you so much. As I said, Tom's a very sweet sweet boy that I love dearly. It's shame that he's so much fun to write about
Date: 08/11/11 04:51 pm Title: Chocolate Chip - The Overused Plot
Oh my god. You just blew my mind.
Author's Response: Awww no problem :3