Date: 02/01/15 06:13 am Title: The Things Tom Does For Bill
I finally got to read this one! And I canīt stop smiling! This was so awesome!
I really like this shy Tom, which makes the problem to talk about things connected with his ass. :-D He's so cute! Again, I had to laugh at the mention of 'closet monster'. :-D Actually, the whole part was again extremely funny! Billīs strip and a the T-shirt that had stuck to his head. :-D :-D This is all Bill! :-D
Oh, and I was so surprised and happy at the same time that Tom finally let Bill do all this. In fact, I didnīt believe that this could happen. And it did! I'm so excited!
Thanks for the amazing part !!!
Author's Response: I'm so happy you enjoyed this! I miss writing about these boys, because they were seriously so much fun. You're so sweet to leave me reviews as you read my stories! I thoroughly enjoying reading your thoughts, so thank you. :)
Date: 08/14/14 05:13 pm Title: The Things Tom Does For Bill
That was such an impossible mix of ridiculously funny and ri-dick-ulously sexy!!
Author's Response: Hehe, niiiiice pun. ;) Thank you!
Date: 03/23/14 11:26 pm Title: The Things Tom Does For Bill
I've read Work Out several times. It's definitely one of my favs! Totally loved this! Bill is so freakin hilarious! I missed these boys.
Author's Response: Ohhh thank you so so much! I miss writing about these boys. Maybe I'll have to again soon..
Date: 12/31/13 09:26 am Title: The Things Tom Does For Bill
Oh god, girl, you are such a brilliant writer, this is plain amazing.
I laughed so badly when Bill got stuck in his shirt, me and my friends are sitting here in a very quiet apartment, everyone doing their own things, and I suddenly starts laughing at, what they see as, nothing at all. And I couldn't stop even to explain to them what was so funny. Seriously, I love your Bill so much! He's such an amazing character, in an awkward but yet amazing way! "I appear to be stuck!" hahaha I'm dying again just by writing this review because I'm thinking about it! Okay sorry, I'll be serious now! *takes deep breaths*
This was extremely hot, in that funny way that I seriously think only you can manage to write, and I don't really know what to write because the only thing I can think of saying is that it was simply brilliant, and man I'm happy Tom could experience that, good job Bill!
And then of course, in the end you had me laughing like an idiot again, my friends must think I've completely lost it 'cause I'm sitting here giggling at my computer. America's next top model. Oh god Bill, you amazing person you!
Okay, I suck at giving reviews, I'm just babbling, but I loved it, I love this universe you've created and I can't stop laughing at your Bill, he's simply amazing *-* Well done girl ^-^
Author's Response: You have noooo idea how much this review made me smile! What an awesome thing to wake up to. I'm so happy that you find my weird and random humor funny, because I wrote everything from the Work Out universe straight from my mind, lol. It was the easiest thing I've ever written because I didn't even have to think about it. So glad I could make you laugh! That's what I always strive for.
Date: 09/29/11 08:26 pm Title: The Things Tom Does For Bill
My God, I missed these boys so much! I loved this, it was everything I expected from you :D keep up the good work! And now I go on to #2 ;)
Author's Response: Well hey there! I'm smiling so big right now because of the fact that you read my one shots. :D Thank you so very much! I'm really happy so happy that you enjoyed this. Eeeeek, now I'm off to respond to your other fantastic review! ^_^
Date: 09/15/11 09:02 pm Title: The Things Tom Does For Bill
Kay I'm late ><
I'm just now reading this(and LOVING this!!!) Rawrrr kay I love so much!!
Author's Response: I'm soooo happy that you loved this. You are the sweetest. Thank you so much for reading and leaving me this review, love. :D Meow meow.
Date: 09/15/11 12:48 pm Title: The Things Tom Does For Bill
I did read the other oneshot and loved it :3 And n'awh stop it with the compliments *blushes* I am going to be eagerly awaiting the next one of these though :D And nononono, YOU are the awesome one! I smile like an idiot whenever you update or reply to my reviews :) Thank YOU for writing such awesome stories!
Author's Response: I'll try to stop with the compliments but it's just really hard when you are THAT cute. I love that I can make you smile, because you do the same for me. :D
Date: 09/14/11 05:06 pm Title: The Things Tom Does For Bill
OHMYGOD HOW DID I NOT SEE THIS BEFORE!? I only just noticed that this story existed. lol. IT'S AMAZING. LIKE, JUST AMAZING. I CAN'T EVEN. You're just too awesome. I'm at such a loss for words XD *squeals from happiness* *loves*
Author's Response: Haha. I'm so happy that you found it! Have you read the second one shot, as well? They're pretty nondescript so they are definitely easy to pass over. I'm entirely pleased that you enjoyed it! You are just the sweetest little thing, k? I'm hoping to post another one at either the end of this month or the beginning of the next. :D YOU are the awesome one, though. Just so you know. Thank you SO much for making me smile!
Date: 09/13/11 10:22 am Title: The Things Tom Does For Bill
OMG THIS IS SO LONG.. SORRY!!!!!!!!!!
Author's Response: I LOVED EVERY WORD OF IT. TRUTH.
Date: 09/13/11 10:21 am Title: The Things Tom Does For Bill
I think the creepiest thing just happened to me. I was reading it on the bus on my way home from school. To be more specific, I was reading about Bill.. fingering him.
I turned around and found out the woman sitting next to me was looking at my phone and gaping. I sorta got out of there and waited for the next buss. Oh god...!!!!
So now I'm sitting here, tring not to pull out the little area of hair that is still left on my head. And DON'T dare laughing. UGHHH. I knew I should have read it at home but naaaah, was doing homework. now that's another reason to hate homework.
Hey, if your middle name was "hilarious", as it should be, mine was probably "rambling idiot" Fuck! I should have gotten this as my nickname!
Well anyway, I remember Bill saying that he fingered Tom on the last chapter and at first thought he will.. you know. As entertaining as it may be, it may be really creepy. for Tom.
Oh Tom's mom! HAHA "Don't forget to use condoms and lube"!!!
Oh right, I almost forgot, and this is probably a whole new level of super-duper-long-and-fat-ass-comment. I wanted to respond to your response. MUAHAHA I'm usually too lazy and kinda length-stingy. AS I COMMENT LENGTH!!! not what your dirty mind might have thought!!!!
So, first of all, you need to know. chainsaws are made for threatening, not hurting. If I wanted to hurt you I'd say I'll bring all Justin beaver's CDs and make you listen to them.
Are you kidding me?!?! working AND taking classes? I'm crying for even having homework and you do all that!! on VACATION!! O__O
Oh, and answering my stupid long-ass reviews and others' non-stupid but still long-ass reviews.. Yeah, I'm gonna have to get the fies out of my mouth if I don't close it soon.
You'll be lucky enough if I Don't read it, belive me, I'm a well-trained stalker.
Nah, my reviews can brighen one's day only in being this annoying light that blinds you, like a flash... in my cell-phone... cell-phone... fingering Tom... the woman at the buss. Bad connotation.
Oh, seriously, it was the FIRST link there so I thought it was the actual thing.. but it was really funny. could've been funnier if I watched the show though.
YEAH YEAH, now I'm going. This comment is so long I actually opened a TextDocument to make sure I don't overdo it too much.
See it as a revenge for... well, it's not really your fault. I'm afraid to actually see how long it is, and I'm actually adding more words now...
p.s. If you're someone esle, reading it because you were curious or a trained-stalker, please don't send me baaack, I just escaped from there :(((
p.s.2. I wonder what is longer, the chapter or this comment.
Author's Response: Hahaha that woman was probably quite pervy and enjoying what she was reading, lol. That is hilarious. Well, YOU are hilarious so I'm not surprised that hilarious things happen in your life, haha. Ohhhh no! I've made you lose your hair, lol. Keep that little area! You can braid it or maybe just make it into one big curl. Yeah? Cool! Homework is important, k? But I do hate it, too. It should always come before reading silly things such as this, though. Indeed. Noooo you're not a rambling idiot! You're fantastic. Ahhhh yes, the fingering. I figured I couldn't just mention it like that and then not write about it! Tom's mom is so ridiculous, lol. LENGTH AND CHEEKS. You are dirty, lol. I liiiike it. Okay, fine! But chainsaws CAN hurt too, k? But somehow I don't think one would hurt as bad as having to listen to JB's shiz. I'll take the chainsaw, thank you! Yeahhhhh I was sooo busy over the summer. I'm still working AND taking classes. Except, now it's classes full-time and work part-time. I will always find time to respond to reviews, though. I don't understand how author's can just let sweet words go unacknowledged. Haha...OMG you are NOT like an annoying cell-phone flashing. You're like a beautiful ray of sunshine. That was a funny video, it's just hilarious that it was what you stumbled upon when searching. Hahaha. I loved this comment! Even with its LENGTH. P.S. OMG LOLOLOL. Don't send her back! I want to keep her here. P.S.2. I think the chapter beat you by at least...a few words. ;) I'm so happy you read this!
Date: 09/09/11 12:58 pm Title: The Things Tom Does For Bill
omg that was funny just like workout was :d great job :D
Author's Response: Aww thank you so much! I'm so happy you read this, love. :D
Date: 08/30/11 08:14 pm Title: The Things Tom Does For Bill
Again with the site cutting off half my review -_-;; THIS SITE HATES ME!!! *CRIES, WAILS, SNOT-RUNNING-EVERYWHERE*
Anyway your Workout series seriously always makes me laugh no matter what!!! Here I am sitting at the library and I am trying to hold in my laughter!!! (the guy next to me keeps looking my way *shifty eye*)
Author's Response: Oh nooooo *shakes fist at site* That's okay, though! I love you! Even if the site is mean to you! I'll beat it up, k? Just for you ;) Hahah you tell that shifty eye guy to mind his own business. I'm so glad that this series makes you laugh. Making people laugh is my absolute favorite thing to do. So you have made me smile so big :D Thank you!
Date: 08/30/11 08:10 pm Title: The Things Tom Does For Bill
Ahhh a spin off of when the guys went to Disney World. (if I remember correctly, when Bill said he fingered Tom) I fricken love this!!!
Author's Response: Gotta love it when Bill fingers Tom ;) I'm so happy that you loved it!! Thank you so very much for reading :D
Date: 08/27/11 03:59 pm Title: The Things Tom Does For Bill
I love these two together and how much in love they are. I love that Bill is such an airhead and that Tom can't say no to him. I love that everything is going so well for them both. It's nice to read a story where one isn't screwing around on the other and they actually respect and love each other. I certainly wouldn't mind another one of these one shots. Maybe you can have Bill visit Tom at his school and make all the guys there jealous. Thank you for this story and these characters. I don't think I'll ever be able to get them out of my mind. :D:D
Author's Response: Hello, again!! How lovely are you for reading the story AND the one shot? I'm glad that you love their dynamic. Most stories that I read, always contain some sort of drama betwixt the characters...but sometimes there really are relationships where people are just..happy. With no cheating or lying (save for Tom's little lies to protect Bill's feelings, hehe). I just wanted to write a story that would make people feel good, instead of stress them out. I'm so happy that this could do that for you! I'm definitely going to write a one shot where Bill visits Tom at school :D I think it would be too hilarious to pass up the opportunity to write. Thank YOU for reading, love. I am so pleased and happy that you enjoyed my story and characters. You have seriously made my day. :D
Date: 08/26/11 03:10 am Title: The Things Tom Does For Bill
Of course I read the one-shot! Can't get enough of this Bill. He's from another planet, and adorably cute, even with a giant hosing weenie. The main story - okay, I can't stop thinking about how you managed to fit in a shitting, deaf, angry midget (midgets give me the creeps - this was straight out of a nightmare for me!); murderous squirrels (I've got them living under my house and send them death-ray thoughts whenever I hear them digging); and a messenger monkey covered in jizz(almost .... I almost died ... it was so fucking funny. On my tombstone: "Blame Mohanrocks and her jizz covered monkey") in one short story.
You have much more control with your comma issues here! Good job!
And keep writing. Lots.
Author's Response: Hahahaha "giant hosing weenie". You totally killed me with that. I still don't know how I fit all of that in there, either!!! I mean dear goodness, there was just a little bit of everything horrifying in that story, wasn't there? Haha. I'm so happy that you read it even with it's absurdity! Yaaaay I'm glad I got your comma approval. I'm still working on it. I've been posting a new story and I think I have wrangled the commas even more in that one. ;) Thank you so much for reading and I will most definitely keep writing! Thank you! :D xD
Date: 08/26/11 01:09 am Title: The Things Tom Does For Bill
OMG! I loved this one-shot and i also loved the story work out i hope that you dont quit writing abo
Author's Response: Thank you SO much! I'm so happy that you enjoyed the story and the one shot. I definitely won't stop writing about them, I promise! Thank you so very much for reading and sharing your thoughts with me :D
Date: 08/24/11 08:44 pm Title: The Things Tom Does For Bill
You know what I want... XD More of Bot Tom! :D
Author's Response: You're so going to get more. You just wait. :D
Date: 08/23/11 08:55 am Title: The Things Tom Does For Bill
'“Shit, hang on,” Bill pulled back and hopped off the bed. “I've gotta take these jeans off before my dick rips right through them.”
Tom would have laughed but this had actually proven to be a potential problem in the past.'
Haha had me laughing out loud, as usual. They're so cute T_T...
Author's Response: Hey now, it's a very REAL problem, okay? Haha. Only for this Bill, though. Yay! I'm so happy that you read this! And of course, very pleased that it made you laugh out loud. I love to make you laugh. It makes me smile. :D Thank you so very much!
Date: 08/22/11 05:21 am Title: The Things Tom Does For Bill
You are really a bad ass chick...you got me with this girl...LOL I thought it would be Bill's biggest asset will get Tom on the howl.....damn it's just that teasing fingers....hahahahaha that is one major of a teaser, about the hair whip it's damn hilarious...I can't imagine the real life Tom would look like on his dreads doing that...damn, you really, really rock girl I liiiikkkkkeeeee you humor, you always get rid of my boredom.....:D gooluck!
Author's Response: I'm pretty sure that you are the bad ass one, here :D I'm so happy that you enjoyed it! And yeah, it was definitely a tease...but I'm pretty sure I'm going to write about the real thing in one of these one shots ;) Haha whenever I think about Tom whipping his dreads, it makes me laugh. I'm sooo pleased that you like my humor and that I can entertain you. You are so sweet. Thank you SO much!! :D xD
Date: 08/20/11 01:48 am Title: The Things Tom Does For Bill
How did I miss this story before?!I can't believe it! *calms down* I guess what's most important is that I have read it now. Amazing one shot! Not only did it have the awesomeness that is your Bill and Tom, but it had some bot Tom action going on in there, and who doesn't like a little bot Tom one in awhile? XD Loved it!
Author's Response: OH!! HI!! I was so happy when I saw that you reviewed this. It was definitely easy to miss, though. Since I didn't give you guys any warning and there's no banner or anything. So do not fret!! Yaaaaaay I am so happy that you enjoyed it! I tried my best to keep the characters' personalities, as quirky as ever ;) And you know...I think that botTom might just be good for you. Like, 'An apple a day, keeps the doctor away." A little botTom a day.... Hehe. Thank you so much for reading and reviewing!! You're just quite amazing, k? :D