Date: 05/01/23 12:56 am Title: Mine
I have left a review on other stories of yours, but wanted to say that I enjoyed this one too!
Date: 08/26/11 02:36 pm Title: Mine
Hmmm, this was definitely OOC, I wasn't expecting that. Way rougher than necessary, bordering on unrealistic, but well written nonetheless. You describe things well, keep a great tension going, and you write a good insecure!overcompensating!dominating!Tom. Lol. This was a good read. Well done. :)
Author's Response: I kind of wanted the unrealistic thing - I wanted to show just how far jealousy can push people, because lets be honest, it can make people a little crazy. Having said that, I appreciate and agree with you. :) Thank you, it's great to know that you like it and it means a lot that you think I wrote it well. :3
Date: 08/14/11 06:23 pm Title: Mine
It's interestying to notice how conflicted emotions this caused in me. While possessiveness is hot, it is also scary and in this, it lingered on a border of being hotr & secure and sick and scary. Maybe it was the reasons it was born from? I still don't know how to feel.
I understand Tom and in a way i think he has his own insecurities - in real life, too. I can't helkp but wonder how it must have been to grow up in a shadow of his own brother as clearly as itr has been for Tom. In this fic is escalated in an uncontrolled ways and it was sad and scary.
This was very well written and I really likled it how you actually challenged the reasder with the theme of this. I hope tom believes.
Author's Response: It's good that it caused conflicting emotions - it means I managed to get across what I wanted to. Possessiveness is hot, but only to a degree and that was what I wanted to go for in this - I wanted to show how insecurities can warp someone's opinion.
Mmm, I really hope that there isn't too much truth in this, obviously not the whole twincest thing, but the insecurtities. It must have been incredibly difficult to grow up as Bill's brother.
Thank you, I'm really glad that you liked it. :D
Date: 08/14/11 04:23 pm Title: Mine
Wow. Very well written and very well done. The emotions displayed were wonderful. It felt so real. Thank you for writing it!
Author's Response: Awhh, thank you, that means a lot. :3 Thank you for reading and reviewing. :)
Date: 08/09/11 06:32 pm Title: Mine
Wow, intense. Tom certainly has some things to work out. I would NOT want to be dating this character.
Author's Response: He definitely has some things to work out!
Date: 08/09/11 12:23 pm Title: Mine
Crazy Tomi, crazy sex--- GOOOOOD!!!
Author's Response: Thank you! :D
Date: 08/09/11 06:41 am Title: Mine
That was epic! I love jealous Tom! He's so protective of Bill! I feltt bad for Tom in the begining though. I hope that's not true. And then I felt bad for Bill because of Tom's jealousy but I still loved it! Great job! Good luck in the future!
Author's Response: Awhh thank you! :D What's not to love about jealous Tom?! Ah, I hope it's not true either...I don't think so - he'd have to be blind not to see he's completely gorgeous! Thank you, I'm glad you liked it. :3
Date: 08/09/11 04:47 am Title: Mine
Delcious. this makes my day.
Author's Response: Awwwhh, thank you! :D
Date: 08/09/11 03:25 am Title: Mine
Oh Tom! Ooops that's not the way to deal with fans *bites lip and tries not to laugh*
So Tom getting his possesive, macho caveman thing going on is hot. H. O. T. though poor Bill being accused of cheating when he's completely innocent. Though maybe Bill flirts a little just to rile Tom up? Love it honey *smooshes*
Author's Response: Hahah, nope it's most certainly not. xD
It is most definitely hot! I think that is a possibility - I can imagine Bill liking to see that Tom cares. :D Thank you! -hugs-
Date: 08/09/11 01:50 am Title: Mine
Maybe not the healthiest relationship or emotions for Tom to have, but jealousy is a part of love. It would be hard to be Bill's brother; harder even more to be insecure and to be Bill's brother. I hope that the ending opens up for Tom to become more comfortable with himself. Entertaining read! Thanks.
Author's Response: Jealousy is definitely part of love, although hopefully not as extreme as Tom felt it. It would be incredibly difficult to be insecure and Bill's brother. I think that Tom will have realised a few things by the end of it. Thank you, I'm really glad you enjoyed it! :D
Date: 08/09/11 12:13 am Title: Mine
*lurking and reading other's reviews*
Umm, you did a great job with this. Maybe some of your readers were shocked ( I don't why since you tend to write about mature subjects) but angry sex + Tom + Bill (preferably scared underage Bill) = fangirl orgasms all across the board
Don't be put off by some negative feedback. I loved it. In fact I would have practically died of joy had Tom gotten a little more violent. Tom's such a sweet boy in real life but I just love manny him so darn bad in my fics
Again great job with the fic *double thumbs up*
Author's Response: Thank you, but don't worry, I'm not put off by negative feedback. Everyone likes different things, so there's bound to be a few people who didn't like it. 99% of people seemed to enjoy it though, and you enjoyed it (who it was actually written for), so I'm fine. :D
Thank you! xD
Date: 08/09/11 12:06 am Title: Mine
Ohmygosh...o_o ohmygosh ohmygosh
This was wonderful!! I loved it!! You managed to make Tom angry and posessive yet sweet and caring at the end. Tom's characterization was exactly what I wanted out of this prompt, you did a wonderful job bringing it all to life! Poor poor Tom (I do love the bit about how he feels the constant urge to exercise in order to feel better about himself)
This was so great!! Thank you so much!
Author's Response: Awwhh thank you! I'm really glad you liked it - I was super worried it wouldn't be what you wanted. :3 Thanks again! :D
Date: 08/08/11 10:09 pm Title: Mine
very good as always! I don't like this "angry" sex though. "The singer had both of his hands wrapped around his wrist, pulling him with all his strength away (...)Giving a particularly hard yank, he succeeded causing Tom to take a couple of stumbled steps towards him" @@ what year is it about? current Bill is same strong as Tom, if not stronger XD
Author's Response: Thank you. :) That's alright, everyone likes different things. Really? You think Bill's as strong as Tom? xD I'm not so sure...anyway, I'm saying this is set before Bill turned up all buffed up! :3 Some people use all their strength when they're angry, so that's what Tom was doing. :D Thanks for the review!
Date: 08/08/11 05:34 pm Title: Mine
i find it repulsive.
But maybe im just not into this masochistic behaviour
Author's Response: Fair enough. You're entitled to your opinion, although masochism doesn't feature in this story.
Date: 08/08/11 03:37 pm Title: Mine
I'm pretty sure they lost one fan xD lol Aw poor Tom, but he shouldn't worry, Bill will always love him!
Author's Response: I think he might have done. xD Bill will most certainly always love him. :) Thanks for your review!
Date: 08/08/11 03:15 pm Title: Mine
Oooh, this was so good. Really hot and sweet at the same time. Bet Tom lost them a fan by punchng the guy in the club, though!
Author's Response: Thank you! :) I'm glad you liked it. :D Hahah, I'm pretty sure he did!
Date: 08/08/11 03:13 pm Title: Mine
aww, this was really cute. jealous Tom is kinda hot. *Bill girl alert*
Author's Response: Thank you. :D He is! :3
Date: 08/08/11 01:22 pm Title: Mine
Wow, jealous Tom is hot! Great story sweetie and I'm so glad that Tom finally believed his Bill. :)
Author's Response: He most certainly is. xD Thank you, I'm glad you liked it. :) How could he not? Poor Bill was innocent. :D