Date: 08/13/11 10:10 pm Title: Chapter 4
Alright! We've got some toleration going on between them. And even a little flirtation. I am pleased!!
Author's Response: flirtation? you mean drunk bill? that's flirtation?
Date: 08/13/11 03:25 pm Title: Chapter 4
I'm really happy they are getting along. Can't wait to read more!
Author's Response: thanks so much! more on wednesday!
Date: 08/13/11 02:24 pm Title: Chapter 4
great fic. I read 4 chapters in a row and would love to see more.
Author's Response: lots more to come
Date: 08/13/11 01:02 pm Title: Chapter 4
I'm glad Bill is finally at ease with Tom.
Can't wait for what's next.
Author's Response: yeah, at least they don't want to kill each other anymore
Date: 08/13/11 12:48 pm Title: Chapter 4
LOl Tom is a momas boy! too cute!
Author's Response: aw man, don't call him that! lol she just worries about her baby!
Date: 08/13/11 12:04 pm Title: Chapter 4
Aww! They are so cute! Glad that they are getting along better now =P Very interesting to learn more about their past and how they ended up doing what they do now! Great chapter, looking forward to the next one!
Author's Response: yeah i wanted to have tom answer the question "what made you decide to start following people around for a living?"
Author's Response: yeah i wanted to have tom answer the question "what made you decide to start following people around for a living?"
Date: 08/12/11 01:01 am Title: Chapter 3
Ohhh goodness. There is such a fine line between hate and love and well...they're totally treading it. I love passionate anger, like that. So excited for the next chapter!
Author's Response: you say you love passionate anger? hm, interesting.
Date: 08/11/11 04:52 am Title: Chapter 3
*frets but continues to read anxiously*
Author's Response: oh quit all that hand wringing, your skin will get all dry before the next chapter
Date: 08/10/11 05:23 pm Title: Chapter 3
I really, really like you story!! Bill is such a spoiled little brat ;)
Author's Response: yeah, he's pretty good at it
Date: 08/10/11 02:57 pm Title: Chapter 3
Aw, poor Tom. Bill's been living him such a hart time for so long. One can only imagine how heartbroken he was back the when Bill left him!
I'm loving the story so far!
Please keep them coming!
Author's Response: i shall do so
Author's Response: i shall do so
Date: 08/10/11 02:16 pm Title: Chapter 3
Ooh girl!!! They are SO in love.
Author's Response: already? lol
Date: 08/10/11 01:26 pm Title: Chapter 3
Ouch...
Bill(y) can surely be a bitch when he wants...
After the first part of this chapter, I thought Bill could become a bit less bitchy...But the contrary happened.
Tom doesn't seem to "love" what Bill has become towards him but doesn't want to bend before meany Bill and give a couple hits back...
The problem is....Bill isn't mean, he seems to be deliberately cruel to Tom...Defensive mechanism, isn't it?
I liked the others members of the band this far.
However...what about the threats towards Bill??? In each line of this chapter, I waited for something to happen...someone being hurt when getting Bill's phone, for exemple...
I can't wait for Bill to be aware of those threats....I kinda imagine this happeing in a few scenes like the movie "The Bodyguard"...when she was a diva, learnt the threats, and then accepted to listen to her bodyguard....
I want a rapprochement between Tom and Bill, a explanation about the past, and forgivenes before love...
See what you will write next.
Love.Kiki
Author's Response: bill's thinking he can just act like a brat and tom will leave and he won't have to deal with him. as for someone getting hurt...wait and see.
Date: 08/10/11 01:09 pm Title: Chapter 2
Still very good.
The first contact after five years is a bit rough, from Bill's side....while Tom is calm
But hey it's a bit normal...
Bill thinks Tom cheated on him....
IS it true? I don't know what to think.
Tom believes Bill left him for someone else, and Bill thinks Tom cheated on him???
Who is right? Who is wrong? Tom or Bill? Maybe none of them....
Their future relations for work will be a tad tensed but for the moment, they seem to have found a way to be near each other without fighting.
And maybe they will find a way to be friend once more....and overcome their past pain to become lovers again...Since it seems that each one has still feelings for the other....
Love it.
Kiki
Author's Response: thanks for reading. it is all a bit puzzling, isn't it?
Date: 08/10/11 12:46 pm Title: Chapter 3
damn. God Bill. he's being a bitch -nods- cant wait for the next update
Author's Response: yeah, bit of a bitch our bill is being. hey, say that 3 times fast! lol
Date: 08/10/11 12:46 pm Title: Chapter 3
Wow! Bill should be happy that Tom had enough control to punch the wall instead of him. Bill's really pushing it lol. Hopefully now he will take his bitching down a notch or two. I'm excited for the next chapter.
Author's Response: one can always hope
Date: 08/10/11 12:20 pm Title: Chapter 3
Awesome chapter! I love the tension! They really need to talk and explain things, god! I feel bad for both of them... for Tom cause he doesn't even know why Bill acts like he hate him and for Bill cause he was obviously really hurt and isn't over it. Can't wait for the next chapter!
Author's Response: *flutter clap* glad you like it!
Date: 08/08/11 09:20 am Title: Chapter 2
Seems like there is a little misunderstanding going between Tom and Bill. Or Tom just lied through his teeth to David about 'Bill leaving him out of nowhere'. And go Gustav, you wise man. Make stuborn Bill see the light to atleast go talk to Tom ;)
Author's Response: you'll see
Date: 08/08/11 01:11 am Title: Chapter 2
Thanks for the much needed slash dose. This was just the kind of story I wanted to read and I can't wait to read what's going to happen next.
I just love BodyGuard!Tom and Diva!Bill. Oh and BestFriend!Gustav. Looking forward for the next chapter!
Author's Response: glad i could scratch your slash itch
Date: 08/07/11 05:50 am Title: Chapter 2
exciting, very good!!!!
Author's Response: thanks so much!
Author's Response: thanks so much!
Date: 08/07/11 01:52 am Title: Chapter 2
Great chapter! I can't wait to see what happens next XD
Author's Response: thanks! next chapter up wednesday.
Author's Response: thanks! next chapter up wednesday.