Date: 08/18/11 09:03 am Title: Chapter 2
gustav's right...bill should've stayed and talked it out...or at least found out what was going on...but at least tom will keep trying...and maybe bill will eventually become receptive...
Date: 08/18/11 08:56 am Title: Chapter 1
well i want to start off by saying...HAPPY BIRTHDAY!!! (even though it's belated)...hope it was a good one...on with the review...
let's see...that had to be kinda hard on tom...it's sad when someone you love just up and leaves...but now he has a chance to ask any questions he may have had...
Date: 08/18/11 05:25 am Title: Chapter 5
Uhhhh, I'm sensing Jamie will come up again ;)
Love this chapter
Author's Response: no, jamie was just a one-time appearance
Date: 08/18/11 12:41 am Title: Chapter 5
Awww, they are becoming friendlier!
Author's Response: they certainly are
Date: 08/18/11 12:14 am Title: Chapter 5
haha elvis!!!
and awww Tom that was SO ADORABLE
Author's Response: i know right?
Date: 08/17/11 09:11 pm Title: Chapter 5
Sweaty Tom, I can understand Bill for talking to his abs! =D That birthday gift was such a sweet gesture on Tom's part. Loving this story so far, keep up the great work!
Author's Response: i was torn between sweaty tom and fresh out of the shower tom. glad you like my choice.
Date: 08/17/11 09:00 pm Title: Chapter 5
Great chapter. Im glad to see them getting along more. Can't wait for more! XD
Author's Response: it's nice to not want to kill each other all the time
Date: 08/17/11 08:43 pm Title: Chapter 5
Thanks for the update!
Tom is so sweet. I'm so glad Bill is not bitching him (a lot) anymore.
I'm looking forward to what's next.
Take care!
Author's Response: and thank you for reading!
Author's Response: and thank you for reading!
Date: 08/17/11 08:21 pm Title: Chapter 5
love this
Author's Response: *flutter clap*
Date: 08/17/11 07:07 pm Title: Chapter 5
oh here you go again with the food xD yay for elvis, i was starting to wonder if ur name was an accident xP yay friendlier tides
Author's Response: and let's not forget the mountain of grated parm on top of the meat sauce!rnyeah, they're getting a little friendlier
Author's Response: and let's not forget the mountain of grated parm on top of the meat sauce!rnyeah, they're getting a little friendlier
Date: 08/17/11 07:02 pm Title: Chapter 5
Now I totally get your pen-name. I'm all shook up. Carry on, write some more, i'll try to be patient and not stalk you. *peeks thru window to see if your writing the net chappie yet.
Author's Response: yeah, little bit of an elvis obsession going on with me.rn*closes blinds*rnactually the next chapter is done. the whole story is done. i'm working on like new story #3 right now!
Date: 08/15/11 06:24 am Title: Chapter 4
awwie! :D it's kinda awkward how theyre suddenly acting or well trying to be bff's kinda and all but thats what brings a true meaning and essence to this story -eyes sparkle- loved it!
Author's Response: i made your eyes sparkle! yay me!
Date: 08/15/11 06:05 am Title: Chapter 4
Hi.
It seems to go better for those two.
Bill behaves and even apologize - which I didn't think would come before a very long time.
There is even a few memories chared about their past and they now can be civil around each other... but they haven't cleared their love past yet.
Oh and a few more letters but Bill still doesn't know about them....It will explose soon, I think.
By the way....I totally loved the tucking thing...a softer side of Bill, maybe you can give us more in the future. If- not WHEN things will go bad, Bill will use a few lovely moments with his bodyguard.
See what you have in store for us in the next chapter.
Kiki
Author's Response: i can totally see a drunk (or even a sober) bill asking to be tucked in.
Date: 08/15/11 05:18 am Title: Chapter 4
aaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaah, want more. they were just getting back into the swing of conversation between two people more than familiar with each other :3
Author's Response: patience grasshopper, you'll get more on wednesday
Date: 08/15/11 05:08 am Title: Chapter 3
lollll bodyguards cant hit their charges, can they? tee hee, they're hilarious together
Date: 08/15/11 04:59 am Title: Chapter 2
aaaaaw, sounds like some sort of big misunderstanding stole 5 precious years from them...
Date: 08/15/11 04:30 am Title: Chapter 1
oooh...lol, still Tomi, eh? i'm thinking someone wasn't really over it...just a guess. :)
Date: 08/14/11 06:10 pm Title: Chapter 4
Brilliant ;)
It's great that they're getting along!
Author's Response: yeah, less tension is always a good thing
Author's Response: yeah, less tension is always a good thing
Date: 08/14/11 02:50 am Title: Chapter 4
Great chapter! Can't wait for more XD
Author's Response: thanks! glad you're liking it.
Author's Response: thanks! glad you're liking it.
Date: 08/14/11 02:41 am Title: Chapter 3
I completely missed this chapter! But at least now there is another chapter waiting for me XD I wonder when they will sort out that misunderstanding of theres and get on good terms again. Can't wait!