Date: 02/08/12 08:27 am Title: 00iii. Pizza and Paps
This was a little piece of the special life the twins live. They desperately seek for normality, and they cling to this girl, who is indeed cool, but I really wonder why her drinking problem isn't disturbing to them. Can they really see beyond that right from the start?
I also like the way Bill sticks to his beliefs, no matter who makes fun of him.Please go on, I really like reading your story.
Author's Response: The issues the twins have with her drinking problem will be addressed a little later ;) It's a bit later in the story--you'll see! And yes, Bill is absolutely unmoving; that's just how I imagine him to be in real life, very confident in his beliefs. :) Thank you so much for the review! It means so much (especially coming from you; I love your writing :D)! (L)
Date: 02/03/12 02:53 am Title: 00iii. Pizza and Paps
My goodness Mandie, you are insane for even suggesting that this chapter isn't good. Even if it is a filler, I loved it. Emma's character is awesome, she both amuses and intrigues me. I can't wait for what comes next!
Oh, and silly Bill thinking he's never made anyone cry with his writing. Either he's lying or extremely oblivious. xD
Author's Response: Awe, babe. You're too good to me! :) Thank you for the wonderful review! And I'm glad you like Emma; she's a really fun character to write most of the time! Haha, and yes. Bill. He's being sneaky ;) Thanks again for the review, beautiful! It means the world to me! :D (L)
Date: 10/20/11 02:53 am Title: 00ii. Sticky With Champagne
adslkajd I got so excited when I saw this was updated! I loved this chapter, but I'm very jealous of Emma getting to cuddle Bill. haha. I can't explain it, but there's something about your writing style that I absolutely love.
Also, good luck finding a copy of Uninvited, I hope someone's got a copy saved somewhere.
Author's Response: Awe, I'm so glad you loved it, darling! Haha, and trust me; I'm jealous, too! x) =^^= And I'm incredibly happy to hear you like the writing style--thank you so much! :D And as always, thank you for the review! (L)
Date: 10/17/11 11:41 pm Title: 00ii. Sticky With Champagne
I absolutely loved it and can't wait for the next one :D
Author's Response: :D I'm so glad you loved it! Thanks for the review! (L)
Date: 10/17/11 11:28 pm Title: 00i. Buy You a Drank
I'm beginning to really like this story. The story-line as well as the writing style :D
Author's Response: Awe, thanks so much, darling! :] (L)
Date: 10/17/11 10:39 pm Title: 00ii. Sticky With Champagne
:O
Oh. My. God.
I literally shit bricks when I saw his on the Recenta Stories section ^.^ I've been waiting foooreveeer for you to update this story.
I'm so happy right now that I can feel the angels singigtheir beautiful songs :P
I can now peacefully go to bed now knowing that you're not dead and will be updating more.
And I'm really sorry about Adi-Adi's lost story; I hope someone has a copy of it.
Author's Response: Haha, oh my. I hope your ass is ok! ;) Sorry it took so long to update! Like I said, school and real life seriously like to impede upon my ability to write. )': Thanks for the review, dear! I'm glad you're looking forward to more! (L)
Date: 10/17/11 08:37 pm Title: 00ii. Sticky With Champagne
I think I have a new favorite story. I'm simply in love with your writing and how you describe things. I have perfect visuals in my head as I read it and you leave me craving more. The way you write Emma's heartbreak is breathtakingly agonizing and I love it! I can't wait for more. :)
I hope you find a copy of "Uninvited" Adi-Adi is my all time favorite author on this site and her writing inspired me to start writing on my own. I'm one of those crying in their bed right now. lol
Best of luck and looking forward to more of this story!!! < 3
Author's Response: Oh, god. Darling, you're so sweet! This review is beautiful; I'll hold it close to my heart forever! :D (L) And yes, Adi-Adi and I are both really sad! )): I hope beyond hope that someone has a copy. Thanks for the gorgeous review, dear, and look forward to more! ;) (L)
Date: 10/17/11 08:11 pm Title: 00o. Prologue
You have caught my attention.... :) I'm loving it!
Author's Response: I'm so glad! :) Thanks for the review, beautiful! (L)
Date: 08/02/11 03:46 am Title: 00i. Buy You a Drank
(reviewing from my phone sorry if it cuts off)
Now I really want to know the story behind the Crown Royal and her brother. Even without knowing the story on that Zach's gift was really thoughtful. Please update soon this story is different I like!
Author's Response: Oh, girl, I know how that phone stuff goes. Don't even worry about it! And I'll tell you now, just so there's no confusion, there's not much of a story behind the Crown Royal, other than the fact that her brother liked that brand of whiskey a lot. :) I'm so glad you like the story, and thank you SO much for the review! :D (L)
Date: 08/02/11 02:47 am Title: 00i. Buy You a Drank
Loved it! :)
Author's Response: :D I'm glad! Thanks for the review, doll! (L)
Date: 08/01/11 12:08 pm Title: 00i. Buy You a Drank
ooooohhhh i like this story already Please update :P
Author's Response: Awe, I'm glad you're enjoying it, darling! Thank you so much for the review! :) (L)
Date: 08/01/11 04:36 am Title: 00i. Buy You a Drank
Is it odd that this is only the second chapter and I already love this story? Oh well, this was amazing babe. I especially loved the "You are the sun to plum" part, it made me laugh for a good five minutes. I think you nailed Tom perfectly with the Tokio Hotel is complete shit, except their amazing guitarist bit. I can't wait for more.
Author's Response: Awe, doll! :) You're so sweet; I'm so gald you're liking it! I'm also glad you liked that part--it was incredibly fun to write! :D Thanks for the review, beautiful! (L)
Date: 07/31/11 10:57 pm Title: 00i. Buy You a Drank
I like the way things are going, can't wait to see how her and Bills relationship will develop.
Author's Response: Thank you, sweets! I'm glad you approve! ;) Thanks for the review! (L)
Date: 07/31/11 04:03 pm Title: 00i. Buy You a Drank
:)
Author's Response: :D (L)
Date: 07/31/11 08:43 am Title: 00i. Buy You a Drank
Oh I can't wait to meet Bill! I'm interested to see how you will portray him. You handled Tom's entry well, and I totally loved this line:
“They’re shit,” Tom said immediately. “They are a horrible band—the laughing stock of our country. The only thing is,” he put a finger up, “they have a brilliant guitarist. That’s the only thing good about them.”
That asshole, that sounds exactly like something he would say. xD I wonder when/how Emma will find out who they are. But maybe I'm getting a bit ahead of myself. Then again, I'd expect the twins' home to be plastered in their platinum records and music awards, so maybe not ;D
Also, since you mentioned it last time, I copied the mistakes I found. Just two:
bit my lip and the resulting shattering.
I think "and" was supposed to be "at"?
“I’m use to being alone. I like it.”
"used to"
Can't wait for more! :)
Author's Response: -blushes- Thank you so much, darling! :) It's going to be a fun time over at the twins' house; you'll see what happens soon! ;] And thank you so much for pointing out the mistakes! I will fix them post-haste! I appreciate the reviews, and the help you give me! More to come soon! (L) :D
Date: 07/29/11 05:58 pm Title: 00o. Prologue
You're back! I can't even explain how much I smiled when I got the email saying you had posted something new.
I already like this story, I always love the characters you come up with and this one is no different. I can't wait to see where this story goes.
Author's Response: Yes! My triumphant return! >:D -strikes epic pose- It's an honor to me that you've got me tracked x) I love it! I'm glad you're liking the story, and more will be up very soon! Thanks for the review, darling! You've always been one of my regulars, and I really appreciate it! -bows- (L)
Date: 07/29/11 05:42 pm Title: 00o. Prologue
I really want to see where you take this! Great beginning, I like how you set up her story, and I look forward to an update. :D Since you mentioned it, there were a couple typos, but I've forgotten where they are. Sorry to be unhelpful! xD
Author's Response: Awe, thanks so much, sweetie! I'm glad you like it! I'm working on chapter one at this very moment, so you won't have to wait super long! ;) And thanks for letting me know about the typos--you're still quite helpful! Like I said, I finished it at three in the morning, so I wasn't really proofreading! x) But I'll go through in a moment and fix everything I see! Thanks for the review! (L)
Date: 07/29/11 01:58 pm Title: 00o. Prologue
Right. So I did like this quite a bit, and fully intend on tracking it. However, I must point out (and this is advice I got when I wrote my first fanfic, and its helped me like crazy):
We want Bill XD
See, no matter how wonderful your writing style and your plot is, this is a fanfiction, and most people lose interest if the main characters don't make an appearance fast enough. Personally, I liked how you spoke about her past, and why exactly she needed the liquor. Here's hoping you're making the band arrive soon!
Author's Response: HAHA. Oh, girl, trust me. I want Bill, too! ;) This is only the prologue, so I did want it to focus on her a bit and why she needs the liquor. Thank you so much for the criticism, though. I know sometimes it can be a risky move not introducing the band right off the bat, but I felt like background was required. I promise, the band is in the very next chapter! :) Thank you for the wonderful compliments, though, and the review! More is coming soon! ^.^ (L)
Date: 07/29/11 12:19 pm Title: 00o. Prologue
Wow nicely written! Can't wait to read more!
Author's Response: Thanks, pumpkin! :) I'm glad you liked it! Next chapter is in the works! (L)