Date: 08/21/11 06:56 pm Title: Chapter 5
Ahh Bill. -shakes head- Reading this chapter was some what strange because it's like reading my Bill from Desperate but in a different situation. It's great though, because it means that I completely understand what he's thinking and feeling. I don't know if that even made sense. Anyway, this was a fantastic chapter and it was definitely worth the wait. :3
Date: 08/21/11 03:27 am Title: Chapter 5
god im so nervous!!!! idk whats gonna happen but i have a general idea of where it'll get eventually, i think...bad bad stuff. ;_; poor billy, i dont like thinking of tom as evil, but...yah
Author's Response: Yeah, I don't like evil Tom either :( we'll see where it goes... thanks for reviewing :)
Date: 08/21/11 03:11 am Title: Chapter 3
oh so it's...a false sense of security and a real sense of longing? damn, crafty sons of bitches
Date: 08/21/11 03:04 am Title: Chapter 2
oh no ooh no! aaah *coveres eyes* whats gonna happen when they go with them???aaaah
Date: 08/21/11 02:57 am Title: Chapter 1
hmmm, interesting concept, i'd never heard of the practice. are you from Europe, then?
Author's Response: Yeah, I'm from Europe! Thanks for all your reviews :)
Date: 08/20/11 07:27 pm Title: Chapter 5
OMG. moar.
Author's Response: yes sir! :P
Date: 08/20/11 02:39 pm Title: Chapter 5
Tricky, tricky Tom. And Bill is so sweet and trusting. Oh, I'm on edge wondering just what is going to happen. Please write more soon.
Author's Response: im glad you find this interesting and are eager to read on! thanks for the review :)
Date: 08/20/11 01:35 pm Title: Chapter 5
I agree with MissAnna; people need to be aware of this. Thanks for putting this up, and thanks for updating! :3
Author's Response: Thank you! Glad you see it that way too, hope you'll enjoy the following updates :)
Date: 08/20/11 01:13 pm Title: Chapter 5
I just hate the fact that Tom is playing Bill (even tho that was his intentions) & seeing Bill fall for it. I kinda feel bad for him already for when he finds out what Tom was up to. I'm curious about how Tom honestly feels about Bill at this point.
Author's Response: Yeah, it's sad... but we'll see, later chapters will focus a little more on how Tom feels about everything! Thanks for reviewing :)
Date: 08/20/11 12:58 pm Title: Chapter 4
Bill is being smart about being a bit reserved when it comes to Tom. But somehow I don't think that's going to keep him out of trouble. On to the next =)
Date: 08/20/11 11:59 am Title: Chapter 5
I think every single teenager should read this fic. I would be good for those who think they are mature and can make decisions for themselves.
Tom doesn't even have to do much to influence Bill since he already is trying to emancipate himself in his mother's eyes.
I'm not sure if you do, but you should post this on other sites. Even change the names and post it in a local newspaper.
I'm so scared for what's gonna happen. I know it can be scary as hell.
Author's Response: You've got it right! It's a horrible thing and it happens way too frequently, and the scary thing about it is that often these girls/boys go back to these loverboys even when 'rescued' from the police, they just can't get out of the cycle anymore! I got the idea because my mother bought me a very good book about this topic since i almost stepped into this cycle myself, thankfully she recognized it early enough to open my eyes! it happens without you even realizing it, it really is scary! i will, however, give this story and unusual twist that would (probably) never happen in real life! Thanks for reviewing :)
Date: 08/20/11 11:48 am Title: Chapter 5
tan inocente jaja ya lo atraparon esos 2 al pobre Bill q èstà caendo redondito.... buen capì :D me gustò en espera de tu actalizacuòn :=)
Author's Response: Gracias! Si pobre Bill... pero ya veremos ;)
Date: 08/20/11 11:45 am Title: Chapter 5
mhmmmm. Bad influencing going on here. At a certain point letting your parents know where you are going to be isn't the same as asking permission.
I'm wondering what is going on here with Bushido. I think it was kind of odd Tom bringing up that BUshido wished Andreas was there, when we know he just talked to Andi and stuff. Very strange to me.
Good chapter. I am really looking forward to more. Keep up the awesome work!
Author's Response: Thank you! Yes, Tom and Bushido... very suspicious. Hope you'll enjoy the following chapters :)
Date: 08/20/11 11:13 am Title: Chapter 5
What Tom and Bushido is kinda creepy but the way they go about I is interesting. You're a good writer by the way.
Author's Response: Thank you!!! hopefully I'll keep you interested until the end with this story :)
Date: 08/20/11 10:49 am Title: Chapter 5
Ugh, Tom is just so slippery in this! And poor Bill has all sorts of warning bells going off in his head, but he's just too insecure to go with it...this story has become so addicting!
Author's Response: Thanks for the review!!! Glad you're enjoying the story :D
Date: 08/07/11 10:30 pm Title: Chapter 4
aww I was right! He is adorable! Also, I don't normally get all hot over cars, but daaamn if one were to do it, that's it.
Well, Bill, maybe if you would start acting like an adult, your mummy would treat you like one.
Ok, so a bit of concrit here...When Andi said You, on the other hand, have forgotten your math homework three times last week and today...” I think it might have sounded better if you had said "'have forgotten your home work today and three times last week" or maybe "'had forgotten your home work three times last week, and today"
Anyway, other than that, wonderful chapter. I am really looking forward to more! I just want to shake that boy though. You gotta go with your gut on things like this.
Author's Response: Thanks for your review! concrit is always good and I think you're right! It flows better, I'll change that right away :) sorry for taking so long to reply/post, the next chapter is finally up ;)
Date: 08/07/11 07:23 pm Title: Chapter 4
Another fantastic chapter and as per usual, I can't wait to read the next one. :)
Author's Response: Thanks so much for your review! Sorry it took so long to reply and post the next chapter! Hope you enjoy it :)
Date: 08/06/11 10:00 pm Title: Chapter 4
have you read haus of eros on here?
Author's Response: Nope, don't know it! Why? :)
Date: 08/06/11 04:22 pm Title: Chapter 4
OMG! Love the story so far...if i was Bill i would totally be all "oh i didnt do the work anyways so we can go out!" but yeah...cant wait for your next update!
Author's Response: haha! glad you like it so much :) working on the next update!