Date: 04/16/13 11:55 am Title: Chapter 9
Hm...this is getting good, was a little iffy about reading it at first. Than sat down last night and started reading it, and continued this morning. So far so good!
Author's Response: I'm glad you decided to give this fic a chance! Hope you will continue liking it ;) Thanks for the review!
Date: 04/15/13 10:31 pm Title: Chapter 9
siii regresaste al fin !! Im glad I love this fic!!! please update soon, very soon :)
Author's Response: Siii, hace muchisimo tiempo pero en fin regresé :) I'll update asap ;) I'm glad you enjoy the this fic! :D
Date: 04/15/13 06:41 pm Title: Chapter 9
I think Bill has an intuition that something is fishy with Tom and Bushido. I hope Bill will be careful. Great chapter!
Author's Response: Yes, Bill is definitely a little more careful than Andreas :P Thanks for the review! :)
Date: 04/15/13 03:49 pm Title: Chapter 9
Ohhh, things are getting really interesting and feisty :D I can't wait for more and what's going to happen between Bill and Tom! Cuz I'm pretty sure something IS going to happen, right? ;-)
Author's Response: We will seeeee....... ;P Thanks for reviewing! :D
Date: 04/15/13 03:47 pm Title: Chapter 9
that took a while but finally you updated yay :D
Author's Response: :D
Date: 04/15/13 01:20 pm Title: Chapter 9
wow....sad but they are kinda good in their little game ;p can't wait for more
Author's Response: Yeah, the know exactly what they are doing... Thanks for reviewing! :)
Date: 04/15/13 12:19 pm Title: Chapter 9
I was kinda hoping Bill and Andi were going to be too smart to fall for their charm again lol. For a second I was proud of them. But I get they are young and dumb :) can't wait to find out what's next. Great chapter!
Author's Response: Yes, unfortunately they are young and dumb... although the story would be boring if they weren't ;P Thanks for reviewing!
Date: 04/15/13 02:10 am Title: Chapter 8
I just read one of my old comments and noticed that I made a mistake there. What I actually meant is that I really really hope that Bill will be OK in this story. I do not want anything bad happen to him. Look forward to the next chapter!
Author's Response: Thanks for reviewing! Yes I remember your comment haha We will see what's going to happen to Bill... ;)
Date: 04/14/13 10:34 pm Title: Chapter 8
wow....Tom and Bu really have to have some history of this kind of "work". but something i think Tom takes this one a little bit different, but maybe i'm wrong. can't wait for more
Author's Response: Thanks for the comment! We'll see ;)
Date: 04/14/13 04:44 pm Title: Chapter 8
Nice chapter. I hope that Tom will develop real feelings for Bill and everything well end well. Or that Bill is distrustful enough to not get caught into this web.
The movie I had in mind that reminded me of this story is "Moment of Truth: Why My Daughter?" (1993).
You can watch it on YouTube: http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=Db_9m0yFaxk
Author's Response: Thanks for the link! I'll definitely watch it :D Thanks for reviewing :)
Date: 04/14/13 04:39 pm Title: Chapter 8
I'm excited to see what will happen next :)
Author's Response: Nice to see you continue reading this story after so much time! Thanks :)
Date: 04/14/13 02:49 pm Title: Chapter 1
Seems very interesting :)
Author's Response: Thanks! :)
Date: 04/14/13 01:59 pm Title: Chapter 8
Yay! Thanks for posting so quickly. I really enjoy this story, its really mysterious and exciting!
Author's Response: Aw thank you! I'm glad you're enjoying it :D
Date: 04/14/13 12:55 am Title: Chapter 7
nice ;)i'm curious what Bu and Tom have in mind with what they're doing with Bill and Andreas
Author's Response: If you continue reading you'll see... ;) Next chapter will be up soon!
Date: 04/14/13 12:23 am Title: Chapter 7
Interesting story. It reminds me a movie where everything ended badly for a girl that played a part similar to Bill's. I hope you will completely ruin Bill here.
Author's Response: Really? What is the movie called? It would really interest me to see it! I'm still deciding how to end this story... I know how it SHOULD end, but we'll see ;) Thanks a lot for reviewing!
Date: 04/13/13 09:59 pm Title: Chapter 7
Hurry scurry write and posty!!!
Author's Response: I'm at it! ;)
Date: 04/13/13 08:40 pm Title: Chapter 7
Another amazing chapter. I'm getting excited for what's to come next, but I'm curious to why Bushido went back into the club? I can't wait for the next chapter though, I hope you'll update again soon! Much Love xxxxx
Author's Response: You'll see ;D Typing up the next chapter at the moment, should be up soon :) Thanks for reviewing!
Date: 04/13/13 04:55 pm Title: Chapter 6
Hi! I've just read all six chapters and I've got to admit, I really love this.
I like your writing style and your writing technique. There's something distinctive about the way you write, because although there isn't mass amounts of description for each setting and scene, I could still visualize everything that you've written and that's baffled me, tbh. Learn me how to do that?
I adore the storyline. It's very interesting to read, because it's original and new in comparison to what I've read on here already. I love how Bill and Andreas are really naive, young and careless in this, because it makes the story more gripping. However, Bill seems to be most cautious out of the pair of them, but that still doesn't say much about his carelessness, because Tom's utterly drawn him in and knocked every suspicion he may have - out of the window, as Bushido has with Andreas. I love Tom and Bushido, there's something dark and mysterious about them and that's making everything much more exciting.
I've rambled enough I think, but I love this and I can't wait until the next Chapter. When do you think you'll update this again?
xxxxx
Author's Response: Thank you so much for taking the time to review! I will probably post the next chapter before I go to bed tonight, I have already written half of it :) I'm really glad you like my story and writing-style, thanks! :)
Date: 12/05/11 04:26 am Title: Chapter 5
I am in love with this story so far! It's seductive in a cute way! >///
Date: 09/01/11 04:29 pm Title: Chapter 5
I missed this chapter because I was on holiday and didn't realise there was an update, so my review is late! But this was a cute chapter. And I am worried about what Tom is going to do next!