Date: 04/19/13 11:26 am Title: Chapter 11
OMGOMGOMG this story is so addictive. Awesome plot and you're such a good writer, every chapter's ending makes me crazy to read more... so please update sooooon :D
Author's Response: Thank yooouuu! So glad you enjoy this story so much :D I'll update asap! :)
Date: 04/18/13 11:03 pm Title: Chapter 11
siii me encanta que actualices rapido gracias XD super genial capi :)
Author's Response: Muchisimas gracias! ^^
Date: 04/18/13 10:15 pm Title: Chapter 11
Bill and Andreas are so naive...
Is Tom falling for Bill? I hope so.
Author's Response: Hmmm you'll see ;) Thanks for reviewing!
Date: 04/18/13 09:50 pm Title: Chapter 11
Hmmm...I think Tom feels something to Billabd tests why he wants to leave them but what he wants now?
Date: 04/18/13 09:50 pm Title: Chapter 11
Hmmm...I think Tom feels something to Billabd tests why he wants to leave them but what he wants now?
Author's Response: You'll have to wait and see... ;)
Date: 04/18/13 07:49 pm Title: Chapter 11
Excellent chapter!
Author's Response: Thank you ^^
Date: 04/18/13 07:45 pm Title: Chapter 11
Hi again! Another intriguing Chapter.
Tom and Bill's first kiss was something I had expected to happen, yet I didn't expect Tom to freak out like that. I found that a little comforting though, it shows us that however evil and twisted Tom may be, he has a conscience somewhere inside. I think he likes Bill on a deeper level now, more than he should anyway. When Tom looked into Bill's eyes after they kissed, I think Tom saw his innocence and felt guilty for what he was planning on doing to him, knowing that a special person like Bill doesn't deserve that.
Also, I think Bill is the type of kid who would do anything to impress Tom. Especially more so now, since Tom freaked out about the kiss, I think he'll do anything to keep him thoroughly interested, because Tom's gotten so far into his head with his poison and Bill's hooked on him.
This was amazing and I can't wait for more.
xxxxx
Author's Response: I just love your reviews! :D You really put thought into it and I can see you know exactly what is going on ;P Thank you for reading this story! Next chapter coming up soon ;)
Date: 04/18/13 03:16 pm Title: Chapter 10
I started reading this story when you first posted it so I'm really happy you're writing again. I really don't like Bushido - he makes my skin crawl - but I think that Tom is somehow not as bad even though he's also involved in the scam to bring in young boys (and girls I suspect from what Bushido's cousin said). I'm really on edge wondering just when and how Bill and Andi will get introduced to Jost who seems to be running the whole operation. Can't wait for the next chapter.
Author's Response: Thank you so much for continuing to read this story, even after i half abandoned it! I really appreciate it :) I'm glad you enjoy it! The next chapter is up riiiiight now! :D
Date: 04/18/13 01:26 am Title: Chapter 10
Oh lord...I know it's part of the story but I hate that B & A are being played big time. Not really a fan of Bills mom, but shes right to be worried. I'm surprised B & A haven't discussed and tried to rationalize more as to why Bu & T are 'falling' for them so fast and giving them gifts-do they not realize that's going to cost them or are they that naive? Can't wait for next chapter!
Author's Response: Yep, they are definitely a little (or a lot) naive! Thanks for the review! Next chapter up soon :)
Date: 04/17/13 11:29 pm Title: Chapter 10
oh now the thing is getting very more interesting!!!!!!!! :) :) :) me encantaaaa!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!1 :D
Author's Response: Graciaaaas :D
Date: 04/17/13 07:02 pm Title: Chapter 10
Now as I think about it I am a bit surprise how easy Bill and Andreas decide to steal clothes from that store.
Great chapter!
Author's Response: Thanks for reviewing! :D
Date: 04/17/13 06:19 pm Title: Chapter 10
Oooh! Very interesting....can't blame Simone for being worried over Bill honestly.
Author's Response: Thanks! Definitely can't blame her! :)
Date: 04/17/13 04:04 pm Title: Chapter 10
Ooh ooh! Thanks for posting! I wonder what they will buy?
Author's Response: Thanks for reviewing! We will see... ;)
Date: 04/17/13 02:24 pm Title: Chapter 10
i love how fast you are uploading ^__^
Author's Response: Thanks! Will try to keep it up :)
Date: 04/17/13 02:23 pm Title: Chapter 10
O wow! Can hardly wait to see what's next!
Author's Response: Me neither :P Thanks for the review!
Date: 04/17/13 02:15 pm Title: Chapter 10
oh wow. Bu knows how to play and get to Andreas good side after what he did. also Bill's mom....i think if she would do something about the thing she found and Tom?
Author's Response: Yes, the guys really know what they are doing... we'll see what action bills mom is going to take ;) thanks for reviewing!
Date: 04/17/13 12:57 pm Title: Chapter 10
SHIT. Bushido has manipulated Andreas into forgiveness with an expensive ring and Tom has gotten too far into Bill's head about standing up for himself to his mother. They should know all the STRANGER DANGER rules by now, come on, who doesn't?!
This is getting exciting though, I really like it. I think you're hitting dead on in such a realistic field with this and where you're taking it, because this shit happens too often, sadly! I think you've captured that with the way you've written how Tom and Bu are manipulating Bill and Andreas into trusting them more and more in each Chapter, etc. This is gonna go tits up, I can just smell it.
You're clearly a very talented writer and I can't wait to see where the next lot of Chapters go. Thank you for sharing this and I hope you update again soon.
xxxxx
Author's Response: Wow, what a review! I can see you read between the lines which is great, you know exactly what is going on and how it is all happening, and that makes me happy :D Thanks a lot for the compliment, I will try to upload the next chapter tonight :) Thanks for reading this story! and thanks for reviewing :)rn
Date: 04/17/13 12:55 pm Title: Chapter 10
Poor little Bill is going to get his heart broken, I don't like this :( x
Author's Response: :(
Date: 04/17/13 11:10 am Title: Chapter 9
I love this Story! And you are right for the Reason why u write a story like this ;)
Keep it coming ;)
Author's Response: Thank you! Obviously this story is meant to be enjoyed, however it is a very serious topic and unfortunately it happens way too much... I'm glad you like the story though, and thanks for reviewing :)
Date: 04/16/13 04:59 pm Title: Chapter 9
I really hope this has a happy ending but I really doubt it at the moment! Its really good though :) x
Author's Response: Just wait and see ;) Glad you like the story, thanks for reviewing!