Date: 04/26/13 12:27 pm Title: Chapter 13
THE SUSPENSE IS KILLING ME! But its getting good!
Date: 04/26/13 11:30 am Title: Chapter 13
Yay! I like new chapters! Thanks for another great one and good luck on the next!
Date: 04/26/13 11:29 am Title: Chapter 13
omg!! i cant wait for the next!! they are so innocent!! (Bill and Andreas)
Date: 04/26/13 10:53 am Title: Chapter 13
Yea, Tom's totally in luuuurve mit Billa. Poor Tomi. But y'now, I don't get why their 17 years is makong such a difference if they normally go as young as 18...un less that's just an excuse his brain is pulling out to protect itself?
Yea, Bushido, I don't think you'd be in Andi by tomorrow if it wasn't for the huuuuge help Bill just gave you. Totes don't believ Andi would've given it up, no matter how smooth Bushy was if he was feeling as wary as he appear to have been.
Fantastic chapter! Look forward to the next!
Date: 04/26/13 10:30 am Title: Chapter 13
This story keeps getting better and better. Can't wait to see where you take it!!!
Date: 04/26/13 09:17 am Title: Chapter 13
This update just made my day! I really hope that Tom doesn't do anything mean to Bill and that everything will be ok in the end. I guess we're in for a bumpy ride! :P
Author's Response: Oh I'm glad this made your day :D Thank you so much for the review! Yep- a bumpy ride it will be ;D
Date: 04/26/13 09:15 am Title: Chapter 13
OH MY GOD. Hello?! Another amazing Chapter.
I really do love Tom more and more, and that's probably really crazy for you to read. His character is totally different to Bushido's and that's why I like him. Bushido is all about the job and getting it done in the short time he was set by David, whereas Tom actually has a conscience about what they'll be doing to Bill and Andreas. I think because he spends so much time with Bill, he's starting to grow an attachment, like feelings toward him, like feelings he shouldn't be having for him when he's setting him up like this. Even though, he'd probably put it down to feeling guilty for doing it to someone as innocent and young as Bill.
I just ramble on like there's no tomorrow during reviews, so I'm sorry! But I can't wait for another update. xxxxx
Author's Response: Don't even think about apologizing for your reviews :O I absolutely love them ;P I'm so glad you are enjoying this story so much, I'm already working on the next chapter ;D And I absolutely understand why you like Tom... ;P
Date: 04/25/13 06:21 pm Title: Chapter 1
I love this story! I hope you update soon even though you just did;) I think Tom is starting to actually fall for Bill! Yay! <3
Author's Response: Thanks for your review! Hope you enjoy the next chapter ;)
Date: 04/23/13 05:53 pm Title: Chapter 12
Awwwww tom's falling c': Can't wait for more, you're such a good writer!
Author's Response: Aw thank you so much for your review! Hope you like the next chapter :D
Date: 04/23/13 04:07 pm Title: Chapter 12
you are actually uploading fast
Author's Response: I'm very glad you see it that way :)
Date: 04/23/13 07:58 am Title: Chapter 12
So Bill practically ditched school for Tom..,well, maybe it was worth cos he got a little present and maybe after he went back from Bu's sister, Tom would focus just on Bill? Hmmm....I don't know, but I guess with Bill he works differently than with others he did
Author's Response: Yes I think he works differently with Bill too ;P Hope you like the next chapter :D
Date: 04/23/13 06:07 am Title: Chapter 12
This story is so intriguing :)
Author's Response: Thank yooou :D
Date: 04/23/13 02:02 am Title: Chapter 12
Cool beans, I wanna see their reactions when they're sold into prostitution, :( But the plot is going great and keeping me hooked! haha, no pun intended....
Author's Response: Hahaha, thanks for your review! We'll see about their reaction..... :O
Date: 04/23/13 12:49 am Title: Chapter 12
*shakes Bill* wake up boy!
Surely there will be a trace of Fatiha on Toms lips/clothes. Anxious to see if so and Bills reaction. Bill was left at a dirty bar right? What if something happens to him while Toms gone and Bills not at Starbucks to meet him?! My mind is thinking of so many scenarios with this...When I get into a story I sometimes ramble with thoughts in my review-sorry. Thanks for this update,looking forward to the next!
Author's Response: Haha love your thoughts on the story! Interesting ideas ;) Thanks for the review! Glad you enjoy the story so much :D
Date: 04/23/13 12:22 am Title: Chapter 12
I get the distinct feeling that Tom is starting to actually fall for Bill. I'm not sure who I feel worse for, Billl or Tom. Fantastic chapter! I can't wait for the next!
Author's Response: We'll see whether your feeling is right ;P If it is... I think you should feel worse for Tom hahaha. Thanks for the review! :)
Date: 04/22/13 10:17 pm Title: Chapter 12
Tom is falling for Bill. Yeah!
Author's Response: Maybe.... ;p
Date: 04/22/13 08:20 pm Title: Chapter 12
Great chapter! I don't know what it was about the part with Tom and Fatiha but it made my stomach turn lol.
Author's Response: Thank you! ;)
Date: 04/22/13 07:23 pm Title: Chapter 11
Y'know... Tom needs to keep an eye on Bushido. Seems like he's taking the reins pretty tightly. Fantastic couple of chapters. I look forward to seeing the next
Author's Response: Thank you so much for you review! Next chapter right up ;)
Date: 04/20/13 12:52 am Title: Chapter 11
If you didn't know Tom was falling for Bill--you do now,especially since he was freaking out after that kiss! Bu and his big mouth, already telling David...god I am not looking forward to what awaits Bill and Andreas and their shock of betrayal. Good stuff-thanks for the quick update, i'll be right here waiting for more!
Author's Response: Thanks for the great review! I'm glad you're enjoying the story :) I'll update asap ;)rn
Date: 04/19/13 05:51 pm Title: Chapter 11
I knew Tom had a conscience somewhere under that self-assured exterior. I'm getting the vibe that he's starting to be attracted to Bill, especially with how he reacted to the kiss. At the least he has second thoughts about handing him over to Jost. It was funny but sad the way he convinced himself it was because he hadn't had his usual puff of weed for the day. I hate, hate, hate Bushido, he's such a callous arsehole. It makes me cringe the way he's wooing Andres with sweet words and jewellery (that ring is lovely). But then Tom's doing the same with Bill. I'm all on edge wondering what will happen next. Please post another chapter soon.
Author's Response: What a wonderful review :) Thanks for taking the time! You're definitely readying between the lines ;) I'm glad you're enjoying the story! next update soon :)