Date: 08/06/11 11:31 am Title: Chapter 4
:) van a salir juntos aunq no deberia alegrarme tanto ya q conocemos las verdaderas intenciones de Tom .. y me encanto la parte en q bill voltea y ve a todos mirāndolo jaja :D en espera del sgte=)
Author's Response: es un dilemma! por un lado todos queremos ver a Bill y Tom juntos y por el otro sabemos que Tom no es el que parece ser... pero ya veremos ;) me alegra que te guste el fic :D
Date: 08/06/11 10:34 am Title: Chapter 4
I love it so far!
Author's Response: yaay thank yooou :D
Date: 08/06/11 09:57 am Title: Chapter 4
OMG. That picture of 'Liam' is so cute, and 'Tom's' car...WOW!
Loved this chapter...can't wait to find out what's going to happen when Bill meets Tom later.
Author's Response: Yep, I'd love to make Tom's car mine :p so glad you liked the chapter, let's see what happens when they meet/if they meet ;) Thanks for the review :D
Date: 08/06/11 08:52 am Title: Chapter 4
Tom has a nice car!
as for letting Bills mother wait for him - he can always call her :)
Author's Response: yep, I guess he could ;) I'd love to have Tom's car :O thanks for reviewing :)
Date: 08/06/11 08:48 am Title: Chapter 3
really good as for now! I like Tom and Bushido, I guess I shouldn't ,haha
poor Bill, had to babysit a baby...his mother is pretty irresponsible and egoistic
Author's Response: Thank you! Glad you like them, a lot more of them to come in future chapters, obviously :P
Date: 08/04/11 01:33 pm Title: Chapter 1
Please write more. I can't wait to see what happens.
Author's Response: working on it :D
Date: 08/03/11 07:39 pm Title: Chapter 3
Bushido and Tom are playing their cards right. but I worry for the end result.
Author's Response: yep, your review pretty much sums it up!
Date: 08/03/11 02:08 am Title: Chapter 3
me encanta!! actualiza pronto please! :D
Author's Response: eres espaņola? o simplemente sabes hablar espaņol? :P actualizare lo más pronto posible! :)
Date: 08/02/11 10:54 pm Title: Chapter 3
Now how on earth could it be boring when we found out that Bill has an itty bitty bruder? I'll bet Liam is adorable. *lightbulb* You should get us a pic! It'd be awesome!
I say do not call back Andi! *shakes finger emphatically* You should'nt do it! He is too old for a high schooler to e messing around with, without even taking into consideration the icky feeling I get from him.
Great chapter. I'm glad we had some parental interaction. I wish there was a bit more with Simone, so we could've seen why she is so "uncool". But I kind of get the feeling that this evening is the story of Bill's life, and fairly typical for her.
I can't wait to see more! Keep up the wonderful work!
Author's Response: haha you're so cute! I'll find a pic of Bill's little brother to post it with my next chapter then ;) I'm glad you get an icky feeling with Bushido! I get that icky feeling every time I write his dialogue or actions... there will be quite a lot of parental interaction in this story and why Simone is so uncool will become apparent throughout each of her appearances! Thanks for the review :)
Date: 08/02/11 10:50 pm Title: Chapter 3
Call him back, Andi! And don't forget to ask Tom's number while you're at it ;) I hope they get to have a second date with the guys :)
Oh and I'm glad Bill and Andi got home safe.
My favorite line in this chapter is when Bill said: “I wanted to make sure we'd be completely out of it, so we wouldn't notice anything incase they raped us,” wow, that boy has the sense of anticipation! I like how he has a little naive side, but not too much.
Author's Response: Glad you liked it!!! :D More Tom in the next chapter, I think you'll be surprised ;P Thanks for the review :D
Date: 08/02/11 10:21 pm Title: Chapter 1
:)) cant wait for the next chapter. i love it
Author's Response: thank yooou :D
Date: 08/02/11 07:33 pm Title: Chapter 3
I love it!! :D
Author's Response: Thank yoooou :D
Date: 08/02/11 07:32 pm Title: Chapter 3
I love that Tom and Bushido actually took them home, rather than stealing them away. xD And Bill's line about being so drunk that they wouldn't notice if they raped them cracked me up. It probably shouldn't have, but whatever. :P
Author's Response: yeah, things in this fic are gonna go slow! that's how most loverboys work anyway, they need to have complete control of the situation and snatching them away immediately would have caused complete chaos! and you can crack up at any line in the story you want to, i will be sprinkling a little humor here and there ;)
Date: 08/02/11 07:22 pm Title: Chapter 1
This is a fantastic start. I have a bit of a thing for perv!Tom (I know, I'm a horrible person) so this should be good! Obviously outside the context of fiction, grooming of young boys and girls is a huge problem and is definitely something which needs to be adressed more.
Author's Response: Yes indeed it is a huge problem! i'm glad you're liking the fic though and i hope you'll enjoy it till the end :)
Date: 08/02/11 07:19 pm Title: Chapter 3
I'm looking forward to reading more of this.
Author's Response: Thanks! More to come soon :)
Date: 08/02/11 06:39 pm Title: Chapter 3
Ah, I kinda feel for Bill...I don't know, he's just a really easy character to understand and sympathize with. Great update and I'm excited for some more Tom!
Author's Response: I'm glad you can sympathize with him! I hope that's good :) and don't worry, there will be enough Tom in the next chapter ;)
Date: 08/01/11 07:46 pm Title: Chapter 2
I am absolutely loving this story already! It's just a brilliant concept of an idea. So excited to read the next chapter, I hope it comes soon. Until then this is an amazing chapter and so well thought through. Love it!
Author's Response: Thank you so much Blondey, I'm so glad you like it :) And thanks also for the banner it's lovely! Hope you enjoy the next chapter :)
Date: 08/01/11 12:06 am Title: Chapter 2
I'm indeed looking forward to the third chapter, I like how you put Tom and Bushido trying to seduce Bill and Andreas at a club :)
What a good idea to write a story about how men seduce minors to enroll them in a prostitution network, (phrased like that it sounds wrong lol) but it's true that there is not enough awareness about this topic.
What's gonna happen in the car? :O Will Bushido and Tom attempt to rape Andreas and Bill? I think not yet, since they want to keep the teens on their good side, but I'll have to see for myself in the next chapter!
Author's Response: Thanks, I'm glad you liked the chapter and find the storyline a good idea, I hope I can make it justice :) next chapter will be up soon!
Date: 07/31/11 02:54 pm Title: Chapter 2
Ack, the stupidity they're both expressing (mostly Andreas) is incredible. But you write the tipsiness so well that it's kinda understandable.
Eepies. *is ascared of Tom and Bushido*
Author's Response: sadly many teens act that way! thanks for the review :)
Date: 07/31/11 11:13 am Title: Chapter 2
andreas is so naive. i just wanna knock some sense into him. and Bill....at least he's still a bit apprehensive, but that won't last long. sadly.
Author's Response: we'll see... thanks for the review :)