Date: 10/26/11 03:07 pm Title: The Closed Door
You killed the end part -__- I seriously thought he would knock and Abby would still be awake and they would be up all night talking and somehow Tom ends up falling asleep with her in HER BED!!! eeeepp! Yea it's crazy I know -___-
Author's Response: I'm sorry.
Date: 10/26/11 02:49 pm Title: Yanni Says Hi To Tom
1) 10 more but they need to progress a little quicker to much jibber-jabber.
2) I don't know the real Tom lol *interviews and articles don't count* but I have an idea. I can see Tom being the way you describe him in your story.
3) Yea continue with it, didn't really get that question.
4) Lol it was the F-U banner XD
Great chapter btw!!
Date: 10/26/11 12:24 pm Title: The Closed Door
love the last part.
Author's Response: Good to know! Some people don't like it at all. But things will progress and I promise everything will get better. In a few chapters, Abby willdo something that'll have everyone's reactions at, "Oh snap she didn't!!!"
Date: 10/24/11 12:38 am Title: The Closed Door
MORE!!! I love this story!
Author's Response: Aha! Of course! Things are a little slow right now because I'm in high school and it's really taking a lot out of me and all, but there will be more!
Date: 10/23/11 02:47 pm Title: The Closed Door
My heart jumped when I saw there was a new chapter
Author's Response: Awe! That's so sweet of you to say! That really means a lot to me and I appreciate it! <3
Date: 10/23/11 11:22 am Title: The Closed Door
Oh my gosh!! I couldn't find this story anywhere!!! I was so scared that it got deleted or something..but um..anyways Great chapter(s) and as an answer to the other chapter, I think the reason a reader would say its as if these things happened, is because It's just so easy to get attached to Abby and the insights you give in to Tom's thoughts make it seem like its actually going through his head at the time... And as a writer its hard to do that...And add that to an exceptionally excellently written plot line and we have a story like this ^^ loved by many!!
Author's Response: Aha! No! I would never delete this story! Oh and thank you for answering the question. That's so nice of you! Oh my gosh that's so nice of you to say! I really appreciate how kind you are! I honestly think I am not the best writer. My 7th grade English teacher told me I couldn't write and that I'd never amount to be a good writer. I'm glad you're helping me prove him wrong! Many many thanks!! <33
Date: 10/23/11 06:30 am Title: The Closed Door
It didn't suck actually I think this was a transition chapter. I am very glad that this chapter came today and I was able to see it because it actually made my day! I think it was great and the whole time I was with Abby and Tom -like always- thanks to your incredible talent and skills on writing, I can't wait for the next chapter! Abby didn't surprise me this time because in this chapter she was totally a normal human-being with confusion and unforgiveness in her head. It was time that she realized she could never forgive Tom. But Tom has to try and earn that forgiveness from her. He should listen, care and be there for her. He shouldn't just leave her. Of course this is what I think but from the line "That jealousy will one day be his downfall." I am guessing those two will be together or at least fate will bring them together and Tom will screw things up again.
Thank you for being such an amazing writer and please please write the new chap soon :)
Author's Response: Awe, that;s so nice of you to say that it made your day! The grammar here was shit, actually. xD And that's a great analogy you've made with how Abby and Tom are both acting. Many many thanks for reading and sticking around with the story! I will try to update much sooner from now on!
Date: 10/23/11 04:16 am Title: The Closed Door
It didn't suck it was very interesting!!can't wait for the next chapter
Author's Response: Oh well thank you so much! That really means a lot to me. I am so grateful to have such an awesome reader like you along for the ride and I always look forward to your reviews! Thanks so much for the sweet complement! I promise the story will get better soon.
Date: 10/23/11 03:44 am Title: The Closed Door
Great story so far!!!(: Me loves it!!!(:
Author's Response: Wow that really means a lot to me coming from a big time writer like you! Honest! I am so grateful to have such kind and positive people like you reading my story! I could not ask for a better reader. <3
Date: 10/23/11 03:01 am Title: The Closed Door
Shush ur mouth! This did NOT suck! Lol. It was another amazingly brilliant chapter =)
Author's Response: Aha! Wow, thank you so much for your kind words! I really have no way to thank you for being such a kind and dedicated reader other than: thank you so so much!!! I really feel grateful to have such a wondeful person like you reading my story and reviewing it! <3
Date: 10/23/11 02:37 am Title: The Closed Door
This did not suck, Missy. It was quite good. I'm starting to feel bad for Tom and it seems he starting to feel guilty, too. Thank the Lord I decided to check the recents before going to bed(: Now I can rest in peace.
Author's Response: I think it was mediocre. The grammar was not the best. I'm trying to go back to all my chapters and fix everything. It's taking a while though. And Tom is definately starting to grow up a little bit. And that's so sweet of you to say! Aha! Many many thanks for your kind words and for always being around! Love ya!
Date: 10/20/11 07:02 pm Title: Basketball
Hello :) I'm a major fan of this story. I absolutely love it. Your writting is absolutely amazing and the way you portray the characters and draw my attention into the story as though I'm actually in it is spectacular. I love it!
I also love this story so much that I was desperate to make a banner for it :D You don't need to use it, I just wanted to give it a go tehe. Anyhow love it! Can't wait until the next chapter!
And if you wanted to use it then you can find the HTML code here :D
http://s382.photobucket.com/albums/oo267/xBringmetolifex09/?action=view¤t=SheForgivesYou.jpg
AND if you where wanting to use it then here is the HTML :)
Author's Response: Oh, that is soo sweet of you to say! That really means a lot and I incredibly appreciate such kind words from a reader! <3 And I think the banner is gorgeous! It's incredible and I can't believe you made such a nice thing. Unfortunately, I can't post anything new in my description box; the thing has bee frozen for nearly a month now. D= I don't know why. But I will post it in a chapter so everyone can see what a wonderful job you've done! I really really love it! Amazing job!!! <3333
Date: 10/13/11 11:00 pm Title: February 15, 2008
Les Afghans on Tour!
Author's Response: You got it!
Date: 10/13/11 08:32 am Title: February 15, 2008
awryt..first off i know that i'm a terrible reviewer for letting it go for 15 chapters before giving a review... but i'd like to tell you that you did an AWESOME job with this story. Abby (we even have the same name. yay!) is such an inspiration for me, going through a rough patch myself. the crazy shit she constantly goes through reminds me that no matter what hurdles sprout your way, you can always turn it into something positive and something you can actually learn from. keep it up! and thank you. =)
Author's Response: You are not a terrible reviewer! the fact that you simply took the time to even write a review makes you an awesome person in my book. That really great for me to hear that you like the story and that you can really connect to it; that means a lot. I am so grateful to have such a kind person as a reader, like you. Many many thanks for leaving such a sweet review and for reviewing! <3
Date: 10/12/11 03:44 pm Title: Yanni Says Hi To Tom
so I realized that i started by reviewing with numbered comments, then paragraphs, then numbered comments again. Not sure which is better for you but im going to go with the numbers since something tells me i'l just ask a bunch of questions, which means its probably going tobe pretty long...soryy
comment1: whats the 'body' figure thing about? Just being able to tell she's a girl from her boobs and such?... I feel like i should know and i dont- silly stupid me! lol
comment2:oh do i kind of feel bad for toms mom once abby finds out she's the one who told him her addresscomment3:- but then again, it wasnt AT ALL her business to tell so she deserves whatever she gets
comment3: awww the camera part is vute... they had to of been so shocked!
comment4:"hiking it as far above the beginning of what little cleavage she had as it would allow" i had to read this 3 times to get that you were saying that her bobs are small. i was sitting here thinking "The beginning of her cleavage? isnt she like way to old to not Hit puberty?" silly me
comment5:(And if she did, what would you have done, Tom?) good question- have a mentioned that i like your little inserts? lol
comment6:The first time he had heard her say something to him, and it was “SHIT!” hahahahaha
comment7:(And then one day, her voice would be gone forever and ever.)' have i mentioned how much your inserts sometimes worry me.
comment8:i was wondering if he would realize how out of line he was to ask about jason- good to know he's kicking himself
comment9:Rockaway Beach High Marching Band on it, with a picture of a French horn below the words." not to be creepy, but didnt you say you play french horn? is that why she has a shirt with one on it?
comment10:is he seriously disappointed about there not being chairs? HE HASNT SEEN HER IN 6 YEARS- WTH DOES THAT MATTER? idiot
comment11:“Who did we used to play with all the time, again? I forget everyone’s names.” ah. now i finally get a start of an answer to the title of this chapter.
comment12:I thought it would be funny to fuck around with the air bags a little.” .... good god. can i just say i very much though she was going to hit him... i think he even thought it lol
heres my answers to the questions
1. um...idk. id just like for it to go on for a while lol
2. i think that he might be because the tom in this story is so realistic, but im well aware that this tom is a character so iv never actually applied his characteristics to real life tom- not to mention iv been listening to a lot or Korean music of which he makes none of so i haven't been thinking of the real him that much
3. im sorry, but i don't understand this question so i cant answer it
4.i kept seeing the banner for it and found it really interesting but had taken on alot of other stories that i hadn't been reading on commenting on. once i started commenting a decent amount on those, i started tracking this one.
sorry this is so grossly long!
Author's Response: That's okay if it's really long; it just might take me longer than usual to reply to it. Like now. I've been so busy lately and haven't even been able to post a chapter, forget answer to reviews.So here I go... 1) She is uncomfortable with having other men see her..."lady parts", or like the shape of them, if you will. That whole thing with Tom just screwed her up like that for the longest time. 2) You're absolutely right about that. There will be more on that later in the story though...or maybe not.... I haven't really decided yet. I have a planned ending that will not change, but it's the stuff in the middle that's making me blank out here. 3) Aha! Well yeah; they've never seen one before, so they were all really happy about it. =D 4) Ahaha! Yes, but that's not what I was saying. xD Abby already went through puberty, therefore she has boobs, but they're pretty small. She's really flat. 5) Awe, thank you! And yeah, it gives you something to think about while I take forever to write the next chapter. I'm lazy. 7) That also gives you something to think about while I take the rest of eternity to upload a new chapter! 8) Aha, I know! Tom is a very jealous guy when it comes to girls; at least that's what I've noticed. So I thought it would be fitting for him to say as the first thing to pop into his head. 9) Why yes I am in the marching band. I switched to the French horn 4 months ago after I declared I hated the violin. (Which I still do and always will.) And that's not the reason entirely; there's going to be a little string on the plot line about that. It was mentioned in another chapter a long time ago. No one really picked it up. You'll see though! 10) Hey, he's used to being seated in the lap of luxury on a silk pillow; not a boulder. He's a picky guy. Abby on the other hand would sit on those boulders any day over a silk cusion. 12) AH! She should have, shouldn't she? xD Nah, he'll get what's coming to him sonner or later. Probably in like...ten to fifteen chapters.
Date: 10/10/11 10:27 am Title: Yanni Says Hi To Tom
1) I've no idea but I do think it's too early to end. There's still part for Tom to learn more about Abby, then Tom's side of the story with Bill and the band..... lots of stiff and then what happens to Tom and Abby. You're the author so it's up to you, but I'm hoping for a long story 8DDD
2)I do think that it's a possible side of Tom
3)What's the real person that Abby's based on? I'd like to read up about her. She's amazing. I don't know why but when I read it, it does sound like a real-life situation.
4)The title and a bit of the description? I seemed interesting so I thought I should try. I'm so glad I did 8DDDD
I need Moooore~~!!!!
Author's Response: If you're hoping for a long story, you'll get it! I'm here to please the reader. I've decided upon somewhere between 20 to 30 more chapters for this story. The real person that I based Abby on is named Alison Thompson; she's my hero. Now thank you so so much for saying such incredibly kind things and for answering the questions! You're such a great person and I feel grateful for having such an awesome reader!!! <3
Date: 10/10/11 03:58 am Title: Yanni Says Hi To Tom
1) 20 or 100 either one ...
2) yeah i'm starting to believe it's what he's really like even though it's not :P
3) Honestly it's because you're such a great writer and it feels as though she's actually been though all these things and that she's real in this world. You put the dates in the exact order as things had actually happened it's weird but amazing.
4) Well I thought the description was interesting and wanted to read a rape story.. (i'm a fucking freak don't mind me) but honestly after reading it got so interesting I couldn't and still can't wait for you to keep posting I squeal at the thought of what might happen next it's exciting.
You truly are a great writer I think the way your mind works is just interesting keep writing can't wait for more ;3
Author's Response: "20 or 100 more either one..." Aha! That made me laugh so hard, and I think that is so kind of you to say! <3 It really means a lot to me that you've taken the time to answer these questions and to be so kind as to say that you think I am a great writer! <3 You know, my seventh grade English teacher told me that I would never amount to becoming a good writer. Thanks for letting me know I provided that bastard wrong! Many many thanks for reading and reviewing!!! <3
Date: 10/09/11 06:59 pm Title: Yanni Says Hi To Tom
1) as many as to do
2)no because i dont think the real top would rape some 1
3)it just sounds so real like it was actually lived through like you are actually living it
4) i act dont know i think it was the description that drew me to it, it just sounded so intresting and fasenating
Author's Response: Well thank you so much for the feedback! I greatly appreciate it and I am so grateful to have such a cool reader like you! Many many thanks for reading and reviewing; I hope to hear from you again in the future! <3
Date: 10/09/11 06:37 pm Title: Yanni Says Hi To Tom
Personally I love this so much that I wouldn't mind if u posted updates forever lol. But since that's impossible i'll just settle for however many u decide on =) Tom's character seems like a good guy to me. He just let himself go too far one night. I think the purposely forgetting what happened & the way he mentally torchered himself after he remembered proved that he's a pretty decent & remorseful guy. I'd like to think of the real Tom as being the same way. Like character Tom, the real one has done things i'm sure he's not proud of, but sometimes emotions get in the way. So yeah, I think the real Tom is simular to the fictional one...As far as what drew me to read this? I think it was the banner & the fact that I liked the idea of a chick telling a jerk Tom to fuck off lol. But of course after reading the first chapter, it was ur excellent writing that kept me coming back =)
Author's Response: Aha! I wish I could post forever! but sadly, I am lazy. And I've decided on about 40 chapters, based on what other people have recommended through these question answers. I love the way you see Tom; a lot of people, from reading this story, do not see him that way, unfortunately. I wish to change everyone's minds in the next ten chapters or so. Now, thank you so so much for such a nice review! You are such a sweet person and very very kind. I am so grateful to have a wonderful reader like you! <3 I'm glad to have you around and I hope to hear from you more in the future!
Date: 10/09/11 05:49 pm Title: Yanni Says Hi To Tom
1) i never want it to stop : )
2) well, i don't really know about that. i have one picture of tom that i sort of project into every story, regardless of how the author want him to be portrayed. sorry, can't help it
3) it seems real because most of the happenings in this story somehow involve tom, but at the same time he isn't psysically there... and a lot of people can probably relate to having that feeling about someone or something.
4) my love for tom/ofc fiction. plus, i like your banner. : )
i love the story, and you write really well. but i just gotta say that the whole 'writing stuff in parenthesis' thing you have going on really bugs me. i feel like it kinda ruins the story a little, and it's somewhat annoying. but don't take it the wrong way, other than that i love it. : )
Author's Response: Aha! "I never want it to stop!" Ah, you're such a sweetheart! That's such a nice thing to stay! <3 But sadly, I am lazy. Therefore, this will end at around 40 or so chapters. That is about the requested number, so it will be around 40...maybe 45...ish.... But anyway! Thank you so much for answering the questions and thank you so much for such a nice compliment on the banner. Honestly, it was something I slapped together in...15 minutes? Maybe 10? And I'm sorry you don't like the stuff in parenthesis. I promise I'll try to to it less now. I really will. I've gone a little over-board, I know. I apologize. But thank you anyway for all that you've said and done! Many many thanks for reading and reviewing! I hope to hear from you more in the future!!!