Date: 04/08/12 04:53 am Title: And So It Begins
I'm so glad this story is back! ....For now. haha. I know High School is awful, but it'll be over before you know it. Can't wait to see what happens to Tom. =]
Author's Response: Oh thank you that is so sweet of you to say! ANd I know I am so sorry I've neglected updating this for a really long time! I'm going to re-edit it and make it all nice and it'll be so much better! I feel so bad for not updating in forever! And I hope you're right about high school. You'll find out what happenes to Tom in the next chapter!
Date: 01/24/12 05:18 am Title: Christian Mckeon is a Murderer
YOU'RE SENDING A MURDERER TO MY COUNTRY AND WHERE I LIVE?!! XD Great chapter i miss reading fan fic and your writing c:
Author's Response: Ahhhhh sorry! xD I picked Austalia because 1) It's really cool and 2)It was practical to pick because it was as far away from Abby as Tom could put Jason (Christian). Anyway, that is so incredibly sweet of you to say! <3 That really means a lot to me that you miss my story and I promise to update more! I'm thinking I'll do once a week on the weekends from now on. My plan is still in progress. Working on it and writing full steam ahead to the end!!!
Date: 01/23/12 10:59 pm Title: Christian Mckeon is a Murderer
well i am not gonna bombard you with smartass remarks, i just hope you will have consistent updates... BTW i love your fic soo much! :>
Author's Response: Oh I promise it won't be like before where I dropped off the face of Earth for a month! No! I'll probably update again this weekend after midterms are over. I'm really going to try to step up my game and update once a week on the weekends. I'm working something out; I promise. And many many thanks for such a sweet comment! That really means a lot to me that you'd take the time to read my story and review it! <333
Date: 01/22/12 12:53 am Title: Christian Mckeon is a Murderer
I'm not pissed(: I don't care how long it takes as long as I get something amazing like this:DDD Wow. Jason is a bad guy. I wanna say Tom is sweet for watching out for Abigail, but I don't think he's doing it for all the right reasons. Hmph. I wonder what's gonna happen next...Great job, hun(:
Author's Response: Yay you're not angry! I was so afraid everyone was going to be all, "DAMN IT TICKETTORIDE! YOU SUCK!" But I guess not! So thank you very much for doing that. I promise to update again soon after midterm week if I can. I really want to update. It's just that I don't have the time!
Date: 01/21/12 08:49 pm Title: Christian Mckeon is a Murderer
wow , Tom is looking after Abigal , even though wat he did to her . so glad . can`t wait for more
Author's Response: Yeah the next 10 chapters are going to be a doozey for sure! xD thank you so so much for reading and taking the time to review! Many many thanks!!
Date: 01/21/12 07:04 pm Title: Christian Mckeon is a Murderer
YES! Another update! Hahahaha, damn. I can't believe Tom just blew all that money to get Jason, well Christian, to leave the country. That's insane. It kind of made me laugh a little. Wait so I'm confused. Does Tom really love Abigail? Or why is he doing all of this? I don't understand..maybe I need to go back and read everything.
Author's Response: Oh no no you're no confused. I haven't written why yet. But I will in the next couple of chapters.
Date: 01/05/12 01:59 pm Title: That Should've Been Tom
~fi~na~lly u_u
Date: 01/04/12 02:53 pm Title: That Should've Been Tom
Yea of course you can't explain this! I was waiting for it for such a long time that I nearly ran in the house from joy :D So, I have no words for it girl. It was awesome and exciting. You know how to get us excited and with that little parentheses with small hints always make me hope for more but I guess you don't have the time to write. I'd really appreciate it if you could write a chapter again this or the next week! Love your work, keep up!
Date: 01/04/12 03:03 am Title: That Should've Been Tom
That's so sad!): I fee bad for Tom in a way? Ahh well please update soon I need more of this story!(:
Author's Response: will definately update soon. And I'm sure what you feel for Tom will change in the next few chapters. It's gonna be a surprise.
Date: 01/03/12 10:22 pm Title: That Should've Been Tom
You're back! Thank god. :) I have to re-read from the beginning because I forgot the other parts of the story. I must say she went through hell in those 6 years.
Just curious with the jealousy side of Tom. Why so sudden especially with him seeing the kiss.
And damn that cliffhanger. At first I though he hired a hitman for Jason. Haha.. Must know what's in that envelope!
Thank you for the update and hopefully you can update soon. :D
Author's Response: French the Llama! I so have to go back an fix everything. Cause I had so many grammar mistakes that it now disgusts me. Oh and you're going to find out why he be all jealousy. I think you'll all really like what I ahve planned. And I like the hitman idea! Very creative! <3 I shall update this weekend!
Date: 01/03/12 09:00 am Title: That Should've Been Tom
,kx;bljhcdfbngl;dfjkscbio[adhjkfjdo Took your time HMPH. This was a great chapter missed your writing :3
Author's Response: It did take me long enough. My life hasn't been great lately; not that it's been sad or upsetting -- just confusing. I kinda just needed some time to breath. But I'm happy you liked it, and it just made my day that you missed my writing! You know, my English teacher hates my writing. She always leaves comments on my work that my writing is like nonsense. I hate her class. But anyway, I will update soon; promise! This weekend, even! Afterall, there's only 11 chapters left.
Date: 01/02/12 11:55 pm Title: That Should've Been Tom
-.- You suck! I've waited for two damn months for an update and then you leave me with an ending like THIS!? I thought we were better than this....just kidding. Anyways, SUPER GLAD you're back and oooooohhhh. Tom's so jealous it's kinda funny. I think he hired Mr. Richard as a stalker to watch their every move. Oh, I also find it hilarious that they live so close to the Osbournes. Please, please, please update soon. I can't wait much longer!
Author's Response: Yes, I do suck. Yeah...this chapter was kinda poop for how long you've been waiting. I'm really sorry. I promise to update again this weekend. xD I'm happy that you're glad, though. And you know what? I've always pictured them being associated with the Osbournes. So i thought it would work well for this chapter.
Date: 01/02/12 11:38 pm Title: That Should've Been Tom
OMG!!! Just a couple days ago I was thinking about how much I missed this story. I was about to go to bed and decided to refresh the recents, not expecting anything good. Boy, oh boy did I get a surprise!
I really want to know what the manilla folders held! Did Tom have Richard do a background check? Grrrr. My curiosity is killing me!
Author's Response: You'll know next chapter! Promise! I am really sorry for not updating for so long. I have brought shame upon my family. I know.
Date: 11/13/11 06:11 am Title: American Pie
this is good don't let people pressure you into doing the story faster or what they want go at your pace. can't wait for your next chapter I'm really enjoying this ^.^ can't wait to see what happenssss!!!
Date: 11/13/11 02:39 am Title: American Pie
tom deserves a lot worse than being jealous to death for what he did to abby....but he's so cute when he's jealous! the things that go on inside his head cracked me up more than once. haha! love this.
PS : served u right kaulitz!
Date: 11/11/11 11:49 pm Title: American Pie
Weee~~~ update ^ ^
So excited for more. Btw, what's a name day? I've never heard of it from where I am
Date: 11/11/11 03:03 pm Title: American Pie
I'M GLAD YOU UPDATED FINALLY! I MISSED THIS STORY! And ooooohhhh, Tom's getting really jealous. Funny how that works out; he completely forgets about her for years and then his feelings (he did actually like her when they were younger, right?) he used to have for her come back within just two days. Can't wait for the next chapter!
Date: 11/11/11 11:39 am Title: American Pie
Oh my Tom is fuming with jealousy lol wtf!...I love this chappie pure awesomeness...is Tom aware of his feelings for Abby now? I'm sure he knows he likes her! ^_^...if these two ever end up having sex it will be so magical lol did I just use the word magical jeez I'm just so wrapped up in this story...but I have a feeling Abby would have to overcome a great deal of issue in order for her to let Tom make love to her...this is good update soon!!!
Date: 11/04/11 10:36 pm Title: The Closed Door
aww man. i was hoping that jason guy was going to walk in and stir up some drama or something :)are abby and jason together, or what?
Author's Response: Oh, don't worry. There will be drama coming up soon. And no, Abby and Jason are not together.
Date: 10/26/11 10:34 pm Title: The Closed Door
I want something to happen with them! pretty please!! hahahaha
Author's Response: Yes yes. Wait a few chapters and it'll happen. It'll ALL happen. Promise.