Date: 07/30/11 04:13 pm Title: Movie Choices
1) Women's baskerball :D
2) Hinted. I think sometimes good stories can be ruined by sex D:
3) Neither! It is going perfectly :D
4)More Bill!!
Author's Response: Thank you for you opinions! I appreciate it deeply. And thank you so much for reading! I hope you continue to enjoy!
Date: 07/30/11 10:31 am Title: Movie Choices
PLEASE!!! WRITE THE SEX SCENES WITH DETAILS!!! TOM MAY BE ROUGH AND GENTLE AT THE SAME TIME...
Author's Response: OKAY I SHALL WRITE THEM AS YOU PLEASE!!! XD
Date: 07/30/11 08:09 am Title: Movie Choices
1.I think Abby would probably do something like music in a carrer or something or basketball maybe.
2.I would have to agree with xVioletStarsx with this one go in depth it is way more interesting to read.
3.Not even, it has a perfect flow to it :D keep it up.
4. Not that I could think of. lol
Anyway please keep up your superb writing and update real soon! I can't wait for more and find out what will happen next :D
Author's Response: Awe thank you so much! That is so sweet and kind of you to say! Thank you so much for your opinions and I will deeply consider them! But what makes you say something with music for her?
Date: 07/30/11 03:56 am Title: Movie Choices
1) basketball coach lol
2) in depth, obviously
3) its going smoothly
4) not particularly
keep it up! :D
Author's Response: Oh, thank you for the support and for putting in your opinion! I couldn't ask for better readers! Thank you so much!
Date: 07/29/11 11:55 pm Title: Movie Choices
HAHA this made me laugh (: Love it!
Author's Response: Glad to hear and good to know! Thank you for the incredibly sweet comment and I look forward to your reviews in the future! Thank you for reading!
Date: 07/29/11 11:53 pm Title: Movie Choices
1. Professional basketball player or wrestler. But if her personality and attitude changes after she sleeps with Tom, then a fashion designer.
2. Go in depth, please. It's way more interesting to read.
3. I think the pace is going pretty good, but then again I'm really eager to read about how Tom finally gets her.
4. Ummm. I'd like to see him get jealous about Abby maybe being with some other guy orrrr have her hate his guts afterwards even though she forgives him for being a douche.
Author's Response: Oh! Thank you for answering them~! I really like your answers. I'm seriously going to take them into an indepth look through and see what I can come up with along the way. But I was a little shocked to see that you think she'd be a fashion designer. What made you say so?
Date: 07/29/11 02:55 pm Title: Phone Calls
Tom is a bit of a creep. Haha. Shower time. I don't think I'll look at my shower the same again. And my iPod. And my iHome. lol Iove it(:
Author's Response: xD Haha! Sorry he was so creepy this chapter! But I promise that this was a one time deal and the rest of the story will go pretty much creepy Tom free! Sorry for any weirdness in your life I've caused! xD
Date: 07/29/11 01:08 pm Title: Phone Calls
Lol! I like this very much!
Author's Response: Glad to hear that you enjoy it! xD thank you very much for the kind review. I appreciate it and will update soon!
Date: 07/29/11 04:08 am Title: Phone Calls
uh oh... what is he gonna do :(
Author's Response: ;) Oh, you'll find out. Keep reading!
Date: 07/29/11 03:52 am Title: Phone Calls
ASDFGHJKL;' WHAT IS THIS!? Lol this was a good chapter :) I just find it a bit weird of how much of a creeper Tom is... hehe... Can't wait for the next chapter! c:
Author's Response: xD Thanks. And I promise to you that Tom will no longer be this creepy. This was a one time deal. I've already started the next chapter and he's nothing like that. The rest of the story will go pretty much creeper Tom free.
Date: 07/29/11 03:37 am Title: Phone Calls
I laughed so hard when Tom shouted "Stalk you!" at Abby after she said to call her. XD Tom's a weirdo in this but I like it. (x Poor Abby though. Can't wait for the next update !
Author's Response: haha, thank you! xD I'm sorry Tom's being a little twisted right now. But he's a teenage boy and I'm basing him off of what my guy friends do sometimes. I promise thought that he won't be like that for the rest of the story. This was like... a one time deal.
Date: 07/29/11 01:58 am Title: Phone Calls
Oh wow. Tom's all hung up over her and she's not having it. It's great really. Can't wait for another update.
Author's Response: Glad to hear. =) Thank you very much for the kind review!
Date: 07/29/11 12:00 am Title: The Kiss
hahaha way to go Abby
Author's Response: She is one of the more spunky characters I've come up with. I thought that since Tom was so sassy all the time, he needed someone to match that in order to make the story interesting. xD I hope you continue to enjoy the story! Many many thanks!
Date: 07/28/11 11:47 pm Title: The Kiss
ASDFGHJKL;' LOL THIS IS SO FUNNY! HAHAHAHAHA
Omg I'm reading this is the school library so I'm trying not to crack up! X3 this is really good please keep writing mor ^-^
Author's Response: xD I'm so grateful to know that you like it! Many thanks for the compliment and I hope you continue to enjoy the story!
Date: 07/28/11 10:10 pm Title: The Kiss
Love it!
Author's Response: Many thanks from the bottom of my heart for the compliment! I hope you continue to enjoy!
Date: 07/28/11 10:06 pm Title: The Kiss
Oh my god! I love this story :D
Author's Response: Glad to hear it! I give you many thanks for the review and hope to hear your opinions more as the story progresses!
Date: 07/28/11 08:06 pm Title: The Kiss
Haha making Tom kiss the basketball. Something I would totally do:D I love it so far. Seriously:DDDD
Author's Response: Oh, that's so sweet~! Thank you very much, I deeply apprecitae it! I promise this is going to move a little faster sooner. I just had to have their relationship established and all. But one again, thank you very much!
Date: 07/28/11 07:48 pm Title: The Kiss
I liked it!!!! The title and summary caught my attention and I can't wait to read more and find out what will happen next. I absolutely love Abby. But why is Tom trying to have sex with Abby? Please keep up your wonderful writing and update real soon! :D
Author's Response: Thank you very much! That's so kind of you to say, really it is! I deeply apologize if it's confusing right now, I know Tom is a tricky one. But I do promise to clear up that question of yours in the next chapter or so. Once again, thank you very much!
Date: 07/28/11 12:50 pm Title: Basketball
Haha I love how blunt Tom was at the end there. Can't wait to see where you take this. I like it so far:D
Author's Response: Thank you very much! I appreciate your kind feed back and I shall update very soon!
Date: 07/28/11 05:39 am Title: Basketball
Well, she must be the first person ever to deny Tom sex xD
I usually hate het but I am actually looking forward to reading the rest of this.
Author's Response: Then I am honored that you are enjoying it! Thank you so much for the positive feedback and I hope you continue to enjoy the story. I shall update soo. Until then, many thanks!