Date: 08/02/11 03:13 am Title: Sickening Sex
holy crap man. Intense much? Amazing job. Tom makes a sexy creeper. No lie bro.
Author's Response: Many many sincere thanks go out to you for the kind review! I'm grateful that you liked it and hope to see you review again soon in the near future! ;) Thank you so much for reading! <3
Date: 08/02/11 02:24 am Title: Sickening Sex
The sex scene was good...I just wish Tom wasn't such a dick to her while taking her virginity! Poor Abby; I can't wait to see how she reacts.
Author's Response: Well I appreciate it that you're on edge! And Tom was a huge dick, yes. But you'll see what happens. Keeping reading like you have been! Thank you for the review! Many many thanks for being such a devoted reader! <3
Date: 08/02/11 02:23 am Title: Sickening Sex
D:
Sad, but good. But oh so sad. :(
Author's Response: Oh, thank you so much for thinking it was good! That means so much to me, you don't even know. And yes, it was sad. It was ahrd for me to write too. But keep reading to see what happens! ;) Once again, many many thanks for reading and for the kind review!
Date: 08/02/11 01:24 am Title: Sickening Sex
It's was good but omfg what did Tom do :(
Author's Response: Thanks you, I'm glad to hear that you thought it was good! And if you're asking what Tom did to Abby in chapter 6: he raped her. Sorry if there may have been any confusion. xD
Date: 08/02/11 01:15 am Title: Sickening Sex
OH MY GOD! Tom did not just do that! O: I feel so bad for Abby. He raped her! D: What kind of friend does that?! If he even is her friend. I LOVED THIS CHAPTER! :D
Author's Response: I'm so grateful to hear that you loved it! xD I was so scared because I thought people were going to hate it and send me three tons of hate mail! xD But instead, I got your sweet review and everybody else's. Many many thanks for being sucha kind reader! <3
Date: 08/02/11 01:05 am Title: Tom Kaulitz: Winning
Tom is kinda forcing her :(
Author's Response: His is, he is. I know, but it'll all movew along soon. Don't you worry. Thanks for reading! I look forward to more of your reviews! Many thanks!
Date: 08/02/11 12:55 am Title: Basketball
Oh, I forgot to add in that I love the banner(:
Date: 08/02/11 12:51 am Title: Movie Choices
Oooh I like it so far :)
Date: 08/02/11 12:45 am Title: Phone Calls
Ewweee Tom is a creeper.
Author's Response: xD Haha! Yes he is! But he gets better!
Date: 08/02/11 12:37 am Title: The Kiss
Lmao!! XD I can just picture Tom pucker.
Author's Response: Aha! xD Thanks. It took some imagination for even ME to picture that.
Date: 08/02/11 12:31 am Title: Basketball
Omg lol I can't believe Tom blatantly asked that question.
Date: 08/02/11 12:27 am Title: Sickening Sex
You did great! I can't believe Tom did that:( I won't kill you. PROMISE Haha is it bad I laughed when you said Edward Cullen had nothing on him? Ah, poor Abby. Losing her virginity like that. I hope to never lose mine like that. And yes, I shall review every chapter. Reviewing everything I read is something I'm trying to do. I've been doing okay, but I still don't review EVERYTHING. =/
Author's Response: Oh, thank you so much! And yes, it's okay that you laughed! xD I'm glad you did, actaully! That scene was just so heart vreaking to write that I just had to lighten the mood just a little! Thank you so much for reading and giving such a lovely review, I appreciate so much! No one could ask for a better reader!
Date: 07/31/11 06:30 pm Title: Tom Kaulitz: Winning
Wow. o.o It's a shame that he's going to hurt her after this. But I can't wait for the next update!
Author's Response: Glad to hear! And by the time you read this, you've already read the update! xD More coming soon!
Date: 07/31/11 01:59 pm Title: Tom Kaulitz: Winning
1) Depends on whether or not her personality changes after Tom rapes her.
2) Do whatever you are comfortable(:
3) I think the pace is just fine(:
4) I think this story is perfect the way it is(;
Author's Response: Aw, that's so kind of you to say! I'd like to thank you so much for reviewing this story like you have been! I'm so grateful that I have such an awesome reader like you! <3 Thanks once again and I'm looking forward to more of your reviews as the story progresses!
Date: 07/31/11 01:48 pm Title: Tom Kaulitz: Winning
Awesome chapter! :)
Author's Response: Glad to hear! Thank you so much, that's very kind of you to say! I hope you continue to enjoy the story as it progresses! I couldn't ask for a better reader!
Date: 07/31/11 01:45 pm Title: Tom Kaulitz: Winning
isn't this considered rape? lol
Author's Response: Yeah, you could say that. Tom's just frustrated because she had managed to stay away from him romantically for so long and she didn't want his sex. Tom takes that as a bit of an insult and, with his arrogant attitude and all, decided that he's going to have it his way, one way or another.
Date: 07/31/11 11:48 am Title: Tom Kaulitz: Winning
awww :D
i hope the next chapter isn't full of sex. Maybe you should warn me if it is going to be >< :')
Author's Response: xDD Aw, I love your review! It made me laugh! But yes, the next chapter will contain explict sex. So that's your warning. xD
Date: 07/31/11 10:03 am Title: Tom Kaulitz: Winning
1. Work in fashion industry or music teacher maybe? :)
2. More details please.
3. I say the pace is fine.
I really enjoyed the first 5 chapters. I hope the story is not to cheesy or clique-ish. Looking forward to the next chapters! :)
Author's Response: Thank you so much for your suggestions! I'd like to say that yours in particular gave me an idea. Thank you so much for reading and I'm thrilled to know you like the story! I promise you that this story will in no way, as you put it, get too "cheesy" or "clique-ish". xD
Date: 07/31/11 07:15 am Title: Tom Kaulitz: Winning
Definitely think you should go into depth with the sex scene. Maybe she should study some form of art in college.
Author's Response: Alrighty then! Thank you for your honest opinions and I hope you are enjoying the story! I shall take into consideration what you've said and see what I can come up with along the way! Thanks so much for reading and I hope to see another review real soon! ;)
Date: 07/31/11 12:00 am Title: Basketball
Well I figured if her personality changes from Tom-boy (hehe, no pun intended) to girlier after her and Tom sleep together, maybe she'd get a little bit more into fashion. Possibly design some sort of new Athletic Wear for women.