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Reviewer: ResetErase Signed [Report This]
Date: 08/07/11 12:23 am Title: Guys Like Tom

Thank goodness for Yanni! This doesn't seem cheesy at all, either. :)

Author's Response: Oh my Sweet-Scotland-On-Fire thank you for saying it's not cheesy! I was so afraid people were going to hate on this chapter! xD Thank you so very very much for telling me! xD Now I can breathe easy! xD Many mnay thanks for reading and reviewing!

Reviewer: xVioletStarsx Signed [Report This]
Date: 08/06/11 09:28 pm Title: Guys Like Tom

What happens in the next chapter!?

Author's Response: You'll find out! 8D

Reviewer: cuddlepoopz Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 08/06/11 06:37 pm Title: Guys Like Tom

Wow. That was good. I like this Yannie guy. Lol oh, I love the last name, too. Fuchs. Haha I pronounce it like, "Fucks." one of the reasons my friends hate me. Can't wait for the next, babe.

Author's Response: xD It's the last name of my only male friend who can tolerate Tokio Hotel for longer than thirty seconds. It's a very German name, so he let me use it. (That's right he made me ask permission.) xD But thanks for reading! You're the best!

Reviewer: alc0holndubst3p Signed [Report This]
Date: 08/06/11 12:58 pm Title: Enter Yanni

Hey! I love a walk to remember lol but I lve the story (: keep up the great work!

Author's Response: xD That's so funny because I've never eve seen it! Thank you thank you soooo much for the compliment and for reading and reviewing! <3

Reviewer: Holleh Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 08/06/11 09:38 am Title: Enter Yanni

Poor Abby!
I can't beleive Tom would do such a nasty thing and not even try and make it right again :c

Author's Response: I know! I'm so sorry I'm aking him out as a total shit-head right now! But I promise things will change and time will go one. The next ten or so chapter will be short, but they'll be a doozey.

Reviewer: kandihurl Signed [Report This]
Date: 08/06/11 08:47 am Title: Enter Yanni

There goes another cliff hanger. :( haha I feel really bad for Abby crying every night. I hope she will soon feel better. :)

Author's Response: xD I'm so sorry I had to do it! Cause the last chapter wasn't very exciting, so I had to do something to this one to make it a little more exciting. Many many thanks for reading and reviewing, by the way! I love the support! =D

Reviewer: xVioletStarsx Signed [Report This]
Date: 08/06/11 03:07 am Title: Enter Yanni

o.o I can't wait to see what happens between Abby and Yanni. UPDATE SOON! x]

Author's Response: I'm so happy to know that you're eager! xD I'll update very very shortly.

Reviewer: cuddlepoopz Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 08/06/11 01:24 am Title: Enter Yanni

Wow...Just wow. You've made me speechless. And that is quite hard to do since I LOVE talking. I can't wait for the next. That's fo' sho'. ahaha. Fucking Tom:P

Author's Response: xD That's so incredibly kind of you to say! I'm such an amateur writer, so this really means a lot to be for you to say something so nice and to have been saying such nice things! Many many thanks for reading and reviewing and NOT throwing up on it yet! xD And yes, Tom's a total dickw*d. But I'm such your opinion of him will change as everything moves along. xD

Reviewer: Marie87 Signed [Report This]
Date: 08/06/11 01:13 am Title: Enter Yanni

I like it so far:) :) :)

Author's Response: Glad to hear it! Thank you for reading and reviewing! I hope to ehar from you more in the future with your opinions! =D

Reviewer: Marie87 Signed [Report This]
Date: 08/03/11 09:50 pm Title: Bill Knew

Tom sucks. Poor Abby. And bill well that's his brother and you'd be surprised what siblings do for one another specially twins!!

Author's Response: Definately! I know this was Bill's only appearance so far, and it will be the only major one for a while, but he'll pop up here and there. ;P And yes, Tom does suck as of right now. xD Thanks for reading and reviews! Many many thanks for the support!

Reviewer: cuddlepoopz Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 08/03/11 02:39 pm Title: Bill Knew

Awe, poor Bill. It wasn't his fault. Awe, you;'re so sweet. "No one could ask for a better reader." That was cuuute. haha I can't wait to see where you take this.:D

Author's Response: xD Awe, well it's true! And thanks you so much for the support! Updates may be a little slower, but they'll be out.

Reviewer: Holleh Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 08/03/11 06:33 am Title: Bill Knew

Aw Bill is such a sweet brother! I was excited to see him in the fic :3 But it is also mean of Tomi to make him keep something like that a secret.

Author's Response: xD I'm so glad to hear that! I actually put him in because you requested "more Bill". xD So I was thinking "How can I get Bill in there without fucking up the story line too badly?" And then this came to mind and it actaully works out great as a nice filler! So thanks for the opinion you gave that lead to this chapter and thanks so much for reading!

Reviewer: jacinta Signed [Report This]
Date: 08/03/11 04:57 am Title: Bill Knew

Haha true that :/ But like... she forgive Tom right? This is a good story i just wanted to ask you what inspired you to write such a story anyway? Good chapter ^-^

Author's Response: Yes, she ends up forgiving Tom for ultimately making her life miserable. ((SPOILER!!)) You'll see as the story moves on, Tom is somehow attacted to everything bad that happens to her for the next 6 years, but she still forgives him. And my inpiration for this story wasn't even that, really. The idea kind of just popped into my head one night. But it did come into my head as I was listening to the song "Kristy Are You Doing Okay" by The Offspring, So if anything, that's it.

Reviewer: xSkittlesX Signed [Report This]
Date: 08/03/11 02:00 am Title: Bill Knew

I still can't believe he did that D: Great chapter though! :D

Author's Response: Yeah, it's really shocking, I get where you're coming from. But everything comes along better as it all progresses. Thanks for reading and reviewing! I really appreciate how you've been doing it from the start!

Reviewer: xVioletStarsx Signed [Report This]
Date: 08/03/11 01:53 am Title: Bill Knew

Hahaha. Your end note made me laugh. x] I want Abby to beat the shit out of him! Or something. Can't wait for another update.

Author's Response: Glad to know that you liked it. xD And don't worry, there will be plenty of ass kicking of Tom later on. Right now the story is kind of dark in nature, but it will still have that flare of funny. Thanks for reading!

Reviewer: kandihurl Signed [Report This]
Date: 08/02/11 05:59 pm Title: Sickening Sex

What a horrid way to lose ones virginity. Very bad Tom. You've written the scene very well and looking forward to your next update. :)

Author's Response: That's so kind of you to say and I give you many many thanks for taking the time to read and review my story! I sincerely appreciate it and look forward to hearing your thought again! New update coming very shortly!

Reviewer: bubbles47 Signed [Report This]
Date: 08/02/11 09:52 am Title: Basketball

I only saw the "Noncon" warning until now...."Creep" girl he's a rapist! Lol! Not that that's funny but that's just me being nervous....

 

I was here in my room with one hand over my mouth and neck...and I'm even tearing up a bit as I type this---you did a good job in portraying the emotions (the sort of positive and negative ones) and how real it was....

 

I just laid there for a bit until I could think and type....God forbid this ever happens to me...but I thought when Tom meant he was going to get her to do it, he was just going to seduce her and convince her or something not...THAT.

 

 

Anyway, I do like the story and I do hope Abby recovers and finds it in her not to neccesarily forgive; but at least kick his ass some way or another b/c that's just not friendship....

 

Keep it up!



Author's Response: That's so incredibly kind of you to say! That really means a lot to me! Many many thanks for reading and reviewing and I hope to hear more of your awesome feedback as the story goes on!!! <3

Reviewer: Holleh Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 08/02/11 06:01 am Title: Sickening Sex

I only kind of scanned this one with my eyes because as I said I am not a big fan of smut but TOMI IS MEAN D:

Author's Response: That's totally respectable. I promise to you that there won't be something like, sexually, for a long time. I can tell you that in advance. And yes, Tom is mean. You'll see what happens as the story progresses. Many thanks for reading and I hope to hear from you again!

Reviewer: jacinta Signed [Report This]
Date: 08/02/11 04:18 am Title: Sickening Sex

:c KLJDSKLFBAKJLFSAKLFJD THIS IS SO FUCKING WRONG >:C Sorry it's just so sad... :CCCCC But this was a good story

Author's Response: Well I did put the warning on it. Sorry if you think it's so wrong! I'm really sorry!

Reviewer: xxskittlesxx Signed [Report This]
Date: 08/02/11 03:27 am Title: Sickening Sex

Oh my God. This story is sooo good. Poor Abby ! Tom's a bad friend ! But great chapter ! (: Can't wait for the next one.

Author's Response: Thank you so much for such a kind review! You've been so kind for far and so supportive for many many many thanks! I could never ask for a better reader than you and I really appreciate that!

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