Date: 08/08/11 11:16 am Title: December 5, 2005
I never expected her mom, yanni and her unborn child to die in those 2 chapters. Talk about fast forward. But I do appreciate multiple updates. Unto the next chapter. Hopefully, no one will die in it. :)
Author's Response: Yeah, a lot of people did die in those short chapters, but it was spanned over a couple of months. I use important dates in Tokio Hotel history to write it and I try to pick really good dates that aren't too far apart, but are still close enough that I can fit as much of whatever I want to put in there. And many many thanks for reading and reviewing! I'm glad your pleased with the updates! I try really hard for you guys!
Date: 08/08/11 05:08 am Title: December 5, 2005
I really like this story, I'll be honest by saying I hate Non-Con/Rape, but you did a great job! This story reminds of how shitty life can be, but you can't dwell in it and need to just move on. I also loved the part where Abby puts the PT in Yanni's face, I figured those lines where from the Sherlock Holm's movie. Anyways, love it and keep up the good work. ^^
Author's Response: Thanks you so so much for the wonderful compliment! It's people like you that make my day! <3 And yes, I did quote Sherlock Holmes. xD I make a lot of movie refrences so people can find them and be proud of themselves for finding them. xD
Date: 08/08/11 03:44 am Title: December 5, 2005
This is so sad... Why does everyone she love die? D: And as much as I love the movie Juno I can't find the quote... Can't wait for the next chapter ^-^
Author's Response: It is sad. And a lot of people (and dogs) do die. I like writing it though and I give you many mnay many thanks for reading it and reviewing. rnrnThe Juno quote was: "Next time I see that kid, I'm going to punch him in the weener." Juno's dad said that about Bleeker. Abby's dad said that about Tom.
Date: 08/08/11 03:30 am Title: December 5, 2005
Oh my gosh, now her mom ? :o What ? I have never hated Tom in a story so much. I really can't wait until they meet again. I'm dying to know what's gonna happen. You're seriously a really good writer ! (: Keep up the good work.
Author's Response: Awe, that's so incredibly kind of you to say! That really means a lot to me! <3 Many many thanks for beung such a devoted reader and posting such a kind review!!! <3 New update soon!
Date: 08/08/11 02:44 am Title: December 5, 2005
Holy fuck. Her life is so shitty now all because of that asshole. When will he get what's coming to him!?!?!? I can't take it that he's living his amazing life as a "Rock God" while terrible things are happening to Abby. D= GAAAAAAAAAAAAHHHHH!
Author's Response: It's part of the plot! But I can tell you that Tom will definately get what's coming to him later on in the story. He's going to be miserable about it. Trust me. Many many thanks for readign and reviewing! I love how you're getting very in-touch with the characters and story! <3
Date: 08/08/11 02:30 am Title: December 5, 2005
I've never watched Juno. Lol awe, I love that Queen song though:D God, Tom is just fucking ruining everything! Douche fairy. I reallyyyy can't wait now. Her poor mother:( God, you're just killing everyone! lol
Author's Response: Is it bad that I'm having fun killing people off? <_< Well I think it's exciting! xD Many many thanks for reading and reviewing! I love how you're really getting into it and really connecting with the character! And I promise Tom's "douche-fairy-ness" will be toned down in the future. Or at least, it won't be as bad.
Date: 08/08/11 01:24 am Title: Basketball
Oh my gosh great chapter once again! Gosh, I still feel terrible for Abby. I can't believe Tom would do that to her! D: great chap though :D
Date: 08/08/11 01:16 am Title: October 6, 2005
Ahh, this keeps getting better and better ! I love the Abby you've created in your story. There isn't many characters like her and if there is, they just seem too fake and cliche. It seems like all the bad things are happening to poor Abby and all the good things are happening to Tom, when it should be the other way around. :o But this is still great, can't wait to read more !
Date: 08/07/11 11:46 pm Title: October 6, 2005
oh.
wow
Author's Response: I can't tell if you hate it or love it. xD But I suppose taht's a good thing. If you thoughtthis chapter was shocking, wait an hour. I just posted the next chapter. xD
Date: 08/07/11 04:18 pm Title: October 6, 2005
I LOVE this :D btw I was that Sillybam with the story called Just Another Love Story. I made a new account and I will get the story back up sooon if you would like to contiue reading :D
Author's Response: Many many htanks for liking it and reading! And yes, if you repost, I will of course continure to read and review your story!
Date: 08/07/11 02:19 pm Title: Basketball
I like that reference to Sherlock Holmes you threw in that last chapter!
Author's Response: xD I'm glad you caught that! I like to throw in movie refrences and quotes to see if people will pick up on them!
Date: 08/07/11 12:21 pm Title: October 6, 2005
Omigosh I love this story!! And I love your quick updates!!!!
Author's Response: I'm so grateful to hear that! Many mnay thanks for reading and giving such a kinf review! I'm so happy you love it!
Date: 08/07/11 08:54 am Title: October 6, 2005
i wasn't expecting that, omg :o & i'm going away for 3 weeks tomorrow in Ghana so i have to wait to find out what happens D:
Author's Response: Well luck to you in Ghana! I read your profile about why your going. That's incredibly kind of you. If you belive in such, bless you, even. But anyway, many many thanks for reading and reviewing. That's very kind of you to do! =D
Date: 08/07/11 06:00 am Title: October 6, 2005
How did she pregnant if Tom wore a condom? O.O Anyways.. I like it :) I think it's interesting. I'm going to keep reading this.
Author's Response: That's because when I wrote the chapter "Sickening Sex", at the end when Tom pulled out, he looked down and it was "a gross mess of secretions, blood and latex". I was trying to imply that the condom had ripped several times from the friction, but I guess I'm just not that good of a writer yet. XD I'll get better though. I've been trying to make my writing less vague. And I'm so happy to know that you like it! Thanks so much for reading!
Date: 08/07/11 05:49 am Title: October 6, 2005
Wow you update fast! Not that I am complaining ^_^
And wow that was sad o.o
Author's Response: Oh, thanks for the opinion! That means a lot to me to get feedback like that. And yeah, I have no life outside of band camp, my summer homework, and the occasional pick-up basketball games with my dude friends. xD So I get really into writing this.
Date: 08/07/11 02:54 am Title: October 6, 2005
This was really sad... :( KASJFKLDJLSK WHY?!?!?!?! This was good it wasn't shitty just really unfortunate... anyway can't wait for the next chapter c:
Author's Response: Glad to hear that you're eager to read more! But yes, there are going to be a lot of sad things in this story. And a lot of them are going to be very unfortunate for Abby. But many mnay thanks for reading and reviewing. It's people like you with kind words that keep me writing. <3
Date: 08/07/11 02:23 am Title: Movie Choices
Love how you keep making references to Stick It lol
Date: 08/07/11 02:06 am Title: October 6, 2005
Oh no! Why Yanni? He was such an angel ): poor Abby too! Good job though!
Author's Response: Thank you so much for the kind words! Many many thanks for reading and reviewing! <3
Date: 08/07/11 01:43 am Title: October 6, 2005
Oh my fucking God. I seriously want to cry because of how sad this chapter is. D= Noooooooooooo YANNI WAS SO COOL! For once, I hope something awful happens to Tom.
Author's Response: Oh, don't you worry. Things will happen. But maybe just not too soon. Anyway, thank you so so much for reading! <3 I really appreciate how you're upset about his death because it means I'm doing a good job at connecting with the reader! Many many thanks!
Date: 08/07/11 12:45 am Title: Guys Like Tom
Can you please update asap? I feel as if it was getting to the good part. Its like having your favourite food right in front of you after not eating for 3 days, getting to smell it an have a taste then having it ripped from your hands! :(
Author's Response: I suspect the next chapter is up by now. Quick enough for you? ;)