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Reviewer: Emokjeks Signed [Report This]
Date: 08/20/11 06:01 am Title: September 4 - 7, 2008

Moore.. :D



Author's Response: I am so increasingly happy that you like it! There will be another update soon! Many many MANY thanks for being such a kind and devoted reader! If only the world had more people like you~!

Reviewer: LaughingPains Signed [Report This]
Date: 08/20/11 05:49 am Title: Basketball

Haha, Your very welcome hun. :) I think if an writer spents time writing a good story they deserve honest feedback, ya know? ^^ But Im glad to hear that things will turn postive for Abby. :DD Ohh, I didnt mention this in my other review but one thing I do love about our dear Abby is even though Tom competely did her wrong, she looks at it as a growing expeience. I think its cool how you didnt make her vengeful or anything (A tad bitter towards Tom, but can you blame her?) and even though all these tragedies are happening to her she continues to learn from them and have a postive aspect on things. :) But Im rambling now, so I'll cut this stort. ^___^ Again, really really good story. You have quite a way with words, Keep up the good work sweetheart. =)

Reviewer: TomsParkingOnly Signed [Report This]
Date: 08/20/11 02:54 am Title: September 4 - 7, 2008

Holy crap! Wow. All I can say is, wow.

Author's Response: I'm so grateful to know that you find it exciting enough to be nearly speechless! xD But I make this promise to you now that the traumatic experiances will cool down for a chapter or two before picking up again. Things will speed along before you know it! Many many heart-filled thanks for the wonderful reviews thus far and for being such a devoted reader! I ahve no words to express my gratetude to you besides thank you!

Reviewer: cuddlepoopz Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 08/20/11 02:24 am Title: September 4 - 7, 2008

Damn. This story is so fucking awful yet so fucking addicting. I can't stop reading it. Abby should be put in a bubble. Like bubble boy. Shit, I still think she'd find a way to hurt herself.

Author's Response: I promise you she won't hurt herself because Tom is such a dickwad. And things DO get betetr on her part. I'll say this now without spoiling much. But Abby is a very humble persona dn as her life moves on and then become entwined with Tom's again, it'll take quite a 180 degree turn. Many many thanks for always being such a wonderfully loyal reader! <3 You make my day with your lovely reviews!

Reviewer: xVioletStarsx Signed [Report This]
Date: 08/20/11 01:16 am Title: September 4 - 7, 2008

Can Tom please get his dick chopped off now? Kthnx.

Author's Response: Awe, I know how you feel. But I'm doing this for a reason. I'm sure Tom wouldn't really be such a fuck face if he ever really did that. But I'm doing it to show that Abby is the bigger person, even if her life sucks eggs. I believe it's a good plot line, as well as a powerful message. Your review made me laugh, by the way! xD You're so sweet, thank you so so much for reading and reviewing! I couldn't ask for better readers! <3

Reviewer: Xxdark_angelxX Signed [Report This]
Date: 08/19/11 06:07 pm Title: August 22, 2008 (RE-WRITTEN)

Its pretty good just why does she have to keep gettn hurt wen tokio hotel or tom is brought up... give the poor girl a rest its way over the top

Author's Response: Well someone in the reviews once called it "the Tokio Hotel curse". So think of it like that? The storyline is supposed to be that bad things started happening to Abby because Tom was a horrible friend to her, and mostly everything is his fault. It's just like the universe is shitting on her becaus eof what Tom has done.

Reviewer: LaughingPains Signed [Report This]
Date: 08/19/11 11:19 am Title: August 22, 2008 (RE-WRITTEN)

OMG, I can't wait for the next chapter...Please update soon! I really can't wait until Abby & Tom meet again, that will be interesting to see how that plays out. Very good story I must say, its very captivating and really keeps the reader on edge. However, it hate how all these terrible things happen to Abby and not Tom. :/ It makes feel bad for her...Its like I share her pain, LOL but that could just be me.:P Anyways, love the story, hope you update soon. :) b29;

Author's Response: Ah, I know everyone hates it, but I think it;s a very powerful plot and message. I'll be sticking to it. And I promise you that some of teh bad stuff will turn into good stuff in Abby's eyes. She is one to never be let down by herself -- she'll make it~! Love you for reviewing and reading! Many many thanks for giving me your honest opinion on the story! It means soooo much to me, honestly! People like you make my day!

Reviewer: dimmortalemo Signed [Report This]
Date: 08/17/11 05:02 am Title: August 22, 2008 (RE-WRITTEN)

this is so cool but I want to see Tom's reaction or if they meet again?? hehe excited this is so funny and a little bit dramatic and I like it!I mean I love it! :DD I'm hoping for your next chapter asap! your amazing love it lots! :DDD

Author's Response: You'll see the reaction when the time comes and I promise it won't be disappointing. That is so sweet and so kind of you to say! You've just made my day! I really mean it when I say I am so grateful to ahve such a wonderful reader like you! <3

Reviewer: Emokjeks Signed [Report This]
Date: 08/17/11 04:28 am Title: August 22, 2008 (RE-WRITTEN)

Moore.. :D



Author's Response: I'm so grateful to hear that you really like it! Thank you so so much for reading and leaving such an encouraging review!!! <3

Reviewer: jacinta Signed [Report This]
Date: 08/17/11 02:52 am Title: August 22, 2008 (RE-WRITTEN)

this was good ^-^ can't wait for the next chapter and it was so disruptive! i will not spit on your writing!

Author's Response: Yay you're not going to spit on it!!! Many many thanks for the sweet review and for reading! It means soooooo much to me! Thanks again and I promise to have an update soon!

Reviewer: cuddlepoopz Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 08/16/11 10:52 pm Title: August 22, 2008 (RE-WRITTEN)

Awe thanks babe(: My dad is German haha and I have it in my blood but I'm not like that. Haha. Wow. I love this story and how you like narrate parts. Usually I hate that shit. You tell this story so well. I love it and I guessing that's a way of saying I love Abby's misery. I'm so glad his parents know now and I hope she gets his ass back twice as bad. Oh, I have wifi here. So I'm on my iPod and you have no clue how psyched I am about that because I ge to read this awesome story(:

Author's Response: That is so sweet of you to say! I can't tell you how much that really means to me! And I hope you're having an awesome time on your vacation! <333

Reviewer: TomsParkingOnly Signed [Report This]
Date: 08/16/11 08:48 pm Title: August 22, 2008 (RE-WRITTEN)

I'm glad that Simone & Gordon know about what happened with Tom. I doubt they will do anything with that information (like confront him) but it's a relief, even for me, for them to know. Great chapter!

Author's Response: It was actually a bit of a last minute thing, that I had let them know. I have a piece of paper, and on it is written everything that will happen in the story with the dates and the people and whatnot. The original plot for this chapter was for Abby to get a chemical burn, then have Simone hate on her for making such a mess. But I changed my mind. Glad to know that it worked out well! Many many thanks for being so kind!

Reviewer: gigglebot Signed [Report This]
Date: 08/16/11 05:03 pm Title: February 15, 2008

:o intense !

Author's Response: I'm glad that you like it enough to sahre your view of the story! I hope it's intense or else that makes me a bad writer! xD Many many thanks for reading and reviewing! It means the world to me and you've definately made my day! <3

Reviewer: TomsParkingOnly Signed [Report This]
Date: 08/15/11 09:39 am Title: February 15, 2008

Poor girl! She just can't seem to catch a break :(

Author's Response: That's life for you, huh? Well I'm glad that you like it. Many many thanks for reading and reviewing! You've made my day!

Reviewer: Emokjeks Signed [Report This]
Date: 08/15/11 04:49 am Title: February 15, 2008

Moore.. :D



Author's Response: Awe, so glad you like it! =D You know, when I first wrote this story, I thought no one would like it. But look! I have sweet people like you enjoying it and that's all I could ever ask for! Many many thanks for reading and reviewing! You've made my day!

Reviewer: jacinta Signed [Report This]
Date: 08/15/11 03:11 am Title: February 15, 2008

wow this was good you have me gasping when describing the wounds. can't wait for the next chapter this was was great ^-^

Author's Response: Thank you so much taht means so much to me! I had posted the next chapter, but took it down after a few hours because I didn't like it and I was senseless when I wrote it. So the new Chapter 16 should be up in an hour or two!

Reviewer: xVioletStarsx Signed [Report This]
Date: 08/15/11 01:30 am Title: February 15, 2008

It drives me insane to read that Tom's never once thought of her. THEY WERE BEST FRIENDS BEFORE HE GOT FAMOUS! How can he forget her just like that!? And I have no idea about the French Stalkers...besides the one that molested Tom but wasn't that a little later?

Author's Response: The French stalkers were the "Le Afghans on Tour". The one that "molested" Tom was part of said group. And don't you worry, Tom is going to hate what happens to him. He'll feel worse than Abby ever had. I promise you that. ;) Many many thanks for reading and reviewing! I love how you always review and I couldn't ask for a better reader!

Reviewer: cuddlepoopz Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 08/15/11 12:27 am Title: February 15, 2008

Poor Abby. I remember I watched a Lifetime movie YEARS ago. I was like eight. I was scarred. These awful boys, shit now that I think of it, I think they did it 'cause he was gay. Anyways, these boys took the gay(just because I get the feeling he was) guy out in the middle of this field. They tie him to this fence and basically beat him to death. It was so sad. I was bawling. Poor Abby. She let her hatred of Tokio Fucking Hotel get her in danger. There, again. Tom caused her more pain. Everything is that dirty fucker's fault. Dayummmm. I'ma miss this story while on vacation! Two weeks! I leave in seven hours!!!! haha I'm pulling an all nighter=3

Author's Response: Yep that's exactly the movie and the reason the boys did it. I based this chapter off it loosely. The "Le Afghans on Tour" are the girls who hurt Abby because she did something that they didn't like. In the movie, the boys Russell Henderson and Aaron McKinney were the ones that killed Matthew Shepard because he was something they didn't like. So the consept is fairly the same. It's my favorite movei of all time. Have fun on vacation! =D

Reviewer: Readerirish Signed [Report This]
Date: 08/14/11 11:50 pm Title: February 15, 2008

Le afghans on tour... Do I win?!? :)

Author's Response: xD Yes! You win! Your prize is... the satisfaction of being able to figure it out first! Many many thanks for reading and reviewing! Your review made me laugh!

Reviewer: Marie87 Signed [Report This]
Date: 08/12/11 10:17 pm Title: July 14, 2007

That's so sad :( I was listening to the fray- how to save a life:: while I was reading about yasmine :( the irony I tell ya.

Author's Response: Wow, that really is ironic! (And that's a great song, by the way. You ahve awesome taste in music!) And did you really think it was sad? That's great! (Well, sort of.) I thought people would think this chapter was boring. Well thank you so so SO much for reading! You've been sticking with this story for a long time and I'm so happy about that! You rock! <3

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