Date: 09/18/11 05:37 pm Title: February 3, 2007
Wow, shes a hero. And he's a complete asshole. If her boss doesn't give her more than a weeks vacation for that she should sue- you know, assuming she goes back to work. And speaking of which,her boss must feel pretty damn bad for making her stay that night now.
Author's Response: Aha I love how you just switched analogies like that. It made me laugh! xD And yes, she was a hero. I never really thought about it like that. I always saw her as just going wherever the wind takes her. I like the observation! Great job and many many thanks for reading and commenting!
Date: 09/18/11 05:23 pm Title: For Whom the Bell Tolls
I can't believe it it's almost at and end... this was a REALLY good chapter and I can't wait for more but it was so intense at the end for me lol -I'm weird don't mind me-
Author's Response: Oh! Trust me when I say this is NOT almost at an end! Don't panic! Although, I do have an ending already planned out and I won't be changing that. So I know the direction this is going to go, but I'm still planning what'll happen in the middle. I suspect another 20 or so chapters before this thing ends. And maybe even a sequel. xD And thank you so much for thinking it was intense! And you're not weird! I lvoe the positive feedback and how you're openly expressing what you think about it! I love you and all your opinions! <3
Date: 09/18/11 05:11 pm Title: December 5, 2005
Good grief. When you said everything that could go wrong does you weren't kidding. First her best friend/fake boyfriend/fake father of her child. Then the child itself. Then her mother. Its just never ending. Poor girl. I seriously didn't get that her mother died at first. It toke me getting to the part about the body to get that... stupid me. The irony is literally, killing.
Author's Response: That's not your fault that you didn't get that. I just didn't amke it clear. No worries. And you are so not stupid! Don't worry a thing about it! And the story gets kinda sad from these points on, so you may want to hold onto your oants here. Thanks so much for being such a supportive reader and frequent commenter! I lvoe the positive feedback and all your opinipons! You rock! Love ya'!
Date: 09/18/11 04:58 pm Title: October 6, 2005
Yanni's dead....omg omg oh my goodness holy god, Yanni is DEAD.... And so is Yanni jr. (lets face it, even if she was going to keep it, she wasn't naming it after its father). And to make it worse they were killed by stupid girls singing Tokio Hotel on their way to see Tokio Hotel. What a bitter twist of irony.This is so very, very, sad. ='(
Author's Response: Ah! Yeah I know! A lot of people were seriously bummed about that. And Yanni Jr? xD I love that! That's so creative! Aha! I love you; you're so cool and I lvoe your awesome feedback! Can i just say what a kind and awesome person you are? Love ya'!
Date: 09/18/11 04:43 pm Title: For Whom the Bell Tolls
That was so intense! And hilarious that Georg snores like "dying whales." x] I'm so glad that he remembers the terrible shit he's done now. I can't wait to see what happens after this. Also, Metallica is fucking awesome. m/
Author's Response: First of all, you have awesome taste in music! So props to you. =3 And secondly, thank you so so very much for being such a kind and awesome reviewer and reader! I'm so grateful that you like the story and what's happening. A lot of people are really pleased that Tom finally remembers everything and that he was a total darche face. I promise to have another chapter up this week! Maybe even tonight if I bust my ass.
Date: 09/18/11 04:10 pm Title: Guys Like Tom
I like yanni =) I keep picturing him as some kind of chubby cheeked little boy instead of a teenaged one though. Don't ask me why.Maybe its because he's so nice and just seems so innocent in all this. I also couldn't help thinking that his last name is 'fox' in Germen which is what a certain Germen rapper used to use as his graffiti name...What can I say, my mind wanders.
Author's Response: Aha! xD Yeah at some times even I picture him that way! But I'm so glad you picked up on the fox thing, since no one else did! In my story, you'll find that I make a lot of hidden connections like that. And yes, his last name was connected to a German artist, but not a rapper. His name is Peter Fox. He's known for his music videos that involve a drumline of monkies. The connection there was that Tom and Bill love monkies; monkies are their favorite animals. And the message is that even if Tom is gone, he never really left her; he's sneeky like a fox. I'm so happy you're the only one that picked up on the fox thing! I really am! xD
Date: 09/18/11 04:08 pm Title: For Whom the Bell Tolls
I enjoyed Tom's inner fight with himself. Even if at the time he didn't know exactly what he was fighting. Great chapter.
Author's Response: That's so nice of you to say! I'm really glad that you like it; I'm seriously trying to pull good stuff out of my ass at this point. I have all these ideas in my head and I have no idea which way I want to turn the story; but I do have an ending planned out. Oh! And in the next chapter, since the freakin description box is still not letting me do anything, I will be posting your awesome banner. =3
Date: 09/18/11 04:02 pm Title: For Whom the Bell Tolls
wow. i loved that chapter.
Author's Response: Oh my gosh thank you so much! That'o kind of you to say! I'm so greatful to have such an awesome person like you review and read my story and like it! Many many thanks for all you do! <3
Date: 09/18/11 02:18 pm Title: For Whom the Bell Tolls
Every time I read a chapter of this story my head automatically plays a song I know...Which is usually a great sign ^^ And this time, I heard AC/DC's "Hell's Bells" and Skillet's "Forgiven" lol Never a disappointment from this story! :)
Author's Response: You have awesome taste in music then! 8D "Hells Bells" is on my funeral playlist. I ahve one just in case I get hit by a bus or something crazy like that. It goes: "See You On The Other Side" by Ozzy Osbourne, "Crazy Train" by Ozzy Osbourne, "Highway To Hell" by ACDC, "Hells Bells" by ACDC and "Runnin' With the Devil" by Van Halen. xD And thank you so much for leaving such an awesome review! That really made my day when you said this story is never a disappointment! Thank you so so much! <3
Date: 09/18/11 02:15 pm Title: For Whom the Bell Tolls
Oh my godddddd. I cannot believe what just happened ! :o I'm shocked right now. I can't wait for the next one ! asfdjaksfjasfds Keep up the awesome work !
Author's Response: Wow! Thank you so much! In my opinion, the grammar in this chapter was totally screwed up. I was really tired when I write it. But your kind words really made my day and I want to thank you so much for reading and leaving such an awesome review! You're stuck by the story so long and that really makes me so happy and greatful! <3 I couldn't ask for a better reader!
Date: 09/18/11 12:52 pm Title: For Whom the Bell Tolls
Oh maaa gaawsh! This just keeps getting better and better! O:
Author's Response: Awe, thank you! <3 That just totally made my day! Thank you so so much for your kindness and for sticking around the story like this! You're such an amazing person and all your kind words really make me smile! =D
Date: 09/18/11 12:50 pm Title: For Whom the Bell Tolls
Moore... :D
Author's Response: As soon as I find the time, I will post better stuff. feel like this chpater was ruined by my tiredness. I really hate this chapter. I may repost.
Date: 09/16/11 10:44 pm Title: Movie Choices
This chapter was actually really cute- not that the others were not cute, just that tom was a stalking little creeper in them. A sex crazed stalker creeper at that. They both just seem cute and innocent in this one. Well...besides toms sexual thoughts. And speaking of 'sexual' thoughts', im ever so slightly scared of where this is going...
Author's Response: Aha! xD You make me laugh! Tom was indeed a stalking little creeper who was (is) after sex. I meant to use this chapter to express the notion that they've been best friends even before they learned how to use a potty. This is how Tom normally would act around her. And if you're scared of where it's going, check the warnings. If not, skip chapter 6.
Date: 09/16/11 10:35 pm Title: Phone Calls
"Ewe... Tom's a creeper." Toms a MAJOR creeper. That whole shwer thing is icky. Funny part is I
Author's Response: Yes, yes he was a creeper. But just think: he was a teenage boy. It happens.
Date: 09/16/11 10:14 pm Title: The Kiss
Well THAT'S not the way I saw that going. Its crazy that he didnt just let it go after being turned down. Has he asked before or something? Has he seriously wanted her since he lost it?...did he want to lose it TO her INSTEAD? Ahhhhhh, so many questions!
Author's Response: Yeah. Tom is a funny one about expressing his feelings. I've come to create his early personallity based off of what he's said in interviews and what teenage boys are normally like at his age. And yes, he seriously has wanted her since he had his cherry popped. And I'm afraid you'll ahve to wait for an answer to the other one. ;) That's going to be a surprise!
Date: 09/16/11 10:02 pm Title: Basketball
WARNING:I do comments instead of 'reviews'. They tend to be rther long so if they bother you, tell me and ill stop...
comment1: the screaming girls -both kinds- is funny.
comment2: Basketball. That makes since...ouch. iv actually been hit in the face area with a bball-not fun.
comment3:“Ah, for fucks sake!” He shouted, “That hurt like a mother, Abby!” hahahahah
comment4: 'captain guitar hero' has to be the funniest name iv ever herd tom called.
comment5: toddler on crack? Sound like something child services should be notified of.
comment6:“On the contrary, my dear friend, it is you who is the one to be with the sucking,” again 'hahahahaha'
comment7: awww i thought they had some kins of security at school. poor twins
comment8: "will you have sex with me?" WHAT HAPPENED TO HER ALWAYS BEING ONE OF THE BOYS?! Is tom secretly gay?
comment9: i gotta say he kind of set him self up for rejection. What did he expect her to do? Even if she did say yes they're on a basketball court. Was she supposed to just gladly make love to him on the tar?....ooor were they going to go into the field and do it in plain sight of the other kids
comment10: "Um... did you die? o.o Was it really that bad?" Yes i died, im dyING to know what happens next. I wonder where a convo goes from there im thinking its kinda like "...lets have a rematch!" lol (that means it was good)
Author's Response: Aha! I love all your comments! And they're absolutely not annoying; I love every last one! <3 You're so funny and I deeply appreciate that you took such time to analize the story and really say something about it. You're really kind! Love you! <3
Date: 09/07/11 10:25 pm Title: June 3, 2011
OMG!!!! I LOVE YOUR STORY..EVERYTHING IS SO AMAZING...THE DETAILS AND HOW YOU EXPLAIN EVERYTHING!!!! AMAZING!!!!
and does this mean Abby and Tom are gonna meet?? =D
Author's Response: Awe, thank you so much! Your kind review just made my afternoon! And you'll see what happenes between them very, very soon! Continue reading! 8D
Date: 09/07/11 05:07 pm Title: June 3, 2011
Girl, I fucking love you! I almost cried when she had her little melt down. It might have something to do with this whole storyline. Haha I love how you explained how Tom got happy all of a sudden. My grandma was hit by a bus when she was 9 years old. She almost died. Meaning I wouldn't be here:o I'm glad all is well with you as it is for me. Senior year. Class of 2012. The world isn't ending, we're just taking over:D (Senior as in high school). haha
Author's Response: I'm so sorry to hear about your grandma! But, of course, she's okay! And I love you too! Thanks for the great compliments and always sticking by the story! And wow! You're a senior? I'm in high school too; I'm just not in teh grade that most people on this site would think I am since I'm writing such an R rated story. But I love your 2012 joke! It made me crack up! xD
Date: 09/07/11 01:19 pm Title: June 3, 2011
Moore.. :D
Author's Response: And you shall have more! ...As soon as I find the time in my crazy life to write more!
Date: 09/07/11 09:26 am Title: June 3, 2011
Fantastic as usual =) Can't wait til ur next post.
Author's Response: Wow! Thank you so much! That's such an awesome thing for you to say and I really appreciate it! Thanks so much for reading and reviewing; there will be an update in the next couple of days. I'm so busy lately because of school!