Date: 09/27/11 12:44 am Title: Of Mice and Men
Pleaseee update I can't wait to see what happens!
Date: 09/23/11 11:05 pm Title: Of Mice and Men
FINALLY! WORTH THE WAIT!! OMG OMG OMG!
Author's Response: Aha! Well I sure hope so! I've been working really hard to keep all of you real happy, so I'm glad that it's working! <3 Many mnay thanks for reading and supporting me as long as you have been! I realy appreciate it and your reviews are always so positive and relaly motivate me!
Date: 09/23/11 04:51 pm Title: For Whom the Bell Tolls
The bells thing made tom seem like he's evil or something. lol Then after i got further in i thought that maybe the bells was a sign of his conscience...? Also, i find it funny that he didn't notice her until the last song of the concert. And yaaay gustav! with his taped fingers- which im guessing has to do something with his druming...? And how the hell did she get his cell phone number? Answer- cause shes ninja- hiya! um... what else... How could bill just sweep what he did under the rug and help him forget? tisk tisk. And did tom throw the whole guitar off stage or just the strap?- THAT my dear, was just the most scatter brained review iv ever given...enjoy!
Author's Response: No the bell is just something he remembered; it was like...the triggar that started everything. I think it was a sign that everything was about to be let go. And he didn't notice her until the end because he didn't want to notice her until the end. That thing his mind had been doing for 6 years was still in play until he was looking for pretty girls. And since he wanted to find a pretty girl, he found one. And yes, when Gustav drums, he tapes his fingers. She asked his mom for his cell phone number. And Bill was just trying to protect Tom or else he would have gone insane. He didn't want his brother hung over something like that. Bill loves Tom too much to do something like that to him. And Tom just threw it on stage. Like...it crashed on the stage floor.
Date: 09/22/11 09:17 am Title: December 12, 2010
How the fuck someone like Donny Thompson had those kind of connections was beyond Abby.' I was just thinking up a smart remark about donny and all his 'connections'. My theory, if you care to hear it, is that he's secretly a spy. Just saying, it would explain a lot.
how the hell did abbys legs get slashed? And did they really just go back to signing autographs after seeing bloodied people getting out of a plane? Fuck tom, i think that makes me kind of sick at the whole band- even Gustav! If you don't know im team Gustav, i LOVE Gustav, but if he really could just shrug it out than yes im even sick at him. Did tom really wish that he could have fucked some girl behind stairs? He wouldn't have even brought her to a hotel or car, nope, just publicly shame her under some stairs. UGH. How can you be wishing an airport wasn't shut down - which doesn't happen easily- so you could publicly shame some girl and yourself in an airport? DO THEY EVEN HAVE STAIR CASES IN AIR PORTS!? ugggggh! ok, im ranting, i think its time to move on.OH! IV TAKEN PICTURES WITH/IN A WEINERMOBILE AS A CHILD! It's pretty funny since I don't really like hot dogs lol but the driver was nice and let me ride in it. Thanks for reminding me lol
Author's Response: Oh yeah, Donny is totally a super secret spy working for the Queen. ;D If you read the next chapter, it explains everything. I never leave things hanging. I always explain everything. And you know what? I think the band was justreally really excited to be in Japan, you know? 8D They were there for the first time, living their dream. Nothing was going to bring it down. And yes, there are staircases in all airports. Whenever I travel, I use the staircase at the airport. It's better for your heart. Oh, I love your rants! =3 They're so much fun to read!
Date: 09/21/11 04:12 pm Title: January 18, 2010
Ok, i first want to say bill looks somehow, somewhat plastic in the first pic. Then besides that i think your dead on about the fashion show thing. They didn't donate it to charity or anything. Its gross. Its kind of funny that there's so many pictures of tom getting shit faced. And i like that you labeled/caption bills picture 'bills balls'...really? lol. So im guessing the name part is about what abby named 'static fuzz' or whatever you were calling it/him..? Well its sad that its not yanni jr (sad face here) but the story behind the name he got is amazing. I wish my name had that kind of a story. Well...it does have a hell of a story, but i don't think its quite like this one lol OH! And i had to look up google.translater to figure out what the hell he (the man) said to his now wife. I read a book called 'The stinky cheese man and other fairly stupid tales' as a child so i laughed my ass off at that. I think its kinda cute. And they all so have one hell of A story-with him jumping off buildings and calling himself stinky cheese when they met. haha
Author's Response: I agree, Bill does look plastic. It's too much makeup and the fluresent lighting is hitting him at a shitty angle. And I love the pictures of Tom getting shit faced. xD I have a million of them on my iPod and computer! Based on the story, some people may not be able to figure this out, but I lvoe Tom. =3 He's my favorite. Oh! xD The "Bill's crotch" thing! Yes! I was hoping someone would like that. And I crack up every time you say Yanni Jr. xD I love that name! Wish I knew about it when I wrote the chapter. You know, about the story of how Donny and Danielle met, I always meant for them to be very interesting people. The Thompsons are supposed to be like the parents Abby lost. So for all her suffering, I figured it was high time Abby got something nice: Donny and Danielle Thompson, who just so happen to be really cool people. =3
Date: 09/21/11 12:28 pm Title: October 9, 2009
First off- abby is very blonde. Second- you just couldnt resist calling tom a dildo could you? Lol
Author's Response: Aha! Yes, Abby is very blone. xD She got it from her father. Her mom had dark hair. (Atleast, that's how I pictured it.) And no, I couldn't resist. =3 But in my defence: if I didn't do it, it would have been a total waste! xD Aha, I love Tom.
Date: 09/20/11 12:15 am Title: Of Mice and Men
LLOOOOvee the banner use it, and omg i cant imagine the confrontation those two will have!!
Author's Response: AHhhhhh, I wish I could use it! The entire description box on my story is frozen solid; I can't change a thing or even click on anything. I have no idea what's wrong with it. I'm hoping it'll start working again soon. I really like that banner. And trust me about the confrontation: you'll like it a whole lot. =) I just know everyone will like what I ahve in store for the final 20 chapters or so. Many many thanks for reading and reviewing! <3
Date: 09/20/11 12:07 am Title: For Whom the Bell Tolls
holy fuck O_O
Author's Response: I actually think that's a good response to this chapter. xD When I posted it, the minute after, my reaction kicked in and I was all, "Holy fuck...what did I just do...?" xD
Date: 09/19/11 10:05 pm Title: Of Mice and Men
Holy shit. This just keeps getting better. :o You're such a good writer, really. I love your writing style and the grammar your use. And I love the humor mushed up in there despite the serious situations. Now, I'm really curious about what will unfold if Tom does find Abby. Will she be mad? Will she break down and cry? Oh, the suspense.. Anyway, I really can't wait for the next chapter ! Keep up the awesome work. (:
Author's Response: Awe, thank you so much for such a sweet compliment! That really means a lot to me; I can't stop smiling. =)And you'll find out what happens! <3 I'm so glad you're eager! That just encourages me to write faster! Love it!
Date: 09/19/11 12:17 pm Title: Of Mice and Men
HEEEEY! FINALLY! I WAS SOOO EXCITED WHEN I SAW THAT YOU UPDATED AND I STILL AM EXCITED! Girl, you are the best do you know that? It was so f'ing emotional and I nearly felt my heart stop and I held my breath when they saw eachother. It was just to much! Please continue and update soon pleaase! Good work!
Author's Response: OhmysweetScotlandonfire YOU JUST MADE MY WHOLE DAY! =D Thank you so so much for leaving such a kind review! That just got me soooo excited! I think you're the best! Really I am so happy right now! That's great that you're really feeling emotion with this story; I'm really loving it. There will be an update this week! Promise!
Date: 09/19/11 02:44 am Title: Of Mice and Men
wow this chapter is good it's good how he's catching up to her now but she doesn't want to speak to him... can't waitf or the next chapter!
Author's Response: I love the support you've been giving for so long! I'm so happy that you've stuck by the story this long to be able to see what's going to happen. =3 Personally, I think everyone will like it all. There may even be an alternate ending to the one I already ahve planned, and mayeb a sequel. <3 Awesome people like you keep me going!
Date: 09/19/11 01:08 am Title: Of Mice and Men
Moore.. :D
Author's Response: I'm really liking the enthusiasm! I hope the next chapters to come will get more than one word out of you! xD Thanks so much for reading! I love you and all your reviews anyway! No worries; you're always such a boost! Love ya'!
Date: 09/19/11 12:34 am Title: Of Mice and Men
OMGG!! I can't wait until the next chapter!! :D Dudde you have me on the edge of my seat! like..literally! :D
Author's Response: Well don't fall off. Then I'd feel real guilty for making you bruise your buttox. o.o It makes me really happy to know that you can't wait! That really shows what awesome readers I ahvea t hands and I am so greatful to have every last one of you! And you've been with the story since some of the early early chapters, so I'm so happy to still have you around! Many many thanks! <3 Update will probably be this Friday. If not, Saturday.
Date: 09/19/11 12:20 am Title: Of Mice and Men
Yayayayayayayayay! You updated again today. That makes me so incredibly happy. I'm really interested to know Tom could possibly say to Abby once he does get a hold of her. Please tell me that Abby at least slaps him really hard when they meet up again?
Author's Response: Aha! xD And I'm really happy that you've shared your opinion! You're so funny! I love you! Thanks so so much for reading and reviewing as long as you have been! It really realy means a whole awful lot to me. and Tom had a whole lot to say to Abby. He just won't be able to get it all out in one sitting. ;) And Abby will definately do something. Don't you worry.
Date: 09/18/11 11:28 pm Title: Of Mice and Men
Omgosh, i'm nervous about Tom catching up to her. Another great chapter =)
Author's Response: To tell the truth, I'm nervous too. xD Aha! I lvoe the support and the opinions! Keep them coming, please! I love to hear what everyone has to say and I always listen to your opinions! Thanks so much for being such an awesome reader and reviewer! You totally make my day! Love ya'! <3
Date: 09/18/11 10:49 pm Title: Of Mice and Men
This was an awesome chapter! I love this story so so much! You seriously have to have this featured, or something! I love everything about your story; it's so unique and the plot is original and the characters are all just so cool! Keep up the amazing work!
Author's Response: Aha! That's so kind of you to say! That really just made me smile! =D
Date: 09/18/11 07:59 pm Title: September 4 - 7, 2008
Jeeeeeeeez Louise. This whole thing reminded me of that movie about the miner who got stuck and had to cut his own hand off starring...james franco? Idk- the green lanterns son. All that and her dad kills himself.I knew it, I called in my head after the mother died. Im pretty sure i posted it in a review somewhere on here too-did i? Im sorry but if you ask me her father was rather selfish. How could he also put her through losing him knowing how much she had lost already? Ugh. And who was the country singer? I feel like I wana say it was Taylor swift but if I remember right it was Katy Perry That through the bitch fit when they beat her out for best new artist.
'someday you'll remember/dancing in September/never was a cloudy daaaaaaay" And I didn't even listen to/watch the video., I just know the song.I want you to look at those lyrics then reread your own writing.Ok? Now look at those lyrics, reread your writing, then look at the date in the story. SHAME.ON.YOU. The irony is racking up a hell of body count:were at...4 and a half right now? (her mother,her father,yanni,the raped girl, and yanni jr is the half)
Author's Response: Yes you did call it! Props to you! And Neil just couldn't bare it anymore. He knew his daughter could take care of herself; she was a trooper. He didn't think it would smack ehr in teh face too hard. And the country singer was not Taylor Swift. I don't think Tom would have given Taylor Swift the finger; I think he would have flirted with her instead. I pictured the country singer as Toby Keith. And I was listening to September because I'm in the marching band and that's one of our songs this year. But yes, it does go every well with the date of the story. I never thought I'd love playing the French horn in such a goofy outfit so much. =3
Date: 09/18/11 07:16 pm Title: August 22, 2008 (RE-WRITTEN)
I don't know how long ago you wrote them, but i JUST saw that you responded to my reviews/comments. I have this to say:'YAY FOR ME GETTING THE FOX THING! WOOOO!' lol I feel all smarticle for knowing that lol now on to the story
I don't know why shes even going within 10 yards of anything toxic any more. Girl done had the common since knocked outta her i swear! Granted she couldn't know that it was going to get on her, but shouldn't she have been wearing some protective pants or something? Her poor fathers going to drink himself half blind then just off himself if she gets in another accident. also i have a question:When she told his toms parents-GASP! i mentioned his name!- did she mention the serious of unfortunate events that followed? Just curious.
Author's Response: Aha! xD Yeah I was really surprised when you mentioned it! No one had ever gotten it, so I assumed no one ever would. And to answer your question, no, Abby didn't tell Simone and Gordon about the series of unfortunate events afterwards. She didn't think it was that relevent at the time.
Date: 09/18/11 06:37 pm Title: February 15, 2008
let me guess: was it the girls that tom got accused of hitting? I cant believe she really tried to stand up to them. What a brave - but stupid- girl. I give her points though, i really do. Of course tom is just counting off the 'bangable' girls in the front row as she's being killed nearly. Of course.
Author's Response: Yeah, that's them. Le Afgahns on Tour. And that's just how life is. Tom gets what he wants. Abby kind does too, but she gets what's coming to her. Not in the same sense as Tom. Very far off, actually.
Date: 09/18/11 06:02 pm Title: July 14, 2007
I should have known she wouldn't be able to go back to work . The place was BURNING for gods sakes- what was i thinking? Guess its cause i imagined the store was in a mall and the mall wouldn't want just a big hole in its side. Guess I was wrong. I don't even know what to say about the overdoes except 'who the HELL leaves pills around a rape victim?REALLY?! UGH!'. I fond that guy waving his 'undergarments' in the first row funny. I cant figure if they were boxers or like panties.
Author's Response: Nah, it wasn't in a mall. Loitsche is a town with a population of around 700. There ain't no mall for kilometers around. In Magdeburg maybe, but there, no. And I guess the nurses at the clinic leave pills around a rape victum. o.O Woops! xD Aha! I love the feedback and comments!