Date: 10/09/11 05:28 pm Title: Yanni Says Hi To Tom
Hiiii!! :D
1) Many more.. xD I really don't know, as long as you want it.. ^^
2) He might be in some ways.. I have no idea.. Havn't met him :P
3) Because you bring up things that actually have happened, and explain them as if you have been there.. ^^
4) The summary.. :P
Even more words.. ^^ :D
Author's Response: Heeeeyyyy!! ;D Wow! So many words! I'm really breaking through to you, aren't I? ;) Aha! You're such a sweetheart! <3 That's so nice of you to say and I really appreciate you taking the time to answer all the questions. Many many thanks for reading and reviewing! I hope to hear from you more in the future.
Date: 10/09/11 04:45 pm Title: Yanni Says Hi To Tom
1- hmmm..........maybe 2 or 3 more? i would love to see if they become friends again
2- well you know....we only see as much as the real life Tom, lets us see. For all we know, he could be portrayed as a player for the girls and be a sweet heart like his brother off camara!
3- I find that when a writter can make a story make people think its real, that the events really happened, shows that your realy talented. And you could deffinatly make a carreer out of it. Just not so much that you dont find joy in it anymore.
4-I wanted somehting different to read, to see what your Tom character would do in the situation he was put in. :)
Wonderful story, and i realllllllyyyy hope that you continue this story :)
Author's Response: Wow 2 or 3? That it? I got people telling me they want 20 more chapters! xD That's why I like you! Less work for me! Aha! You're so sweet. <3 But sadly, there will be about 20 more chapters, give or take. But thank you for the opinions and thank you for answering the questions! I really appreciate it and am looking forward to hearing more from you in the future. Thank you so much for the wonderful compliemt! <3 Many many thanks for reading and reviewing!
Date: 10/09/11 02:58 pm Title: Yanni Says Hi To Tom
1. I pretty much don't wait this story to end hahaha. I don't know where exactly you want this story to end at though. Do you want Abby and Tom to be together at the end of it all or did you just want her to say she forgave him, allowing both to be at peace with the past? I'd say at least like 40 chapters would be great!
2. I kinda hope the real Tom isn't like this fictional; being able to do something so horrible and then forget about his childhood friend. But in a way I could see him pushing away bad memories so his world can turn out perfectly.
3. Abby and all the events in the story seem real because you go into so much detail about them and use the dates of Tokio Hotel events very accurately.
4. And what drew me to read this story was wondering, "Why would a girl, who had been so hurt by Tom, forgive him?" Because I know if I had been in Abby's shoes, I would've quit a long time ago and never forgave him. I love how strong she is; she's a great person.
Author's Response: Yes, 40 chapters is what I've been aiming for, and I just wanted to know what people would feel about that! xD "I would like it to never end!" Aha! You're so funny! I WISH I could do this forever! But sadly, I have indeed picked an ending and I am writing full steam ahead towards that ending. So about 40 chapters is where this story will end. Many many thanks for replyign to the questions! I love the opinion and I love hearing what you have to say. So never be shy to give this kind of feedback, even if I haven't asked any questions. Thank you so so much for reading and reviewing! I couldn't ask for a better reader! <3
Date: 10/09/11 02:26 pm Title: Yanni Says Hi To Tom
First of all, I can't believe how calm Abby is! I know it has been a lot of years , like 5 or smt but man she's tough!
1) I would like to see a lot of chapters, like 40 or so...
2) Actually I think that Tom is much more thoughtful than this fictional Tom because he has had a brother his entire life and I know that he cares for him and protects him at some point so I don't think that he would just put things in the back of his mind and be this ignorant but well, how do we know, we don't know him in real life...
3) I can't believe that a person like Abby would exist but since we are all hopeless of the current condition of people in the world, (I mean everybody is just selfish and bad bastards) it feels good to imagine good people. But I would like it if you focused on Tom and Abby's relationship more :)
4) I like to read about Tom and the relationship between his best girl friend(I mean friend friend). I like it when two people who get along great fall in love :D
GREAT STORYYYYYYY! AND CHAPTER :) Please go on! You're great!
Author's Response: Yes, Abby is very calm. I kind of thought that since she was the one who sucked it up and took the high road, she shouldn't have thrown a fit about him being there. And about 40 chapters is what I was aiming for, I just wanted the public's opinion. So thank you! <3 Thank you so much for replying to all the questions! Many many thanks for reading and reviewing; I always am looking forward to hearing what people have to say about this story! So don't be afraid to review more in the future!!! ;) Love ya'! <3
Date: 10/09/11 02:17 pm Title: Yanni Says Hi To Tom
I lovet his story. please keep writing. your to good to not continue
Author's Response: Awe, thank you so much! That really means a lot to me! That's so sweet of you to say; you're such a kind persona dn I'm grateful to have to as a reader. <3 Many many thanks for reading and reviewing!
Date: 10/09/11 01:12 pm Title: Yanni Says Hi To Tom
Oh my God. I swear Tom is the cause of all that girl's pain. I think you should write as many chapters as you can before the story ends just right. Like it doesn't matter how many chapters as long as the story has an ending that fits it(: What drew me in was the summary then the banner. The banner fits is perfectly:D I love this story and I love how you write it. It's fucking realistic and I can't explain how.
Author's Response: Ah, well she said it was okay that Tom didn't know what happened because he was a stupid teenager. But you're right, it's all his fault. I hope I can pop out bout 16 or so more of these chapters before I finish the story. And there may be an alternate ending as well, seeing as the ending I have planned is a little controversial. Aha! Thanks you for saying it's realistic! <3 It may be fiction, but I was going for the sense that it may have all happened somehow. And the banner is just...it wasn't supposed to be that banner. I made that myself on picnic at like...2 AM because I'm impatient and no banner artists would get back to me on time. xD So I'm glad you like it! <3 Many many thanks for reading and reviewing!!!
Date: 10/08/11 05:35 pm Title: The Art of Slamming Doors
I never knew a person can go through that many bad situations. Especially in only a few years. I hope she gets Loads of miracles and extreme happiness from all that.
Please update, I MUST know what happens!
Author's Response: Awe, that's so nice of you to wish for Abby! <3 I'm so grateful I have such amazingly sweet readers like you! Your review really just made my afternoon and I'm so happy to have read it! Many many thanks for reading and reviewing! <3 You're the best!
Date: 10/02/11 01:11 am Title: The Art of Slamming Doors
comment1: awww poor girl- how did you end up in the hospital?( if i may be so nosey)
comment2:tom actually drove all 17 hours?... much of a dick as he is i give him probs for that one
comment3:he herd about her hijacking? thats funny- in a very very very sick way.
comment4:they only buy germen cars? I dont know weather to laugh of scoff at that.
comment5:now if only she knew why he did it too... hell if only I KNEW why he did it lol
comment6:he didn't talk to her for all these years yet he goes back to being obsessive over small details. crazy.
comment7:i dont think iv said anything anything about your interactions in the story as the narrater/with the narrations but i like them. Im writing this as i read the things in "(____)" about tom remembering her face.
comment8:he chooses now- 4 minutes from her house- to reflect on his life? Not than im knocking it, but the past few hours could have been used to do some of that too.
comment9:i find toms cluelessness of america funny- im actually really really good with maps and can say where most things in THE WORLD are and come rather close and hope to study multible languages. He cant even find states. tisk tisk my friend
comment10:theres no school buses in germany? or are you just exaggerating...?
comment11:Even with his (somewhat) having a beard the first thing i thought when i saw the line about him shaving was "HE SHAVES? SINCE WHEN DOES TOM HAVE ANYTHING TO SHAVE ON HIS FACE?!" silly me
comment12:'memory lane' now THAT'S funny.
comment13:'for corns sake!' that's funny too. I think the farms are messing with tom's speech
comment14:her english is better than his and bills? NICE.
comment15: wait wait wait... was she getting ready for, like a DATE with jason?..! 0_o
comment16:'who's jason?' that made me laugh. he sounds jealous.
Author's Response: Wow where do I start? Okay. Here I go: 1) I ended up in the hospital after the wire of my braces snapped off and I accidently swallowed it; it punctured my esophogeus and I had to get an andomoscpoy (or whatever) where they shoved a tube down my throat to get it out before it reached my intestines. 2) Yeah he did drive all that way just for her. 3) He heard about it after the band asked around about why the airport was shut down; I never mentioned it, I just hoped people wouldn't ask. xD 4) It's true that the twisn only buy German cars. They only support the German car industry; they've said so themselves in an interview. 5) You'll find out why he did it in about 7 to 10 chapters. It's a really good reason, too; you won't be disappointed. 6) It is really crazy. He would have been obsessive like that over the years, but you have to factor in that he didn't remember ANYTHING at all about her, therefore his personallity was also fucked up because he had to act as if Abby never existed. And, to a certain extent, she DIDN'T exist for about 21 years of his life, not just 6. It was really as if she was never there to begin with. 7) Oh thank you~! I'm glad that at least one person has said that she likes my little interjections! And remember to pay attention to them, because they are really crucial. 8) He was worrying over other things. The whole week had made him a bit scatter brained. 9) Hey, he dropped out of high school. And for most of middle and the time that he WAS in high school, his mind was on his music, not where the fuck Kansas was. xD 10) That's a true fact. There are NO big yellow school busses in Germany. Children, no matter if they're in kindergarden or in high school, take the public mass transit bus to school or ride their bikes or walk. Very few accually commute by car. The school gives all the kids a bus pass and they use that to get to school. 11) xD Aha! I know! I hate his beard so much! It looks gross and makes him seem like a hunky hobo! 12) I thought it would be nice irony and a good blow to Tom's inflamed ego for a change. 13) Aha! Definately. You'll see a huge change in Tom's personality as the story goes on; but nothing too drastic. He'll still be the Tom we all know, but just different. I promise though that he will NOT start wearing cowboy boots and drop the guitar so he can he a professional square dancer. 14) It's true. It's because she has been around English speaking people much longer than Bill and Tom in the sense that it's been more frequent to her. She hasn't had a chance to actually speak German for a very long time. 15) No! No date! They're just a dude and a chick going to the cinema to see Harry Potter. You'll read more about Abby's relationship with men as the story goes on. 16) He is jealous. In fact, Tom's jealousy will end up being a major factor in his own suffering. He'll be the cause of everything that goes wrong for himself. You'll see. ;)
Date: 10/01/11 10:10 pm Title: The Art of Slamming Doors
Omg omg OH MY FUCKING GAWD! And the position Tom saw Abby in LOL in a towel no less. And Tom "who the hell is Jason?" jealous boy ;)
I CAN'T WAIT TILL YOU UPDATE AGAIN PLEASE UPDATE SOON!!!!
Author's Response: Tomi is indeed a jealous boy! ;D That trait of his will end up being a major sting of the plot very very soon. And I'm so glad that you're eager to keep reading! Many many thanks for reading and reviewing! You're so sweet and kind and I could never ask for a betetr reader!!! <3
Date: 09/30/11 10:15 pm Title: The Art of Slamming Doors
I hope you are okay! Oh my. What a cliffhanger you left there, Missy!
Author's Response: Yeah I'm fine. I just swallowed something by accident and it poked a bunch of holes in my esophogeus and intestines. Pft, nothing I can't handle. ;) I've done worse to myself. xD But yeah, it'll all play out, so don't you worry! Many amny thanks for reading and reviewing! You've been so loyal to the story for so long and I'm so greatful for that! Love ya'!rn
Date: 09/30/11 04:01 pm Title: Of Mice and Men
Can't say I haven't done the same (made a funeral playlist that is) but I always thought I'd go in a more poetic way, like getting run down by a book trolley or something lol, but I love your banner its the cutest thing ever! I love Simone's temper I literally yelled 'get it girl!' When I read that part lol
Author's Response: Aha~! I love the ways you think you'll end up goin! I've always thought I'd end up doing something stupid like forgetting to pack my parachute after jumping out of a plane or getting hit by a bus or being impaled by my French horn. And I'm so glad to hear you really like it! Many many thanks for reading and reviewing! <3
Date: 09/30/11 02:58 pm Title: The Art of Slamming Doors
I'm so glad you updated before the weekend! Is Tom really going to leave even though he drove all the way to her house? Or is he going to stay and try to talk to her? I can't wait for the next chapter! =] Your writing is amazing.
Author's Response: Or, you know Tom: he doesn't take no for an answer! He's not leaving that easily, I promise! ;) In fact, what he does will lead to his own suffering. I'm so glad that you're eager to read more! That really touches me and I think that's so sweet of you to say! You're so sweet and kind, I love you! <3 Many many thanks for being so loyal to the story for so long! You really just made my day! <3
Date: 09/30/11 01:39 pm Title: The Art of Slamming Doors
Oh my gosh!!!! This just keeps getting better and better!!!!! :) Love it!
Author's Response: Thanks so much! You're so sweet! That really just made my day! =D Many many thanks for reading and reviewing and be so loyal to the story like you have been for a long time! I'm so greatful to ahve an awesomely awesome reader like you! <3 You're such a kind person!
Date: 09/30/11 10:57 am Title: The Art of Slamming Doors
whoa. this was great. im sorry to hear about you in the hospital. i hope you are ok now, and if not i hope you have a full speedy recovery
Author's Response: Glad to know you liked it! And I'm fine; I just swallowed something by accident and it poked holes in my insides. Nothing that I can't handle. ;) Many many thanks for reading and reviewing! Love it! <3 I'm so greatful to have an awesome reader like you!
Date: 09/30/11 09:16 am Title: The Art of Slamming Doors
O wow lol. My first reaction would be a door to the face too. Although i'm sure I wouldn't want to face him either & wouldn't have anything to say to him, I wish she'd just let him say his piece (just coz i'd personally like to see how that conversation would go.) Afterall, he did come all that way... :)
Author's Response: Oh trust me, he'll say his piece. You'll see what happens in the next chapter, I promise. Many many thanks for reading and reviewing! I love the feedback and I love the personal comments! I love hearing it all! <3
Date: 09/30/11 08:57 am Title: The Art of Slamming Doors
OMG SKOADSIFASJFDIOJADFKJAS I LOVE IT!!!! I'm jelly of her house so pweetttyyyy and i can't believe how intense this story is!!!
Author's Response: Aha! I love the positive feedback! Thank you very very much! Many many thanks for reading and reviewing! You totally just made my whole day! <3
Date: 09/30/11 07:53 am Title: The Art of Slamming Doors
why did she close it!? OMG! I hate the suspense! But I love this..ironic huh?
Author's Response: She got scared, that's why! xD She figured that forgivng him would be the end of it and then she could move on with her life. She didn't expect to see Tom on her door step. xD Many many thanks for reading and reviewing! I have the best readers in the whole wide world! Love you! <3
Date: 09/30/11 06:23 am Title: Of Mice and Men
That is a pretty banner(: haha I love how Tom says, "I'll set you on fire!" who says that? I love "Of Mice And Men." that was a good book. I'd go read the next chapter, but it will have to wait until after school=/
Date: 09/30/11 06:14 am Title: For Whom the Bell Tolls
I'm finally able to catch up! I immediately recognized the title as Metallica! That was so much drama! Ahh. How could Tom forget something like that? I'm so glad they finally met up. Now my happy ass is movin onto the next chapter.
Author's Response: Aha! I'm glad you have caught up, too! I was afraid you dropped off the face of the Earth and then went on a jungle expedition...without me! Anyway, many many thanks for reading and reviewing as always! I love seeing your reviews; they make me so happy! I think this chapter came out real suckish and I plan to edit it when I get the time.
Date: 09/30/11 02:51 am Title: The Art of Slamming Doors
I want moore.. :D but take your time.. :P
I love this story, I really do..
There you have more than one word from me.. :D
Author's Response: Aha! Oh my gosh! I didn't think you'd actually do that! I looked at all of your reviews on your user bio and I saw it was all the same thing! So this really surprised me! Wow! And thank you so much! You're so sweet and I love all your reviews, be they one word or not! <3