Date: 04/26/13 04:24 am Title: Sickening Sex
omg i can't believe he did that after they'd been so sweet together Okay i no longer think hes the good guy here and i didn't really like that bit but i'm gonna keep reading and hope he redeems himself somehow... Still shocked, that was pretty graphic.
Date: 04/26/13 03:32 am Title: Movie Choices
I just found this today and decided to read it after hearing about it from others. I'm liking it so far, Abby and Tom's teasing has me in stitches and your story is just so well written that ive read these first few chapters really quickly
Date: 01/02/13 01:06 am Title: Contemplation and Airplanes
I'm so freaking glad you updated. I still love this story, and I hope that you post chapter 33 soon. =] HAPPY NEW YEAR!
Date: 12/30/12 01:15 pm Title: Basketball
Hey!:-) I'm one of the student councillors in my school, too! Also, I have an upcoming national exam next year. Hence, i understand what you're going through. I love to read your story when I simply need to relax:-) Keep up with good work, and I wish you all the best in achieving your goals!:-)
Author's Response: Thank you for understanding. <3 I appreciate it so much. And thank you so much for taking the time out to review; it means so, so much to me. Happy New Year. <3
Date: 12/29/12 11:32 pm Title: Basketball
I just started reading this story and im already half way through it. Im addicted :)
Author's Response: I'm glad you do. This writing is so old and I hate it. I'm a different writer now and I plan to finish this story. I'm going to work on weekly updates, but if not then I'll update every 2 weeks. I really don't ever want to be on Hiatus like that again. Thank you so much for your kind words. They really do mean a lot to me. <3
Date: 12/29/12 11:01 am Title: Sickening Sex
Sweetheart, I think your sex scene was great. I did not suck as you thought it would be. You're an amazing writer and you deserve to know that. Keep on producing good material! :)
Date: 12/29/12 03:46 am Title: Contemplation and Airplanes
I'm not usually one for screaming and pitching fits. I am generally the torture you in my head while appearing entirely too calm type but I decided that just for you I could make an exception. Here goes nothing. I FIRST READ THIS DAMNED STORY IN AUGUST AGAINST MY BETTER JUDGEMENT THAT SAID ITS PROBABLY NOT A GOOD IDEA TO READ AN UNFINISHED FANFIC THAT HADN'T BEEN UPDATED IN SO LONG BUT I DID AND YOU KNOW WHAT I FUCKING LOVED IT I FELL IN LOVE WITH THE TRADGEDY OF THE STORY ALL THE WHILE KNOWING THAT IT WOULD PROBABLY NEVER BE UPDATED AGAIN THEN HERE I AM IN DECEMBER GOING THROUGH THE RECENTS AND I SEE THIS SO WHAT THE FUCK DO I DO I READ IT AND TO START ITS SHORT AS A MOTHERFUCKER AND YOU HAD BETTER BET YOUR ASS THAT YOU HAVE SOME EXPLAINING TO DO YOU HAD BETTER OF BEEN CHAINED IN SOMEONES BASEMENT BEING STABBED WITH MULTIPLE BLUNT OBJECTS FOR GODSAKE I CAN ONLY IMAGINE HOW YOUR LONG TERM READERS FELT YOU KNOW THE ONES WHO WAITED EIGHT FUCKING MONTHS FOR AN UPDATE THAT NEVER CAME THEY PROBABLY ARE READY TO STAKE YOUR MIA ASS AND ONE MORE THING I HOPE THAT TOM SUFFERS IN THE NEXT ONCOMING CHAPTERS OR I WILL PERSONALLY GO MANHUNT ON YOUR ASS I MEAN ABBY NEEDS TO GO TOTAL APESHIT AND CUT OFF HIS TESTICLES WITH A PAIR OF BLUNT RUSTING SAFETY SCISSORS I think I'm done. Did I make you feel better about yourself? Just so you know the lack of punctuation, in that extremely drawn out run on sentence made me want to slit my wrists. You should feel special; I discarded all previous notions about grammar and sentence structure just for you. At this point this may seem redundant but you need to get your shit together and start mass producing chapters. I'd advise you do this quickly as I wasn't gifted with very much patience. Toodles.
Author's Response: Um...me love you long time? I do apologize for my extremely long hiatus, however. I ended up in a time slip and it spit me out in the year 2035 where I fought in the Robot Wars. Very tragic stuff.
Date: 12/29/12 12:19 am Title: Contemplation and Airplanes
okay i'll scream at you...
YOU'RE BACK YOU'RE REALLY BACK!!!!!!!!!!! I COULD HUG YOU FOR THIS!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! YAY!
okay I screamed. :)
Author's Response: Next chapter will be up in about a week. I am so, so sorry I've been gone so long. I ended up in a time slip and it spit me out in the year 2035 where I fought in the Robot Wars. Tragic stuff.
Date: 12/28/12 09:35 pm Title: Contemplation and Airplanes
I'm so glad that you are back, but plz don't wait that long before you update, I had to read chapter 31 over again to connect the dots over what story this is.
And what's up with the r13, what does it mean?
Author's Response: You know what, I don't actually know what that r13 is. It must be some kind of glitch in the site. I'll do my best to try and so back over the chapter and fix everything. And I am so, so sorry that I've been gone so long. I really don't plan to do that every again. I'm writing full steam ahead to the end. Next update will be in about a week.
Date: 09/17/12 04:29 pm Title: And So It Begins
wow just wow
Author's Response: Is that bad? I apologize for my stupid. Trying to get the story updated right now but it's not working. >_<
Date: 05/17/12 04:22 pm Title: And So It Begins
hope all is well with you, missing this story so much! lotsa love to you! I'm still waiting ;)
Author's Response: Yeah I missed it to. So last night I made stuff happen, but this site is preventing you all from viewing that stuff.
Date: 04/11/12 06:25 pm Title: Basketball
I'm glad you are one of the few people who will not hate her because of who she is(: Wow, you sound good. Like you could be a professional lolol. haha When on vacation, I met a girl from Kansas. She lives in Baltimore now, near my area. She said she missed Kansas and the white people. She was pretty cool and I wish I could have gotten her number or something. Oh well. Haha She's a freshman, too. I'm sure all will work out in the end. It will just take them dorks a few weeks or months or whatever to adjust to having a pretty kickass person like yourself:D
Date: 04/11/12 09:13 am Title: January 18, 2010
Abby is amazing!
Author's Response: Thank you! Many many thanks for reading and reviewing! I really appreciate it and I love hearing from everyone, no matter what they have to say! <3
Date: 04/10/12 06:43 pm Title: Basketball
Awe, thanks. haha There should be more people like You And I. haha I used to hate her. Then Bad Romance came out and I thought she was fuckin' weird. Then I couldn't get the damn song out of my head. I gave in and put it on my iPod...along with the whole album. I've been hooked ever since lmao. Omg.. I cry every fuckin' time I see her crying about how she still feels like a loser kid in High School. She's highly against Bullying. She cannot stand it. Football team, eh? Pretty impressive. Were you any good? haha
Author's Response: Well I don't have anything against her or whatever. I'm just not into her music is all. But I respect her as a person and I think it's very honorable that she does what she does and doesn't let anybody get in her way. And yes, I was on my middle school football team. I was actually pretty good. I played for two years, seventh and eighth grades, and I loved it. I was linebacker and I was a very good kicker, so I as kicked for the team. The guys didn't really like having a girl on the team at first but once they figured out that I wasn't leaving, they grew to like me. I had a good time in New York. I'm not saying I hate Kansas, but it's just bad to be the new kid at this school. But I have friends in the band and it's all going to be okay. ...I hope.
Date: 04/10/12 03:43 pm Title: And So It Begins
I really like this chapter Nd you best update soon leaving a cliffy like that and all ;) haha I know what you mean about cliques in smalltowns... I'm from a smalltown in the middle of the prairies in Canada :) I am lucky that our cliques aren't too bad and my grade 12 class all gets along well
*hugs to you* !!!! keep up the amazing work, I truly love this story!!!
Author's Response: I promise I'll upsate this weekend! I'm doing my best here. I know what I want to write, it's just putting it all down is the hardest part for me because this story needs so much re-editing and it's so inconsistant and I have school and this crazy band festival to get through and my awful parents and I just really need to calm the fuck down. I'm so glad that the TH fans are really supportive of one another and I just want to thank you for all your kindness and all these reviews. You're such a sweet person!
Date: 04/10/12 03:33 pm Title: Christian Mckeon is a Murderer
Holy shocked!!!!! :P who woulda think it?? Haha! Great chapter as always!! Can't wait to continue :)
Author's Response: "Holy shocked!" I love that! <3 Many many thanks for really liking my story enought to read and review it! I really appreciate it! You're so sweet and there should be more people in the world like you~! <3
Date: 04/10/12 03:19 pm Title: That Should've Been Tom
What has Tom done now?!? :P haha and I love that Bill finally stood up to his brother!!! Good chapter :)
Author's Response: Yes Bill was in this chapter! After the next couple of chapters, he won't come up in person anymore, but he still exists and is usually a huge part in Tom's life, so he needs to be there. Thank you so so much for so many of the wonderful reviews! You were my 300th review and it's amazing!!!!!
Date: 04/10/12 03:04 pm Title: American Pie
Good chapter :) Tomi is jealous!! :P
Author's Response: Yeah I always pictured him as a bit of a jealous person, but not a bad person. He always has a reason for everything he does, even if I haven't explained what those reasons are, yet. But they will be explained. Many many thanks for reading and reviewing every single chapter! French the llama you're amazing!!! <3
Date: 04/10/12 02:44 pm Title: The Closed Door
It didn't suck :) haha I swear!! :)
Author's Response: Oh thank you! But I think all of the chapters in the whole story need to be edited. The grammar is awful and I want to throw up on it. Many many thanks for reading and reviewing! I really appreciate it! <3
Date: 04/10/12 02:27 pm Title: Yanni Says Hi To Tom
1) I love this story, it never has to end if u don't want it to ;)
2) I think the real Tom hS some reason for being a sex addict, and that he really is a Teddy bear deep down :)
3) I think that the world events as well as important dates of the band really make the story feel real :) also, you have a talent of writing, therefore the storie makes the characters come to life!! :)
4) I thought the summary wAs well written and the wordcount drew me in as well. After the first chapter, I was hooked!!
Love the story as always
Author's Response: Oh wow! I wish I could never make it end! I already have an ending planned, though. But I've been thinking about doing an alternate ending for those who want it to be that way. It's still on the drawing board, though. And you're right; Tom does have a reason for being that way thatw ill be revealed later on in like chapter 33 or 34. Thank you! I do try to be as realistic as possible, although this is of course fiction. Many many thanks for the sweet review and for answering the questions! I really appreciate it and I always take into consideration what my readers say! <3