Date: 08/16/11 05:37 pm Title: Chapter 11- C.C.
Bill I wanna slap him
Now why CHRIS is acting that way
we still don't really know
Date: 08/16/11 04:46 pm Title: Chapter 11- C.C.
I don't know why you didn't like this chapter I think it's brilliant. So full of emotion. I can't believe Chris cut his name into Bill's flesh...the thought makes me shiver. Poor Bill...and poor David. Thank you so much for updating.
Author's Response: Your reviews always make me smile. So thank you :)
Date: 08/11/11 08:14 pm Title: Chapter 10- Scars of the Past
Waooo!!! me encanto Bill en este capitulo, que le dijera sus verdades a Chris, como se le ocurre decirle When will you love me?, que le pasa...Por cierto ahora quedo con la intriga de quien ayudo a Bill, o si Bill lo esta inventando para que chris empiece a culpar a sus compaņeros.
Pero tambien me preocupa como empezo esta historia cuando Bill decia que si hubiera sabido lo que iba a pasar, hubiera entonces elegido ir con Chris...entonces todo va a terminar mal de todas formas.
Date: 08/11/11 01:45 am Title: Chapter 10- Scars of the Past
o q valeinte mi billito :D maldito Chris ojalā y lo regreses vivo a David y ya deja en paz a Bill ya los demās
Date: 08/10/11 11:41 pm Title: Chapter 10- Scars of the Past
looking forward for more
please update soon
Date: 08/10/11 11:21 pm Title: Chapter 10- Scars of the Past
I spent the last couple of hours reading the last story and now this one, and I must say, I'm enjoying them very much. You're an awesome writer. Props 4 real!
Author's Response: Thank you very much :)
Date: 08/10/11 10:36 pm Title: Chapter 10- Scars of the Past
I want moar!!!
You need a award I swear!
Author's Response: Haha thanks:) I'
Date: 08/10/11 06:09 pm Title: Chapter 9-More Trouble
oh my god...i seriously hate chris
Date: 08/10/11 01:34 pm Title: Chapter 9-More Trouble
Each chapter just gets better and better and sadder and sadder. My heart is truly breaking for Bill. And I so love that Tom crushed the cigarettes rather than remind Bill of Chris.
Date: 08/09/11 11:21 pm Title: Chapter 9-More Trouble
OMG this chapter made me cry, almost.
please update soon.
Bill needs an STD test
Date: 08/09/11 10:07 pm Title: Chapter 9-More Trouble
quiero leer la conferencia :D buen capi maldito kenny
actualiza pronto
Date: 08/09/11 02:27 pm Title: Chapter 8-Punishment
Oh, God, poor Bill. Reading about his imprisonment is really gruelling, all the horrible things that were done to him. Poor Caelan too.
And he's being so brave now agreeing to do the press conference for David. Can't wait for more.
Date: 08/09/11 01:11 pm Title: Chapter 8-Punishment
looking forward to more
Date: 08/09/11 12:40 am Title: Chapter 8-Punishment
sė yo tambičn estoy emocionada de leer la historia de Tom :D
sigue actualizando me encanta :D
Date: 08/07/11 02:32 pm Title: Chapter 1-It's Been Weeks
Another great chapter. Looking forward to the next one.
Date: 08/07/11 02:12 am Title: Chapter 7-They're Watching
q miedo me dan esos locos secuestradores... acechándolos...
actualiza pronto :D
Date: 08/06/11 09:24 pm Title: Chapter 7-They're Watching
looking forward to more
I liked this chapter much more then the last one.
I really like the way you write
Author's Response: Thank you:) I haven't actually liked the past few chapters but I recovered. rnMaybe I should kick Caelan's ass more often lol
Date: 08/06/11 08:13 pm Title: Chapter 7-They're Watching
Lo que entiendo es que Caelan es como un prisionero tambien. Y quien es el padre? siempre se refieren a el pero nunca dicen nada especifico.
Author's Response: The Dad is explained a bit in Stockholm. He isn't a main character and is meant to be a mystery.:)