Date: 07/28/11 06:08 pm Title: Forbidden Fruit
For a moment I thought the part of the chapter about the fruit was like about the Garden of Eden lol
The first thing I noticed on the banner was his pointy ear lol
I'm on board for this :D
Author's Response: It is a little bit like that! Somehow, forbidden things always lead back to the story of Adam and Eve! And yaaay pointy ear haha. It is indeed quite pointy. *holds out hand* Shall we go? Journey on!! Btw, thank you for reading....*grins*
Date: 07/28/11 06:03 pm Title: Just Like a Dream
WOAH, how awesome is this!
Tom's nipples............ *swoon*
Author's Response: Why, THANK YOU!!! I'm so happy you're reading! :D And....NIPPLES? Unf. Tom's nipples? Double unf. haha. ;)
Date: 07/28/11 05:49 pm Title: Forbidden Fruit
^^ i wish that place existed it sounds so amazing and tom being there is just a huge plus! :D absolutly fantastic chapter :3
Author's Response: Okay first of all...I'm sorry for my being an idiot and clicking "submit" TWICE on my response to your last review! *facepalm* Haha. Hopefully you can ignore the second one ;) Second of all, THANK YOU!! I'm glad you like the world I've dreamed up. And I'm sooo happy you're reading! I know I've said that already, but I really am! And yes...Tom just really adds to its appeal hehe. Thank you, love!
Date: 07/28/11 05:41 pm Title: Forbidden Fruit
I love the banner. I love sexy Tom. Haha oh Bill and the nipples lmfao haha I used to have a teacher who would say it funny. lmfao that's a whole other story. Tom has a connection with Bill. How cute. Haha the fruit thing totally reminded me of the bible. Just saying. Love ya girl:D
Author's Response: Dearest!! I have yet to have the chance to really chat with you. :( Life is sooo busy. When do you have to leave me, again? Never? OKAY! I'm glad you like the banner and sexy Tom. Yummmy. I like to say nipples in a Russian accent. I wish you could hear me say it, lol. The fruit thing is definitely reminiscent of the Bible. So many things go back to that story of Adam and Eve ;) I was definitely somewhat inspired by it! I LOVE YOU! Thank you for reading, doll!!
Date: 07/28/11 05:34 pm Title: Just Like a Dream
i just got my internet back and i couldnt be happier to see another amazing story being posted from my favorite writer ^^. i dont have a twitter but im thinking of making on just to follow you :D and i shall join you on this adventure!!!!! *grabs a plastic pirate sword* i dunno if we will need this but it dosnt hurt to have it ^_^
Author's Response: Hello darling!!! I've missed you! *hugs* I'm so glad you're reading my new story!! You are soooo sweet to say that I'm your favorite ;D And you SHOULD make a twitter. I'd totally follow you back so we can talk ;) Yay!! *grabs hand as we journey on* And hey...smart thinkin'! We very well might need it...dun dun dun. haha. Seriously though, thank you so much for reading!!
Author's Response: Hello darling!!! I've missed you! *hugs* I'm so glad you're reading my new story!! You are soooo sweet to say that I'm your favorite ;D And you SHOULD make a twitter. I'd totally follow you back so we can talk ;) Yay!! *grabs hand as we journey on* And hey...smart thinkin'! We very well might need it...dun dun dun. haha. Seriously though, thank you so much for reading!!
Date: 07/28/11 05:24 pm Title: Forbidden Fruit
*jumps up and down* You know I'll prolly review every damn chapter of this as well :( I cant help myself.
Author's Response: *grabs your hands to jump up and down with you* You know I'll prolly smile the day away if you review every damn chapter. I just can't help myself from loving you :D
Date: 07/28/11 05:20 pm Title: Forbidden Fruit
Oh Bill. I know he wants answers, hell I want answers, but Tom isn't giving him any to protect him. Damn teenagers never seeing the whole picture.
Author's Response: They NEVER do!! Tom's already risking a lot, to try to appease Bill. But of course, Bill does not see this. And, I'm pretty sure you'll have answers, before Bill does ;) We'll just keep him clueless for a bit longer... Damn teenagers, though...
Date: 07/28/11 02:20 pm Title: Just Like a Dream
Seriously I love the first chappy girl I'm kinda imagining your story morphing kinda somewhat like Narnia and Avatar???? Please make it more a fantastic ride and I'll go with the flow...hehehe. Well you're right that this was different from your first story in which you really rock that one....soooooooo I was thinking ,impress me again aaaannnndddd i'll review. tooodles girl pls rock my world again coz I have'nt have enough from your first story "workout"...;D hear more from you soon.....goodluck!
Author's Response: I'm so glad you like the first chapter!! And I promise it won't be like Narnia or Avatar ;) It's gonna be a new twist fo sho. I'll try my verrrrrry best to impress you!!! I'm about to post the next chapter :D And I'm going to post a one-shot from Work Out, fairly soon as well!! Thank you soo much for reading and I hope you like the next chapter xD
Date: 07/28/11 12:54 am Title: Just Like a Dream
Right? It is true love. TRUE LOVE. DWFONBcs'vvewnRBOEGJwdfbeqwRNOw I AM SI VERREH EXCITED. UGH. I BET IT IS AMAZIIIINGGGGG. I WILL LOOK. I WILL LOVE. and hell yes! I'll stroke you until your inspiration explodes everywhere ;) KTHXBAILOVEYOU!
Author's Response: You have stroked me and inspiration hath sprung forth and exploded!! hahaha. I'm about to post the next chapter!! Kbyeloveyoumorethanthemoonandthestars
Date: 07/27/11 09:12 pm Title: Just Like a Dream
I really like this story, seems really interesting. So...write more!! and *cough* awesome banner *cough*
Author's Response: I'm really happy that you like this so far :D I'm gonna be posting a new chapter, tomorrow! Yay! I'm glad you're reading!! And I feel ya on the banner hehe ;) Thank youuu!!
Date: 07/27/11 11:37 am Title: Just Like a Dream
FUCKING AMAZING.
I'm dying for the next chapter man!!
lol, and I didn't review the last chapter of 'Work out' so here it is: OMFG!! IT WAS FUCKING THE BEST THING EVER!!! I loved it, I love you, you my dear are the best author ever, maybe better than me O_O no thats not possible. (hey im cocky dont mind me) Any way.....I'm done! (finally) Bye!!~
Author's Response: THANK YOU SO MUCH!! I'm so excited to post the next chapter. It should be up tomorrow :D And I just put up a new banner for this story :) And OHHHHHH wow thank you so much for loving Work Out so much. That makes me so happy!! And it's allll good if you're a better writer than me. You probs are! haha. But I'm so happy you enjoyed the story...and I hope you like this one just as much!! Thank you! :D
Date: 07/27/11 03:28 am Title: Just Like a Dream
Key mashing makes everyone's heart melt with love. It's fact. Oh, I feel it everywhere, babes ;D OHBABY I AM SO HAPPY I STILL MAKE CHU SMILE WITH MAH REVIEWS. IT IS LOVE. LAAAAHHHVVVEEE~ And and and I am so excited for that new banner, my god. Like. The update will be amazing in itself but... HAVING A NON-HUMAN TOM WILL JUST ADD SO MUCH AMAZING TO IT. I AM SHAKING IN ANTICIPATION. You're excited to post coz you get to talk to me more? Well, you can always email me. I honestly think I'm more excited for you to post than I am, though. Just sayin'.
Author's Response: Key mashing is the diamond ring. OF COURSE YOU STILL MAKE ME SMILE. DUDE. I JUST POSTED THE NEW BANNER. Even though I haven't updated again, yet. GO LOOK. And I will email you! I'm gonna update either tonight, or tomorrow. I have yet to write the next chapter lol. Just waiting for a stroke of inspiration. Wanna stroke me? hehe. SERIOUSLY THOUGH. GO LOOK AT THE BANNER. Ok I LUUUHHHVE you bye!
Date: 07/27/11 12:24 am Title: Just Like a Dream
WIFEEEEEYYYYY~ I love you so much. SDFINobldVFBBGIFwhgfbvdlbBGWIHROBfrg kWERDNFOJB FDGIHOGlwer,fbVEIJHO$Re
THIS STORY IS GOING TO BE SO AMAZING. I CAN FEEL IT IN MY BONES (and other places ;)~)
Just. I have no words. This review is gonna suck, because I'm all out of magical smile dust but... URGH. I love it so much already. It's different from Work Out but I love it. Like. God. I am so excited to see what you do with it. And Tom. Being not-human. HOT. Is it creepy that I think that? Yes? I DON'T CARE COZ IT IS TRUE AND YOU CAN'T TELL ME OTHERWISE.
I can't even... just guuh, it hurts how much I love this already. I am so inlovewithyou. I need you to write a story FOR ME so that I can love on it more and more and more without sharing with these fucking bastards.
KTHX :)
(oh, btw I love Bill so far. He sounds awesome.)
AND I JUST LOVE YOUR WRITING. Oh. and you.
Author's Response: I just realllly love you, k? All of those letters that you wrote up there in a jumble? They just made me feel sooo much love. I hope you can feel it in other places ^_- Although feeling it in your bones is good too. BONE. I LOVE THAT YOU LOVE THIS. It's not creepy that you think he sounds hot!! I was drooling a bit when I thought up his look. And in my new banner, you're gonna get to seeeee him :D Next time I post, there's gonna be a new banner up! YAY. I hurts so much because I'm smiling soooo big because of this review...because of YOU! When's your birthday? I'll write something for you! I totally will! And yay! I'm glad you love Bill and you think Tom is hot and that you love me. I LOVE YOU TOO! I'm so excited to post more of this and talk to you more, bb. You're the besst :D
Date: 07/27/11 12:05 am Title: Just Like a Dream
okay so I love this story so much its in my favorites already. :) It's so firggin awesome and this was only the first chapter so I sence it will be epicly awesome as this story goes on. I can not wait to read more! :D
Author's Response: *waves* Heeeeey!!! I am so flattered that you've already put this in your favorites! I am so excited to be writing this story...it's gonna be so much fun..for everyone, I hope! I can't wait to post more :D I'm thinking a new will be up on Thursday at the latest! Thank you so much for reading, so happy to have you here :D *hugs*
Date: 07/26/11 11:15 pm Title: Just Like a Dream
Dude, I friggin' love it! It's so nice to see old Bill again! And woot :D I can't to read/ see it.
Author's Response: Yesssshhhh! I bet it's nice seeing him all girly and bouncy. I love that. And I can't to write it!! ;D
Date: 07/26/11 10:10 pm Title: Just Like a Dream
Me: *scrolling, scrolling* "Ugh, there's nothing!" *scrolling.*
... *double take.* "MOHANROCKS?! FUCK YEAH."
And that's how I ended up in this little box telling you that this story is really catchy and I'm enjoying it a lot already! :D
Oh, btw ..... FIRST REVIEW. ^_^
Author's Response: Yessss! I'm so happy you're here!! And that you saw my naaaaame. I'm gonna have a new banner the next time I post, so keep on lookin' out for my name! I'm really happy you're enjoying this story already! *loves on you* Thank you for reading, and just being awesome. ;) FIRST REVIEW FUCK YEAH!! ^_-
Date: 07/26/11 09:42 pm Title: Just Like a Dream
Of course I'd be here!! :D -gushes-
Author's Response: You're soooo sweet :D
Date: 07/26/11 05:45 pm Title: Just Like a Dream
Dude I'm home now, the letter was so lame xD I wrote him back saying so. It was like 1 paragraph long lmao. And I'm watching the DVD as I type this and let me tell you, I'm lovein' in. It's worth the 25 bucks I spent.
And post soon >D
Author's Response: Duuuuude, good thing you put his ass in place, then! I think I'm gonna have to purchase this DVD. It would please me greatly, I believe. I think I'm gonna post tomorrowwww! I'm getting a kick ass banner made, right now.
Date: 07/26/11 05:06 pm Title: Just Like a Dream
Great beginning! Love the imagery and vividness in Bill's dream. And I love his parents -- they probably have their hands full with him. Can't wait to see where you take this!
Author's Response: Hey you!! I was so happy to see that you reviewed :D Thrilled to have you here, reading. And I'm glad that you appreciated the imagery. I tried to be as descriptive as possible so that you could picture the world, just as I did. They definitely have their hands full, hehe. It's gonna be quite a journey for them all. I'm so happy that you're excited about the next chapter! I hope you like it! OH! And btw, some people were talking about your lion fic on twitter the other day. They loved it. I loved it, too. You are so talented. :D
Date: 07/26/11 11:34 am Title: Just Like a Dream
!!!! Yay! You're writing a new story! (I told you I would read it haha) honestly I saw the picture as I was scrolling through recent stories and was intregued by that awesome doorknob and then I saw it was you writing it & opened it imediately haha. I do want to talk to you because I feel like we have a lot in common.
Author's Response: HEY!!! I'm so happy you're here and reading :D I'm so glad you were intrigued by the banner and that my name made you open it :D :D That makes me so happy, you have no idea. But guess what?? I'm going to have a new and awesome banner made soon! It's gonna show the dream world and it's gonna be beautiful. But I'm glad you like the silly little one that I threw together. And I love talking to you!! I'm so excited that you're reading! Thank you! :D