Date: 07/29/11 04:18 pm Title: Forbidden Fruit
AHAH this chapter was the cutest thing ever! I laughed at the 'fuck, he's so beautiful' line XD This is awesome, you deserve, like, a truckload of gummy bears or something...keep up the good work! XD
Author's Response: D'aww no way! THANK YOU!! The fact that you're even saying that I deserve a truckload of gummy worms...just makes me wanna hug you soooo tight. So I'm gonna. *squeezes you* Thank you! I'm glad you liked it and that it made you laugh a bit! I don't think I'm going to be able to keep humor out of this one, lol. The next chapter will be up this weekend! xD
Date: 07/29/11 12:47 pm Title: Forbidden Fruit
Bill will never listen will he? :D can't wait for next chapter!
Author's Response: Seriously, Bill. I mean, Tom has been very clear about the rules and yet he is just gonna go ahead and do his own thang anyway. *shakes head* haha. :D Thank you SO much for reading! I shall post the next chapter this weekend! ;)
Date: 07/29/11 11:52 am Title: Forbidden Fruit
lmao dude, you are sucha freakin' dork! "And nipples. It was important to note the nipples." You just couldn't hold back huh?
lmao post more, I'm really loving this!
Author's Response: I COULDN'T HOLD BACK. haha. Seriously though...nipples; especially male nipples, are often greatly overlooked. LOL. I shall post more this weekend!! So glad you're loving it and I hope you've watched that Zimmer 483 DVD countless times, for me ;) Thank you!
Date: 07/29/11 09:51 am Title: Just Like a Dream
Hey girl I LOVE THE TATTOO what's the meaning of it? I'm happy that the readers responds to your story exicitedly and I'm excited of it too I reread and guess what? *Whooo hooo make it good let us get pumping*....what's next? what's next? what's next?...adrenalin rush...:D
Author's Response: HEY!! You'll find out the meaning in one of the chapters ;) I am very pleased by the response to this story, as well :D It makes me want to write it so much better for all of you!! I shall reveal what is next very soon! Meaning...this weekend lol. I'm excited that you're excited! Thank you so much for reading, girl ;D
Date: 07/29/11 05:32 am Title: Just Like a Dream
I did. It was orgasmic, I promise you. Just a bit though ;)YAY I SO SO ADORE IT!!!!!!!! awwwyeaaaah baby, deep ballin' was the first thing I listed for college apps. WOOT YYEEEAAAHHH BABEEEHHH. best present everrrrr! I am so ready. so fucking ready it hurts. *HUGS* I LOVE IT ALL IN BED!
Author's Response: Just a bit, is just enough!! Ya hear? Wait, what? NO! I insist that it be mucho orgasmic. Listen, colleges really appreciate deep ballin'. They do. They'll give you scholarships and prizes and shit. BEST BIRTHDAY PRESENT EVER, INDEED!!! I am soooooo ready! In bed. On the floor. In the shower. WHEREVER! I'M READY! ILOVEYOU!
Date: 07/29/11 03:14 am Title: Forbidden Fruit
OHMAIGAWDS!!!
I'm in love officially with this story!!
Author's Response: NUH UH. SERIOUSLY?! I could not be happier to hear that!!! Eeeek. Thank you so much. You have made my night. Love you for loving this story ;) I hope you like the next chapter!
Date: 07/29/11 02:56 am Title: Forbidden Fruit
Yay! No-filter-Bill is back :) I love him haha. This story is so exciting & intreguing. You keep leaving me wanting to know the rest of the story. I'm also throughly impressed by the fact that you can write both serious writing & funny writing not to mention both real life & fantasy :) so keep up the amazing work!!
Author's Response: I just can't write a Bill with a filter. It just doesn't feel right haha. So I'm HAPPY you love him like that. :D And just...gahhhh, I wanna bottle up this review and keep it forever. You are sooo sweeet. I'm glad that you are intrigued and wanting more. And thank you for the amazing compliments. I'm happy to have you here!! I hope you like the next chapter, love ;D
Date: 07/29/11 01:10 am Title: Forbidden Fruit
BANNER. FUCK. BANNERRRR. LOVE LOVE LOVE. Tom. So hot. FUCK. Oh god. Fucking amazing. I jizzed. Multiple times. My lady balls. Are shrivelled and dry. Coz I jizzed. That much. NOT only because of the banner... but because this story is fucking hot. JUST AMAZING. UNF. Wanna shove it all up in my uteral grill.... I will stop talking now.
No, just kidding. This review isn't over SO I SHALL NOT STOP TALKING. Ahem. I am nonsensical right now. What the fuck ever. I adore this story, and it's only two chapters in. I ADORE YOU, AND I'M ONLY ONE POCKET IT. (I was gonna say balls deep in, but I decided not to be that crude. But I added it in brackets, because I am a fearless motherfucker.) ANYPOODLE. My scanner is fixed. but i'm on vacation now, so you is gonna hafta wait until August 21st. I'm a horrid artist, by the way. BUT WHATEVER. This story makes me happy. Like. I just... I love it. Lotsly. It is so good so far. I am so curious. And and I want more, coz it's almost addicting. And and and and and and I am just so excited to see what happens. With Bill and Tom and scary creatures that plant trees. You're too amazing, really. You put detail in the little things, which just makes this so easy to imagine, but you don't over-detail, to take away from the plot. And you create characters that could be so real. Even if Tom isn't human, I can just imagine him being real. Coz I'm badass. But yes. I enjoy this. And you. (inbed)
ILAAAAAAHHHHHVVEEEYYOOUUUU!~
Author's Response: That banner just received SO MUCH PLEASURE FROM YOU. And maybe I got a bit of it, too. OKAY A LOT. And please, don't ever stop talking! Cuz I love you and shit. I'M SO HAPPY YOU ALREADY ADORE THIS STORY. Balls deep is cool with me, yo. We be deep ballin'. I CAN'T WAIT TO SEE THE PICTURE ON AUGUST 21st! That's 9 days before my birthday! It shall be a birthday surprise, for meee :D And I'm almost positive that you could never produce anything horrid. YOU MAKE ME SO HAPPY. I'm so glad I've got you intrigued. ;) And what you said about how I add just the right amount of details? Gonna hug you for saying that *huuuuuuugs* This story is gonna get crazy. I hope you're ready. I'll keep you safe in my pocket though, k? YOU ARE A BAD ASS (in bed). I hope you like the next chapter (in bed). I LOVE YOU (in bed). bahahaha. ;D
Date: 07/28/11 10:45 pm Title: Forbidden Fruit
Rather than me leaving a review, cause you know I think it's fucking fantastic, I'm just gonna curl up here, and take a nap until it's updated again...
Author's Response: *smiles down at you* I'll give you a little nudge and offer you a plate of freshly baked cookies when it is updated. I will NOT offer you pickles. I promise. And I think YOU are fucking fantastic. ;)
Date: 07/28/11 10:04 pm Title: Forbidden Fruit
Journey!! and an incredible journey it shall be! -nods very seriously- I love the picture of the blue sand and purple water I kinda imagine it to be a milky light blue and mauve-ish pink waves, So pretty -eyes sparkle- and LOL @ Bill for always defying laws and breaking rules :P Well, i'm just like him. I WANNA KNOW WHAT THAT DOOR IS! or what that "something" is xD Okay I'm gonna end my essay before it gets to the point where I literally sit and write you an essay xD -hugs and love-
Author's Response: YES! I feel very lucky to have you going on this journey with me :D I'm so happy you love the banner. I keep staring at the pretty colors...*nods* Bill ALWAYS has to go against what he's supposed to do, I SWEAR. And you are totally gonna know what that door is. Hang tight, bb. The journey shall take us there! I like your essay. I like it, a lot. Feel free to write me an essay, anytime ;) *loooves on you* Thank you!!
Date: 07/28/11 09:39 pm Title: Forbidden Fruit
Damn, Bill & his curiosity. Lol. I love this & can't wait to find out what happens next.
Author's Response: Bill needs to calm down and just trust the strange elf boy haha. I'm SO happy you love this! I shall post again, soon. Thank you so much for reading, love :D
Date: 07/28/11 08:47 pm Title: Forbidden Fruit
go ahead and call it a journey. i love a good road trip. *packs suitcase* seriously digging tom's tattoo, btw.
Author's Response: Oh you...I love a good road trip, too!! I'm going on a mini one, tomorrow. Just to visit my folks, about 4 hours away. And I'm gonna call this a journey. I'm gonna do it. *tries to place random things in your suitcase* Huh? What? You don't need a cheese grater? Glad you're into that tattoo. He wears it well. He does. *nods* xD
Date: 07/28/11 08:36 pm Title: Forbidden Fruit
Lol! This whole chapter was italicized.
I like the banner; it's so damn colorful :D I also caught a glimpse on Twitter about you saying something about having a male nipple on the banner XD
”Gotta...find that hidden door...” -- What the HELL, Bill?!
Yay! Journey! *love for this chappie*
Author's Response: Bahaha it totally was. For some reason..dreams and Italics just go hand in hand. I'm really happy you like the banner! I keep getting lost in the pretty colors...I'll probably go stare at it some more after I'm done talking to you, lovely. Do you follow me on twitter?! What's your name? Wanna follow youuu. My tweets can be quite inappropriate haha. Nipple talk. xD SERIOUSLY, WHAT THE HELL, BILL? You should ALWAYS heed a strange elf boy's warnings. *shakes head* So happy you're coming along for this journey!!! *grins* Thanks for lovin' on this chapter. It appreciates it almost as much as I do!
Date: 07/28/11 08:30 pm Title: Forbidden Fruit
I'm gonna call this review numbah 2!
It's one of my less serious ones. So, go!
1- JOURNEY. MWAHA. :D *packs a bag.*
2- NIPPLES. Okay. Like that part made me laugh because I'm always commenting on guys nips and my best friend thinks I'm so weird for it. xD Lolol. *smiles big.*
Author's Response: I'm diggin' the numbah 2!! And hey now, I looove the less serious things in life..so bring it on, girl! Let's do dis. 1- YES JOURNEY. You'd better pack that bag. Let's gooo! 2- You can talk about nipples with me as much as you want! I too, appreciate man nips. haha. 3- Yes I realize that you didn't have a number 3 but I'm adding one so I can say thank you for reading and making me smile with your review! :D *huuuugs* NIPPLES
Date: 07/28/11 08:29 pm Title: Forbidden Fruit
Loving the idea of the fruit. Kinda like the tree of knowledge, but... not. LOL.
So are you going to use the light up tree houses? if so, I'll try and make a manip with them that you can add to the story.
Author's Response: Indeed it is a bit like the tree of knowledge ;P Forbidden fruit is always sweeter...hehe. People are loving your banner, girl. I love it soo much. AND YES!! That would be amaaaazing. I would love that. Could you? *hugs you forever*
Date: 07/28/11 08:14 pm Title: Forbidden Fruit
GAHHHH, SO PUMPED! ._.
I already dig this story so much, I can't wait to review EVERY CHAPTER! :D
And your new banner is so prettyful :3 I stared at it for like 30 seconds, in complete wonder, before I realized it was your story. Then I flailed/squealed/clicked furiously xD
Update soon, please! Looooove :)
Author's Response: *jumps up and down* I'm sooo happy that you're excited for this!! If you reviewed every chapter...I think I might just love you forever. Wait...I'd love you anyway. I can't lie. ;) And...I keep staring at it, tooo haha. But I'm really happy that you saw my name. AND THAT YOU CLICKED!! Seriously, so glad that you're reading. I shall not leave you hanging for long!! Thank you for loving this, already :D *huuugs*
Date: 07/28/11 07:25 pm Title: Forbidden Fruit
this sounds so very interesting and i can't wait for the update :D btw i started following you on twitter ;) i'm KiraKuran :D
Author's Response: I'm so happy that I have you intrigued :D And I accepted your follow! Can't wait to talk to you on there, love. :D I hope you like the next chapter! *hugs*
Date: 07/28/11 06:34 pm Title: Forbidden Fruit
You're making me REALLY want to smell Tom.
Among other things.
But I am even more intrigued as to how Tom himself fits into all this and for that matter, Bill as well. Where are they? Was is this world? Is the house the only access point to it, seeing as the door is right there and Bill has yet to spot it?
I'm so ready for this trip, you have no idea! I need a little more excitement in my life at the moment. XD ♥
Author's Response: There is actually a particular candle I was burning when I wrote the first chapter. It's called "Pineapple Orchid", from Bath & Bodyworks. It smells soooo good. But...it doesn't even compare to the smell that I have imagined up for Tom, himself. If I come across a candle or scent that's like him...I will immediately tell you! And probably buy 20 of them, lol. And yes, I would also like to do other things to Tom. *nods* But I'll let you have at him, because I'm just so happy that you're reading ;) ALL SECRETS SHALL BE REVEALED....eventually, lol. But honestly, those are seriously valid questions and I can't wait to answer them for you. I'm SO ready for you to take this trip with me. Climb aboard and hold on...this is gonna be exciting, for sure. *loves*
Date: 07/28/11 06:15 pm Title: Forbidden Fruit
aww first off...LOVE the banner lol..and i did get confused again, but i saw ur name! YAY! i love the connection they have for each other...it's sweet of tom to protect bill :D
tom looks sooo hot btw!
Author's Response: So glad you looked for my name, again hehe. AND YAY!! I love the banner, too :D Once again, so happy to have you here and reading, love! I'm pleased that you're enjoying their connection. I can't wait for you to find out more about Tom and his world ;) And mmm....creature Tom...let's just stare at him a while, k? *stares at banner*
Date: 07/28/11 06:13 pm Title: Forbidden Fruit
Its a beautiful banner, but I dunno. There is something off about Tom's face in it, other thsn the pointy ears. But I love that shre loved you enought to make you one!
So...I see Work Out!Bill peeking out in someplaces. In the distraction by Tom's nipples, the randomly shouted words, the curiousity he has for random things that have nothing to do with what is goig on around him. Its a beautiful thing.
This. This was a nice chapter. I loved how Tom broke down and answered some of Bill's questions. I totally understand wanting to find the door but for shame onBill is he actually goes though it after promising the strange dream elf boy named Tom he wouldn't.
You are totally right, secrets have a tendancy to remain secrets untl they are no longer secrets. Its uncanny how they do that.
I can't wait for more! Keep up the wonderful work! *cuddles up*
Author's Response: Perhaps it's his lack of lip ring? Or! His green eyes? He definitely doesn't look like regular Tom..but you can see traces of him there. It really is weird seeing him without a lip ring though lol. And yes! I can't help but interject a little random and a little quirky, into Bill. I just think that all Bills around the world, call for it ;) I'm glad you find it beautiful! I find your reviews, beautiful! We are a match! I'm sooo glad you liked the chapter. Tom is barely scraping the surface with his answers...but he'll reveal more things, soon. And THE NERVE OF BILL. I understand his curiosity as well, but I mean..if a strange Elf boy warns you about something...YOU LISTEN. Ya hear me, Bill? Truer words have never been spoken in the secret secrets of secrets. That word looks SO weird after a while...haha. I'm so happy you're liking it! I'mma respond to your email, soon :D We can be pen pals? Yeah? Maybe? *snuggles you* Thank you!!