Date: 07/30/11 11:38 pm Title: Discoveries
AAARRRRRGGGHHHH!!! Why must you end it so soon ;-; I wanna know what happens next .;-; I'm not a patient person any more -chains you to your lap top and forces you to write-
Gah! It's barely the 3rd chapter and you have me sitting on the edge of my seat :x
BTW Rebecca Black's song "My moment" Or whatever the hell it's called. Actually isn't that bad. :x It's better than friday
Author's Response: You know I gotta keep you on the edge of your seat, guuuurl. *fights off the chains* I PROMISE I'LL MAKE THE NEXT CHAPTER WORTH IT! Are we going to have a throw down? Do I need to get the Windex?? haha. I'm soooo glad that you're already digging it this much. I seriously am. You know I love having you here. HMMM. I've never actually heard that song by her. She really doesn't have a bad voice...it's just...THAT song...lol. I hope you like the next chapter! Hit me up on twitter in between now and then ;) Thank you!!
Date: 07/30/11 11:32 pm Title: Discoveries
HOLY SHIT indeed! MORE MORE MORE! xD this is great of course darling and i can't wait for the update! soo very interesting :D
Author's Response: I shall give you MORE!!! I'm really glad you liked the chapter, love. And I'm excited for you to read the next one!! Btw, it was so nice talking to you on twitter, yesterday :D You're so sweet and I'm thrilled to have you as a reader and a twitter friend ;)
Date: 07/30/11 11:32 pm Title: Forbidden Fruit
I don't care what Tom claims -- he was totally watching Bill get changed. Who could resist?
Another intriguing chapter and more mystery. I hope Bill can resist the call of the forbidden fruit or I'm going to start calling him Eve. Come on, Bill, you can do it. This Tom is really fascinating, especially when he's chiding Bill for his swearing. I can't wait to learn more about him and his world.
I want to go on this journey with you! I'll try and pack lightly, but I make no promises! ^__^
P.S. Thanks for letting me know last time that you guys were talking about me on Twitter. You made me blush. *_* I'm always going to be known as that weird one who wrote the humping lions fic, aren't I? How can I ever live that down?
Author's Response: Dude -- you KNOW he was watching him change, lol. I mean, I can't blame the boy. Because seriously, who could resist? ;) Ahh I'm so happy that you are intrigued by the mystery. And you totally should call him Eve. I believe that he has warranted that nickname lol. But he's just gotta resist that fruit. *cheers him on with you* I can't wait to tell you more about Tom and his world. I hope he continues to fascinate you, too :D Hey hey, you don't need to pack lightly. I'm the WORST when it comes to packing light. So you and I can just be at the back of the crowd...lugging our suitcases..but still enjoying the sights and story!! And girl, I'm glad that it could make you blush because, you deserve praise. That was SUCH a sweet and well written story. I know that whatever else your write, is going to be fantastic. And plus, I think there are worse things than being know for writing a humping lion fic, haha. You don't need to live it down. Just embrace it. Embrace it. :D
Date: 07/30/11 11:28 pm Title: Discoveries
Wow ok so here's some stuff I'd like to say about this chapter: Tom is adorable, the spark thing was cool, the owl doormat thing was kinda bothersome & so was the Rebecca Black thing, and finally I really love how you write Bill :D
Author's Response: First of all, I want to apologize for the bothersome things haha. I know the doormat was pretty cheesy and Rebecca Black..well...she's Rebecca Black. haha. BUT! I'm soo happy you find Tom adorable and that you love the way I write Bill. That seriously makes me smile and feel happy. :D I'm so glad that you're reading and I hope you like the next chapter!!
Date: 07/30/11 10:24 pm Title: Discoveries
LMAO!..oh great..now that damn song is in my head lol..you know how hard it is to get it out of my head?? xD
i truly LOVE this chapter!!! i think it's sooo romantic that bill belongs to tom..makes me jealous lol..but i cant wait to see where tom lives and how he lives and all that good stuff!!!!
oh btw..do u have a facebook?? :D
cant wait for more sweetheart!! *hugs you tight*
-your biggest fan
Author's Response: I'M SO SORRY!!! :( I hope it's out of your head, soon. And that it doesn't pop back into your head when you read this review haha. ;D I'm soooo happy that you love this chapter!! Bill belongs to Tom ;) Gives me the warm and fuzzies inside and also makes me jealous lol. I'm so excited for you to read the next chapter and find out about all of that!! I do have a facebook..but it's one that I'm friends with my family and stuff on so I don't really talk about my writing or Tokio Hotel on it. But! I might just message it to you, if you want it? I'd be happy to be friends with you :D *squeeeeezes you* Thank you soo much for reading, sweet love!
Date: 07/30/11 08:57 pm Title: Discoveries
Hum, bueno, antes que nada: HOLA! Se que quizá no entiendas nada de lo que te diga y vas a tener que usar un traductor de ingles- español, pero quería comentar porque me siento mal conmigo misma. No se escribir en inglés por eso lo hago en mi idioma natal.
He leído tus dos historias y hasta ahora no hay nada que me haya hecho reír así, eres una genia total, admiro tu forma de escribir y amo las personalidades de Bill y Tom! Tienes una creatividad increíble, con una enorme imaginación. Siempre logras dejarme con la intriga! ¿Así que Bill le pertenece? *O* Ya no hay vuelta atrás, no le puede prohibir más, me fascina el lugar de los sueños de Bill, todo psicodélico con muchos colores *-*
Espero que no te enfades conmigo por mi ignorancia xD realmente quería decirte lo mucho que me gustan tus historias! :)
Un beso gigante.
Author's Response: Hola cariña! Estoy utilizando un traductor para esto, pero tengo que decir ... Estoy tan halagado que se tomaron el tiempo para escribir esta crítica en su idioma. Eres tan dulce. Usted y opinar sobre este ... me hizo muy feliz. Realmente aprecio que me dicen todos los elogios : D Sí! Bill pertenece a Tom:) Espero que disfruten el próximo capítulo. Y sí! Psychedelic es una buena manera de describir todos los colores en el mundo de los sueños. Yo estaba tan feliz que se tomaron el tiempo para escribir esta crítica para mí. En serio. Gracias por escribir esta crítica y para el gusto de mi escritura. : D un abrazo enorme y un beso. Espero saber de ti, otra vez! Además, espero que este traductor trabajó bien. haha. Si el traductor no funciona muy bien, por lo menos te hizo reír un poco. haha. :D *amor* Gracias, otra vez!
Date: 07/30/11 08:57 pm Title: Discoveries
I love that doormat! :3 If it exists, maybe I'll buy it someday.
About Rebecca Black, she's fun to hate and everything, but I honestly didn't have my ears bleeding when hearing that song XD I didn't like it, no, but I didn't HATE it like the rest of the world seems to XD
and the consequences would be dyer > Supposed to be dire*
Anyway, oh my gosh XD
Author's Response: Bahaha it doesn't exist to my knowledge...but maybe it will someday! Perhaps I'll just have to make it myself and then send you one, of course. :D Truly...the only thing that grated on my nerves about that song is how she turned the two syllable word "Friday", into three syllables. That, and just the lack of creativity in the lyrics. She's not a bad singer though!! THANK YOU for pointing that mistake out to me. I knew something seemed off about it. I was actually gonna tweet you to thank you haha. I might, still! Anyway, yay!!! I'm excited for you to read the next chapter!!
Date: 07/30/11 08:49 pm Title: Discoveries
*giggles while eating whataburger*
Author's Response: *resists handing you a jar of pickles because I love you too much*
Date: 07/30/11 08:19 pm Title: Discoveries
First and fore most I HATE REBECA BLACK! Second this chapter was awesome, Bill's Pokeman hoddie :D I hope when Bill finaly see where Tom lives..Hmmm I wonder!!!!
Author's Response: Hahaha that song is just sooo catchy and repetitive in the head. YAY! I'm soooo happy you liked this chapter despite it having Rebecca Black in it hehe. And hell yeah Pokemon! They were the shit, back in the day ;) I'm excited for you to read the next chapter. Answers shall be revealed! Thanks again for reading hun. It's always so great to see your reviews xD
Date: 07/30/11 08:03 pm Title: Discoveries
this was cute! bill belongs to tom!
Author's Response: They belong! They do! Thanks for reading and finding it cute. It's amazing how you can make me smile with a little review, like this. So thank you for THAT. :D Hope you like the next chapter!
Date: 07/30/11 07:44 pm Title: Discoveries
i wasnt sure i was going to like this when i first saw it posted a few days ago. but i decided to give it a shot and im actually really liking this so far. and can io just say that the whole “Why now?” Bill asked the loaded question, hoping for an actual answer.
“Because,” Tom took a deep breath. “You do belong to me.” Tom whispered as he stared evenly at Bill, gauging his reaction.
“Holy shit...” Bill uttered in astonishment. moment had me turning to absolute mush inside? cant wait for the next update!
Author's Response: Can I just say how happy I am that you gave this story a chance? I'm SO glad to have you here and reading!! I hope you continue liking it :D And that part...it makes me smile that it turned you to mush. Turning to mush can be such a lovely feeling!! Thank you sooo much and I hope you like the next chapter!
Date: 07/30/11 07:14 pm Title: Discoveries
-wishes I belonged to Tom, too-
LOVE this story! And YOU! :D
I'm so excited for the next update! ^.^
Author's Response: *stares longingly into the distance and wishes the same thing* Ohhhh my gosh I love you, too!! I'm delighted that you love this story :D Thank you for reading and just being such a sweet person! I hope you enjoy the next chapter :D
Date: 07/30/11 06:56 pm Title: Discoveries
Thanks for swooping by and I hope Owl see you later Lmfao girl you never cease to make me laugh. I swear if we had a mat that sat that, the thing would 'magically' disappear. Meaning, I would burn it. God, a yelling conversation. I have so many of those with my mom. She used to call/text me. Now she feels the need to yell. Ugh. Moms. Damn you Rebecca Black. God, did you hear "Prom Night?" It's like the same fucking thing. Awe, Bill belongs to Tom. How fucking sweet. Now, I can't wait for answers. Girllll, I miss talking to youuuuuu. I leave again on the 15. Uggggghhhhhh. I'ma miss everything so muchhhh. haha I'm whining really bad now. haha. Talk to ya later, love. Maybe:D haha
Author's Response: Bahaha I was trying to wrack my brain for something for that damn mat. And the puns have just been coming to me lately, and thus...the doormat was conceived!! That sounds like something my mom would get just to freak me out. She once bough 10 tiny gnomes and hid them around my bedroom. WTF. One had a surprisingly sharp shovel. Hahaha my mom used to ALWAYS call and text me when I was in the other room. But yeahhh, she enjoys her yelling as well. And she's going deaf I swear, so the yelling is getting LOUDER. Haha I've never heard Prom Night but now...I shall not look it up!! Yaaay Bill and Tom belong. I'm excited to give you answers! I'm prolly gonna be MIA on MSN this week because I have a friend staying with me and I'm moving on Friday...but after that it's on like donkey kong, girl! We're gonna talk it up :D Love ya! Thank you sooo much for reading!
Date: 07/30/11 02:29 am Title: Just Like a Dream
Oh, I can give you mucho orgasmic ;) Dude. College is sounding amazing right about now. Just. Deep Ballin' is totally my forté, you know? So, this is good. The only award I ever won was not peeing on the carpet in Kindergarden at all during the year. Was a proud year for me. OH YOU ARE ALWAYS READY, EH?! THIS MAKES THINGS SO MUCH EASIER!!!!!!!!!!!!! Ahem. ILOVEYOUTOO!
Author's Response: THAT IS THE BEST REWARD EVER! Not peeing on the carpet in kindergarten is a very hard task to accomplish. You must know this. I'm always ready for you, darling. Only you ;) Love you and your deep ballin'.
Date: 07/30/11 02:07 am Title: Forbidden Fruit
(reply) Lol, I'm Mintmunkie. And I'm already following you.
Author's Response: Oh!! *follows back*
Date: 07/30/11 01:04 am Title: Forbidden Fruit
I always like going in flower shops, and having those blossoms surround me. I can't even imagine what it would be like for Bill in this flowery and beautiful dream world! He seems like his loses his inhibitions and control when in the dream world; or maybe that's just how he gets around Tom.
Nipples. I like nipples. Especially when they're preceded by the adjective "dusky."
What the heck is going on in the dream world? People watching, all in control and shit? I'm strongly reminded of the video game "Final Fantasy X." Within a real-life world, some spirits of a magic and dead civilization create a dream-world with dream-people in it, and watch and control everything. The spirits are trying to reconstruct their past by playing with the dream world like children play with dolls and dollhouses. The people in it are totally alive and autonomous; but in the end, they're just dream-people. Epic events happen and the spirits come to terms with their deadness, and stop dreaming the people. The dream-world and dream-people dissolve; which is sad because the main story of the game is about a dream-person falling in love with a real-life person. ......So, it's one of my favorite video games ever. Just like how you are my favorite koala buddy ever.
LOL Tom's been watching Bill? The attraction and fascination are mutual. I love their interaction on the beach, when Bill is laying down. I think a little bit of the randomness from Work Out has leaked into here. I'm not complaining!
I notice how much better your writing and punctuation have gotten. Stellar, stellar job, Puff Daddy! You've made me proud.
I'm laughing at Bill. Tom: "Don't go in the door." Bill: "Mmm, gotta find that door!" Tom's world is really intriguing, and I'm looking so forward to you unveiling more. This universe is really rich and weird, what with the people who watch, and Tom's people who obey. If this were a movie, I'd be chomping popcorn, totally engrossed. :D
Author's Response: Long. Epic. Perfect. I love going into flower shops, too!! Good smells are addicting, to me. You know this because of the Hobby Lobby story I shared, lol. And that's an interesting point...maybe it's the dream world..or perhaps it's just Tom's presence that gets Bill like that. I'll be sure to use "dusky nipples" in a future chapter, just for you. Seriously, I'm gonna do it. SO MUCH IS GOING ON IN THIS DREAM WORLD. But listen, the end of this story isn't going to be like that. They're gonna end up together. Cuz that's just how I roll. MARSHMALLOW STYLE. But I do love that game, as well. I always try to get the boy I nanny to play it with me and like an ass, he's like "noooo that's stupid!" Psssssh. Kids. They don't know anything. He's been watching him, girl. And...I don't think I can keep humorous and filterless Bill out of a story I write. It just feels too right to be wrong haha. I'm happy you liked their interaction, though. They're gonna be interacting lots more, soon! YAAAAAAY PUNCTUATION AND WRITING! I have tried my best to improve upon it. I think it helps that I'm not cranking out chapters every day in a hurried manner. Bill doesn't listen for shit, I swear. And girl, you'd better grab that popcorn because secrets are going to be revealed, mysteries are going to arise, and forbidden love is going to blossom *said in movie trailer voice* *KOALA LATCH*
Date: 07/30/11 01:02 am Title: Forbidden Fruit
lol i didnt notice it XD and im making a twitter! :D also from reading work out and now this one. Inspiration hit me! im doing a painting of the world you dreamed up ^^ also im naming it Mohans Adventures :D im painting the purple waters blue sands and the forest with on of the ruby fruits ^_^
Author's Response: Can I just hug you? Please? Not only are you making a twitter...but you're painting the world and naming it MOHAN'S ADVENTURES?? Yep. I'm gonna hug you. *squeeeeeeeeezes* You are amazing. I cannot wait to see it. I wish I could make pretty things, like that. ;)
Date: 07/29/11 11:30 pm Title: Just Like a Dream
ok, read your response, after I replied to the email, so I shall respond to your response here. Of course we can be pen pals!!
Author's Response: Read this before I read your email. I shall go read it!! And YAY! I'm excited. Talk to ya soon :D
Date: 07/29/11 08:29 pm Title: Forbidden Fruit
Now that I like. Its another second story number one in my books coming from you darling. Very well done again as always can't wait for more and see if Bill finally finds that door he is forbidden to go in LOL..Way to go again :D ta ta for now
Author's Response: THANK YOU!!! As always, you have made me smile! You are so sweet. I'm really happy that you enjoyed the chapter and that you're looking forward to the next one. I have a sneaking suspicion that Bill is going to go searching for that door...even though Tom told him NOT to lol.Thank you SO much for reading and I can't wait to hear what you thought about the next chapter!! :D
Date: 07/29/11 06:51 pm Title: Forbidden Fruit
I just joined the adventure when you told me about it in your response. :D
Okay, so I was a TINY bit hesitant because of the creature warning, but reading it, I'm not. It's just.. different, Bill's not reacting like it's totally normal to have dreams like that and that's a good thing. ;D
I like where it's going because I have no idea where it's going.
:o And look at that, it's already got a ton of reviews, so I know I want to get in on this party early. Yaaaay, more stuff to read AFTER Summer. :D I can't wait to see where we go!
Author's Response: WELCOME!! I'm so happy you've joined :D I understand the hesitancy. Creaturefics can be quite strange. But when it comes to Tom...he's not THAT different from a human so, there won't be anything popping up and frightening you away from this story when it comes to him, lol. I really like what you just said..."I like where it's going because I have no idea where it's going" <--- That right there is just what I want; at least for now. Gotta keep you on your toes ;D And I am sooo surprised by the amount of reviews already! And sooo happy about it! Not as happy as I am about you joining this party though ;) We shall go many wonderful and magical places! Let's do thisss!!