Date: 08/01/11 11:02 am Title: Just Like a Dream
-squeeeeeez- Yay for hugs! -tossing windex in trash. I'm glad it made you happy :D
Author's Response: *wipes brow* So long, Windex!! Won't be missin' you!! xD
Date: 08/01/11 02:46 am Title: Just Like a Dream
-brings out the Windex- YOU BETTER KEEP THAT PROMISE!
And of course I love this story. I mean how can I not like this story? I mean it's just awesome :D!
Yeah, I feel bad for all the shit she gets. I mean okay so not her best voice but still :x But friday still sucks xD
Author's Response: ....Gonna hug you even though you're holding the dreaded windex....*hugggggs* I had to do that because, well, I just feel so much happy over the fact that you said this is awesome and that you love it. :) And you know I'll keep that promise!! I promise! Lol. And yes, RB just got caught in an unfortunate situation :(
Date: 08/01/11 12:20 am Title: Discoveries
I can't... I can't even. LOVE. Bill is gon' get answerrrss (and laid, hopefully) AND MORE TOCUH ORGASMS COZ THOSE BE HAWT YO. AND DUDE. i loved this. I am like. Dying. I might like it more that Work out.... No. Nevermind. I like it different. Like. Like. Different categories of awesome. Both totally awesome though, you know?
AND TOM IS BILLS, LIKE MY POCKET IS YOURS. YAAAAAAAAY
Author's Response: Touch orgasms are the shit, yo. Errybody be talkin' about 'em!! I LOVE YOU. Different kinds of like are essential in life. And baby, I'm just soooo happy you're liking this. Even if it is more than Work Out!!! For real! I'm just happy to have you here, loving on my writing and on me! YOU ARE AQESOME!! And awwww. YES! That comparison is perrrrfect, darling. I hope you like the next chapter and that you're pleased with what gets answered!! THANK YOUUUUU!!! *loves*
Date: 07/31/11 09:02 pm Title: Discoveries
Damn... I think the same thing would happen to me if I held Tom's hand.
LOL
I can't wait for more. I'm excited to find out what Tom has to say.
Author's Response: Girl, I think if I held Tom's hand, I'd pass out on the damn floor lol. I'm so glad you're excited for more! And have I mentioned how thankful I am that you make me such pretty things? If not; THANK YOU!! *huggles*
Date: 07/31/11 06:10 pm Title: Just Like a Dream
Fucking amazing !!!! I love it
Author's Response: For real?? Ahhh thank you SO much! That makes me so happy that you love it :D I hope you feel the same way about the next chapter!! :)
Date: 07/31/11 05:18 pm Title: Discoveries
Bill's mom is cool lol. I love her nonchalant type character =) I have no clue what will happen next & i'm needing to know xD Anything could happen n this crazy world they r living n.
Author's Response: I'm glad you like her :) She's fun for me to write. And you are very right! Just about anything could happen...but I think they will be things you'll enjoy ;) I I really hope you like the next chapter and thank you so much for reading!!! XD
Date: 07/31/11 02:20 pm Title: Just Like a Dream
Of course I forgive you. If I didn't you migh hold out updates on us, and I wouldn't want that. Lol just kidding. I'm sure you wouldn't do that. Oh, did I ever mention, I'm really diggng the green-eyes Tomnus (I don't know why I like to call him Tomnus sometimes, but I do)Very Smexy, Kind of makes me picture him as Harry Potter and Draco Malfoy's love child.
Author's Response: Tomnus is quite a sexy name!! And thank you for forgiving me :) The next update might not be until Friday, though...I'm working 45 hrs this week AND moving into a new apartment. But it'll be a good one and I won't make you wait that long, again. Promise! Super glad you're liking Tomnus with green eyes. I like picturing it, myself *sighs* Harry and Draco are a fun pairing, hehe.
Date: 07/31/11 01:16 pm Title: Discoveries
Fucking Friday! Thanks for another lovely update!
Author's Response: Damn that song!! Thank YOU for reading!! :D
Date: 07/31/11 11:22 am Title: Discoveries
i love this so much, can't wait to read more
Author's Response: Ahhh I am so thrilled that you love it. Thank you SO much for reading! I really hope you like the next chapter ;D Can't wait to talk to you some more!
Date: 07/31/11 06:42 am Title: Discoveries
Hey sweetheart,
I've had some stuff to deal with all week, but I've read all three chapters and I’m hooked so bad lol
I like how this Bill sort of makes me think of an older and wiser Bill from workout. At the same time, this Bill is different but just as impulsive and adorable. I can perfectly understand that it just isn't in his nature to not open forbidden doors. What's the point with a door anyway if it's not to open it? On the other hand, it is also a test. Can he resist temptation as such, and no, he can't ;)
So far, he's innocent when everything happens in his sleep.
Tom... *pants* omg what's not to like? He's such a turn on I can hardly wait for Bill to fall asleep so I can read something about him and his incredible emerald eyes. I think I need to manip a picture of him with those green eyes!
The way someone's scent seduces a person and that pure touch makes electricity and good feelings occur always speaks to me. I love what ever is going to happen even if it's bad before it can get better.
It's like Tom's has always been there and that time has been standing still until Bill moved in. Apparently time has been filled with what went on in Tom's life, the strange codes of the tree, ownership and so forth. But still it's like the clock has begun working now and time is beginning to function. I don’t know. Just thoughts of mine before I have more information *g*
Also, the strong colours of the beach should be beautiful but I react towards it like one should with colourful toads from South America. They're poisonous and shouldn't be touched at all to prevent you from becoming ill or die. I'm nervous about the beach because it has those warning signs or alluring to make you plunge right into temptation. Tom is warning Bill, but his resistance is wavering. So it's like Garden of Eden in Paradise but at this point I'm not sure who is Adam and who is Eve ;)
*g*
There. My review for the story so far
Great job, K. Really terrific.
*hugs*
Maria
ps. Thank god I don't know that song nor will I look it up :D
Author's Response: Maria, I'm so happy that you found the time to read my new and growing story :D And I hope that the stuff you had to deal with wasn't too bad...and that it's all resolved now :D And yaaaay! You're hooked! That delights me because I love having you as a reader, and getting to talk with you. As always, your thoughts and insights are so lovely to read. Especially the part about someone's scent and touch. You've no idea how much that affects me when I first start to like someone. The smiles it induces and the little shocks of electricity it sends :D And your thoughts about the tree are SO interesting. I love that theory. Yes! The beach is beautiful but potently dangerous; just like the toads. Tom will protect Bill though, even when things become dangerous and acrimonious for them. It's going to get hard, but they'll have each other :D Haha and seriously, I'm not sure which one of them is Adam and who is Eve yet, either ;) But stay tuned, and we shall delve into it!! I LOVED THIS REVIEW. Thank you so much for taking the time to read and leave me this fantastic thing. Thank you so much, Maria. *hugggs* And definitely don't look up that song haha. Your ears and brain will thank you for it, immensely. ;) I hope you enjoy the next chapter!!
Date: 07/31/11 04:53 am Title: Discoveries
ew RB!! i dont like her, poor girl tho the song and the music was totally the company's idea LOL
omg Im so curious now CLIFFHANGER YO! -hugs and loves on u-
Author's Response: She doesn't have that bad of a voice but...THAT SONG...it sucks that she got roped into doing it. Seriously though, that song kills me lol. Totally left you on a cliff. But don't worry! You won't be there for too long and I left some comfy pillows and snacks for you, while you're waiting :D Thank you for reading!!! *hugs and love*
Date: 07/31/11 04:19 am Title: Discoveries
that was all just too cute. the electric spark touch thing was awesome XD Bill belongs to Toooomm :O I need to see what happens next! *gets bag of gummy bears and sits and waits for the next update*
Author's Response: *squeals* You thought it was cute? YAY! Bill so belongs to Tom. I can't wait for you to find out more about it. I won't leave you hanging in that mystery. The next chapter shall be quite worth it, I promise! *looks at bag of gummy bears* I think you may have found the way straight to my heart...gummy bears...hehe. Thank you so much for reading, sweetness :D
Date: 07/31/11 03:05 am Title: Discoveries
Review..I believe this is 3? Haha. Let's hope I got that right!
So, it's 3 AM and I positively CAN'T SLEEP. So I was like "Okay, YouTube. You are officially boring me. Let's go check THF." And then I started reading this and it just gets better and better! I swear! Sometimes since I never criticize I feel like you maybe think I'm lying or sugar coating it..BUT I'M TOTALLY NOT. THIS IS SOOO MY FAVORITE CHAPTER SO FAR.
OHMYGOD. Rebecca Black! Yuck. LOL. No offense to the chick but I really don't enjoy her. HAHA.
And...dundunDUN. So, Bill knows he belongs to Tom. DUN DUN DUNNN.
Lol. To me this review just seemed kinda loopy. Sorry, it's late [as I said before] so I'm kinda like..well loopy. xD
Love ya! *huggles.*
Author's Response: Yep! 3! YAY FOR 3! Listen, I happen to love late night rambles and so I'm already excited about this review, lol. And just...you...That's exactly how I feel when I tell you how much you make me smile and how happy your reviews make me. I feel like you might think I'm just saying it but I'M REALLY NOT!! You really do make me like that. :D I'm so glad that this is your favorite chapter so far because that means that it's getting better ;D And yeah...Rebecca Black...her and I don't mesh very well lol. Bill belongs to Tom!! DUN DUN DUUUUUUUN. Gotta love dramatic sound effects :D This review was actually quite coherent...and yet, wonderfully loopy at the same time! I LOVED it!! And I love you! Feel free to leave me a loopy review whenever you want :D *squeezes*
Date: 07/31/11 02:59 am Title: Just Like a Dream
Don't know why but, I love the "Rebeca Black" part =))
Author's Response: Haha I'm SO glad that you did. And I'm even more glad that you're reading. Thank you sooo much!! :D
Date: 07/31/11 02:58 am Title: Discoveries
I'm trying very hard not to think of that song but as I write this it's playing a little in my head. If I sing that song in my sleep all night I will be so pissed at you. haha. I loved the banter with Bill and his mom about the door. I hope Tom didn't hear the comment about him falling in the shower, haha. So embarrassing. I loved the little jolt he felt, and I somehow have the feeling Bill will show Tom exactly what an orgasm is. haha. Nice chapter. I can't wait for the next one now that you've talked it up.
Author's Response: ....Look, I'm just really sorry that I put that atrocity into your head...Please tell me you were able to sleep without it in your head? I truly hope so!! haha. I'm glad you loved that banter. I'm having a really fun time writing Bill's mom. She's just coming out very strange, and I'm digging it. Lol I feel like Tom has heard a lot of embarrassing things that Bill has said...but hopefully he'll be respectful enough to not throw them back in his face...we shall see! Jolts! Yay! And that feeling you're getting...is definitely spot on, hehe. I shall leave it at that. I'm glad you liked the chapter and I'll be sure to deliver on my words, with the next one! I promise :D Sorry again about the song....but thank you for reading!!
Date: 07/31/11 02:49 am Title: Discoveries
"Did you fall in the shower again?" holy shit. Hilariousness. I love dear!! omg, I love this story so and I will never stop telling yeww!!
Author's Response: NEVER STOP TELLING MEEEE!! Seriously, your reviews are the shit. They make me smile and laugh; always. I'm so glad that part made you laugh haha. Bill's mom is pretty silly. I like writing her. I'm soooo happy that you love this story! Can't wait for you to read the next chapter. THANK YOU! :D
Date: 07/31/11 12:55 am Title: Discoveries
also i sent u a twitter request :D
Author's Response: I believe I accepted you!! Are you the twitter that has two girls on it? I hope so..if not, I just added a random person...lol. Talk to me on there!! I followed back, too. So I really hope that was you! haha. xD
Date: 07/31/11 12:24 am Title: Discoveries
i love this story!!!! ur writing is just sparking ideas in my head constently!!! i swear its like ur stories and you are my new found inspireation ive been needing for along time!!! thank you so much!!
Author's Response: THANK YOU, LOVE!! I don't think you could have picked a nicer thing to say about my stories and writing. I absolutely ADORE that they can be of inspiration to you. I'll keep writing so that you can keep being inspired :D And thank YOU for reading, reviewing, and just being so damn sweet. :D
Date: 07/30/11 11:49 pm Title: Discoveries
Yay! They belong together! What a great way to end the chapter!
Tom should have known from the start that telling Bill something was forbidden would just make him try all the harder to discover it. That's teenage boys for you. (OK, so that's most people, really, but teenagers are worse.)
But, you had no right to strip away poor Bill's innocence and naivete like that -- how could you do that to him with that Friday song? He was so sweet and trusting, just sitting there watching YouTube like a little innocent lamb. You should have warned for that! Have you no mercy? Have you no soul? Poor Bill and Tom will be traumatized forever. (I was.) LOL
And finally, I loved seeing where Bill gets his personality quirks from. Like I always tell my family: the crazy apple doesn't fall far from the crazy tree. But they never get the hint either, kind of like Bill's mom. She's awesome!
Keep up the incredible work! ^__^
Author's Response: They do! They belooooong! I'm glad you liked the ending, because I know it was a bit of a cliffie. And honestly, telling someone NOT to do something, only exponentially increases their chances of doing it. And agreed; especially teenage boys. Teenagers are so curious and fearless. Haha...I DO feel quite terrible about inflicting Rebecca Black onto the poor, young, and Pokemon wearing Bill. But I feel like everyone needs to see that video at least once...so they know what NOT to do when singing a song and making a video, lol. I too, was traumatized. I promise I'll make it up to them (and you) by making the next chapter full of special moments between them :D Haha yes, I can't even tell you how much I'm like my mom. And she's one of a kind. Or so I thought...lol. Bill definitely gets his little quirks from his family. I'm glad that you like Bill's mom! She's super fun to write. I shall keep it up...and well...*blushes* thanks for calling it 'incredible'. I hope you like the next chapter and THANK YOU!!
Date: 07/30/11 11:45 pm Title: Discoveries
*tackles back* Oh my god!! *wiggles around* Amazing! I love how blunt Bill was right at he beginning, and how his mom just, well I'm not sure really. Was she rolling with it, or was she just ignoring what Bill was saying?
My goodness, that is a fucking horrible song. I hadn't listened to it til today. He voice itself isn't so terrible, but that song was ust...wow. Bad.
Bill...belongs...to Tom.? What the frick is up with that shiz? MO-ey you have some 'splainin to dooo *shakes finger like Rickey Ricardo*
Though must say, I am incredibly proud of Bill for not opeing the forbidden door. Though why he would think it might be in the oven I still don't get. Tom said he was watching him in his room. Remeber? He freaked out cuz hes been naked in there.
This was a great chapter. I am quite excited to see Tom's Hub. Keep up the wonderful work! *snuggles*
Author's Response: *squeezes you tight* THANK YOU!! I think that his mom was doing a mixture of rolling with it AND ignoring what he was saying. I get the feeling that this Bill...is often up to various schemes and shenanigans. Plus, she was just really into knitting that toilet seat cover. I'M REALLY SORRY that your ears had to be accosted by that, because of me. :( Forgive me? *hugs you* It really does make the brain hurt. He belongs! *wahhhh (this was supposed to be a Lucy noise)* haha. I shall explain, I promise!! I'm surprised he didn't open it, either. If it were me, I'd just waltz right in like I owned the damn place. And then probably get shot by poisonous darts or something... And Bill looked in the oven because Bill is weird, and he was getting desperate to find the door. It was entirely nonsensical but he's all loopy in the head because of creature Tom. hehe. I'm SO happy that you liked the chapter and am excited for you to read the next, love. THANK YOU!! *huggles*