Date: 08/10/11 01:44 am Title: Snooblet Scrutiny
Okee. Hi~ XD
Wellll I'm from Copenhagen(capital of)Denmark. You know that rainy little thing above Germany where everyone is naked XDDD (well 75% of the population is anyway, NOT me) Hmmnn....Jeg elsker dig!!! XDDD My language
Author's Response: Awww a lot of my ancestors came from Denmark!! We must be kindred spirits ;) Are people really naked there, a lot?? Sounds magical....*daydreams* Haha even if you were a nudist I'd still like you. Btw, I totally google translated that. I LOVE YOU, TOO!! Your English is really really good. Just so you know. :D I am impressed!!
Date: 08/09/11 10:22 pm Title: Snooblet Scrutiny
OHHH I CANNOT WAIT FOR MORE! this is soo great (of course it is, you write it!) :) i really really like it and i hate that i took so long reading it but it's done and i'm happy :D however now i want chocolate chip pancakes D: the DOOR, i'm excited xD love this!
Author's Response: I seriously can't wait to post the next chapter for you! I'm just so happy that you're enjoying it. And girrrrl, you're toooo sweet. And don't worry about when you read it. You can take as much time as you need! I'm just happy that you got the chance to and that you left this sweet review for me. :D Dude, I want those pancakes too haha. YES the door!!! Thank you for loving this!!! :D
Date: 08/09/11 02:24 am Title: Just Like a Dream
Yess yes yes, of course! I just read that. And loved it. I mean, I love everything you write but especially that. Coz it's awesome. POCKETS FTW xD Making me happy is simple, but YOU. You just take it. To a whole. Nuthuh'. Levuwl. AND THE MAKING OUT WAS FUCKTASTIC. I JIZZED MULTIPLE TIMES. I JERKED MY DICK SO HARD THAT I'M PRETTY SURE IT'S ALL JUST ONE BIG SCAB NOW. Kiss it better? I AM GLAD I MAKE YOU SMILE. And yes, I knew that but here's something that might be a shocker... I LOVE YOU, TOO. IN FACT, I THINK I LOVE YOU MORE. Thank you for writing things I can love. Seriously. That makes me want to let you fling yourself onto me and never let go. Let us have a mutual never-let-go relationship, kay? I have amazing words. They're just so amazing, that they are unspoken. WELCOME. ILOVEYOUTOOKBYE.
Author's Response: I TRULY ENJOY taking your happiness to a whole new level :D And I also like INTERJECTING unnecessary all caps when I can. It just FEELS SO RIGHT. You make me really happy, tooooooo!!! I'm really glad you liked the making out but here's the thing...I might just wait until your dick heals before I kiss it, k? But I will provide the soothing ointments and magical healing powers until then ;) I'm just so thrilled that you love the things that I write!! I really am. I know I say it all of the time but I really do mean that. I AM TOTALLY DOWN FOR THAT KIND OF RELATIONSHIP. Unspoken words are so amazingly silent and profound. *nods* LOVEYOU.
Date: 08/09/11 02:20 am Title: Just Like a Dream
IT SO IS. GONNA MAKE ME JIZZ MYSELF SO FAST. THAT'S HOW HOT IT'S GON' BEEEE~ Oh, Is that a promise? ;) Saying eh and not being Canadian does not make you an imposter. It would, cept you've never had maple candy so if you're trying to be an imposter you fail. I love you, too! And be honest, have my reviews been lacking lately? I FEEL AS IF THEY HAVE.
Author's Response: I just really need to try some maple candy. Like NAO. It sounds so so good. I want it. Do you think they sell it around these parts? I shall search!! Your reviews totally haven't been lacking. They are just suited to a different genre!! With Work Out it was all about the "LOL"s and this story has a little more serious things in it. And your reviews have just slightly adjusted because of that, I think. But...I LOVE THEM JUST AS MUCH. As I love youuuuu!!! You are splendid, my love. :D
Date: 08/09/11 01:25 am Title: Snooblet Scrutiny
Omg, to reiterate: SO CUTE. Loving this, so hard. :)
Author's Response: I love reiteration! I am so flattered and happy right now, by the way. I'm truly pleased that you're reading and enjoying this! Thank you so much and I really hope you like the next chapter. :D
Date: 08/09/11 12:35 am Title: Snooblet Scrutiny
I can imagine how penetrating stares could be awkward. When Gustav was staring at him, I wanted to take Bill into my bosom to shield him. Question: Is Gustav's snooblet voice squeaky? Can I imagine him sounding squeaky, please? It contrasts hysterically with the image of him being serious.
Gah what the heck is so dangerous about Tom's world? : / Waaahhh ich will jetzt wissen... (btw did you know I whine and cuss entirely in german? I know enough words to do so. Thanks ,Tokio Hotel! :D It lets me cuss in front of other people without them ever knowing!
You know how adorable you are? It's rubbing off on this story, in a big way. I adore Gustav and Bill interacting. XD And I'm such a nerd; when you wrote about Tom's abdomen contracting, I mentally listed all the muscles that do so.
So, during the touchy feely scene, I was flailing. Dusky nipples! Use 'dusky nipples!' I love that something as innocent as hand holding is so awesome for them. Hands are wonderful things.
....And that might have been the most awkward ending to a chapter, ever. Mmm, good ol morning wood. Wonderful chapter! I loved how descriptive you were, and how fresh your vocabulary and sentence structure were. I'm so proud of you! And that you wrote this during/after the madness of moving, I am all the more impressed! You are amazing! *latches on tight* I'm on you like purple polish on Bill's nails.
Author's Response: Penetrating stares are included in the footnote of the definition of awkward, I think. Haha...his voice...I actually thought about making it squeaky...but then I chickened out and just didn't describe it. But!!! There is still a chance to redeem this. You should probably take me into your bosom as well because um...*KOALA LATCH* I did NOT know that you whiny cuss in German! I think you just became even more amazing to me, if possible. Sneaky cussing is always useful. YOU SHALL FIND OUT THOUGH, DEER. About the dangerous things, I mean. Hahah I love that you know parts of the body. You are incredible, bumbles. Truly! And d'awww. I'm rubbing off on this story? It's adorable? *latches again* Hands are beautiful and powerful parts of the body :D And gosh darn it all! I forgot to use "DUSKY NIPPLES* I am ashamed. I shall make it up to you, though! There WILL be dusky nipples. Hahha. Awkward ending for Bill instead of a happy ending. Poooor little guy. Gotta love that morning wood. I'm so happy you loved the chapter. Having you say that my writing, sentence structure, and vocab were good...means the world to me. Because I just wanna impress you, k? I'm feeling your color of purple :D THANK YOU!!
Date: 08/08/11 11:47 pm Title: Snooblet Scrutiny
"Or maybe! I could ride around in someone's pocket for a while. It would certainly save on gas money!” THAT is my most favourite line ever. That entire paragraph about pockets kind of just made me happy, really. And with Snooblet!Gustav being all macho and BILL IS GON GO THRU DAT DOOR. WHUUT? YUSSSSSSSSS.
So, uhm, That makeout scene was hot. So hot. Legit. You're such a good writer, it's insane. BUT I LOVE IT. AND AND AND I LOVE YOU. AND THIS. AND JUST. SO MUCH LOVE. AND LUST. LOTS OF THAT TOO. LOVE. AND UHM. JUST. UHM. JUST. GAAH. *is at a loss for words*
Author's Response: Well, that IS a perk of me riding around in YOUR pocket. So I figured that Bill should consider it as well. haha. I LOVE POCKETS. And I love making you happy. HE'S GUNNA GO FRU DAT DOOR. I'm just really glad you liked the making out. I'd be so disappointed if I let you down, with that. OH HOW YOU MAKE ME SMILE. You already know this but...I LOVE YOU. Thank you for loving my writing. Seriously. That makes me want to fling myself onto you and never let gooooo! I love your words. Even when you're at a loss for them. THANKYOU! ILOVEYOUKBYE.
Date: 08/08/11 06:34 pm Title: Snooblet Scrutiny
Gustav is just super adorable!!! I love when he gets all happy with the shade of bills nailpolish :3
Author's Response: Thank you sooo much! He's a secret softy on the inside, hehe. I'm glad you like him because there will be more of him soon! Thank you so much for reading :D
Date: 08/08/11 06:28 pm Title: Snooblet Scrutiny
Snooblet Gustav has stolen my heart. I now belong to him. I'll send you the address where he can come collect me. But seriously, he's such a cute little addition to the story. I'm excited to see what kind of role you come up with for him.
I also never thought I'd say I have something in common with Bill, but I, too, cannot stand nervous silences and will babble uncontrollably. I'm told it's an annoying habit but can be quite hilarious for listeners. The nipples part was funny, as was Bill's mother. To mothers there is no such thing as TMI, but I bet her pancakes rock.
And now I'm worried for Bill. He's gonna go through that door, but what is going to happen to him? I'm very nervous for him, so I'll just sit here and babble until your next update.
Author's Response: Ohhhh he loves you so. He fluttered next to my ear and told me! And well, I love that you love him. *grins* I'm really excited to write more about him, too! HAHA. I can't stand uncomfortable silences either...and so I ramble, but I'm a terrible rambler! So I just trip over my words and make things even MORE awkward. So help me...*shakes head* I'm glad you liked the nipples and Bill's mother, haha. Mothers really don't care about things that mortify their children. I know that my mother actually enjoys mortifying me, lol. And her pancakes definitely rock. I'm sure of it. Don't be nervous, k? I promise that even if he goes flying through that door without a care...he will be protected! I won't let anything hurt him ;) Thank you so much for reading! *babbles with you*
Date: 08/08/11 06:05 pm Title: Snooblet Scrutiny
OMG. I like..-scratches out- FUCKING love this chapter. (as all the rest, but i just dont otherwise know how to tell you) Being foreign and all :/ WELLL...I LOVE YOU!~~ Bye
Author's Response: WHAAAAT? For real? *tackles you* Thank you sooo much for loving this chapter!! I LOVE YOU, TOO! You're foreign?? Where are you from, love? *is curious* I'm soooo happy that you're reading my story. K? K! K bye....
Date: 08/08/11 04:09 pm Title: Just Like a Dream
You're already pocket-sized, and that's enough for me :) AND YES LET ME LICK YOUR FACE. YOU just made my daaaaaaay :D SLOWLY THINGS ARE BEING REVEALED, EH? IT'S LIKE A STRIP TEASE FOR THE WORLD OF LITERATURE. Dude, I'm about to read the next chapter. Uber excited for it :) I WILL KNOW EVERYTHING, EH? YES. (I feel Canadian today, so sue me) Totally vacay, play with Tom's ears, stuff like that. YES, CREEPY FOREIGN AMAZING STARERS WITH AWESOME AWESOMENESS. I love you too, and and and I'm happy you're ALIVE. so there. Jizz is amazing. Makes the fucking world go 'round.
Author's Response: IT'S LIKE THE SEXIEST STRIP TEASE OF LITERATURE, EVER. You can lick my face, all you want ;) Really!!! I'll like it, I promise. I say "Eh?" alllll of the time. But I am not Canadian. Does that make me an impostor?? Can you still love me anyway? I am about to go and read your review on the next chapter! AND I'M SO EXCITED TO READ IT. Jizz is the fuel of life. And I'm soooo happy that you are in my alive LIFE. For realz, yo. I love you. I shall talk to you again on your other review!!! k bye!
Date: 08/08/11 04:03 pm Title: Snooblet Scrutiny
bill is so weird lol love him.. darling beautiful chapter you never disappoint. *hugs* love
Author's Response: I'm just so happy that you love Bill, haha. Even with his weirdness. Thank you so much for saying that about this chapter. You make me smile :D *squeezes you*
Date: 08/08/11 03:18 pm Title: Snooblet Scrutiny
NIPPLES AND COCKBLOCKING.
LOL, I can't stop laughing.
AND YAWNING.
We're both just very lazy. Haha. :)
Late nights out always get to me, then I sleep in and it doesn't seem to help a bit!!
Well, I liked this chapter. :D
I like the way they act around each other. ;D
Okay, so I'm super tired so I'm just gonna cut this review short. I really need to stay home and get some much needed sleep before school! Kbye! *hugs*
Author's Response: Ohhhhh my gosh!! Your all caps intro into this review made me LAUGH!!! Hahaha. Thank you for that. And dude...I am yawning up a storm right now. Ughhh. Let's just curl up and sleep. I feel like I could sleep an entire day and still be tired, lol. I'm really glad that you liked this chapter!! And I don't blame you for the need to sleep. Sleep is most important! Thank you so much for taking the time to read and review this, though. You are so sweet. K bye bye! *huuuuugs*
Date: 08/08/11 10:33 am Title: Snooblet Scrutiny
brilliant as always darling dearest!
Author's Response: You've made me smile, as always! Thank you :D Annnd I just said on twitter that I'm going to bed. And I'm gonna, now! Good night, again! haha. *big spoons you*
Date: 08/08/11 08:56 am Title: Snooblet Scrutiny
OMG! I wrote this whole reply and then I clicked submit and my phone said: you lost connection blablabla... And now it's gone and I have to write it all over again ><
But at least I am on my laptop now, so no more weird words (I re-read my first reply and was mortified. I wrote something like waunters instead of waiting or something =O Stupid phone...) OK. Back to replying the story.
First thing I wanted to say is that the relationship between Tom and Bill seems to be going very smooth and fast and stuff. And maybe that is because Bill is a horny little bastard and is next to that also 'meant for' Tom, well, I guess that is the reason. But Bill is human now, isn't he? I feel like he is some 11 year old with his first crush, just diving into it because he has never been hurt before. Same time though he is talking about sex, just seems a bit odd to me.
Beside that little bit of criticism, I totally enjoyed reading this chapter. Gustav is some weird but hilarious being xD And I wanna punch Simone for being a cockblock *glaring*.
Also, Bill should not even be thinking about going through that door unless he is on some sort of suicide mission! Doesn't he listen to Tom at all? Ugh. Okay, I think that is enough rambling from me here =P Goodluck with the next chapter, i can't wait! ;) xxx
Author's Response: First of all, I SOOOO appreciate the fact that you took the time to write this all out, again! You are pretty much just entirely awesome. :D Hahaha. My phone ALWAYS changes my words. SO rude! Don't be mortified though! I didn't judge you for a single second. I was just really happy that you read and reviewed, I swear. It is moving a little fast, but that's only because of the "belonging" thing. And also the fact that all of the feelings in Tom's world are enhanced. It's like...they can't keep away from each other, you know? But, I'm not going to rush the sex thing, I promise :D I appreciate your criticism, actually! Thank you for being honest. I'm really glad that you enjoyed this chapter! And how dare Simone. *glares with you* Seriously though, Bill needs to heed Tom's warnings and not go diving into things he doesn't know much about. *shakes head* I enjoy your rambling! Pretty sure I rambled, too. haha. Thank you so much and I really hope you enjoy the next chapter!! xD
Date: 08/08/11 04:50 am Title: Snooblet Scrutiny
Yay for updates! This chapter was super cute (as expected). I really liked how Gustav tried to be all tough but Bill made him smile. Also Bill's mom waking him was quite funny as well :) I hope your new apartment is awesome-sauce....I'm kinda in the market for one myself seeing as I'll be 20 in December and at some point it's just awkward to live at home haha
Author's Response: Yay for awesome reviews! I'm really happy that you enjoyed the chapter and you thought it was cute :D And Bill was the one to crack Gustav...who would have thought? hehe. Awkward boner moments are always fun to write about, lol. I'm glad it made you laugh! And thank you!! I really love my new apt. I've lived with roommates for the past 3 years so it's sooo nice to have a place to myself. I hope you find one that is perfect for you! And I feel ya on the awkward. Whenever I visit my parents for an extended period of time I'm like "....K bye..." haha. Thank you for reading!
Date: 08/08/11 04:35 am Title: Snooblet Scrutiny
wow this was so good!!! Can't wait for your next chapter :D And congratz on moving into your new apartment!
Author's Response: Thank you SO much! I'm really happy that you enjoyed it. I hope you like the next chapter :D I'm excited to post it! Thank you so much for the congrats!! You're so sweet. I love it here xD
Date: 08/08/11 01:33 am Title: Snooblet Scrutiny
*tackles*
Gusti is one bitchy ass little fairy snooblet.
Congrats on the move!! I hope everything went really well. No lost boxes or anything right? Dogs took to the place Ok?
Wow, kissing and hand holding, simultaneously...intense. But yes, good thing Sim woke him up when she did. I would hate to have to wash that up. In fact if I were a mom I would make them wash things that had been done to themselves. I get that night time ejacs arent their fault persay...but anyother time, jump in the shower and do it in there.
Of course he has to go after the pancakes! First of all, well , they are chocolate chip pancakes, who could pass? Secondly, I'm sure hes gonna need all the energy he can get for travelling the dangerous place safely.
Wonderful work. *wiggles in seat* I can't wait for more!
Author's Response: *falls back and curls around* GUSTAV IS A HARD ASS. The move went pretty well! But...I am SO glad that it's over. It's just too hot for such things. But no casualties or lost objects, occurred! Totally simultaneously intense. I mean...if she hadn't of woken him up...things would have been messy for sure. Hahah nighttime emissions aren't their fault but if I were a mom, I'd totally make them wash their own sheets too. Just because well, it would be nasty you know? I'm just glad that Simone didn't have to worry about that. Chocolate chip pancakes give one a resilience that no other kind of breakfast food can conjure. I mean really, he's eating them and gaining power by doing it. He's gonna need every little chocolaty morsel of energy he can garner, to go through that door! Eeeek. *wiggles with you* Thank you SO much. I can't wait for you to read the next!
Date: 08/08/11 12:17 am Title: Snooblet Scrutiny
I love Gustav! XD he's so cute here, instead of his usual calm, stoic attitude we love portraying xD and mm choco chip pancakes
Author's Response: Yay!! I am so pleased that you love Gustav. AND I realllly want choco pancakes, now. Can we make some? Yeah? *hands you the mix* Let's do this! Thank you sooo much for reading and making me smile! :D
Date: 08/07/11 11:54 pm Title: Snooblet Scrutiny
I love this story hope u up date soon .... It has a great story line, I'm going to be wondering about what is going to happen to bill once he goes through the door. And toms innocenes about cussing and such is too cute.
Author's Response: Hi!! *waves* Thank you so much for loving this story! I am so happy that you're reading it. I hope all of your questions get answered in the next chapter :D I'm so glad you're excited about it and that you think Tom's innocence is cute ;) Thank you so much!