Date: 08/28/11 08:04 pm Title: Revelations
Beautiful picture and cool chapter. Loved it *sits and waits for more*...*checks for secret door again*...*goes back to computer* :P LOL
Author's Response: I'm so glad you enjoyed the picture and chapter!! Thank you so much :D *sneaks behind you to check for the door, as well* Well, maybe it'll appear sometime...*secretly wishes* Hmm. *also goes back to computer* Haha. :D Thank you for reading!! Keep looking for that door!
Date: 08/28/11 05:21 pm Title: Spellbound
I can't believe I've reached the last posted chapter. *allows tears to fall freely down face* This story is like a movie for me complete with all the colours of the rainbow. You can write a romantic sex scene like no other and I adore how they react to each other. I can't get enough of this story and especially your writing. I shall be (im)patiently waiting and chomping at the bit for the next one. :)
Author's Response: Ahhh but I have just posted the new one!! So you do not have to wait! *wipes your tears away* I am so happy that you're enjoying this story, truly. I am pleased that you've decided to take this journey with me :D I'm really glad that you can picture the things that I write with this story. I try really hard to be as descriptive as possible :D Thank you sooo very much and I can't wait to hear what you thought of the next one!
Date: 08/28/11 05:05 pm Title: Anticipation
What is 'not' to love about Bill's mother? I think she's wonderful, albeit scatterbrained. :) LillithValo is absolutely brilliant I have to say. Her manips are beautiful! So now they're in the same realm. I wonder what's going to happen next? Is Bill so lovestruck that he will do something to put them in danger? Georg does look like a playa and he suddenly appears much more attractive somehow. Hmmmm! On to the next chapter. :)
Author's Response: Eeeee I'm so glad you love her! She is such a sill character and I really enjoy writing about her. Isn't Lillith the best? I'm so lucky to have her. Georg just works very well as a playa, doesn't he? Hehe. He was meant to be that way! I really hope you liked the next chapter! I shall go look and see what you said, now! By the way, you are so amazing for reading and reviewing on each chapter. Thank you so much for that!!! You are just....*squeezes you tight*
Date: 08/28/11 04:44 pm Title: Snooblet Scrutiny
I have to tell you that I have to have Bill all to myself. He is just the best characterization of Bill I've ever read. You just keep getting better and funnier with each chapter. Now I must go back and read some more of this chapter. :) Bill is random and Tom is laid back and Gustav is a Snooblet with common sense. Who'da thunk it? This was another amazing chapter. *hugs you back really tight* This journey is becoming more and more of a joy. This chapter had me laughing out loud at Bill and his matter of fact mother. I'm so happy I can just click next and not have to wait to see what happens next. See you on the flip side. :)
Author's Response: You can borrow him whenever you'd like! He just has to be back for the new chapters, and such :D You flatter me so! Like literally, I'm smiling so big right now! I'm really happy you loved the chapter. I hope you continue to enjoy the story! I actually just posted the next chapter and I can't wait to see what you think about it :D Thank you so much for reading and enjoying!
Date: 08/28/11 04:29 pm Title: Strange Magic
I have to tell you that I absolutely love how you characterize Bill in your stories. He is such a rarity and so damn interesting. And I want a Snooblet of my own. Now back to the chapter. OMG I really want a purple Gustav Snooblet now. My favourite colour and I Gustav makes such a cute Snooblet. I love how Bill is just so straightforward. I'm like that too, my mouth does a lot more talking for me than my brain does. It can get me in trouble sometimes. :) I love this story and you are going to get sick of hearing that so maybe I'll have to learn how to say it in a different language for each chapter...hmmmmm! Gonna have to think on that. On to the next chapter. :)
Author's Response: Ahhh thank you so much! I love to play around with the character of Bill. I feel like just about anything can be done with him. I'm so glad that you love how I write him I want a snooblet, too!! Oh goodness, do I want one. Purple is MY favorite color, too!!! We both need purple snooblets. For sure. And, my mouth is the same way. I have to filter myself quite often, lol. I am not getting sick of hearing you say that at ALL! It makes me smile so big. Thank you sooooo much! On to your next review!
Date: 08/28/11 04:09 pm Title: Discoveries
Do you realize that this is an adult fairy tale? Complete with forbidden fruit, hidden doors and who knows what other evil and deadly things. I love this story sooooo much and your sense of humour in each chapter shines through so well. You always make me smile so big. :)
Author's Response: I'm soooo happy that you already love this story!! It is sort of an adult fairy tale, isn't it? One that I hope will keep you on your toes the whole way through! I am delighted that you can still see my sense of humor in this story :D And listen, it's just a pretty good thing that I make you smile because well...YOU make me smile just as big. Always. Thank you so much! :D
Date: 08/28/11 03:53 pm Title: Forbidden Fruit
Of course we want to go on this journey with you and it is a journey. Any story that someone writes is a journey. I know that my own stories are journey's in my mind if nowhere else. I loved this chapter especially the forbidden fruit. Bill is so obedient and I wonder how long it will take him to find the door. I love how excitable you make him. Poor Tom. I fear his future with Bill is going to be very unsettling for him. :) On to the next chapter. :)
Author's Response: Yay for coming on the journey with me! Tom is definitely going to have his hands full with Bill. I'm so glad you loved this chapter! Things will begin to unfold very soon for these two boys...I also can't wait for you to get to the chapters where there are pictures at the end! Thank you again so much for reading! You are quite lovely :D
Date: 08/28/11 03:25 pm Title: Just Like a Dream
OMG Narnia and the door in the wardrobe/closet. This is a wonderful start and Tom with emerald eyes sounds perfect. I really enjoy how oblivious Bill's parents are and how they ignore what he says. They're so laid back. They must be hippies. :) Anyway I'm intrigued by this story and I promise I will comment after each chapter. Love it and now I'm on to the next. :)
Author's Response: Oh my goodness! I'm so happy that you're reading this, truly! I smiled so big when I saw your name. I'm glad that you are intrigued and wanting to read more. This story is definitely a lot different than Work Out so I hope it can keep your interest. You are so sweet to comment after every chapter :D Thank you so much for that! But mostly, thank you for reading and just being here. :D I hope you enjoy the rest!
Date: 08/27/11 05:03 pm Title: Just Like a Dream
EXACTLY ;D AND AND AND AND if you write that shit. I will love you. So much. And hard. And hey, wassn't your birthday like, a few days ago? I AM HAPPY TO MAKE YOU HAPPPEEEEE~ But yes, our relationship is so strong, you SHOULD be jelly. Fucking biffles. LoveyoutoJupitersmoonsandback
Author's Response: My birthday is this Tuesday, actually! :D I keep forgetting that it's coming up, lol. I am totally jelly of your biffle status with the Kwins. All I have is snooblet Gustav to buzz around my head and make perverted jokes. He's SUCH a perv. iloveyoutoplutowhichisnolongeraplanetandback :D
Date: 08/26/11 12:34 am Title: Just Like a Dream
FUCK. GET DOWN, WHERE YOU BELONG! (I mean coz he's short, gosh) And dude, Georg tied down with snooblets? Like. That would make the most hilarious crack!PWP ever. I feel errythang in mah penis, gurl, specially when it involves yewwww~ ILOVEYOUTOO. I'm sweet to you, because you write sexy awesome stories with sexy awesome times and sexy awesome not-human Tom and shit. I'm glad I make you happy, though I only say what's true, so it's no big deaaalll. I AM SO LIKE. THER BEST FRUNDDDDD~ Dey be lyk "Mhmm, Dat kidd gurl be trippin, yo" And I'm like "Pshft, I'm too white to understand that shit but you're hot so Ima smile along". Our relationship is awesome. THANK YOU SO MUCH FOR WRITING AND AND AND BEING AMAZING IN GENERAL~ Iloveyoumoree
Author's Response: Haha. Right, because he's short. >_> That really WOULD be hilarious crack!PWP. Perhaps I will write it, just for youuuuu. I so appreciate your words to me, always. You really do make me happpeeeee. Hahah. You and those two have the healthiest of truest of relationships. I'm jelly. YOU ARE SO WELCOME BUT NO REALLY THANK YOU FOR READING AND BEING THE BEST. Loveyoutothemoonandback. :D
Date: 08/26/11 12:29 am Title: Just Like a Dream
FUCK, I DIDN'T EVEN REALIZE THE ENTIRETY OF MY CAPS. OOPS. WOOT. ANYPOODLE, HAIRYTOE IS THE SEXIEST NAME EVER, I THINK. NOT LYING. AND ITTY BITTY CHAMPAGNE FLUTES? FUCKING HOT. GOODPLAN. BESTPLAN.
Author's Response: Haha your all caps just came so naturally that you didn't even notice. Hairytoe is so delightfully sexy in the most hairiest of ways. I love it. I do. Hahaha. Itty bitty champagne flutes are only the hottest thing since Bill's beard! I am very pleased by your approval!
Date: 08/25/11 02:24 pm Title: Just Like a Dream
DID I NOT REVIEW THIS? Could it be possible for such a huge lapse in judgement? I am so truely sorry for not telling you all about your awesomness and amazingness and brilliantness. ONLY LOVE!
Author's Response: OKAAAAAAAY could you have made me smile ANY MORE than this?? I don't think so!! You are just far too fabulous! So much love for you and your amazingly awesome self. Thank you!!!!
Date: 08/25/11 02:15 pm Title: Just Like a Dream
DID I NOT REVIEW THIS? Could it be possible for such a huge lapse in judgement? I am so truely sorry for not telling you all about your awesomness and amazingness and brilliantness. ONLY LOVE!
Date: 08/25/11 12:19 am Title: Just Like a Dream
GURL, YO JUST WENT THUR. DAAAYUM, YOU DID IT. DATS HAWT. OHOHOHO, POCKET WEDDING? WHY, THOSE ARE THE MOST FABULOUS OF THEM ALL! AND WITH SNOOBLETS?! FUCK ME SIDEWAYS AND NAME ME HAIRYTOE, THAT IS JUST SPLENDID! WE ARE SO AMAZING
Author's Response: ALL CAPS REVIEW IS FUCKING AWESOME. I SHALL CALL YOU HAIRYTOE, PROUDLY. POCKET AND FUN-SIZED WEDDING. WE CAN BUY TINY CANDY BARS TO HAND OUT TO OUR GUESTS. SNOOBLETS WILL CARRY AROUND ITTY BITTY FLUTES OF CHAMPAGNE. IT WILL BE THE TINIEST OF GRAND EVENTS. #lolkiloveyoubye
Date: 08/25/11 12:00 am Title: Spellbound
BPGAKVdF BVINJOHRG FUCKING COCKBLOCK. NOT COOL, LOVE. NOT COOL. BUT BUT BUT BUT THIS IS JUST FANTASTIC, EVEN WITH THE COCKBLOCK. AND OHSHIT, SERIOUS STUFF HAPPENING SOON. I CAN FEEL IT IN MY PENIS. I MEAN BONES. I MEAN. UGH. Iloveyou, Why are you such a talented writer? Honestly, I just love love love your characters and shit. Really. I know I've said it a million times and more, but you just write your characters so that it's like, I'm fucking friends with them and shit. Yup. IT kind of turns me on.
Author's Response: DAMMIT GEORG. GO BACK TO THE SHIRE WITH THE HOBBITS. Okay but seriously, I'm gonna make sure that Georg is tied down by snooblets or something so that he does not interrupt the BotTom again. It's okay if you feel it in your penis, as well as your bones. I know that I do. ILOVEYOU. Why are you so sweet to me? You make me so happy with every review and you always say the most amazing things about my writing. It makes me want to write even more! You totally are friends with them, k? Tom and Bill were talking about you the other day and they were like "Guuuuuurl, Kidd is so nais." And I was like "I know dat. I know." Thank you so much for reading and leaving me another amazing review. I love you!!
Date: 08/24/11 09:56 pm Title: Spellbound
BotTom yay!!! damn georg though D: xD goddd i love this fic :') i love how bill acts most of the time and i love how the story is going and i can't wait for the next update! and yay for work out being featured!!! that's awesome and i stil believe it should stay there forever! anyway i can't wait for the next update :D
Author's Response: Dammit Georg. Interrupting what could have been a wonderful BotTom scene! But, there will be BotTom, oh yes...there will be. ;) I'll just make sure to lock Georg away somewhere when they get around to doing it, lol. Thank you soo much for reading! I'm glad that you enjoy it and are excited for more. Thank you for being so sweet about Work Out being featured! I am so happy about it. Btw, I read and commented on your story. You are a really great writer! I'm excited to see more from you :D Thank you so much again, love!
Date: 08/24/11 06:51 am Title: Spellbound
Wow!!! I am really enjoying your new story so far and am looking forward to the next chapter. - Chazza
Author's Response: That makes me so happy and smiley! I am very pleased to have you here as a reader. Thank you sooo much, and I really hope you enjoy the next chapter! :D
Date: 08/24/11 02:17 am Title: Spellbound
Amazing. That is all I can say about this chapter. I was even okay with Georg's cock block from all the BotTom glory I was in. I had little happy tears when Bill and Tom were in their own little world it was just amazing and romantic and beautiful. I absolutely love it.
Author's Response: You just put the biggest smile on my face. So, thank you for that. You didn't even mind Georg's cock block? Awww. I'm definitely going to make it up to you anyway. Because you're so sweet and you deserve some sexy/romantic BotTom loving. :D I'm happy that you liked it when they were in their own little world. I like moments like that, too. :D *happy sigh* Thank you so much for loving this and I really hope you enjoy the next! You are just lovely. :)
Date: 08/24/11 02:17 am Title: Spellbound
Awww What the hell Kirst?! And here I thought I was gunna get to read some Tom on Bill while Jamin' out to Eminem! You just ruined this moment for me D: Actually no GEORG DID! Fuckin' bastard. If he didn't have such nice hair I'd kick his ass, just sayin' Shhh dun tell Kit!
Author's Response: Dammit Georg!! That's seriously what I keep saying/thinking when I remember the fact that he cockblocked in such a major way. I promise that I shall make it up to you! And I'll be sure to have Georg occupied elsewhere when it happens, just so he can't come barging in with his glorious hair. Haha. I shan't tell Kit! Although, I think he would support kicking Georg's ass in this situation. I mean, WHAT a dick for interrupting. ;P Thank you for this hilarious review and I can't wait for you to read the next chapter! Yaaaaaay! :D
Date: 08/24/11 01:05 am Title: Spellbound
I was so completely entranced by the picture in the end notes that I almost forgot to review. Anyway, I think I'm in love with you. Ha ha, your writing is something else. Yes, loving the story. I can totally picture Chromea in my head, and it's awesome. But yes, you are amazing. Ha ha, snooblet... Such an awesome word. LOVES to you and the chapter!!! :) :) :)
Author's Response: I am very pleased that you were able to break your trance and leave me this amazing review :D Although, I full support going into a daze because of the pretty pictures. I mean...I've done it. lol. I already knew that I loved you! :D You are so sweet for saying that about my writing. I try really hard to be as descriptive as possible when writing this story because I totally want you to be able to picture it as you read along. But no no, YOU are amazing :D I love the word snooblet, too. I cannot lie. It just brightens my day when I say it. Sort of like how my day was just brightened when I read your review. xD Thank you sooo much! Much love to you until the next chapter! :)