Date: 09/05/11 12:04 am Title: Bonding
Awww yay they made their bond! -happy dances- But eeewww lizards :x Can't wait till next post!
Author's Response: Yesssssh they did! *dances around with you, probably embarrasses you....and then you slowly walk away...* :( Haha jk we'd be awesome at dancing together. And yes, EWW lizards!! I can't wait for you to READ the next post. Thanks so much, guuurl! :D
Date: 09/04/11 10:48 pm Title: Bonding
"I love you." Tom's words were hushed.
"I'm yours." Bill could feel that it was true, with every part of him.
beautiful! absofuckinglutely beautiful!
now please tell me that pesky larreus doesn't harm our boys!
Author's Response: Thank you so very much! You flatter me so. :D I promise that I will keep our guys safe, k? Larreus will have his downfall!
Date: 09/04/11 10:32 pm Title: Bonding
That is one ugly lizard. FINALLY BILL & TOM GET IT ON! LOL! Great job again was so excited to read more of your wondefulness.. Can't wait for more from you :D I wonder what it was that Bill saw on the Big Lizards crest? hmmmm.... Can't wait for more again great job :D
Author's Response: It REALLY is an ugly one! But he has to be scary. Yessss they got it on! Yay! And there will be more of them getting hot and heavy before the story is over :D I'm so happy you enjoyed the chapter. Thank you so much! Eeeeek I can't wait for you to find out more! Thank you so much again, love and I hope you like the next chapter! You make me smile :D
Date: 09/04/11 09:39 pm Title: Bonding
I'm sorry I've been a silent reader and I haven't review in a ages! D: Best believe I'm still in love with this story, and it just continues to grow. >.> This story is so cute. I busted out laughing at how Tom called Bill's winky dinky impressive. xDD That was just too funny! Everything about this world is so awesome, and the little visuals at the end definitely add to the appeal. Great job hun.
Author's Response: Hey now, it's totally fine! I'm just happy that you're reading. Although I do LOVE getting reviews from you :D I'm so happy that you're still loving this story! You are too sweet and this review made me smile so big. Haha "winky dinky" made ME bust out laughing. Lmao. I'm so glad that you like this world and the pictures. But mostly, I'm just really happy that you're reading and enjoying! Thank you so much and I really hope you like the next chapter!
Date: 09/04/11 08:42 pm Title: Bonding
But you love me the most, right? haha botTom! Whoo! That lizard thing is fucking scary. haha You have quite the imagination, babe. Georg is so arrogant and cocky. It's pretty funny. haha snooblets flying lmfao you dirty girl. haha Tom is getting quite a mouth on him. Look what Bill has done! haha Girllll, yesterday I was outside with my GaGa Buddy. Let me just say we saw a huge ass fucking spider. He put his hand on me and was like, "Woah!" Then I saw it and screamed. Then he did the same thing. Haha earlier that same day, he cussed a spider out after he ran into its spider web. The dork. lol I can't wait to talk to you againnnn. I fucking miss you! Haha girl, you should go read the end notes at the end of Chapter 11 for Unfamiliar Territory...I may have said something about you ;D
Author's Response: Of coursssseee :D That lizard is definitely terrifying! My imagination runs wild, lemme tell you. Georg knows what he's got and he's confident about it, lol. Ain't no shame. Snooblets need love, too!! Bill is a bad influence on Bill when it comes to language, for sure. I'm also a bad influence on him for writing him saying curse words ;) OMG I ALWAYS RUN INTO SPIDER WEBS. It's something my dad and I ALWAYS DO. If there is a spider web in the vicinity, we WILL run into them. It's so ridiculous and inconvenient, lol. I miss you, too! School, work, and the fact that I'm going to Peru soon is taking up all of my time, I swear! I'm totally gonna go read those notes, right nowwww!
Date: 09/04/11 08:35 pm Title: Bonding
GILA MONSTERS!!! EEEK....*shudders at the thought* I dun't like lizards. Unless it's THE Lizard, you know, fellow author/friend/member of THF? Just sayin. Anyways, as I said yestermaday via text, I miss you. *snuggles and hands you a pickle*
Author's Response: Dude, I'm shuddering with you, k? Screw those things. And yes OF COURSE. Even though I don't know her personally, she sounds amazing because of the things you've told me :D I MISS YOU TOO. Even though it was quite nice chatting with you last night. Even with the thong song, you pesky devil. I love you!
Date: 09/04/11 02:17 am Title: Revelations
this is a really good story!
i cant wait tell u post the other chapters!
Author's Response: Thank you so very much! I'm really glad you're enjoy it :D I just posted the next chapter and I hope you like it! So happy you're reading. :)
Date: 09/03/11 03:13 am Title: Revelations
If Bill were Ronaldo (btw that name makes me shudder) he would be required to have some sort of facial hair at all times. It goes with the name.
Ahh, Georg. I really like confident, player Georg. Usually the player character is Tom, so this is very refreshing! Alarm and tingles are always a pleasant combination!
DUSKY NIPPLES! You mention nipples every chapter and I love you for it. Intentionally obscure pronouns FTW! I wonder what Tom went through after eating the fruit. Long distance supernatural relationships sound complicated.
Lizards. ....okay. God forbid the Chromeans seeing a Komodo Dragon, or an iguana. Or a crocodile. *.* They'd probably worship Steve Irwin. Didn't you say the other night that you don't like lizards? You lovely little peculiar thing, you make me want to learn every cute little quirk about you~ I'm looking deeply and sincerely forward to the BotTom soon.
*koala latch* Mmmm that's a good one. You smell good.
Author's Response: That name is automatically associated with a long and pedo moustache, in my head. It certainly DOES go with the name. I'm glad you like Georg!! It is a bit different, not writing Tom to be all confident in his sexual prowess. Georg has it going on, though. All the ladies (and mean) think so. I LOVE ALARM AND TINGLES. Dude, I literally have something JUST for you, concerning nipples. It is located in one of the final three chapters. There's only three left! And they're all written, too! I'm so surprised at myself. I just want to post them all before I go to Peru so that I don't leave you guys hanging. Errr...I just realized that I didn't explain what Tom went through after eating the fruit...*makes a note to go back and add that into a chapter* Hahah I really don't like lizards. Which makes writing about them even MORE challenging for me. I do like a challenge. I would let you learn everything about me, if you want. ;) BotTom in the next chapter!! Eeeee. Mmm that was a good one. You FEEL good. *nuzzles deeply into your neck*
Date: 09/01/11 03:03 am Title: Revelations
ASDFGHJKL AWESOME!! I loved this chapter ^-^ haha Larry? Really? And I love how you've told about Tom's past and stuff :) stupid hot looking Lea...
Author's Response: Dammit Lea for being so hot...haha. I'm so glad you loved it! Thank you SO much for reading! And yes...LARRY. :D
Date: 08/31/11 04:27 pm Title: Just Like a Dream
LIZARD SEX. HOW DID YOU KNOW?!?!?! >.> I mean. Uhhh... If you wanna dress up as a lizard one time, in bed... I won't be COMPLETELY opposed to the idea... yup. I love you too :) And yes, I shall :D buzzlightyearismyherosoijustloveyousomuchmorenow
Author's Response: I knew you wouldn't be opposed. This is why I've already ordered a lizard costume from a website that I will not name (lizardsex.com) and have it at the ready. Whenever you want me to wear it, juts let me know, k? thefactthatyoulovebuzzlighyeargivesmeaWOODYimeanwhaaaaat. Haha. Love you, lots.
Date: 08/31/11 04:26 pm Title: Just Like a Dream
I AM HAPPY TO HEAR THAT YOU SMILED HUGELY. MAKES ME SMILE. YES. Right? I think that all mother should have crocs, just so that their daughters can use them secretly in private when no one can see the hideous. It just. It makes sense. Kind of like how all girls 15 and up should work at subway, so no matter what, they hafta make their man a sandwich. Just how it should be. I AM SO CURIOUS. FUCK. I shall wait patiently for more, though :) LOUISA SUCKS. AND LOL! My computer does shit like that too >.> Like, I try to type "wash" and it types "Kidd is the most amazing girl ever." Like. gosh computer. GOSH. YES! we will have so much fun, being all unicorny-like in awkward unicorn pants with dancing and and and YES it will be awesome. my chronological account just makes me sound like such a nerd, don't lie :L But I'm glad it made your heart melt ^^ I'm happy that you're happy that this story makes me happy. So there. And and and I am the most awesome pocket-y thing ever, kay? I'm happy you agree and and and thanks, that just makes me smile so much ^^ DUDE. TOPPING. FUCK. Take turns? I AM HAPPY I MAKE YOU HAPPY SO YOU ARE VERY FUCKING WELCOME, LOVE. I love my green hair too, thanks :D I also have pink now. Or, pink and black. Racoon tail :) I have gone through lots of different hair colours... MY WIFEH IS SHWO MUCH PRETTIER THOOUUGGHHH
Author's Response: Haha that is the ONLY use for crocs owned by mothers. They are so hideous, but so comfortable. A CATCH 22. HAHA WHAAAA SUBWAY. Have you noticed that even if you're in subway for like two minutes, you smell like sandwiches for the rest of the day?? IT IS INEVITABLE. Dude, I just finished writing this story today! There are three more chapters. But they are all over 3,000 words. Shit gets craaaaazy. So you will not have to wait long and the updates will be steady! HAHAHA. That computer and its RUDE(but very true) TYPOS. SO MUCH HAPPINESS HAS BEEN EXCHANGED BETWEEN US AND I LOVE IT. Dude, I don't have the balls to have crazy cool colors in mah hurr. I need to grow some. I do have a big dick, though. THANKFULLY. Ohhhhh shaddup you're gorgeous. I'm so lucky to have you as miiiiine. Seriously though, you are hilarious. I love you.
Date: 08/31/11 02:33 pm Title: Revelations
So Tom used to live in that old house. I'm thrilled about this information. I can vividly imagine Tom 'back then'. Dressed like a farm boy with all those yummy muscles developed from hard labour... um... quite *G* Only 18 back then and certainly only 18 now. Apparently he wasn't attractign any of the other boys livign in the housse enoghh for them to bond with him, and thank god for that since it's Bill who is his soul mate. It's a lognm ttime to wait, but it was worth it.
Bill has his work cut out for him. He can only go back 4 times and Tom can't go back. What if they're all lies? What if Tom can go back after he bonds with Bill because then they belong to each other and perhaps that's a whole different agenda? It's a scary idea getting trapped in a parallel universe that looks like Eden but is anything but. Bill needs all the luck he can get since Tom now thinks he's an expert on Lizards... Who knows how big those hissing critters are and if in fact they are as dangerous as Tom claims.
Anyway, they have to bond first and not get interrupted ;)
and lastly, HAPPY BIRTHDAY, Kirsten!
*A ton of hugs and kisses*
love Maria
Author's Response: Hi, Maria!! :D That is EXACTLY how I picture Tom before he got stuck in Chromea. Just a simple boy, living a simple life. And yes, muscles. Mmmm. None of the other people that he "protected" in the house, had a pull on him like Bill does. Bill and Tom are jut meant to be. :D I'm so happy you're excited about the new developments! Your questions are such good ones. What if the "king" of the world actually isn't all that powerful and just uses illusions and tricks to hold his people captive? But...maybe Tom can go back...when he's with Bill. ;) Although, he would still be very weak if that were the case, and he wouldn't be able to stay there forever. I LOVE YOUR REVIEWS. They always get me thinking and my brainstorming brewing. You are so attentive and perceptive, Maria. I adore you for that. Haha. YES they do have to bond without being interrupted. I'll make sure that the snooblets tie Georg down somewhere so that he won't come bursting in. Thank you SO much for the birthday wishes!! You are the sweetest. :D *hugs, kisses, and loves*
Date: 08/31/11 12:57 pm Title: Revelations
fgHFYHE_JSFGEUJFGUEJG oh my god. Once again, words cannot explain the emotions I am feeling!! Okay, firstly, LARRY THE LIZARD! That is just too awesome! And everything about Tom and him being human and everything made me feel so sorry for him :'( BILL AND TOM WILL BE TOGETHER WHETHER THAT KING LIZARD LIKES IT OR NOT. *ahem* That is all.
(Also, awesomeness rating has just gone up to, like 193453780347302065. Out of 10.) :D x
Author's Response: I love you random assortment of letters that you put when you don't know what to say. :D They just make you even MORE cute, if possible. LARRY IS BACK. I just couldn't leave him in the dust of Work Out. He needed some more time to shine. Although, I'm pretty sure this guy is like Larry's evil, giant cousin. Haha. I know...Tom has quite a sad history. But, he can't remember most of it so don't be too sad for him. He has Bill, now :D KING LARREUS WILL NOT KEEP THEM APART! Hahah I am so pleased and grateful by that awesomeness rating. You make me smile. Did you know? Thank you so much for reading!! :D
Date: 08/31/11 09:23 am Title: Revelations
Oh my god, you are such an amazing writer. Both of your stories have quickly become a part of my favorites. Please update soon!
Author's Response: First of all, I could not be smiling any bigger right now. Thank you SO much for saying that about my writing. I'm so happy that you're reading and enjoying my stories. I'll update as soon as I can! Thank you so much for sharing this sweet review with me :D
Date: 08/30/11 08:51 pm Title: Revelations
OMG that was to funny.. Bill kills me ;) I wonder what will happen next! Hmmmmm
Author's Response: Thank you!!! I can't wait for you to read the next chapter :D I'm really happy that you enjoyed this one, love :)
Date: 08/30/11 07:29 pm Title: Revelations
Wow another pretty picture, we are soooo lucky! =D
This chapter was soooo good! So many revelations, I'm so intrigued right now! You have a talent for keeping things interesting and always make me want to read more! Yayyy for Larry! Haha that was hilarious!
I'm a bit late but I was so excited to learn that you were going to post a one shot! And I really enjoyed it, gonna review it now! =P
Author's Response: I am soooo lucky to have readers like you!! :D I'm happy you like the picture! And, yes! Much was revealed in this chapter! I can't wait to tell you more. And of course I am so happy that I keep you wanting to read the next chapter. Larry is back! haha. He just made his way into this story and I couldn't stop him. I'm so happy you enjoyed this chapter and the one shot! I'm going to respond to your review on that as soon as I get the chance. Thank you so much for reading and sharing your thoughts with me! I appreciate you, a lot :D :D
Date: 08/30/11 01:46 pm Title: Just Like a Dream
YES. Next time i'm in Texas, I'll find you. I will. ALSO, I forgot to mention this in the other comment but. LARREUS. FUCK YES. I knew he was too amazing to be gone. So happy that he is in this story. You don't understand how happy it made me. I saw it. And laughed. So hard.
iloveyoumorethanyoulovemebutamtoolazytocomeupwithapropersimiletocomparemyloveforyouto
Author's Response: LARREUS. I'm so happy that he made you laugh and smile and get excited (not in a pervy way because i'm purdy sure you're not into lizard sex WAIT ARE YOU) I just love you. Come find me in Tejas, k? iloveyoutoinfinityandbeyondfuckyeahbuzzlightyear
Date: 08/30/11 01:44 pm Title: Just Like a Dream
So, I just need to share this. I am sitting here, on my laptop, for some reason wearing my mothers crocs. Had to be shared. ANYPOODLE! Already been said on Twitter, coz I'm now socially in and shit but HAPPY BIRTHDAY. ANYPOODLEx2! I am now very much more curious, which I thought was impossible because this entire story is quite curious but hey, that's cool too, just more shit to look forward to. And my scanner is a bitch. Fucking louisa. Hate her. YOU'RE GOING TO FLEE? WELL, GET YOUR HORNY (lol, coz you're a unicorn) ARSE (or head) OVER HERE TO FUCKING CANADA, EH? WE MUST BE JOLLY AND PRANCE AROUND ALL UNICORN LIKE. I'm also very glad that I will have your new unicorn addy. Always been a dream of mine to add a unicorn. Truefacts. AND MY COMMENTS HAVE BEEN LACKING. I KNOW IT. Just. Gah, I am no longer able to write comments that are 2 paragraphs long. You have broken me. Now, I can only hope to describe your story in few words, since it's indescribable and all. (That was corny, better be getting me laid tonight) BUTNUH. I honestly just can't share with you how much this story makes me happy. I get online, and get onto THF and if this story has been updated I wanna cry. Then, I sign onto my email and see that it has been updated, and delete the message coz I'm already reading it, but still feel a little spark of joy, coz it's there. In my inbox. I'm glad you think the complements are huge, kind of like my dick, and i'm glad that both huge things can satisfy you ;D
BUT SERIOUSLY. I love you and your talented, funny, awesome, creative, unique, hot, amazing, suspenseful story made of complete amazingerfulness. Also. You're pretty. KBYE
Author's Response: First of all, I smiled hugely when I saw this review from you. Secondly, I perked up IMMENSELY when you said you were wearing your mother's crocs. Sometimes I wear my mom's when I visit and need to do things in the backyard. There always there on the back porch. Dependable and lightweight. Hideous; but loyal. Thank you SOOO much for the happy birthday, again!! I am quite pleased that you are curious! This is precisely what I want you to feel with this story. FUCKING LOUISA LMAO. Btw, when I typed "lmao" it came out "lamo"...I think my computer was trying to tell me something about myself....>_> I will ABSOLUTELY come up to Canada when I am in unicorn form. We will prance, dance, and wear awkward unicorn pants. Yes? YES. I'm glad I can fulfill your unicorny dreams :D Your reviews HAVE NOT been lacking! Hahaha that was delightfully corny and you are so getting some because of it. HAHAH your adorable chronological account of the process of you reading my story...just made my heart melt. I'm so happy that this story makes you happy. You're the sweetest, cutest, and most amazing of all of my pockety things. I love having you close to my heart, just chillin in my pocket. :D I also have a huge dick. Who will top? THAT is the question! OMGOMGOMG all of those adjectives are everything I could have hoped for and more for this story. Thank you so much!!! You're pretty, too. I love your green hair. :D My wifey is sew pretteee. kloveyoubye
Date: 08/30/11 12:56 pm Title: Just Like a Dream
I have you favourited soooo i should get an email! Cant wait!
Author's Response: Yay! Can't wait for you to read it :D :D
Date: 08/29/11 09:52 pm Title: Revelations
More soon! And Lea is gorgeous! I love her wings!
Author's Response: Thank you so much! She is very beautiful, and I'm so lucky to have LillithValo making such pretty things for me :D I will post as soon as possible! Thank you so much for reading, lovely :D