Date: 09/05/11 08:55 pm Title: Bonding
DUSKY NIPPLE OMG
I skimmed right over it the first time, because I was more imagining it to describe Tom. DUSKY OMG I love you so much!! Thanks for putting that in! You know how to make a bumblebee feel special!
Author's Response: Haha, you probably missed it because the conjunction of those words just seemed so natural!! I love YOU so very much! So much that I write about dusky nipples, just for you! I like to make you buzzzzz with happy. Buzz on over my way?
Date: 09/05/11 08:34 pm Title: Just Like a Dream
I just want to like this comment. If this were facebook, I'd like it. And comment that I liked it and shit. BUT LIZARDSEX.COM IS LIKE, MY FAVOURITE SITE EVER. WOWZA. WE ARE PERFECT FOR EACH OTHER.
hahahahahahahah, Woody ;) LOVEYOU
Author's Response: We'll pretend that there was an invisible "like" button and you clicked it. AHH YES I SEE IT NOW. YOU TOTALLY LIKED THAT COMMENT. I knew that was your favorite site, HENCE why I mentioned it. I know you. Woody. WOODY. I love you like Aladdin loves magic carpet rides. :D
Date: 09/05/11 08:33 pm Title: Just Like a Dream
We don't have any subway where I live, so no, didn't really pay it much mind. BUT NEXT TIME I FLY OFF OF THIS ISLAND TO ACTUALLY CIVILIZATION, I WILL BE SURE TO CHECK THAT OUT. DUDE. I am so fucking excited for the story. GAH, MY LAPTOP PICKED SUCH AN INCONVENIENT TIME TO CRAP OUT. FUCK. BUT NO MATTER, I SHALL USE MY CRAPPY AND CRACKED IPOD TOUCH :DDD TYPO'S, GODDAMN! Dude, lots of love is just loverly. I love it. DUDE, I'm actually going to start going all natural and shit. Sticking to mah blond/brown/red natural colour. I'LL BE NORMAL, MOMMY :D (I'd hop you're not my mother.. .that'd be awkwarrrrd) GROW DEM BALLS BITCH, TO MATH YO HUGE ASS DICK. haha, ass dick. I mean, of course I'm gorgeous, THAT was obvious ;) But SO ARE YOU. WE ARE SUCH A HOT COUPLE. LIKE. WOW. Seriously though, you are hilarious. I love you more.
Author's Response: WELL OKAY THEN NO SANDWICH SMELL FOR YOU. I am sooooo happy that you're excited. Gosh darn laptop! I so appreciate you typing away on your ipod, though! You are the sweetest of sweets. Maple candy sweet. :D Even though I've never tried it, I'm just positive that you are JUST as sweet as it. COPIOUS AMOUNTS OF IT. Yeahhhh my hair color is my natural. I want pretty colors, though. Haha my mom would HATE it if I did cool things to it. And I'm all like, IT'S MY HURR OKAY. But that woman owns me, so. Dude, I'm not your mom. I proms. ASS DICK. Haha we are totes a hot couple and if we ever took a photo together, it would NOT even develop because the lens would be blinded by our joint beauty ;) Thanks for making me smile, kidd, love of my life...wife. :D
Date: 09/05/11 07:51 pm Title: Bonding
xD i thought this was going to be as long as work-out but i now see i was very wrong. I love this!! and botTom is quite nice every now and then, this was wonderful;) xD that lizard/dragon thing must be scary! i can't wait for the update :D
Author's Response: I don't think I have the time right now to write a beast like Work Out, again, haha. But, I will at some point! I'm so happy that you love this!! Truly, I am. And yes, a little botTom never hurt anyone, hehe. Thank you sooo much! And yes, Larreus is quite scary. But do not fear! The boys will win in the end! I'm gonna post again, tomorrow! :D xoxo
Date: 09/05/11 06:42 pm Title: Just Like a Dream
PWEASE DON'T -sniffle-
Author's Response: I could NEVER!! By the way, I'm really happy for you and your new bf. You two are adorable. :D
Date: 09/05/11 05:19 pm Title: Just Like a Dream
DON'T WALK AWAY FROM ME -drops to the floor and cries-
Author's Response: I WILL NEVER LEAVE YOUUUUU
Date: 09/05/11 04:59 pm Title: Bonding
Woot woot! I love your updates soooo much! Another very good chapter I must say! I looooove their bonding! They are such a perfect match, it's really adorable. I so don't want this fic to endddd! I really like the universe and the world you created here, so original and creative! I'm looking forward to the next chapter!
Oh btw, I just realized that this right here is my 3000th review. O_O Talk about spending way too much time reading fics! Haha But anyway, you totally deserve this special review for being so awesome =P
Author's Response: Well, it just so happens that I love your reviews soooo much! So this works out perfectly! I am so happy you enjoyed the chapter and the bonding ;) Yay! I don't want it to end, either. But at the same time, I'm excited to start new things! You flatter me so much with your compliments. I try really hard to make my stories as different from others as possible, so I can keep it interesting for you guys :D I can't wait for you to read the next chapter!! OHH!! You are suuuuuch a good reviewer. Honestly, you don't know how much I appreciate you, as I'm sure so many other authors do. You are so great at showing your love for stories. I can't thank you enough for all of your reviews!! Thank you so much for the extra super special review! YOU are the awesome one, though :D
Date: 09/05/11 02:16 pm Title: Bonding
hdajklhjklurwvb I LOVE YOU. Dear god..that BotTom scene was just like...too freaking amazing! All the fluff makes my mind turn into mush :3 And I totally want Georg's hair now. It sounds so awesome. I can just imagine him doing a hair flip like 'It's aaalll natural, baby!' *cough*...yeah. And Larreus scares me O_O but he looks like a dragon, and dragons are awesome. I'm so conflicted >.< Don't stop being awesome, kay?
Author's Response: I LOVE YOU AND ALSO MIND MUSH :D I'm so happy that you enjoyed the BotTom scene. Fluff is my specialty so I will give you lots to make your mind extra mushy, k? I want Georg's hair, too! *pouts* Haha If I had his hair, I'd be flipping it allll day long. Larreus IS scary, k? And he is a bit like a lizard/dragon hybrid, isn't he? And dragons really are awesome. If I had one, I would toast marshmallows with the fire that he would breathe. Also, he could keep me safe from creepy crawly things like LIZARDS. I won't stop if you won't stop. Deal? Once again, you're adorable. Gonna keep saying it. Can't stop me! Thank you so much for reading :D
Date: 09/05/11 11:20 am Title: Bonding
Another awsome chappie! Lookin forward to your next update. -chazza
Author's Response: So glad that you enjoyed it! The next update should be fairly soon :D Thank you so much for reading, chazza!!
Date: 09/05/11 10:03 am Title: Bonding
Fantastic....as usual =)
Author's Response: YOU are fantastic...as usual :D Thank you so much for reading!
Date: 09/05/11 06:37 am Title: Bonding
Ok. What is it with you and Bill being WELL endowed?..... I like it!!
BotTom...yummy yummy yummy. *licks fingers* tastes like chicken. HA!
I'm a little goofy in the morning.
Author's Response: Haha, I don't know. It's just something that always creeps its way into my stories! I'm really glad you like it, haha. :D Yaaaaay BotTom! I'm very pleased that I got your approval :D And, oh! Chicken fingers. My favorite! I like you goofy. You're cute :D I'm glad you enjoyed, sweetness. :D
Date: 09/05/11 06:06 am Title: Bonding
this was a really good chapter!
i cant wait tell u post the next one!:)
Author's Response: I'm so glad that you enjoyed it! Thank you so much for reading :D I'm really happy that you're along for the ride. The next chapter will be up before too long! :D
Date: 09/05/11 03:11 am Title: Bonding
PS: And *gasp!* I especially loved that Bill stayed in Tom as they drifted off in relaxation, perchance to sleep. :DD
I might have told you this already (not sure who I've mentioned this to) but I'm a sucker for that prolonged contact.
Author's Response: Oh, hi!! I'm so glad that you loved that. I'm a complete goner for such things, too. So sweet and intimate. I think you may have mentioned it before. Probably just one of the many reasons I think you're fantastic. :D I'm really happy you enjoyed it!
Date: 09/05/11 03:11 am Title: Bonding
Lmfao. Oh my goodness, this was a good chapter.
Larreus looks like something you'd fight in one of those online rpg games XD (Now I'm starting to think of what a funny thing it would be if some incarnation of Larry had a cameo in all your stories XD)
And I totally know about the flying thing. So many insects mate whilst airbourne (Hehe, sounds dreamy)
And dude, I totally know about the waking up at an awkward time from a nap. I always think it's the next day whenever I wake up that late XD
Author's Response: I'm so glad that you enjoyed the chapter! And you are right! He totally looks like one of those, lol. To be honest, I've been encouraged to have Larry cameos in my stories. I might just have to do this, hehe. Some form of him, that is. He can be my lizardy calling card! HAHA there really are a lot of insects who mate while flying! It's perfectly natural for the snooblets to do so, as well. Sounds so dreamy and...windy. Ahhh I hate the awkward nap feeling! I always feel so confused and groggy for the rest of the day. Eeeeep. I am fighting the urge to nap right now, actually. Just because I don't want to wake up at an awkward time, yet again. Haha. Thank you so much for reading!
Date: 09/05/11 02:26 am Title: Bonding
*brain combusts* Damn *picks bits of brain matter off keyboard* This is gonna mak it really hard to focus on your editing...
Wonderful chapter. Larreus is very terrifying sounding, and looking. I am now ridiculously curious about his tummy armor.
Ahh the secrets of Georg's hair...Don't we all wish we could know? Personally, I think he sold his soul for gorgeous hair lol.
Oh Bill, wings and dicks...*shakes head*
Great work on this chapter! I can't wait to see more!
Author's Response: *hands over some clorox wipes, you know..for the bloody bits* We need to figure out how to get that edited document to you! Can you download open office? It's free! That's what I do all of my writing on. I'm so happy that you enjoyed the chapter! Larreus really is terrifying! You SHOULD be curious. And I will feed that curiosity in the next chapter! I so wish I knew what he did for that hair...and if he did sell his soul, how did he arrange this deal? Haha. HAHA. Wings and dicks. I am so pleased by that pair of words. I'm so happy you enjoyed this chapter. Thanks so much! I shall post soon. :D
Date: 09/05/11 01:51 am Title: Bonding
eeeek the king eurgh! meanie! LOL
I loved it, Im a fan of BotTom after all! -giggles-
Author's Response: He IS a meanie! But do not worry, he shall be defeated! I'm so happy that you loved it. I'm a total fan of BotTom as well, hehe. I'm right there with you, girl. Thank you so much for reading and talkin' to meeee!
Date: 09/05/11 01:44 am Title: Bonding
BotTom!!!! That is my only comment.
Author's Response: I APPROVE OF THIS COMMENT.
Date: 09/05/11 12:39 am Title: Bonding
The scene with the lizards was really vivid and scary! And you know how you mention nipples every chapter? I adore you for that. Just another thing to add to the "reasons I adore Kiwi" list. It's getting really long, which is a good thing. A great thing.
:3 You and your adorable commas~ The sex scene was great! I tore through it with wide eyes. My favorite moment was when the juice dripped down Bill's chin. My other favorite moment was just Tom's submissiveness. Mmmm...
Good luck with homework! Thanks for writing BotTom! It was ever so lovely~
Author's Response: I even added "dusky" in, just for YOU! I'm not sure if there is any mention of nipples in the next chapters...hm...perhaps I will go back through and them in, haha. I just adore you in general, k? Like I have a piece of paper entitled: Reasons I love my Bumblebee, and it says "EVERYTHING SHE DOES". True fact. The commas! Oh no! Did I go comma crazy, again? They just flow out of me like water from a pitcher, I swear. I'm so happy you loved the sex scene :D I love it when juice drips! And yes, Tom submitting to Bill is just...unf. I am very pleased that you approve! Thank you for the good lucks! I got a lot done yesterday! But now, I must do more. You are so welcome for writing BotTom, hehe. I am ever so glad that you enjoyed. Thank you so much, bb!
Date: 09/05/11 12:19 am Title: Bonding
I am not entirly sure if I am right. I'm probably not but I kind of feel like you reversed Tom and Georg's real life roles. I like it :D. Everytime you write something it is so easy for me to picture it all in my head. It's all so wonderful. I love Lea she's so easily persuaded and all over Georg. It makes me giggle. Okay Larreus = Creepy McCreeperton. Deffinitly not the average cute wittle lizzard. I'm excited yet scared to see if Bill will go up against him. Will he defend Chromea or will he "HAUL ASS!!" ( :) )?
Oh I hope Tom and Bill will find a way to be able to stay together forever in either world. I love their love. Does that make sence? I hope so. Anyway. OH MY SWEET FUCKING HELL the botTom was pure heaven. Perfect. So perfect. I loved it. I loved how Tom used the word fuck like that, I honestly did not see that coming it was a nice surprise. I love how they conected and how they shared that moment. When Tom closed them off from the outside my heart melted like "Awwwwww thats so sweet and romantic". When Tom asked Bill "Stay in me. Please?" I swear I died and went to heaven. You deffinitly are my favorite author.
P.S. If you ever get anoyed of me cause like I feel like I'm getting to be anoying do tell me cause I don't want to make you feel like that. Also can't wait for the next chapter. When I see it in my inbox I'll be all flutterclappy and happy. :D
Author's Response: Haha Georg and Tom ARE kind of reversed!! I'm so glad you like it. Tom is usually always the player, but he's definitely not like that in this. That positively delights me that you are able to picture what I write! I want to make everything as visual as possible for you :D Lea is such a little flirt. She can't help but love Georg and his beauty ;" Larreus is SO creepy! Dear goodness. Hahah you're so cute. We shall see if he defends or if he HAULS ASS. Of course it makes sense that you love their love. :D And I'm so happy that you do! I promise that it's going to be a happy ending for these boys! OMG the way you just talked about the botTom...made me smile SOOO big. I'm so happy that you enjoyed it and picked up on those little moments. I love it when certain lines or moments stand out for people. You are SO sweet to say that I'm your favorite author! I think I might have to keep you :D P.S. I could NEVER get annoyed of you! Seriously, don't feel like that, because I adore you! I really hope you enjoy the next chapter! Again, I could never get sick of you. You are too sweet, kind, and adorable :D
Date: 09/05/11 12:12 am Title: Bonding
Gorgeous love making scene and beautiful artwork! I'm so glad you updated. :)
Author's Response: I'm so glad that you are still reading and enjoying! And thank you so much for the compliments. You just make me smile, k? :D