Date: 09/08/11 12:42 am Title: Weaknesses
I think I'm in love with Bill's parents.
That lady was weird. She was very lovely and tranquil up until the point she shoved the fruit in Bill's face. Such a wicked transformation. Something about fruit trees is so damn tempting. Just ask Adam, Eve, and Persephone.
I adored the moment when Bill and Tom exchanged, "I love you's" after that. *wipes tear* That was such a beautiful, picturesque movie moment. That short exchange embodied their entire relationship.
Larry = Larreus? I hadn't said the name aloud before now. Larreus is just some lame-ass lizard after all. I once had a lizard named Jib. He was brown when calm, green when excited, and turquiose when freaking out. He was cool. I loved watching him rip off his own skin and eat it.
The kitten mittens! That plot twist came out of nowhere, but it makes so much sense now! Clever you~
How exciting! Tom on Earth again! He's so polite, he makes me want to squish him. Again. I adore Bill's mom. Waffles for breakfast, Kiwi. FEED THEM WAFFLES! Unless you have some plot twist like an interruption to their night together or something... *peers up your sleeve* I can't tell if there's something up there or not.
Their bond pwns if it can revitalize Tom's strength. All night. Boy must be weak indeed. Tom is going to blow Bill's mind. Bill's mind is going to shatter, then re-fuse. Then shatter and fuse over and OVER. All night.
So yeah. Love you Kiwi~ My sweet little fruit. Did you hear this buzzing noise all day? That was bumblebee me, following you lovingly.
Author's Response: Well see, I already knew that I was in love with you. But now...the fact that you are in love with Bill's parents? I feel like our bond has been even more secured. Seriously! I just adore writing about them and I could not be happier that you love them. A wicked transformation, indeed! Looks can be so very deceiving. I just talked to Adam, Eve, AND Persephone and they definitely all agreed about the fruit. Then we went out to lunch and I jokingly ordered a fruit platter. They got all testy and shit, for some reason. Yaaaaay a movie moment! You just made my heart soar with that compliment. Well, you always make it soar but, you know. JIB. That is the cutest name. Although, the skin eating sounds like the stuff of my nightmares. His name makes it a teensy bit cuter, though. I'm so glad you liked the plot twist! I sort of just happened upon in whilst digging and deciphering the workings of my mind (writing). I'm glad that you love Tom's manners and Bill's mom. AND GUESS WHAT. I didn't have them eating waffles but I JUST went and changed that. For you~ I can't wait for you to read the next chapter, bee! Tom is so weak, he needs that sex to amp up his strength. And well, I'm more than happy to write some for him. Hehe. SHATTER AND FUSING ALL NIGHT LONG. Sounds perfect! I love you so much, my little beeby! I DID hear a buzzing noise! I just thought it was my silly ears playing tricks. Now I will always know that it is just my little bug. By the way, this was an even MORE amazing review than usual. And I didn't even think that was possible. I LOVE YOU!
Date: 09/08/11 12:04 am Title: Weaknesses
Well, of course the kitten mittens! Billby's brilliant. :D
Author's Response: Naturally! Billby has all the best ideas. Hehe. Thank you so much for reading. You never fail to make me feel special and put a smile on my face. :D
Date: 09/07/11 11:49 pm Title: Weaknesses
Um, of course Bill is gonna like it with Tom on top. Duuuh. Its Tom, and its sex. What on earth is there to not like?...Unless Tom is *whispers* horrible at it? *stops whispering* But I really doubt that, cuz, well, its Tom.
Its gonna be over lready?!?!? Whaaat? Nein! I love it too much to let it go!
That was a wonderful twist. Larreus is really a tiny lizard with magic armr. Very interesting. I really hope the mittens work as well as they think they will. Kitten Mittens fur immer!!
It sure is a good thing Tom woke up when he did. *pets him* Hes such a good byfriend, saving his Bill from the gorgeous evil bitches of the forest.
I'm really looking forward to sunday!...oh and, I don't think I'm gonna be able to get the next chapter to you thursday after all. Definately before the weekend is over though. *hugs*
Author's Response: I know, I know. Of course he's gonna like it. Your logic cannot be argued with!! I simply can't write Tom as being horrible at sex. I feel it would be a disservice to Bill, Tom, and all of you! It'll def be good. I promise :D I knowwww it's ending! But...after the last chapter...I am going to give you guys a choice (that's all I'm saying for now, muahaha...ha...ahem) I'm really bad at evil laughter, k? I'm so glad that you love this! I really am! And I am so pleased that you enjoyed the twist. I like to twist AND shake things up. :D Haha I want a shirt that says "Kitten Mittens fur immer!" I think it should happen. Tom is so great for keeping Bill away from the evil bitches of the forest. Thank goodness. I'm so excited that YOU are looking forward to Sunday! I'm so lucky to have you. :D And just get the chapter to me whenever it's ready, k? No rush! Thank you so much for reading! *hugs and loves*
Date: 09/07/11 10:21 pm Title: Weaknesses
Haha the things you write! I swear! Haha Bill is a fucking genius. Who knew those damn kitten mittens or whatever the fuck they are called would be so damn useful. Now I'm sad and screaming this next line, Kay? PERU? FUCKING PERU?!?! WHY??? HOW LONG?!?! Anywhore, I hope you have fun. This was an awesome bedtime story(: I love you and I hope you don't run into anymore spiderwebs. Haha omg. I didn't tell you! I found a black widow!!!! I'm gonna die!!! Haha oh and em you know how I don't do slash, right? *inhales deeply* I wrote my first slash story. *exhales* I hope you don't read it. *covers face* I don't recommend anyone to read it. It's awful! Haha but I probably think that 'cause it's my first twincest. So yeah. I miss you and love you more. Trust me, don't waste your breath saying you love me more. I will prove I love you more. I always win. Ask Jster. Lmao I beat her big time and I won't hesitate to beat you. :D I love you babe! I miss you, too!
Author's Response: The kitten mittens!! Who would have thought! Hahaha. They are going to saaaaave Chromea :D OH NO I'M SAD AND SCREAMING BECAUSE YOU ARE SAD AND SCREAMING. Yes, Peru. But! Only for just over a week! Do not fear, I shall return! I am super excited about it and will definitely share pictures :D I'm so happy that this was a good bedtime story for you! I would read it to you, if I could ;) Duuuude the spiders need to leave you alone!! Get some fucking bug spray, girl! YOU WROTE SLASH?! I must read! I'm so proud of you! Well. Now just to be contrary...I LOVE YOU SOOO MUCH MORE. Haha. Thank you so much for reading and I really hope you like the next chapter! :D
Date: 09/07/11 10:16 pm Title: Weaknesses
*stops laughing on the floor and climbs back onto chair* kitten mittens to the rescue!!! okay, this was fucking precious! i was just sitting here thinking "does mohan update tonight?" and then boo ya! you did!
but oh no, what will happen to tom now that he's in bill's world? or does bill's ass have magical healing powers or something?
Author's Response: *is absolutely delighted* Yaaaay for kitten mittens! They are actually relevant, after all! I'm so glad you found my update :D OHMYLAWD YOU SAID BOO YA. I am sooo pleased! I've been trying to bring back 'boo ya'! Haha true facts. Lmao. Dude, this review. I can't even. I'm laughing too much. Perhaps Bill's ass DOES have magical healing powers! Hmmmm *strokes imaginary beard* Seriously though, I'm sorry if this response was incoherent but I am just so very pleased by your review!
Date: 09/07/11 10:15 pm Title: Weaknesses
Well. Im glad there is usage for kitten mittens. And honestly, Bill's mom reminds me of my Ma. Just sayin.
Author's Response: I'm glad, too! Haha. To be honest, it was a total fortuitous happenstance that they actually became relevant! Annnnd another reason why I should chill with you and your Ma. Juuuust sayin'. Btw, I love you.
Date: 09/07/11 10:13 pm Title: Weaknesses
Bill's parents areee soooo cheesy! And thats what I love about them, it's unrealistic yes, but gives a WHOLE new essence to the story, which, like i said, i LOVE! :D
and haha update soon :D -hugs and loves on you-
and btw, I hate lizards! With a true passion lol
Author's Response: I am SO happy that you love Bill's parents. They definitely do add a different dimension to the story and I like that they are completely unrelated to everything that happens in Chromea. That way you guys can take a little breather, occasionally lol. Seriously though, I am SO glad that you love them. I shall update very soon! Thank you soo much for reading and enjoying. Your reviews always make me smile! *loves,hugs,more loves* DUDE I hate them too!! I really do, lol.
Date: 09/07/11 09:24 pm Title: Weaknesses
All..... night?................*thud*
Author's Response: Allllllll night long. *waggles eyebrows* Hehe.
Date: 09/07/11 09:01 pm Title: Weaknesses
xDD I was already laughing after the first few lines... Billterfly! LOL And the kitten mittens are actually going to be useful?! I’m impressed! Can’t believe there only one chapter left =O Bill’s parents are soooo weird, it’s hilarious every time they appear in the story. Loved how Bill introduced Tom as ``He’s mine`` to his mother... and what a sexy proposition from Tom at the end... hey if it can help him, I’m sure Bill is all for it! =D
Author's Response: Haha I have to admit, I had waaaay too much fun coming up with those nicknames for him! YES the kitten mittens are actually part of the strategy! Somehow, it thankfully just worked out that way, lol. Only one chapter! But I'm going to leave it open for an epilogue if you guys want one after you read the last chapter. I'm glad you think Bill's weird parents are funny! I always roll my eyes at myself when I write about them, lol. I'm happy you liked the introduction and the proposition. ;) I mean hey, ANYTHING to help Tom, right? I'm totally for it, too! hehe. Thank you so much for reading and sharing your thoughts with me. I love your reviews so much!
Date: 09/07/11 08:40 pm Title: Bonding
Words. Are. Lost. BotTom. Love. Lareus. Terrified. I am just like. Gaaaaaaah~ You really have outdone yourself this time, Momo. Truly. I like, cannot believe how hot that was. I loved it. AND IT WAS SO SWEET, TOO. I don't have much time because I'm using my roommate's desktop but I just signed on to say how much I LOVED this. Ima read the next chapter later on tonight, once again relying on my iPod. So, if you don't get a review for it... I apologize. Truly. But. I love you. And this. So much.
Author's Response: Your. Words. Are. Still. Perfect. Awww MOMO. I love that nickname! You make me so happy! And I'm truly glad that you enjoyed the botTom. :D Thank you so much for reading and reviewing, even though you had limited time. I LOVE that you loved this! I really hope that you liked the new chapter, too. You are just the best of the bestest best. I love you so!! Thank you as always, for making me smile. :D
Date: 09/07/11 08:15 pm Title: Weaknesses
I get such a goofy smile every time you respond to my reviews. Kitten Mittens and snooblets to the rescue! Who ever said the heroes have to be huge?! I love it. Bill's odd parents add an interesting and quirky dimension to your story, they provide balance.
Author's Response: I really enjoy goofy smiles. So as you can imagine, I am very pleased to hear this! Also you should know that I get a very similar smile when I see your reviews. :D To the rescue, indeed! Great things sometimes come in small packages ;) I'm so glad that you like Bill's parents. They are a tiny part of the story but an absolute delight to write. As always, I love your thoughts! Thank you so much for reading and sharing them with me! :D
Date: 09/07/11 07:47 pm Title: Weaknesses
AWWWW!!!!!!! Ok so much to say.... Tom is very protective I like it. Oh La La! Also the kitten mittens and Bill's parents, they are too cute. I hope Tom will be ok in Bill's world but if he says love making will help then Bring it On!! I may be enjoying that too much hehehe! ^.^ AND!... Last chappie NO! but I can't wait. *sits and waits for last chappie* Maybe the door will appear after this last chapter, maybe. Let's hope. Great Story
Author's Response: I LOVE that you have so much to say! I also enjoy protective Tom ;) Hehe. The kitten mittens finally have a purpose! Yaaaay. I'm really glad you like Bill's parents, they are so much fun to write. I am totally gonna bring on the love making. I mean...ANYTHING to help Tom. No such thing as enjoying it too much! Hehe. I knowww I'm sad it's the last chapter, too. But I'm so happy that you've been reading and enjoying this. I realllly hope that you like the next chapter! You are so sweet. :D Let me know if you find the door after the last chapter! I'd totally be interested in that, haha. Thank you!
Date: 09/07/11 03:58 pm Title: Bonding
;o;
OMG. This was like the best chapter nom
Author's Response: Why THANK YOU!! I am so pleased that you enjoyed it. Om nom om. I just posted the next! I truly hope you like it, loooove. :D
Date: 09/07/11 03:13 pm Title: Revelations
Hey so guess who loves you?
...
ME. DUH. your amazing, sorry im like late... :/ Nom and happy late birthday X3 kay bye
Author's Response: Well hey now, guess who loves you back? THIS GIRL. :D I've missed you! Thank you so much for coming back to me and for the birthday wishes! No, don't go! :(
Date: 09/06/11 09:20 pm Title: Just Like a Dream
OHNOES D: HOW WILL I LIVE WITHOUT THE SAMMICH? Oh, I am very very excited :) OHMYGOD I JUST REALIZED. I have been eating Maple candies all week, coz this guy gave us maple candies. I NEVER THOUGHT TO SHARE WITH YOU, AND JUST FINISHED MY LAST ONE D: But but but but, I WILL GET YOU SOME, SOMEHOW! I'm just waiting for the green to fully fade, then I AM NEVER DYING MY HAIR AGAIN. But oh gosh, the natural colour is gross. I LOVE YOUR HUURRR. And my mother honestly doesn't mind. She knows it's my hair and as long as I don't chop it off or thin it, she's happy. THE COLOUR DOES NOT MATTER, AS LONG AS IT IS THICK LIKE AN INUK'S HAIR SHOULD BE. We are like, THE HOTTEST. And no, the picture would take.. it'd just explode from getting too turned on by itself, coz we were in it. Duh. :D :D Thanks for making ME smile. Yeah. I couldn't think of anything else to say.
Author's Response: GURLFRAN DID YOU EVEN READ THE NEW CHAPTER YET YOU HAVE ME ON PINS AND NEEDLES. Whew. Sorry for the lack of punctuation. I'm just really nervy about what you thought of botTom. :D I bet your natural color is BEAUTIFUL JUST LIKE YOU. I love that your Canadian spellings, btw. I LOVE YOU. You are so cute. But yeah, that camera would be SO turned on. It would try to flash us! heheHAHAHA camera puns. kiloveyoubye.
Date: 09/06/11 03:48 pm Title: Bonding
Honest Georg, saying what we all think about Bill. But, I still love his outbursts of crazy and how he tries to be the voice of reason in this chapter (as hard as *that* is to believe). Even then his mind is all on Georg's hair and how sex wouldn't work between Georg and Lea. >__< That was so funny!
I just adore that Bill knows he can't edit himself from speaking so he just goes with it, even if it causes temporary embarrassment. He cracks me up!
Ohmygosh, the part with the lizards and Larreus was totally creepy! I don't even have a fear of lizards, but the way you described it made me shiver. I LOVE your imagination and the way you can write to translate it for us readers. You make all of us see it too, in vivid color and detail!
Oh, BotTom, how I enjoy you! :P You've made this Tom so lovely and old-fashioned and mature. That scene was wonderful! And very hot! *sigh* You're so awesome as always.
(I'm just still worried about Bill vs. Lizard King. I hope he figures out the mystery of Larreus' armor...)
Author's Response: Gotta love Georg for calling Bill out. I'm so glad you like his random outbursts. Filtering is just really hard for him, k? It is quite hard to believe Bill to be the voice of reason! But, you will be surprised with his revelation in the next chapter! I am quite proud of Bill for it. I can't blame Bill for thinking about Georg's hair. It's a beautiful thing. And dude! Seriously though, what is Lea thinking she can get out of Georg? Haha. Their proportions will just never work for them. She's gotta accept it. Thank you SO much for the compliments on my imagery. I really do try so hard to make it so you are able to envision it as I see it in my head. You are so sweet to say that! I am sorry that I made you get creeped out by the lizards, though. :( I'll keep you safe from them, k? I really like writing this Tom because he's nothing like Tom typically is. Which...actually makes it more challenging for me, but I'm so glad that you enjoy him like this! And that you enjoyed the BotTom ;D Thank you so much! As always, you make me smile with YOUR awesomeness. (Don't be worried, k? A lot of revelations happen in the next chapter that will hopefully put you at ease). Thank you so very much for reading, Miss Featured! :D The next chapter of this will be up tomorrow!
Date: 09/06/11 02:59 pm Title: Bonding
HaHa "flap her wings against your dick" I loved that little part. It was hilarious! Now, I don’t read BotTom that often, probably because it’s so rare, but that was hot! We all appreciate a little BotTom ;) I’m excited to read next chapter. I wanna know how Bill is going to “handle” those Lizards, or if he even can. But most of all I’m looking forward to Tom’s turn XD
Author's Response: Hehe, I'm glad you liked that part! Because seriously, how would that even work?! I'm really happy you enjoyed the botTom. It's the first time I've written it so I was definitely rather nervous about it. Thank you for the compliments :D I can't wait for you to read the next chapter! Lots of things happen and I shall be posting tomorrow! I'm looking forward to Tom's turn, too ;) Totally. Thank you soo much for reading and talking with me!! :D
Date: 09/06/11 12:52 pm Title: Bonding
Where the heck was I when you post this chapter? I must be losing my mind. lol
This was another awesome installment and I love Georg. He is so depraved! :)
Bill is so funny and says it like it is and I love that about him. He and Tom are so sweet together. Imagine being able to have anal sex and not have it hurt at first. You think of all the best things.
Larreus is quite scary looking and I'm a little nervous about what he might have in store for them all. He looks like he could cause a lot of havoc.
Another wonderful picture by LillithValo. She is so talented.
Okay now that I'm caught up with this story, I will be highly anticipating the next one. I adore this story and you! :)
Author's Response: You're totally not losing your mind! It just got pushed down on the recents page because of the BB fics and such. :D I am so happy that you liked this chapter! Georg really is just...incorrigible, lol. I am so glad that you like my characters! And yes, I figured since they are in a magical world and all...they might as well have a magical way to alleviate that pain! hehe. Larreus...that lizard...*sighs*. I promise that in the end, the good will win out over the bad! I'm really happy you like the picture. :D Thank you sooo much for reading! I'm posting the next chapter tomorrow. I can't wait to hear your thoughts on it. :D Thank you so much and I adore you, too!
Date: 09/06/11 10:50 am Title: Bonding
Dang, Larreus looks fearsome! I love Georg's relationship with Lea. He is incorrigible. Tomi and Billa finally get to the grind. it was sweet. I'm curious, since Tom was human, is he in anyway realated to Bill in the human world?
Author's Response: Larreus IS fearsome. That makes me so happy that you comment on Georg and Lea's relationship because it's a small part of the story, but I really like it! And yes, he is just as incorrigible as Larreus is fearsome. xD I'm glad that you enjoyed the bump and grind ;) That is a very interesting AND fascinating question. I wish for you to read on and find out! Oh and hey before I go....you're awesome. Just needed to get that off my chest. :D Thank you for reading!
Date: 09/06/11 02:05 am Title: Bonding
OMG purple boob fruit for the win? You make me smile darling and this chapter was perfect :) there was every kind of emotion in it & that made it fufil all needs anyways I'm rambling... Talk to you in the next chapter!
Author's Response: Haha you are the only one to have pointed that part out! YOU ROCK FOR THAT. I'm so happy that this made you smile and that you enjoyed this chapter. But you have to know that YOU make me smile incredibly so. So, thank you for that!! Seriously, so happy you're reading and liking this. And, I like your rambling! Thanks so much and I can't wait to talk again! *squeezes*