Date: 09/12/11 02:47 pm Title: Uprising
Thanks for this beautiful and colourful story. I enjoyed it immensely. The love was sublimely and passionately described between our boys and I loved that Tom was able to go back to living his life exactly where he left it behind.
It was very touching when Tom was reunited with his parents even if it was just for a few precious seconds. I think I'd love to see how Tom settles in in his old room - Bill's room - so if you're considering it, go ahead ;)
Mostly, I'm looking forward to what else you feel like writing next time. Have an awesome trip to Peru. Take came of yourself, and please remember to also friend my myr_juhl LJ. That's my private one :) *huggles* Maria/Myr
Author's Response: Ohhhhh, Maria! Once again, your review has brightened my day. You are so welcome but really, thank YOU for reading! And for sharing such lovely reviews with me. I'm really pleased that you like how I ended things. I think I definitely will write an epilogue. I have too many ideas to not write it. :) I'm so happy that you're looking forward to what I'm writing next! I'm so lucky to have you as a reader. And, I just added you! I hope I get to talk to you more on there. Thank you so much for the trip wishes. I'll definitely be posting pictures on my livejournal from it!! Thank you again for reading!!!
Date: 09/12/11 02:01 pm Title: Uprising
FUCK THAT WAS PERFECT. I can't..even...so cute :') That lizard was a pretty cool ass one. I want a talking lizard now. It could be my minion :3 BILL AND TOM WILL BE TOGETHER FOREVER :D SUCCESS! All that stuff about how they were destined to be together and stuff was too cute :') Tomi's gonna be human again, yay! Omg. That means he's gonna have normal ears again, lol. An epilogue would be pretty awesome. I think its amazing how you already have an idea for another story :D I suck at getting ideas for stories, I'm so unimaginative : ANYWHO. You are like the awesomest person ever and this story rules. It should have its own minions. I can't wait for your next one :D *loves, gummy bears and awkward hugs*
Author's Response: I AM SO PLEASED THAT YOU ARE PLEASED. Seriously, you make me smile sooo big. Thank you SO much for reading this and always leaving me the cutest and funniest reviews. Okay but for real, that lizard...I would totally chill with that guy. He seems like a cool dude. I'm so happy that you thought it was so cute! He IS going to have normal ears, again! haha. You are the only one who has commented on that but I thought about that almost immediately when I wrote this chapter! I am definitely going to write an epilogue. I have all sorts of ideas for it. :) Psssssh I doubt you are unimaginative. In fact, I'm positive that you're not. Your reviews prove that! I really hope you like what I post next and I'm so happy that you're excited for it. You are way more awesome than me, k? Just putting that out there. Thank you so much for reading! And yaaaaaay, awkward hugs! I love them. Well, especially when they're from you... :3 *loves, snooblets, and bad ass lizards*
Date: 09/12/11 12:37 pm Title: Uprising
I love Saffron! nough said LOL
Author's Response: Haha, I'm so glad that you do! Thank you so much for reading, girl. You've been with me since the beginning...you are so good to me! :D
Date: 09/12/11 08:14 am Title: Uprising
Woooooow I couldn't love this story more *-*
It's so nice to read such a sweet and loving Tom with that foul-mouthed but terrifically endearing Bill - they make such a great duo! (:
And that world of Chromea that you've created is pure and colorful genius :D
I really can't figure why I haven't reviewed before... You seem like such a nice person with the cute author's notes you leave! Can't wait to see more from you, soon, especially cuz I've also enjoyed Work out!
Oh, and YES you should definitely write an epilogue ;)
Thanks for the great story!
Author's Response: Well you should just know that i don't think that you could make me smile any bigger! Seriously, what a lovely review!! I am so happy that you decided to read my story and that you are fond of the world I dreamt up! I am SO happy that you reviewed! You are an absolute delight and I'm lucky to get the chance to talk to you. :D I definitely WILL write an epilogue! I've got lots and lots of ideas for it. Thank YOU for reading my writing and being so sweet to me. :) I'd be totally lucky if you read other things that I post! :3
Date: 09/12/11 02:54 am Title: Uprising
They were on the fifth time for the night -- LOL, that's ridiculous.
Lol, everyone fell asleep in Tom's house.
"Oh...shit," Bill mouthed, wishing he had a knapsack so that he could parachute away. -- Lol, no, I think he needs a *parachute* to parachute away. [/smartassery] ;P
Woah, I did not know that the forbidden fruit and Larry were connected. I though Larreus was just some sort of "minor" evil, as opposed to whoever had created that tree.
and hell, he was hearing it from a lizard. -- I want to hear a magical story from a lizard D:
Lol, Tom fought off the spell. That's sexy.
I can't believe we/they missed the battle XDD Eh, well, it was probably awesome.
Lol, it's a good thing the Queen(?) Saffron explained why she didn't intervene, because when she appeared I immediately thought, 'Where the hell have you been??'
"I get to be with their son for as long as he will have me. They deserve to have you to themselves for a bit," Bill shook his head with a small smile. > Lol, or you could do both. Have Bill meet his parents for like 30 seconds and then give them alone time.
The scene with Tom and his parents was so damn sad ;_; Horrible that he couldn't hug them.
Also horrible when it seemed like Tom was being kicked out of Chromea :(
Bill was quite proud of his allusion to both the portal and love. -- Hehe, me too :3
Hmm, and I vote 'yes' to the epilogue. Simply because it feels like even more closure could be had.
Author's Response: Ridiculous but QUITE possible! Yes, they couldn't resist the comfy vibe of Tom's hut. I just didn't want to have "parachute" twice in the same sentence. I thought it took away from the delivery of the line, I guess. *shrugs* I think that people can assume that there is a parachute in the knapsack, lol. Yup, Larreus was the literal seed of the evil! I also wish to hear a magical story from a bad ass lizard. Well, I sort of thought it was a funny way to skip over the dramatics of a battle and also inform you guys about all of that bidness. You know? But yes, I'm sure it was quite epic! I definitely wouldn't have had her appear and then not explain where she had been! She had to stay away for a reason! And, Tom only got to be with his parents for like 30 seconds...so, all of his time would have been spent introducing Bill and things. Instead of getting to say goodbye. He couldn't hug them but he could feel their love!!! Haha, cheesiness abounds. I'm glad you liked the allusion! And I hope you enjoyed this chapter...it doesn't seem like you were too fond of it if it doesn't feel like I closed it off well! Hopefully I can do it justice with an epilogue; which I am def gonna write. Thank you so much for reading and reviewing! I'm so happy that you took this journey with me.:D
Date: 09/12/11 02:02 am Title: Uprising
Lovely ending, but yes, I think it would be great to see how Tom has settled into his new home and his life with Bill. Anyway! I really kinda loved how Bill and the lizard talked all through the battle! lol Such a Bill thing to do. And the scene with Tom and his parents was so tender and touching. I really enjoyed this story so much and I'm so glad you decided to post it here. :)
Author's Response: You have no idea how flattered and happy I am that you decided to read my story! I really have the biggest smile on my face, right now. :D I believe I will write the epilogue! I think I owe it to you guys to show you a peek into Tom's new home and life. I'm so glad you liked the lizard chat! I was worried that people would be miffed that I had that scene instead of the battle. But I think you're right, it IS such a Bill thing to do, lol. I'm happy you liked the part with Tom and his parents. I felt that he needed some closure and understanding, with them. I'm delighted that you enjoyed this story! Thank you so much for reading and for your encouragement. I think so highly of you, and your opinion means a lot! Really. :D
Date: 09/12/11 01:26 am Title: Uprising
-bounces up & down- pleeeeeeease write an epilogue??? & another story too ;P I love your writing so much! I'm glad you wrote a long & cute author note for this one because I missed that in Workout. I really want to know what your next story will be about and I'm pretty damn excited haha. I heart you & I don't happen to be on twitter much at all but I added you (as I recall... I was pretty tired at the time) maybe soon I'll get up the courage to post something? Tell me what you think!
Author's Response: I will absolutely write the epilogue! Especially if YOU want me to. :D And yes, another story for sure! Thank you so much for reading and complimenting my writing!! You are the sweetest. And hehe, I'm glad you liked the long author's note. Pretty sure I could talk to you guys forevverrr, if I let myself. Yes, I do believe you added me on twitter! I'm glad you're excited about my next story. When I do post it, I'll tweet all about it and hope that you see it! I think that's a WONDERFUL idea! I would love to read what you write. :D I'll totally support you in that. Thank you so much for reading and always letting me know what you thought!! *hugs and loves*
Date: 09/12/11 01:08 am Title: Weaknesses
Rawr, I'm gonna read this again and review it again. I was in a pretty bad rush last time, so didn't get to be as detailed as I would have liked.
Again, worried towards the beginning. I thought maybe Tom would have to rescue him from some evil fortress :P
The revelation about Larry is woah O.O
"Yes, like, smaller than you!" Bill exclaimed to the purple snooblet. -- Lol, yeah right. Snooblets are tiny. WHY IS MY COMPUTER SAYING I'VE MADE A SPELLING ERROR WITH 'SNOOBLET' =O
"Let us focus," Tom commanded, and Bill's dick responded slightly. -- I have the same weakness XD Guys who are already hot are even hotter when they're mad or being serious.
I wanna say, I love how the mittens played into the whole thing.
Oh! And I had thought there was a mistake when Tom said "earlier tonight". I guess I missed where it said this meeting was taking place while it was still night time, and had assumed it was the next day.
Okay, chapter properly reviewed in full. Onto next!
Author's Response: I'm glad that you weren't worried by the end! I couldn't do anything bad to Bill. I tried but...it just didn't feel right! Haha Snooblets ARE tiny, but lizards can be as well. Duuuude, clearly your computer is very confused! We must educate it, lol. Yesss it is super hot when guys are tough and commanding. Yum. I'm really glad that you liked how the mittens played in! It worked out surprisingly well, lol. Yeah, all of that chapter took place during the night...and the beginning of the next. Thanks so much for reading and properly reviewing! I appreciate your thoroughness. :D
Date: 09/12/11 12:47 am Title: Uprising
A-M-Azing!!!! I loved it soooo much, cannot believe its over but it was sooo good :D and even though that door never appeared, I think I know when it will ;)
Author's Response: Thank you SOOO much! I could not be happier that you loved it! Your reviews are always like a little piece of sunshine. Thank you for reading my story and sharing them with me. I have high hopes for the door still appearing! My fingers and toes are crossed. :D *squeezes*
Date: 09/12/11 12:43 am Title: Uprising
The waffles!!! Yay! That little black lizard was a pretty awesome little guy for being a lizard and all. I love how Bill's bad language is rubbing off on Tom. The plan worked! The kitten mitten were carefully planned out all along! This was a super satisfactory ending, so lovely and clever and heartwarming. Destiny is so beautiful, I'm glad Tom and Bill found each other. Just as I have found you, my precious Kiwi dearest! This review is sadly short and for that I apologize. Today was a day of failures. I'm just gonna go to bed now; end it.
Author's Response: The waffles were JUST for you, bee. I think that lizard is the kind that I could chill with. Especially in a tree. It just seems like a fun thing to do, you know? The plan DID work! The kitten mittens saved the day. And..yeah../cough cough...the kitten mittens were always part of the plan! Ahem. Hehe. I love you. I'm so happy that you liked the ending. Your opinion on it, means sooo much to me! You have found me! And you have me forever and always. I'm so sorry you had a bad day, yesterday. I love you so! If you ever want to talk; call me, k? I'm always here for you! Thank you so much for reading my story and for always leaving suuuuch amazing reviews. You are the best at making me smile. :D
Date: 09/12/11 12:17 am Title: Uprising
I loved the lizard that talked to Bill through the whole battle that was going on. I loved how he was so chill and how he could talk and told Bill everything about Larreus. SO GLAD THE MOTHER EFFER WAS KILLED!
Saffron is amazing. It was so sweet the way she brought Tom back to his parents even for that small moment. I was tearing up during that part and then when Bill same to comfort him the tears came but they were gone once it was said that the portal would be open and stay open anf that they could come and go as they pleased.
This was such a beautiful story and there was not one part I did not like. Everything was so amazing and perfect. I know I have said this before but I am going to say it again because it is true, You are such an amazing writter. An epilogue would be amazing but since you are the writter I'm going to leave it up to you and respect your decision.
P.S: I finnaly rememberd all my twitter info and I followed you :). I hope you have an awesome time in Peru! Thank you for being such an amazing writter!
Author's Response: I'm so glad you liked the tree lizard!! I would love to have a convo with that dude, lol. Yesssss Larreus was destroyed!! Yay for Saffron! I really wanted Tom to have some sort of closure with his parents. I'm glad that it made you happy to find out that Bill and Tom can go back and forth between Earth and Chromea :D Tom won't have to say good bye to his friends! I have to say, you seriously have left me the SWEETEST reviews all throughout this story. I appreciate you so much. Thank you for reading my story and telling me your thoughts along the way. Everything you have to say is SO lovely! Thank you for all of the compliments on my writing and this story. I'm smiling so big, right now. I will have to surprise you about the epilogue...I think I might just do it, though. :D Yaaaaay I'm so happy you followed me! I think I followed you back? You should tweet me and let me know! Thank YOU so much for being so very lovely and sweet. I'll talk to you on twitter, hopefully!!
Date: 09/11/11 11:56 pm Title: Uprising
this was a really good story!!
i sad that it is over!
u should add a sequel to this about tom!
Author's Response: I'm so happy that you enjoyed it! Thank you a ton, for reading. :D I'm going to write another little part about Tom, for sure! I have lots of ideas about it. Thank you again for being so sweet. :) *hugs*
Date: 09/11/11 11:54 pm Title: Uprising
So we are texting atm, but I wanted to let you know that I loved this story. Much love for you!
Author's Response: Guuuurl. I am so happy that you loved this story! That makes me so happy. Well, YOU make me happy. So that might have a little bit to do with how big I'm smiling right now. LOVE YOU!!
Date: 09/11/11 11:27 pm Title: Weaknesses
OH MY GOD I AM SOOOOO SORRY I AM SO LATE ON THIS REVEIW!!!! I HAVE BEEN SICK AND I HAVE NOT BEEN ABLE TO READ AND OY!
MOVING ON!
Oooooooooh so amazing as always. Sweet as always. Funny as always. Loving it as always. :) OMG BILLTERFLY I LOVE IT!!!!!!!!!! The part when Bill had to pee and the woman took him and tried to make him eat the fruit I was sitting here like "BILL NO!!!!!! DON'T DO IT!!!!!!!!!" I may have squeeked a little but it's all good. But then Tom came and I flutterclapped and knew Bill wouldn't eat it and Tom would protect his Bill and I had a huge smile on my face. Then Larreus was seen and I was like "Fuck fuck fuck no no no no no no no no no no." But then he took off his armour and became small and I am not lieing when i say this but i actully said "Bum Bum Bum!" Then realised what I had said and thanked my lucky stars I am home alone. Anywhoooo.
Oh Bill and his ways to confuse the Treedan's and Snooblet's. Kitten Mitten oh Bill like they would know what they are. :) Gotta love him.
At the part when Bill and Tom were at the gate and Tom kissed Bill and said "Come back to me" oh lord I started crying at how sweet it was and when Bill said back "Of Course." and kissed him agaian I cried even harder. But as soon as Tom was able to go through my heart skipped a few beats cause I knew he would be weak but Bill will keep him safe.
I hope everything works out with the Snooblet's and the Kitten Mittens. I hope the evil Larreus is vanqished! (I don't think I spelled that right). Well off to read the next chapter!
Author's Response: Ahhhh how did I not see this review before your last one?! Sweetness, don't even worry about being late on a review...EVER. I'm just so happy to have you reading. And I really hope that you feel better, love! You are so delightful as always. Sweet as always. Making me smile...as always. :D Hahaha I love that you wanted to protect Bill from the evil woman! You are adorable. Hahah I could totally picture your reactions and I have the biggest smile on my face right now. Bill is so good at confusing all sorts of creatures, isn't he? How the hell would they know what kitten mittens are? I'm so happy that you love the boys' relationship. I know you've already read the last chapter, but I'm really happy that you enjoyed this one!! I'm really glad you're following me on twitter, btw. ;) Thank you for this!!
Date: 09/11/11 11:26 pm Title: Uprising
oooh congrats on peru! Sounds lke fun.
I think an epilogue would be a stupendously wonderful idea. please?
Larry sure has been getting around lately. First hes in Work out, then this, now hes even showing up in Cupid's Chokehold. He must have an amazing agent. lol
This was a really good ending. Everything was wrapped up amazingly well. I liked the part about the lizard Bill spoke with.
I am looking forward to whatever new fic you get to us too.
Author's Response: Thank youuuuu!! I am super excited about it. YOUR WISH WILL BE GRANTED. I'm gonna write it. :D Larry is busy. What can I say, what can I say. He's just working his way through THF. His ultimate goal is to become an official character on here. He's sooo full of himself. I'm so happy you liked the ending! I was worried that I rushed it a little bit so that is such a compliment! I liked that lizard guy, too. He seems like he'd be cool to chill with. I'm so happy that you're going to stick around for what I have next! Thank you so much for reading this story and always letting me know what you thought. You are just...love. :D
Date: 09/11/11 10:57 pm Title: Uprising
Great story! I think you should totally write and epilogue!!! You're an amazing writer! *hugs* your stories are so funny and happy and sweet! I can t wait to see what else you have to show us!!
Author's Response: Oh, thank you sooo much! I'm really happy you enjoyed it. You are so sweet to say that about my writing and stories! *squeezes you* I will write the epilogue! I have lots of ideas brewing for it, already. :D Thank you for being so kind and I'm so glad that you are excited for my next story!!
Date: 09/11/11 10:27 pm Title: Uprising
you made me cry, you bitch!
don't worry, bitch is a term of affection!
that was both so sweet and sad that tom got to see his parents again!
and i told you bill's ass had magical healing powers!
as for the ending...i actually like the way it ends now. an epilogue wouldn't be a bad thing, but i really don't think you need one. you wrapped things up quite nicely with what you have.
Author's Response: I didn't mean to make you crrrrryyyyy. I'm sorry! /gives puppy dog eyes. I'm so glad you liked the part with Tom and his parents...even if I was a bitch and made you cry with it! :( Dude, you were totally right about Bill's ass! You are so wise. That is quite a compliment that you think I wrapped things up nicely. Thank you so much! I migggght...write the epilogue. But even if I didn't, I'd feel comfortable leaving here, for sure. OKAY thank you so much for reading. I don't know what I've done to deserve your reading and reviewing! I'M NOT WORTHY.
Date: 09/11/11 09:44 pm Title: Uprising
Sorry my phone hates me but do you have a facebook?
Author's Response: I'm so happy that you enjoyed the story! Thank you so very much for reading and letting me know :D I think I'm definitely going to write the epilogue :) I have lots and lots of ideas for it. Annnnd I feel you on the phone. Mine always autocorrects my words and makes me look like a fool, lol. I've been thinking of making a facebook...but I'm worried no one on here would want to be my friend, haha. But if you were my friend on there...it might just be worth it! :D I'll def let you know if I make one, k? Thank you again so much for reading!
Date: 09/11/11 09:41 pm Title: Uprising
I loved reading you story and I would love for you to write an epilogue oh and I have one question d
Date: 09/11/11 09:36 pm Title: Uprising
Oh my God you and that Lizard xDD Or should I say you and Kit and that Lizard lmao I feel as if you are never going to let Larry the Lizard die.
You know, my dad should dress up like lizard for Halloween -stares at dad- Hehe
But sad face the story is over ;-; well nein not until you write the epilogue! I want just one more chapter full of awesomeness (as if any of the other chapters weren't full of awesomeness pft. You know while reading this I told my self I wasn't going to cry when he saw his parents ;-; so sad.
OOOOO OOOOO FOLLOW ME ON TWITTER FOLLOW ME...wait you already do ;) Lmao
I love you too silly :D Have fun in Peru!
Author's Response: LARRY WILL NEVER DIE. Haha. He needs to make his way through THF. He is just a bitch like that and won't go away. Haha. Your dad SHOULD! Omg. I would be so happy. It still delights me to no end that your dad is named Larry! I will totally write the epilogue. I have many ideas for it! And the fact that YOU want me to write it, definitely gives me even more motivation. ;) I know...the parent part was a bit sad. But! He's going to be sooo happy! I promises, k? Haha I doooo already stalk I MEAN follow you, girlfran. Thanks sooo much for reading my story and for loving on it. I LOVE YOU. Talk to you on twitter, probs!! K, bye!