Date: 07/25/11 09:44 am Title: Curiosity almost killed the turtle
I like that the story instantly grabs your attention. And Katy is going to be my favorite girl to hate in this.
I'm anxiously waiting for the other chapters. Great job.
Author's Response: Please feel free to stab her in your head as many times as you want :')
Date: 07/24/11 11:01 pm Title: Curiosity almost killed the turtle
Bill is a merman, dear author lady, merman. I always tought Triton was her dad's name in Little Mermaid, not what he was, so I totally ge you not wanting to call Bill a triton, its kind of silly having the girls called mermaids,m and the ment tritons. Yea...
And yes, I am already hating Katy. I never could stand girls like that. Yolu don't like sand in your shoes? Wellthen you hve two choices, dn't wear shoes on the beach, or better yet don't go to the beach at all. I get the feeling she has no concept of personal time. She seems over all very annoying and I hope you get rid of her soon.
I loved Bill interpretation of Tom's hair an piercing. I am going to enjoy seeing some of Bill's ideas for what the human things he finds are for. I think that was my favorite part of the movie, after the thrill of seeing all new things. Btw, how big is Andi in this? I didn't think sea turtles were so tiny they could get their heads stuck in a soda can hole
I really enjoyed this first chapter, and I am really looking forward to seeing where you go with this. Keep up the fantasmic work! Update soon!
Author's Response: Before anything else, thank you so much for taking the time to read and review.
Actually, I am not sure what they were refered as in the movie... I had this idea Triton might be just the king's name, as well, but I've seen people refering to them as tritons, in general. And I did think of using "merman" instead, but... I dunno, the word sounds so off lol. "Mermaid" is so much prettier xD I may eventually correct it in the future, though.
Annnnnnd... Katy is just getting started, I can assure you. Get ready to stab her in your head repeatedly. As for little Bill's human knowledge, I promise it shall be "aweeeeee!" worthy as well, all the time :)
And Andi! Definitely, a marine turtle would never be as tiny as to get its head stuck in the little hole of a Pepsi can... However, since this fic is based on a roleplay and my "Andreas" originally wrote it like that, I decided to keep it because the non-sense made me laugh. Like, exagerating all that much and being dramatic.
Thank you so, so much once again and see you on chapter 2 :D
Date: 07/24/11 10:08 pm Title: Curiosity almost killed the turtle
@ the triton reference you could just use mermen? o: perhaps. Just a suggestion lol.
Loved the chapter Im intrigued to know whats coming
Author's Response: I could, I actually did think of that... But I dunno, it sounds so off lol. "Mermaid" is a much prettier and nice sounding word xD
Thank you for taking the time to read and review <3
Date: 07/24/11 09:33 pm Title: Curiosity almost killed the turtle
Dear Biu;
MOMMY APPROVES OF THIS FUCKING STORY.
Author's Response: I wish I could use gifs here but, since I can't...
HAPPY BIU FIT <3
Date: 07/24/11 09:14 pm Title: Curiosity almost killed the turtle
Definitely hating Katy! And thanks for not using the word triton cause I think it's such an hideous sounding name and I can't help but giggle when I see it... ANYWAYS.
This is a very interesting first chapter! I can't wait to see where you're gonna take this! I love the idea so far, looking forward to more! =)
Author's Response: I dunno, that word just seems so off... Tritons are tiny wittle animals, not male mermaids xD
Thank you for your kind words, my dear, and for taking the time to read and comment ^__^
Date: 07/24/11 07:26 pm Title: Curiosity almost killed the turtle
Me! Me! Great stOry anways when's the next update?!!
Author's Response: Before the end of the week, that's for sure :) In about 3-4 days, I'd say. And thank you for taking the time to read and review!
Date: 07/24/11 07:04 pm Title: Curiosity almost killed the turtle
shes already annoying and its only the FIRST chapter. -.-'' haha, cant wait for more, it sounds good!
Author's Response: It will get to the point where you'll want to shove her face on a grill, I promise xD
Thank you for reading and reviewing, sweetie <3
Date: 07/24/11 06:47 pm Title: Curiosity almost killed the turtle
i hate Katy. does she have a nice ass though? i love all asses . i'm not judging
love, gustaviper
P.S. i love your story. tracking ... after i press the submit button XDD
Author's Response: NO! She has a fat ass, trust me >_> Save yourself for mine :')
Date: 07/24/11 06:35 pm Title: Curiosity almost killed the turtle
i've never been into such a fantasy fic before.......my god i love it!
Author's Response: Come to the light side, we have mermaids...