Date: 08/17/11 03:54 pm Title: How to tame a serpent
-pouts,finds martha- marthaaaa -whines like a kid would to their parent- you ruined the kiss
Author's Response: Poor thing, it wasn't on purpose xD
Date: 08/17/11 03:51 pm Title: How to tame a serpent
But...*bewildred* you said...horses? I'm just kidding, this was waaay better than horses.
This was so smexy.. I loved it. It was adorable how he was all trying to find his.
I hope his interview doesn't take too long. I am torn on whether I want Demon bitch to go to the interview or not. On the one hand, I don't want her running into Bill and causing trouble. On the other and I don't want it to be an engagment announcement interview thing and Bill be watching it on TV and seeing her hanging all over Tom and kissing him and shizz. You know?
eep up the great work! *hugs* CAtch ya next update!
Author's Response: Indeed, horses! They're coming up next chapter only, they're a bit late xD
I can give you a little spoiler and say that, no, Demon isn't going to the TV appointment. She will cause some more havoc soon, though...
*hugs back* See you soon, sweetie <3
Date: 08/17/11 03:02 pm Title: How to tame a serpent
oh...my....god!
Author's Response: *pats* Better than sandpaper dildos and chicken, wasn't it?
Date: 08/17/11 02:58 pm Title: How to tame a serpent
Oh my. oh my my my u need to update soon lol
Author's Response: I shall in a few days :)
Date: 08/17/11 12:36 pm Title: Not so silent jealousy
LOVE LOVE LOVE
Author's Response: Hope you're ready for more because I am about to post chapter 6 :)
Date: 08/17/11 12:13 am Title: Not so silent jealousy
l cant wait for the next chapter
Author's Response: It will be up very soon, I promise. I just need to proofread it. Thanks so much for reading and all the reviews :)
Date: 08/16/11 11:23 pm Title: Part of your world
AWWW!!! Its just soadorable! -hands over shell and star fish shaped cookies-
Author's Response: Ohhhhhhhh cookies! I shall save them for little Billa :3
Date: 08/16/11 10:52 pm Title: Ballad of the shadow sea
I'm really liking this story! Its soo cute and adorable. This is what it would be like if disney had made the little mermaid as a guy/guy relationship lol
Author's Response: I know, right? They should give it a try, since it's the 21st century and what not xD
Date: 08/16/11 07:04 pm Title: Curiosity almost killed the turtle
Poor Tom! I would have hit her
Author's Response: It only gets worse from here, I guarantee :p
Date: 08/12/11 01:01 pm Title: Not so silent jealousy
oh my please let him get a kiss and dammit Katy! lol
Author's Response: Before this fic is over, you will stab her countless times in your head. I can assure you ;)
Thanks for taking the time to read and review~
Date: 08/12/11 10:52 am Title: Not so silent jealousy
This so cute. I can't help but to bounce with glee as I read this. I love your characters so much! Even the obnoxious ones *coughKatycough*. You make it so easy to visualize them that I forget that I'm reading and I feel like I'm watching a film or something.
Author's Response: I'm glad, because that is always my main goal when I write <3 I don't want people to get bored while reading, especially in COP when my chapters are so long...
Date: 08/12/11 10:16 am Title: Not so silent jealousy
Aww I like this story a lot!
Author's Response: Why thank you, my dear. Glad to know it :)
Date: 08/12/11 06:10 am Title: Curiosity almost killed the turtle
Can't be Merpeople? haha. To quote Zoolander, MERMAN!
xD is that Katy Perry by any chance?
Author's Response: Once you reach chapter 2, you'll see the end of the whole mermaid vs. merman dichotomy xD
And, no, this one Katy is an OFC. Thanks for reading and reviewing :)
Date: 08/11/11 09:06 pm Title: Not so silent jealousy
Awww! I really enjoy reading this fic, Bill is just so cute! And I like how Tom is so attached to him already! Awesome fic and very sweet and interesting chapter as always =)
Author's Response: It's not hard to get attached to such a cute Bill, is it? xD
Thank you for taking the time to read and review <3
Date: 08/11/11 06:03 pm Title: Not so silent jealousy
Oh nos!! One day gone already??!! Whats he donna do?? Tom, get your ass in gear and kiss that boy!! You are not a pedo-bear. You don't even know how old he really is, he could easily be older than he looks! I should know I'm 22 and still occasionally get asked if I would like a kids menu.
Stupid Katy. Seriously, she might have just caused some sort of irreparable international incident. I am glad Martha gave her a stern talking to. Not that Katy has enough sense to listen to what a maid says. I kind of wish Ruff had bitten her. Maybe it would've pissed her off enough to leave, knowing Tom would keep the dog if she gave him the ultimatum.
Poor Bill, gettin all banged and bruised/ I'm so proud of him. Walking all the way to Tom's room, all by himself. I loved the bit about the pen. Trying to use it as a fork. Silly mermaid. Its ok, I'm sure Tom will try and teach you. Lets hope he thinks it is because you hit your head, not that you are so underdeveloped brain wise.
This was a beautiful update. At first the thought of Bill seeing the horses was funny cuz I thought he would freak out about the large animal, but then I remembered. Whales. Waaay bigger than a horse. But I'm sure it would be fun anyway. And I'll bet hewill think the land seaweeds (flowers) are very pretty in the gardens. And oh my goodness. HIm shopping?!?!? That is going to be amazing.
I can't wait to see more@ Keep up the spiffy work!
btw...I'm pretty sure that PETA doesn't care about shampoo bottles animals. They would be more worried about the shampoo bottle animals harming the mermaid by enticing him to drink its pretty colored, delcious smelling, insides. *nod nod*
Author's Response: Oh I feel your pain! Once I was talking to my former boss and someone walked in and asked him if I was his daughter... Because, apparently, I looked like a 13 year old to them lol
I could have made Ruff bite the demon but... Poor doggy, no animal abuse in my fics!
Bill is gathering his knowledge about human thingies xD So far, he knows that seaweed in bottles taste bad and are not to be eaten, that fish hooks in a human's lip are called piercings and that pens are used to scribble and not to eat. And, well, Tom thinks he somehow got amnesic and has no idea how to behave socially.
There will be a little part about horses in the next chapter; nothing special, but it should be cute enough. As far as shopping goes: it will still be a long while before Tom risks taking Bill out, BUT I promise there's an upcoming scene that will make everyone go AWWWW!! ;)
Date: 08/11/11 05:20 pm Title: Not so silent jealousy
Lol, I'm guessing that Bill's star (which I know from rl has three concentric shapes) represents the three days, and that an outline disappears with each day. Hehe, that'd be so cool if that's how it is.
Yay! Well, at this rate, I don't think a kiss is too far.
Author's Response: Actually no, but... That would have been a great idea! Kudos for you :D The star does have a little purpose, but not as deep lol
And, about the kiss... You'll have to wait and see ;) Thanks for taking the time to read and review~
Date: 08/07/11 10:28 am Title: Big business
LOL 'demon roaming around the manner'... xD My darling...xDD
Author's Response: You shall see what I mean soon!
Date: 08/06/11 01:36 am Title: Big business
*holds up a cross* Back demon Back!!
Ok. This chapter was so ridiculously adorable. There wasn't one part I didn't like. Wobbly Bill, Carrier Tom. The bleeding animals (aka soap bottles) It was just great.
Getting a little bit from Ruff's perspective was a really nice touch.
I feel like the Demon will probably be makinf an appearance soon. *sigh sadly* Does she really have to?
I don't have any amazingly wonderful words fr you today. 'm sorry. Its really late, and I just wanted to make sure I left you a little love before I went out of town for the weekend. Wonderful work. I ca't wait (yet I will have to) for the next update. Keep up the fabulous work! *hugs*
Author's Response: I hope PETA won't try to have my ass for making shampoo bottles bleed... And, sadly, yeah; the demon must be back. We can't have the human prince being a hero without the bad guys, after all :')
Your words are always amazingly wonderful to me, even if it was just a "nice chapter" single line <3 *hugs back* Have fun during the weekend!
Date: 08/06/11 01:16 am Title: Big business
oh my that was so cute! :D and demon!? please tell me it aint that wretched fiance of Tom's xD
Author's Response: Alright, I won't tell. Buuuuuuut... ;)
Date: 08/05/11 11:15 pm Title: Big business
Omg Bill is so adorable!!! Love this chaPter, Bill is doing good indeed!
Such a cute line: "Wow... Was that blood? Patting the bottle apologetically..."
I CAN totally picture this Bill doing that! :)
Author's Response: He's very conscious about every animal's rights, even if they're only a bottle of shampoo xD
Thank you for reading and reviewing, as usual <3