Date: 08/22/11 10:14 am Title: Ballyhoo
Aw Bill is so cute..
Author's Response: Always :3
Date: 08/22/11 05:52 am Title: Ballyhoo
Oh my gawd! do it Tom! -cheers- lol Loved it!
Author's Response: Maybe he will ;)
Date: 08/22/11 03:00 am Title: Ballyhoo
Lol! Before anyone can possibly interrupt, Bill needs to catapult his head forward and get that kiss! XD
Also, I must say, you've been amazing at portraying Bill's unfamiliarity with various things.
Author's Response: Now that would be a nice strategy... Who knows ;)
Thank you so much for your words :)
Date: 08/21/11 11:55 pm Title: Curiosity almost killed the turtle
That ^ was what I started thinking about during the horse scene ^_^
Oh my gosh, Bill, Heroic rescue mission number one now officially under his belt. Too bad you trashed the nice ladies work space to do it. But I did love him picking the cookie dough out of Martha's hair. So cute.
I love exploratory Bill looking around the TV trying to find Tom and get him out. Very sweet. I love how well him and Ruff get along. Ear skritches are the best.
As much as I adore Tom carrying Bill around, I think he needs to pop that boy on a treadmill at a low setting and get him some walking practice in.
Btw, evilness stopping it there. I hope it will make sense why you stopped it there next chapter, and not just because you are a sadistic evil person. I'm looking forward to seeing what happens next! Keep up the great work!!
Author's Response: That video made my night, seriously.
The cookie dough was too tasty to let it go like that, Bill may not have been a human for too long but he already cares about recycling and not letting food go to waste...
And Ruff: let's just say that Bill's long nails work wonders on his furry self. Plus, feeding the doggy is a good way to make friends.
Bill is doing some pregress, already... He's slowly learning how to walk on his own. Regardless, being carried around still feels much better.
...........And, err... I do happen to be a sadistic evil person... *looks innocent* HOWEVER. I do have a good reason for the cliffhanger. There's a very important, longish scene to come and I really didn't want to split it up. You'll see what I mean soon enough~
Date: 08/21/11 10:39 pm Title: Ballyhoo
Waiting anxiously- :O OMFB I sooo can't wait for the other chapter - grrr damn it tom you gotta KISS DE BOY!!
Author's Response: Be patientttttttttttttttttt, I promise it will be worth the waiting :3
Date: 08/21/11 10:06 pm Title: Ballyhoo
First things first- I love how calmly this chapter opens up, considering how the last one ended. In a way it sort of highlights their obvious comfort with each other. If anyone else had been in a situation like the previous chapter, it would have most likely been incredibly awkward afterwards. These two, however, just continue on to be wonderful and cute together.
Tom carrying around Bill makes my life, can I tell you that? I love how it just comes naturally to him at this point. But really, how could anyone resist the chance to carry Bill around? Especially considering how cute and helpless he currently is. I'd probably be doing the same, were I Tom.
As soon as I read the words 'crab soup' I had a feeling about who was about to make a reappearance. The idea of poor crab-stav and his family being eaten, nooo! I am so glad Bill managed to break open the cage and save them, even if he made a big mess in the process. I was just glad that Martha wasn't really that upset.
BILL. KISSING. TOM. ON. THE. TV. I had to caps that because that was exactly how I reacted, before making this weird happy wriggling motion. Then I had to stop because I felt my sweet tooth ache for a moment. That moment is probably my favorite in this story so far. I seriously can't even express how much I adore it. I pretty much floated through the rest of the chapter with a huge smile on my face because of it. Not even the cliffhanger could wipe it away.
I can't wait for the next chapter, I want to find out what's going to happen. I have a feeling someone is going to interrupt it, but I'm really hoping it's not going to be who I think it is.
Author's Response: Well... Bill isn't even aware of what really happened and Tom is okay with his pedo self, so it really isn't that much of a big deal to either of them xD
You see, looking at Bill crawling around is like staring at a fluffy kitty... You can't resist the urge, you must go and pick him up and cuddle and carry him around :p Plus, he's as light as a feather. (not as light as COP Bill is becoming, but still...)
I SAID CRAB-STAV WOULD BE BACK SOON, DIDN'T I? Even if like this, the poor thing... I thought Natalie would make a good crab wife, too :') And together they have a handful of tiny blode crabs.
I made Fairy squeaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaal, go me! *proud* I won't spoil though... I shall go back to work in order to update soon~
Date: 08/21/11 09:43 pm Title: Ballyhoo
ooooh your awesome, your awesome, your awesome! hi awesome person :D i really love your awesome story and its really awesome that you posted :) i hope everything is well for you and i cant wait for the next chap, im soo excited this story was in my head all day :D and i have a feeling someone or something is gonna interrupt their little moment, am i right? dont answer that...i want it to be a suprise :D until next time awesome person.
love,
your fan who loves saying awesome :D
Author's Response: Hi awesome person who likes to say awesome :'D
Right now, I really want to work on my other fic but it's not coming out good and I'm getting somewhat frustrated e_e Hopefully, though, stupid writer's block will go away soon and let me update both that one and 1000 Oceans, again. Annnnnnnnnnnnnnnd... yeah, I will not spoil it for you :p
Date: 08/21/11 08:01 pm Title: Ballyhoo
No way you re stopping here!! Lol
Author's Response: Sorry about that ;D
Date: 08/21/11 07:55 pm Title: Ballyhoo
Adorable
Author's Response: Thank you :)
Date: 08/21/11 05:37 pm Title: Ballyhoo
this is the cutest chapter ever!! *_*
Author's Response: I is sowyyyyyyyyyyy for le cliffhanger. Consider it revenge for ding dong-ness >_>
Date: 08/21/11 04:34 pm Title: Ballyhoo
Lucy it's Audrey....and Omg a cliff hanger! Do you want me to die? I got all worked up only to get let down....and I have a feeling as to what might happen since you gave me a hint about a certain young woman before. Can't wait for the next update!
Author's Response: I WARNED YOU xD Considering the message went through, at least... It shall come soon, I promise :3
Date: 08/21/11 03:42 pm Title: Ballyhoo
arg! just make-out already xD
Author's Response: Who knows, who knows ;)
Date: 08/21/11 01:17 pm Title: How to tame a serpent
oh my god..I just got a lady boner, and aww Bill is so adorable cause hes so clueless, i love it! this story is so cute, i wonder why is doesent have more readers? wierd, cause its sooo amazing! i hope you post the next chap soon! :D
Author's Response: Oh but I really don't complain! It's over the 1,500 views already and yours was my 63rd review, I really don't think it's anywhere close to bad :) But thank you so much for your words! And you won't have to wait much because I'm proofreading the next chapter right now, it shall be up very soon ;)
Date: 08/19/11 08:04 pm Title: Curiosity almost killed the turtle
WOOHOO go Disney Adult Zone lol. CAN NOT WAIT TO SEE MORE CHAPTERS!!! i think i just nominated this my FAV story
Author's Response: Why thank you, I really appreciate it <3
Date: 08/18/11 10:40 pm Title: How to tame a serpent
aaaaah, okay, i'm enjoying this enough, but this chapter really stood out for me for obvious reasons...sexyyyyyyyyyyy GUH! i can already tell this will be more satisfying then the disney movie, at least in that respect...:)
Author's Response: Oh yeah, this is Disney for adults here ;D
Thanks for reading and reviewing, glad you're enjoying it so far :)
Date: 08/18/11 12:07 pm Title: How to tame a serpent
Poor Bill. :-(
Author's Response: Thanks for reading :)
Date: 08/18/11 04:36 am Title: How to tame a serpent
*groan* MARTHAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAA! lol at least it wasn't Katy.
I'm excited about cookies for Bill. If you were a published author, I'd buy all of your books and cherish them.
Author's Response: Aweeee so much spoiling <333
Date: 08/18/11 01:06 am Title: How to tame a serpent
ahahah total mood killer! I really really like this. Bill's innocence and undying curiosity is so adorable! :D
Author's Response: Poor Martha, it was not on purpose! xD
Thanks for reading and reviewing, glad you're enjoying it so far :)
Date: 08/17/11 11:48 pm Title: How to tame a serpent
Hey Lucy, It's Audrey!! I'm not sure if you got my messages on tumblr but if not It's ok. I was just trying to explain my concept you asked about. But anyways this was a really good chapter! I really enjoyed the shower scene! And what Martha did! Lucy, do you want me to die? It was good. Message me on tumblr when you read this because I'm not on here often.
Author's Response: bb <3 There goes Tumblr being a bitch and eating messages... Hopefully, we'll be luckier tomorrow.
And poor Martha, she didn't do it on purpose xD
Date: 08/17/11 04:10 pm Title: How to tame a serpent
*mommy's own seal of approval*
Author's Response: Yaaaaaaaaaaayyyyyyyyyy <3