Oh Bill, your minor differences are fairly normal variations from person to person...well, except for the blue nails...that would be bad for a real human. the fct that you both have 'little serpents' makes you both boys.

Very smexy. And after that it was very cute. I like how you have Bill's language skills. Because somehow, no matter how pervasive the English language is, I don't think it would;ve migrated to under the sea.

I loved the Sun bit. Even it needs privacy too, for its girlfriend time.

Can't wait to ee the next installment! I've kinda ben waiting for the shit to hit the fan. And how on earth is Bill going to get Tom to understand the wole mermaid thing, and believe it too? Keep up the great work!

Author's Response: Well, in theory... They speak German :p It's not that Bill is confined to the "German part" of the ocean only, but it's the country his father's castle is closer to. Therefore, most of times when he hung around beaches and stalked humans talking to each other, it was that language and that's how he learned a bit of it. It's not that great, but it shall be enough to get Tomi to understand and believe about a lot of things~

Aww im pretty sure i said this last time but Bill is SO adorable, zomg hes soo cute, i just imagine him with big eyes and a clueless face, awwwww :3

Author's Response: That's EXACTLY how he looks like, plus the little nose twitching like a bunny :')

Oh my gawd! LOL damn i cant wait for the next chappie!

What? Something is going to happen in the next chapter? I didn't see any clues...j/k

Do, this was a great chapter. Bill was adorable, though he didn't do the whole wh what when where why thing as much as I thought he would. But thats alright.

I am so happy that Tom is going to be kicing Demon out, though I can't imagine she is going to take that very well....and their parents probably wont either come to think of it.

I can't wit to see Martha's reaction to talking Bill though. I bet shes just going to be so thrilled.

I cannot wait to find out what happens next, other than the obvious sexy times of course. Keep up the amazing work!

Author's Response: ...I actually had no idea what to name the chapter, I confess. And, since he's now gonna be on an asking spree and wanting to know about everything, that eventually popped in my mind :'D

Next chapter (which may be up tomorrow already, if I can have my way) will be dedicated to them both only, but then we'll get to see the demon's and adorable Martha's reactions. Shit is about to hit the fan...

He can talk! He can talk! *dancing around* Okay, I got that out of my system.

I was a little nervous that something was going to happen when I first read the last chapter. Cliffhangers let the mind wander too much. Either it would be too late, or Bushido would be a double crosser, or something. despite the tiiiiny teaser you gave me, I was still a bit worried about what was going to happen. Needless to say, I was very excited for this whole chapter!

I can't wait to see Tomi's reaction when he realizes that what Bill is saying is the truth. How does one react to dating the one hundred and fifty one year old prince of the oceans? I have a feeling that truth won't fully come out for a while, but I'm looking forward to it.

Bill freaking out over the car- aaah, so cute! Though it was definitely a good thing that he chose to cling to Tomi, and not claw at the door. I am definitely glad to hear that Tom plans on kicking Katy out. I hope nothing goes wrong on that end...

I love that, since Bill can now speak, there is so much more freedom for them to discover about each other. They definitely could have gotten along before, that much was obvious, but now they have the chance to really share and get to know each other. The journey of discovery is going to be so much fun to watch. Also, Billa, yay! I love that nickname, it is so cute. :3

I was giggling like a fool at the end, there. How do you explain being aroused to someone? It was so awkward, but luckily Bill is so eager to learn. A little too eager, I hope his rather abrupt ministrations don't get them into a car accident.

Author's Response: There's still a lot to happen, yes... But, for now, they get some well deserved peace and cuddle time.
In the next chapter (which may be up tomorrow, if I have my way), Bill will already start revealing bits of his origins... but without much success, I must say xD All the while while little Billa goes around being a chatterbox and asking about everything and everyone...

I am dead because of the cuteness of this chapter. "Getting the little serpent all happy and excited? Here? Make Tomi better here?" omg. As usual, I'm not-so-patiently awaiting the next chapter ^_^.

Author's Response: It's the best way he knows to explain sex, yet xD

OMg Bill is the most adorable thing ever!He's so cute and sweet and awwwwww! That was hilarious: ``Getting the little serpent all happy and excited?``

I can't wait to read more! =D

Author's Response: It's the best way he knows to explain sex, yet xD

Even Billaconda can't handle my awesomeness, dude.

omg yesssssssssssssssssssss ;)

Awwwww