Date: 10/03/11 06:54 pm Title: Sex makes babies
*points at Katy* Get slapped hoe! LOL Bill is in for a suprise, i wonder how he reproduces? or if its the girl mermaid...
Author's Response: You shall find out in chapter 16 ;)
Date: 10/03/11 06:07 pm Title: Sex makes babies
LKAFSNKJLFNSLFN SEX SCENE?!?! Pweeaseee it's my birthday today... seriously...
Great chapter!! ^-^ can't wait for the next one!
Author's Response: This will be late but... HAPPY BIRTHDAY :D
Date: 10/03/11 03:59 pm Title: Sex makes babies
mmm Yeeees, "scientific" "research". Wonderful chapter. I am so glad everything turned out well, and we will finally being getting rid of Skank Face. Hopefully for good this time. You should totally have Tom refer to her as Skank Face to her face when he finally gived her the boot. It would just totally make my day, I tell you.
Great work, I love dthe choking on French thing, and the being completely trusting of Tom on the fire thing, Iwould hate to see Bill get hurt like so many kids do, cuz they wont listen to their parents. Kep up the lovely work! Can't wait for more!
Author's Response: It's a nice excuse, I know... Annnnnnnnnnnd. Skank face is worse than a roach, I tell you already, but I won't spoil it.
Since Bill already knew of fire (with Hägen seagull telling him it's the type of stuff humans use to roast his chicken friends and what not), he immediately got the point across that he shouldn't touch it and trouble himself even more, for the day.
*hug* Thank you lots, as usual <3
Date: 10/03/11 03:21 pm Title: Sex makes babies
*squeals* I feel so bad. It's like I'm as loud as Katy when I'm thoroughly amused and pleased by something. "A porn movie might explain it better." I'm so excited.
Is this the end of Katy? Or will she be slithering her evil self back in later? (I understand if you'd prefer not to answer that ^^;).
"Choking in French"! That makes my day! I bet Tomi does have a 'magic' tongue though ^_~. Perhaps we shall see next chapter...
Author's Response: Someone is fangirling :'D And no, Katy will still return... she's worse than a roach, I tell you.
Date: 10/03/11 03:07 pm Title: A poisoned gift
I'm so glad I decided to wait til you posted the next chapter because I would have been tearing my eyeballs out with worry at this cliffhanger >:-(. lol.
Date: 10/03/11 02:45 am Title: A poisoned gift
KDJASNFKLJDSNJJDSKN DON'T DIE BILL!~!!!! ODSFJOSDKJFKLSDJ This is really good can't wait for the next chapter!! mkjodfjsgoldsjgl
Author's Response: Why thank you :D I promise I'll update soon~
Date: 10/02/11 10:34 pm Title: A poisoned gift
Noooo! You cant leave it there! I reallllllyyyy hate Kathy. Poor Bill, i hope Tom Will find him soon! Cant wait for the NeXT chapter!
Author's Response: SORRY! :'D I'll update soon though, promise~
Date: 10/02/11 05:59 pm Title: A poisoned gift
Damn cliff hangers!
Author's Response: SORRY! :'D
Date: 10/02/11 02:15 pm Title: A poisoned gift
noooooooooooooooo! hes probably going to get frost-bite... grr i wanna bitch slap that hoe katy..
Author's Response: Do it, do it, do it! Hard!
Date: 10/02/11 08:33 am Title: How to tame a serpent
Hot. Cute. Disappointing.
MARTHA Y U INTERRUPT?!
This was such a good chapter ^-^
Author's Response: Thank you for reading and reviewing :)
Date: 10/02/11 12:03 am Title: A poisoned gift
Oh no...Update. Now...bitte? *pouts and moans* I hate cliffies, especially ones like thiiis. I can't wait for more!
Author's Response: I KNOW, I'M GUILTY. ...I couldn't help it >_> I shall update soon, though - promise.
Date: 10/01/11 06:56 pm Title: A poisoned gift
THAT BITCH. I WANT TO KILL HER RIGHT NOW.
Date: 10/01/11 06:09 pm Title: A poisoned gift
NO NO SLEEPING!! That was horribly unfair of you. :( BILLA WANTS A UPDATE IN WHICH HE GETS OUT OF THE SNOW
Author's Response: SORRY 8D I promise I'll update soon, though~
Date: 09/28/11 07:28 pm Title: To be or not to be... a mermaid
Awww! I can't get enough of these two. They are so adorable, learning more about each other with each passing hour. It's really entertaining to read =P
Date: 09/26/11 01:02 pm Title: To be or not to be... a mermaid
ooo mountains
Date: 09/26/11 01:55 am Title: To be or not to be... a mermaid
*dies from overdose of adorable*
I'm so happy Tom understands finally! And believed it too! *flutter claps* I loved this chapter. The inner battle of skittles, gummies, coat removal was so cute and funny.
I can't wait to see more! Keep up the amazingly spifftasmic work! Meeting the parents next, right? Thats gonna be good.
Author's Response: He was resisting, but evidence finally became too strong... It was like putting 1+1+1+1+1+1 together and get two, at least based on Bill's knowledge of Maths :p
And, right, next it's the big parents' scene... Plus a bit more. It should come out soon~
Date: 09/25/11 06:40 pm Title: To be or not to be... a mermaid
RE:RE: Review of Chapter 10 of CoP -
You're welcome ^_^. I'm happy you enjoy writing Chad! Your hard work on the challenge definitely pays off. And you're right, I'm sure there are a lot of Chads. And that's just...well, depressing. So I feel for Bill - IRL and in CoP. And I'm feeling a little better - my cold has been replaced with anxiety attacks. Bleh. But I'm alive so I cannot complain!
Now, to actually review this chapter. I'm really excited that Tomi finally knows about Billa's home, and that he believes him. I was worried he still would find him crazy this time, but I've been kinda waiting for this chapter so that Tom knows A) to keep Bill out of the sea water and that B) Bill's not crazy or anything. Though it's super sweet that he loves him anyway...idk I just felt for Billa for some reason.
As always, what a super cute chapter :3. I enjoyed the gummy + skittles scene, in addition to just...well everything :P. Even though tenseness makes me worry a little, I'm still looking forward to the next chapter. ^_^.
Author's Response: Anxiety is my middle name, so I can only sympathize... *hugs* You can do it <3
And yeah... It got to the point where it was too much evidence to keep denying xD Now, all there's left to do is to talk to the parents... Which will, hopefully, come out soon.
Date: 09/25/11 03:27 pm Title: To be or not to be... a mermaid
Tom's mind= Blown O_O
Date: 09/25/11 03:21 pm Title: To be or not to be... a mermaid
Hi, Lucy. Sorry I haven't gotten to read in a while but the last two chpaters were just great. I think Bill is just the cutest thing. And I've been waiting so long for Tom to finally know. Can't wait for the next one!
Date: 09/19/11 08:13 pm Title: I believe I can fly
mooore! this is like a drug! im addicted!