Date: 08/31/11 07:27 pm Title: Professor
I love Bill in this ! More action would be amazing! :)
Author's Response: Ah, thanks so much!! :) I will put some action in the next chapter.rn
Date: 08/24/11 03:01 pm Title: Professor
I like this story. The only thing is could you make the chapters a bit more longer? And yest to answer your question I would like to see more action in the next chapter. Other than that the story is nice. :)
Author's Response: I will try to make them longer. Sorry about that. Okay, I think there will definitely be some action next chapter.
Date: 08/21/11 04:26 pm Title: Professor
awwww this is gonna be good
Author's Response: :)
Date: 08/21/11 04:03 am Title: Professor
i like Bill just the way he is right now and Tom he is so adorable
Author's Response: Really? Thanks so much for reviewing!
Date: 08/21/11 12:16 am Title: Meeting
Glad I could help! :D
Date: 08/20/11 09:46 pm Title: Professor
I wouldn't be disappointed if there was still no action. I wouldn't be surprised, I mean, it's Tom. But I will be interested to see Bill's house and how Tom reacted after only holding someone that closely.
Author's Response: I see! Well I decided too much action too soon can be not so good. I think I'll just build up some tension. :D
Date: 08/20/11 04:58 pm Title: Professor
this sounds like it is going to be a good story!
i cant wait tell u post the rest!
Author's Response: :D Thank you!
Date: 08/20/11 03:36 pm Title: Professor
more actionnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnn :3
Author's Response: :D
Date: 08/20/11 03:34 pm Title: Professor
Aww poor Bill seems to misunderstood :( Bad Anna! Why is she such a bitch to Bill :X Update soon :D
Author's Response: XD I am writing the next chapter right now!
Date: 08/20/11 03:31 pm Title: Professor
I like how Bill observed Bushido's reactions, it provides another view of Bill's character. It probably wouldn't be good for Tom and Bill to get too active so soon. Intimacy is more than just action, Tom still has to learn to be more outgoing and confident. He needs to learn how to set the mood in a subtle manner and to observe like Bill did in order to see what makes his partner tick. :) Hope this is helpful. I can't wait to read more.
Author's Response: Ah that is a good point. Getting too physical can be bad, at least at this moment. Maybe they will go on a date and Tom can observe Bill's confidence. Thank you for your reviews!:D They are really helpful!
Date: 08/20/11 02:54 pm Title: Professor
Awwwie I love bill lol!
Author's Response: I know right? I'm suprised how cute he turned out! XD
Date: 08/20/11 01:21 pm Title: Professor
Can't wait for lesson 2 xDD
Author's Response: :D I will make the lesson soon!
Date: 07/26/11 05:43 pm Title: Meeting
I like where this is going. :) I think Tom's character is coming along great, he's not too shy as to put anyone off. I'm not too sure about Bill's character though. I like that he's playful and teasing, but I'm still not certain as to what his level of maturity is. I look forward to reading more and I hope this was helpful to you.:D If not, then I'm sorry for the trouble.
Author's Response: Actually, that is really helpful! It tells me to show more of Bill's personality. =) I like these kind of reviews the most because it really tells me what to put in the next chapter! Thank you very much! :D
Date: 07/23/11 03:58 pm Title: Meeting
Hm, Tom might be more forward than he thinks he is. I think he's more comfortable with Bill than I would expect.
Author's Response: Yeah, I wanted there to be some comfortableness with Bill. =)
Date: 07/23/11 06:50 am Title: Meeting
Hmm this sounds like it's going to be really interesting :D Post more soon.
Author's Response: ^^ I will post more soon! Promise!=)
Date: 07/23/11 03:40 am Title: Meeting
I like it! :) Im eager to see what happens :)
Date: 07/23/11 03:40 am Title: Meeting
I like it! :) Im eager to see what happens :)
Author's Response: =) I will update soon!!
Date: 07/23/11 02:31 am Title: Meeting
Ooooh xDD I'm liking Tom's idea about Bill teaching him a thing or 2 hehe.
Author's Response: I'm so glad! Thank you!
Date: 07/23/11 01:58 am Title: Meeting
loving shy Tom :) I'm excited for more
Author's Response: Wah! Really? Thanks so much for reviewing!! =)