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Reviewer: danradfan84 Signed [Report This]
Date: 08/02/11 09:15 pm Title: Chapter 5

I can't wait for Bill and Tom to get together. I wonder what it is about Andreas that Bill doesn't like. Can't wait for your next update.

Author's Response: hehe :P i know right =] and you will find out why bill dont like him in the next chatper... when ever i get my beta home =[

Reviewer: buddy_c22 Signed [Report This]
Date: 08/02/11 08:50 pm Title: My name is Bill Kaulitz.....

Okay, first off, just to be clear, I'm not calling you guys liars. But how old is your andy now? It's just, ten or more years ago, did they even have the technology to have full aterficial hearts? And (I have no knowledge of this) but do they tick?! That's pretty cool, but I always thought it was pacemakers you could hear? Finally, I just want some background info: was andy homeschooled to begin with? If he was moved up a year/very clever, he must have been, right?

Author's Response: Andy explained all this in his letter. he didnt have the full heart transplant until he was around 5 or 6 or something like that i dont remember now... it was only for a year until he had a proper heart transplant.. then when he was 16 it failed and he had to go back to the artificail one.. for 2 years. hes 21 now. and yes it ticks slighly not to loud but it does tick its funny i spend hours with my head on his chest. and yes he was home schooled.

Reviewer: TomsParkingOnly Signed [Report This]
Date: 08/02/11 06:51 pm Title: Chapter 5

Yay for the update...now i'm ready for another hehe. I love this xD

Author's Response: haha i am glad, though i havent even wrote it XDD so busy in work and my beta is away for a week so i think this may be my only update this week... unless i find a beta xD

Reviewer: TomsParkingOnly Signed [Report This]
Date: 07/31/11 05:38 pm Title: Chapter 4

I'm glad that Georg is being nice to Bill. I would hate for Geo to have any problems with him. He doesn't need all the drama =) Great chapter.

Author's Response: yes georg is lovely! I nearly made a mistake in this chapter so i took it out so people didnt get angry :PXD

Reviewer: MissAnna Signed [Report This]
Date: 07/31/11 08:14 am Title: Chapter 4

Of course they should be friends. It would be a pain for Gusti if they aren't.

*screams* Hi hi Andi :D
*wonder if that was too loud >.>*

Author's Response: exactly! and georgs to nice to hate XD rnrnhe said hi :D

Reviewer: shaku Signed [Report This]
Date: 07/31/11 05:22 am Title: Chapter 4

they should become friends! I hope you remembered to hug your friend for me -nods- And i loved this chapter, I'm guessing this mystery friend happens to be Tom? :D

Author's Response: haah yes, i did he loves hugs :D and i am glad you like the chapter, and you will soon see :P

Reviewer: Sieren Signed [Report This]
Date: 07/31/11 12:16 am Title: Chapter 4

yeah they should


Hi, Andreas, by the way.


cant wait for more

Author's Response: should update soon :D

Reviewer: ladyX Signed [Report This]
Date: 07/30/11 11:53 pm Title: Chapter 4

Yes, I htink Bill and Georg should've becam friends. This was a good chater. I am really looking forward to the next chapter, where we will hopefully meet Tom. Keep up the good work!

Author's Response: i have it all written up :D should be posted tuesday maybe :DDD i am glad you like this :D

Reviewer: blAckmYsterY Signed [Report This]
Date: 07/28/11 07:30 am Title: Chapter 3

Why are they calling him a liar? Why would someone lie about something like this! They have absolutely no respect!

Is Andy fine now? Do you have a picture of him? I wanna know what your Andy looks like so that I wont picture TH's Andy when you mention him.

Author's Response: http://i79.photobucket.com/albums/j130/rachel1stevens/65857_1755361924517_1253034376_2016465_1811038_n.jpg really old pic hes the one with the red guitar im the bass player XD

Reviewer: blAckmYsterY Signed [Report This]
Date: 07/28/11 07:25 am Title: Chapter 3

Aw, that'a true best friend righ there!
For a second there I thought you were talking about Andreas the twins' best friend XD

Author's Response: ahah nooo my andy xDD lol

Reviewer: jesseforever69 Signed [Report This]
Date: 07/28/11 05:15 am Title: Chapter 3

this is really good story!
but is also really sad!
i cant wait tell u post more!

Author's Response: dont worry it willl start going nice :D glad you enjoy it though i was so scared to post it :D more will be out soon i promise :D

Reviewer: nessa8402 Signed [Report This]
Date: 07/28/11 01:57 am Title: Chapter 3

Nice Story:]

Author's Response: aww danke :D

Reviewer: Sieren Signed [Report This]
Date: 07/28/11 01:12 am Title: My name is Bill Kaulitz.....

Im having trouble reading the note
please help

Reviewer: TomsParkingOnly Signed [Report This]
Date: 07/27/11 11:37 pm Title: Chapter 3

Fantastic chapter =)

Author's Response: thank you :DD

Reviewer: ladyX Signed [Report This]
Date: 07/27/11 11:29 pm Title: Chapter 3

I am really sorry if anything I said was upsetting to either of you. To Andy, I hope your transplant is still going alright. I had a kidney transplant myself when I was 5, it ended up failing when I was 17. I have been on dialysis ever since.

Thank you for taking this chapter to clarify things a bit. I get the feeling we are getting to the 'here and now' of the story very soon. I'm so glad Bill found a friend in Gustav. Hopefully he will in tme have a good relationship with Georg too.

I'm really looking forward to the next chapter. Keep up the lovely work!

Author's Response: no no n your review wasnt upsetting at all... i had a number of emails of people correcting me calling me a liar and sayinbg things like they wished andy was dead if he was like that.... stuff like that =] so dont worry it wasnt you that upset me :Drnrnand yerp we are nearing the here and now bit of the story cuase bill will be 16 in the story :D this will also be where the story changes from being fully true to only being partially true xDD

Reviewer: Sieren Signed [Report This]
Date: 07/27/11 10:40 pm Title: Chapter 3

looking forward to more
love it

Reviewer: shaku Signed [Report This]
Date: 07/27/11 10:12 pm Title: Chapter 3

Say thank you to your friend for the note and i definitely dont think he's a liar! There's nothing fictional aout any of the happenings, it's very possible. Also i hope he keeps well! :D give him a hug for me? :)
I loved the chapter. You have a way of making me tear up :')

Author's Response: aw im glad you enjoyed the chapter, and the note also, he was worried people wouldnt understand what he meant XD he is alot better now... hes nearing 22 and hes fine :D and i shall hug him when he stalks me in work today XDD

Reviewer: Zora Signed [Report This]
Date: 07/27/11 09:50 pm Title: Chapter 3

I love this story! I can't believe you get hate :(
I did see some of the reviews. To that one member. Their is a part of the brain that controls all emotions feelings. I believe its the part above the spinal cord

Author's Response: Hahah yes that review made me giggle uncontrolably for about... 4 days XDD theres a part in your brain called (something i dont remember xD) and it controles depression and stuff like that, and when that gets shut off... people become wreckless and loves pain and stuff...

Reviewer: MissAnna Signed [Report This]
Date: 07/27/11 08:10 pm Title: Chapter 3

Oh such a cute note.
I can't imagine a life like that at all. *hugs* Andi.

Author's Response: he wrote that while he stole my sandwhich xD and scribbled all over my work forms -_- but some comments hurt him when he read them, some people was calling him a liar and he was like yea want me to get my medical notes for you ;P XD so he said he hoped the note didnt come across angry but he was angry =] thanks for revieiwing xxx

Reviewer: dantereznor Signed [Report This]
Date: 07/25/11 06:34 am Title: My name is Bill Kaulitz.....

I don't want to doubt the validity of this story having been true, but at the same time I also am very skeptical as I have done massive research on the subject of artificial hearts among many other implants. The youngest person to ever receive a permanent implantation was a 15 year old Italian boy. That was done last year, and I know it was spoken about in 2004 as being possible. There haven't been any information of newborns receiving artificial hearts yet. Transplants are one thing, but a fully functional false heart is another entirely.
Another thing was pointed out by Ladyx, the human body CAN become immune to different medications and depending on age and weight it can vary. The problem is, pain medications are more rapidly consumed by adult bodies and thus tolerance is born, in young children the legal doses are so minute that it would take nearly a decade for them to become immune to anything unless a allergy was present and only then would the child be given a different medication or have it forgone.

The fact is, that Jarvic hearts and others like them are to faulty to be trusted as many of the people who received them have either died or received transplants with living hearts.

Author's Response: Hi this is Andreas the person who had the transplant. Rachel didnt mention once that it was a full heart transplant, when i was young they had to replace the tubing around my heart.. th vein i beleive (i had an accident recently meaning i forget the whole story.. could of been the artery) and had that replaced when i was a baby. then when i was 16 i had to have the full heart transplant with the artificail heart which i had for two years before having my transplant. hope that sorts everything out for you. as for what happened in chapter two.. it was all true every word.. the doctor who did it then got arrested for giving false measures... as it was illegal to do what he did.

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