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Reviewer: Zora Signed [Report This]
Date: 08/21/11 09:14 pm Title: Chapter 8

More bill!!!!!!

Author's Response: hhaha okies ;p

Reviewer: TomsParkingOnly Signed [Report This]
Date: 08/21/11 07:54 pm Title: Chapter 8

O wow! Tom loves him! xDD He should totally kiss Bill...I know he'll like it, hehe. Georg is the best brother ever =)

Author's Response: haha of course Bill will like it ;) its tom after all xD

Reviewer: lalaabanana Signed [Report This]
Date: 08/20/11 09:38 am Title: Chapter 7

AWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWW

“Then… then kiss me?”

damn Tom has to ruin the moment PFFTTT
ithink i want Tom pov although georg/gus action does sound tempting ;)

Author's Response: georg/gus fun always sounds tempting ;) XD

Reviewer: Sieren Signed [Report This]
Date: 08/18/11 06:21 pm Title: Chapter 7

pleas update soon

Author's Response: will do i promise =]

Reviewer: Sieren Signed [Report This]
Date: 08/18/11 05:14 pm Title: Chapter 7

poor Tomi

Reviewer: pendergards Signed [Report This]
Date: 08/18/11 03:22 pm Title: Chapter 7

I really like the story you write

Author's Response: i am so glad :D

Reviewer: DarkAngel89 Signed [Report This]
Date: 08/18/11 09:18 am Title: Chapter 7

Love love love love love love

Author's Response: :D so glad you love it :D XD

Reviewer: TomsParkingOnly Signed [Report This]
Date: 08/18/11 06:56 am Title: Chapter 7

Can't wait to read more.

Author's Response: more should be soon i promise

Reviewer: shaku Signed [Report This]
Date: 08/17/11 11:49 pm Title: Chapter 7

Oh my Bill!

Author's Response: hehe :D

Reviewer: ladyX Signed [Report This]
Date: 08/17/11 10:56 pm Title: Chapter 7

Tom's POV bitte?

The was a really good chaptr, but I'm still surprised that the guys let Andreas come, even if it has been months. Keep up the lovely work! Looking forward to the next chapter

Author's Response: yea i was suprised too, i didnt want andy to be a bad guy... and the guy hes based off turned out to be the best freind now... but i donno xD

Reviewer: Zora Signed [Report This]
Date: 08/17/11 10:40 pm Title: Chapter 7

TOM'S POV. nowz.
I love this so much you have no idea

Author's Response: i am so glad you like it, :D i was scared to post it tbh becuase ididnt think anyone would :D

Reviewer: Sieren Signed [Report This]
Date: 08/09/11 01:36 pm Title: Chapter 6

GOOD GOING GUSTAV

please update soon

Reviewer: blAckmYsterY Signed [Report This]
Date: 08/09/11 08:59 am Title: Chapter 6

Your Andy looks cool! And your in a band which he plays guitar in! So cool!

It's cool that you play the base too! I'm learning guitar.

I know the pic is old, but I just have to sa it: Your Andy has justin bieber hair! noooes! JB ruins everything!

Author's Response: haha he has no beiber hair! he would shot you for saying that :P the back of his hair is much longer, but at that gig he had it tied and pinned back...like the back was so long it reached his bum xD but the hair dressed messed up his hair, he normally had a really long fringe but they cut it right off and he run out XD

Reviewer: ladyX Signed [Report This]
Date: 08/09/11 12:07 am Title: Chapter 6

That bastard trying that shir on Bill! Good job kickin his ass Gusti. And yay Tom being all protective! Can't wait for more

Author's Response: yess i could imagin Tom being protective and Gus has a secret evil side XD im sure of it XDDD

Reviewer: shaku Signed [Report This]
Date: 08/08/11 10:01 pm Title: Chapter 6

i saw your picture it's really cute :D just a random comment the picture beside the artificial heart one, the black haired dude, looks more like Andy Sixx than Bill O.O It just hit me lol!
I loved the chapter aww Gustav, he's so caring (: and Tom too, even though he dosent even know Bill (:

Author's Response: hahha i never thought o that but now you said it.. i doo see andy sixx in him XDD hahah

Reviewer: Zora Signed [Report This]
Date: 08/08/11 09:47 pm Title: Chapter 6

Amazing! I really love this

Author's Response: Aww thank you :D

Reviewer: TomsParkingOnly Signed [Report This]
Date: 08/08/11 09:41 pm Title: Chapter 6

I kinda pegged Andreas as a creeper by the way he was eye balling Bill when he first met him. Thank goodness it didn't go any farther than the kiss. I love how Tom was there at just the right time xD Great fight. Great chapter =)

Author's Response: :P secets :P hahah andy is ... strange like that but hes not gonna turn out to bad over all ( i hate making characters peple hate)

Reviewer: ladyX Signed [Report This]
Date: 08/02/11 10:16 pm Title: Chapter 5

oooh We saw Taaaaahhmm. Spiffy. I worry about this aversion to Andreas. That doesn't sound good at all. I hope it doesn't have to do with the hand shaking, I offer to shake peoples hands when I meet them. Wonderful work. I can;t wait to see more!

Author's Response: i promise you will find out in the next chatper :D

Reviewer: shaku Signed [Report This]
Date: 08/02/11 10:02 pm Title: Chapter 5

Oh Oh Andreas is gonna be thebad guy in the story? O.O and you finally brought in Tom :D I loved the chapter and somehow I cant picture Bill with blonde hair at all XD I tried and tried but i couldnt e.e;

Author's Response: hmm maybe :P and yes toms in it :D and tom will be in the next chapter too i promise :D

Reviewer: Sieren Signed [Report This]
Date: 08/02/11 09:34 pm Title: Chapter 5

looking forward to more

Author's Response: more will be up soon

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