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Reviewer: Sieren Signed [Report This]
Date: 10/17/11 10:22 pm Title: Chapter 11

aww such a sweet chapter

Reviewer: sraine Signed [Report This]
Date: 10/17/11 08:33 pm Title: Chapter 11

Awww yay! I'm so glad Bill's mom said that to Tom, that made me happy :3

Reviewer: Sieren Signed [Report This]
Date: 10/16/11 01:17 am Title: My name is Bill Kaulitz.....

ohh
sorry

Reviewer: onion5 Signed [Report This]
Date: 10/15/11 04:08 pm Title: Chapter 10

Amaaaziinnnggg!!!! i love it

Author's Response: i am glad there will be more soon

Reviewer: onion5 Signed [Report This]
Date: 10/15/11 03:26 pm Title: Chapter 3

aww, i read his letter... i dont think he's a liar! i think its sad , and i hope he's okay

Author's Response: im glad you are enjoying it

Reviewer: nessa8402 Signed [Report This]
Date: 10/15/11 05:46 am Title: Chapter 10

aww it was short. i thought his diary entry was cute:]

Author's Response: i wrote a lot more but i thought that was a better place to end it

Reviewer: shaku Signed [Report This]
Date: 10/15/11 02:02 am Title: Chapter 10

Awww Bill tch i feel so sad for him :(

Author's Response: i feel sorry for him too

Reviewer: sraine Signed [Report This]
Date: 10/14/11 02:40 am Title: My name is Bill Kaulitz.....

Okay :D Hope he gets to feeling better soon, btw. :3

Reviewer: Sieren Signed [Report This]
Date: 10/13/11 11:50 pm Title: Chapter 10

i really like it

its sure...but then again...its a filler right? lol

Author's Response: no its not a filler...

Reviewer: lalaabanana Signed [Report This]
Date: 10/13/11 09:01 pm Title: Chapter 10

AWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWW

Author's Response: hhehehe

Reviewer: sraine Signed [Report This]
Date: 10/13/11 06:30 pm Title: My name is Bill Kaulitz.....

Maybe my computer is just being stupid xD? I'll look later and review if I still see it :3

Author's Response: or could be mine XD i think its sorted now i went on my grandfathers computer and changed it up there :D should read okay

Reviewer: TomsParkingOnly Signed [Report This]
Date: 10/13/11 10:35 am Title: Chapter 10

Yay for the update =) i've missed this & glad ur back. Well, Bill, ur not completely unwanted xDD

Author's Response: I'm going to update again soon i promise :D

Reviewer: blAckmYsterY Signed [Report This]
Date: 10/13/11 09:28 am Title: Chapter 10

the plot is wonderful but the story line is kind of broken.like a few lines got deleted.

Author's Response: oh ... il look it up now =/

Reviewer: sraine Signed [Report This]
Date: 10/13/11 08:37 am Title: Chapter 10

Awww Bill boo is totally falling head over heals for Tom. I feel bad that he snapped at his mom like that, but she deserved it. :x

BTW, sweetie, you goofed up in some of the coding so 90% of the chapter is in bold italics xD Just thought you should know.

Can't wait till next post

Author's Response: gah its fine on my end =//// dont know whats going on .

Reviewer: sraine Signed [Report This]
Date: 09/24/11 06:55 pm Title: Chapter 9

eeeek! They kissed! Happy days happy days :D! Update again soon, please. I really want to see what Bill's reaction is going to be like!

Reviewer: sraine Signed [Report This]
Date: 09/24/11 06:51 pm Title: Chapter 8

Woot woot! Go Georg for setting Tom straight!

Reviewer: sraine Signed [Report This]
Date: 09/24/11 06:43 pm Title: Chapter 7

Ahhh fucking Tom! I was all excited they were going to kiss, but noooo he just had to go and be the nice guy...pft who does that any more. lmao Nah, but really, I'm excited for when they finally do kiss!

Reviewer: sraine Signed [Report This]
Date: 09/24/11 06:35 pm Title: Chapter 6

Awww! The artwork is adorable! And heck yeah for Gustav beating the shit out of him xD

Reviewer: sraine Signed [Report This]
Date: 09/24/11 06:28 pm Title: Chapter 5

Uh oh why doesn't Bill like Andreas o.o!!

Reviewer: sraine Signed [Report This]
Date: 09/24/11 06:21 pm Title: Chapter 4

XDDD Poor Gustav XD I would have been mortified if my friend caught me making out with my boyfriend in that scenario.

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