Date: 02/14/16 08:09 am Title: Chapter 1
Hello! You gave me so many wonderful reviews over the years so it's only fair that I give you some. With a 2 and a half year old daughter, I don't have a lot of time to read fanfic, not even TH fanfic, but damn, I should have made time to check out your stuff earlier because you are GOOD! I am totally adding this fic to my favourites and I am going to read every last chapter, even if it takes me a while. Loving it so much already! Great characters, promising plot, a lovely mix of humour and drama and wonderful details. I can't fault anything. SO GOOD! (and I haven't even got to the sex yet lol)
Author's Response: Wow, thank you. I couldn't believe it when I saw a new review for this story. I wrote it so long ago, when I'd only just discovered TH (after googling 'twincest') and I didn't know too much about them. It was the start of an ongoing fascination, particularly with the twins, that still grips me today, although I don't write often now. I hope you realise what you're getting yourself in to by starting to read this. There's a sequel too! Really sorry I haven't reviewed the last chapter of Captivation; I've read it but I've had a lot going on the last couple of weeks (my 'babies' are a bit older than yours but still need mum from time to time and we just attended a university graduation ceremony for the youngest). I'll re-read and review over the next day or so. Thank you again for reading and taking time to review. I hope you're working on another story...or further chapters of Captivation? Love, Helen xx
Date: 10/21/13 12:14 am Title: Chapter 38 - EPILOGUE
A very awesome story! Can't wait to read the sequel! =) Hmm, just two quick notes... 1; when talking about lube, you often use the word 'sachet' - according to my dictionary, this means 'small perfumed bag'... Is this a common term in the UK for just any small container, or something? 2; several times when Bill or Tom or whoever was sleeping you use the word 'somnambulant', which means sleepwalking - I think you meant 'somnolent', which means sleepy; drowsy. I hope you'll accept that in the spirit it was intended - constructive criticism. I noticed really very few typos and/or missing words, which is really incredible given the length of your work! I've read novels with more errors, which were also shorter than your fic! You also have the knack of making a story that might otherwise seem long-winded very engaging and entertaining... Your writing is clever and despite its length and occasionally telling the same events from two perspectives, it never feels like its repetitive. An excellent story. (Although, IMHO, somebody should tell Bill that eyeshadow & five o'clock shadow don't mix!) ;)
Date: 03/16/13 01:38 pm Title: Chapter 38 - EPILOGUE
I just read this whole thing in about two days, and I loved every moment of it. It's amazing, so detailed and in depth that you feel like you're part of the story. You capture the personalities of the characters so well, but make them unique to your story. I love your writing style! This story was absolutely astonishing, and I look forward to reading the sequel! :)
Author's Response: Hi there and...wow, what an amazing review. Thank you, thank you, thank you for leaving it. I'm finding the sequel hard to work on at the moment and updates are slow to say the least, but reviews like this inspire me to get my finger out and write. Thanks again, and now I'm off to read your latest chapter. Hugs, Helen x
Date: 12/23/12 12:45 am Title: Chapter 38 - EPILOGUE
whaaaaaaaaaaaat? unforgivable?? I would think it'd be more of a huge disappointment, and maybe a sign of failure as a mother, but never unforgivable :(
Author's Response: Sorry for not responding sooner. Thank you for the review, and if you want to know the reaosns for Simone's intense reaction you'll need to read the sequel, Gordon's Dilemma, which is a WIP and I just updated. Thanks so much for reading. Love and a Happy New Year, Helen x
Date: 12/18/12 03:04 pm Title: Chapter 34
aaaaaaaah!!! sex has been redeemed, and yet will soon be destroyed...im clearly sick because I definitely want Bill to be with Ralph at least once...
Date: 12/17/12 04:15 am Title: Chapter 32
WTF how do you DO IT??? how can you even imagine soooo many things going wrong?@?@?@
Author's Response: I guess I'm a natural pessimist;always looking on the bleak side makes it easy to imagine worst case scenarios! LOL!!!! So glad you're still reading and reviewing. Thank you. Helen x
Date: 12/14/12 06:35 pm Title: Chapter 26
aaaaaaaaaaaaaah!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! how are you doing this, how did you make SO MUCH happen??? it's crazytown
Date: 12/12/12 01:18 am Title: Chapter 22
AHHHH what are you doing to me ?!?!?!
Author's Response: I don't know...what am I doing to you? I hope that whatever it is it means you're still enjoying the story. Thanks for still reading and reviewing. Hugs, Helen x
Date: 12/11/12 01:52 am Title: Chapter 19
Hey, my mom never made me a scrapbook :( haha. Lucky girl. But damn, do you know how to stir up shit in this story.
Author's Response: I have 5 kids and started making a scrapbook for each for their 21st birthday. Its a lot of work but worth it. 4 down and 1 to go in 2014. God, I'm so old. I should really know better than to be writing fanfic at my age...but it keeps me off the streets. LOL!!!! Thanks again for all your wonderful reviews. Love, Helen x
Date: 12/10/12 03:29 pm Title: Chapter 17
oh, God, though...I really don't like what's between Tom and Bill right now...it seems so wrong and negative because Bill let it get so messed up...and Tom let it, too, but not noticing. ughhhhhhh. I'm just sitting here cringing and wondering if Bill's got permanent damage. Would have been something if in the morning they'd both been found dead. Her for whatever reason, and him from internal bleeding and rectal damage...:(
Date: 12/10/12 06:34 am Title: Chapter 16
um...well, that was rather horrifying. I guess I appreciate that it wasn't an, "Oh, a little spit will do, fingers? why bother. wow that was so amazing, I came without even being touched" sex scene, but...*shudder* dammit, Tom! be perceptive
Date: 12/10/12 04:01 am Title: Chapter 15
I'm really curious about the effects of all these pills going around...hmmm, only time will tell, I suppose.
Date: 12/10/12 12:02 am Title: Chapter 14
Yayyyyyyy! except there's still Melissa and then secrecy and lies and then...drama?
Author's Response: Wow!!!! I've just checked my emails and there's all these lovely reviews from you for KUA. Thank you so much for reading and taking the time to let me know what you think. Glad you're enjoying it. I hope it all reads okay as a complete story because when I started writing this I had no idea where it was going so it just developed chapter by chapter. I never intended for it to grow into the moster it became...and then I went and started the sequel, Gordon's Dilemma which was supoosed to be 2-3 chapters long, and once again took on a life of its own. Where will it all end, I ask myself. Actually I do have some idea...but, I get ahead of myself. Hope you enjoy the rest of the story and go on to read GD as well. Love and hugs, Helen x
Date: 12/09/12 11:40 pm Title: Chapter 13
WOOOOOO!!!!!! twincestttttt, now if only Tom doesn't stick his foot in it again...
Date: 12/09/12 11:00 pm Title: Chapter 12
I really wish Tom didn't have cotton for ears in this scene...but I think they'll get there soon!!
Date: 12/09/12 08:13 pm Title: Chapter 10
DAMN FINGERPRINTS! shit!!! I didn't know the word FUBAR, but I think it's the perfect word for the moment. DAMMIT. lol, can you tell I'm into it?
Date: 12/09/12 08:00 pm Title: Chapter 9
wait wait wait...don't Bill and Tom have the same DNA? or at least, I'm pretty sure it would be too close to be able to tell by his sperm unless they took samples of both twins and studied them in depth...and even still? either way, it's a story, and it's a plot twist, so it's fine, but I really wondered about that
Date: 12/09/12 05:58 pm Title: Chapter 8
I hate herrrr!!!!! Omg, ugh! She needs to get the crap beaten out of her
Date: 12/09/12 05:20 pm Title: Chapter 4
Im so sorry I didnt stop to review by now, I've been eating it up on my phone so its even easier to forget...this is really really amazing so far. And crushing atm
Date: 12/09/12 12:45 pm Title: Chapter 38 - EPILOGUE
Muhaha! I knew he would be smart enough to have something like that sent upon his death! Although I was thinking more like he had a lackey that would send it to the press...but this is just as good! Can't wait to go read the sequel! >:D
Author's Response: Hi again. Actually, Ralph probably did intend sending a copy of the tape to the press at some stage, but he was using the threat of disclosure to have his wicked way with Bill...and planning on doing the same to Tom. So, holding back on making it public was in his interests at that time. He was arrogant enough that he didn't really consider his life was in danger from the twins, so he died before he could do anything with the tape. Once he was gone, most of the copies were confiscated or destroyed by the police - thanks to Lisa Munroe. The copy that got forwarded to Simone was one that slipped through the net, one that Ralph was going to send out eventually simply to make more trouble for the twins. He's probably laughing in his grave that his legacy as a manipulative amoral shit lives on. Thank you for your wonderful reviews. I love that someone is still reading and enjoying KUA. Hope you enjoy Gordon's Dilemma just as much. Love and hugs, Helen x