Date: 03/17/12 11:18 pm Title: Chapter 20
I must say, that was one very unprofessional police detective. Wouldn't want to meet her any time soon IRL.
Date: 03/15/12 04:25 pm Title: Chapter 1
:) welcome
im a big fan of BotTom
Date: 03/15/12 03:12 pm Title: Chapter 3
Your descriptions are absolutely amazing! I've never read het sex so good before, kudos! :D
Author's Response: Wow! Thank you. That is an amazing compliment. Hope you enjoy the gay sex as much later in the story. Ooops, am I giving away the plot? Happy that you're enjoying reading and thank you for taking the time to review.
Date: 03/14/12 11:11 pm Title: Chapter 1
THANK YOU THANK YOU
Author's Response: You're welcome. I think it would actually make a good scene because I'm sure Bill would want to try it at least once since he's never fucked anyone before. But Tom's macho side might come out to play and he doesn't want to be the bitch for his brother no matter how much he loves him. So, yeah, great potential for conflict there. Thanks for suggesting it.
Date: 03/14/12 12:18 am Title: Chapter 30
could I make a suggestion?
Twin sex with Bill topping?
for me?
PLEASE?
Author's Response: I like that idea but don't think it will happen in this story because Tom has yet to prove to Bill that anal sex can be fun. Also, I don't think Tom's ready for that yet. He's only just discovered he can enjoy being with a guy. But I'm not ruling it out in the sequel. I like the idea that Tom would lose his anal virginity to his twin, and topping Tom would be like Bill losing another virginity by fucking instead of being fucked. So, yeah, I definitely think that's on the cards for later.
Date: 03/14/12 12:17 am Title: Chapter 30
please update soon
great chapter
Author's Response: Thank you for the review. Working on the next chapter now.
Date: 03/13/12 10:34 pm Title: Chapter 30
Yes! This is really exciting!
Author's Response: Glad you're enjoying it so much. Thank you for reviewing.
Date: 03/13/12 09:16 pm Title: Chapter 30
Interesting chapter as usual! David is awesome. That is all. Thanks for the update! :)
Author's Response: Yeah, David's really trying to make up for getting them all into the mess...he feels so guilty about introducing Bill to Melissa in the first place and insisting they have sex. Glad you're enjoying it and thanks for reviewing.
Date: 03/13/12 08:05 pm Title: Chapter 30
If this bitch is setting David up, so help me, Helen. Wait a minute, oh yeah, this is just fan fiction. Great plot forming chapter and I can't wait to see what happens when David meets with Ralph and if Munroe actually does bury all the forensic evidence and give David whatever was on that recording. Also, I'm looking forward to his actual meeting with the twins. This is all turning out so well and I cannot wait to read more. Thank you for the quick update as I'm sure it's very hard to bring a crime drama like this together, you are doing an awesome job of making it happen!!!
Author's Response: Thank you as always for an amazing review - you always boost my confidence. I'm hoping the next chapter will come together a bit easier than this one which took three attempts. Still cursing myself for making this so complicated...it didn't stsrt out that way but developed a life of its own. Okay, back to writing.
Date: 03/13/12 10:27 am Title: Chapter 9
I am this close to killing your OFC; thank goodness she's fictional.
Author's Response: You're not the only one who had that reaction. Glad you're enjoying the story; I'm getting close to ending it now but there will be at least one and probably 2 sequels. Thanks for taking the time to review, it means so much to have feedback from readers.
Date: 03/08/12 12:10 pm Title: Chapter 29
DID THAT SEAN CREEP TAKE THAT RECORDING DEVICE?!???!!! WOMAN, I NEED ANSWERS OR SO HELP ME!!!! Lol, just kidding, Helen, but no, really, I have to know if the twins are gonna be in trouble or if their relationship is going to come out in the wash of the investigation.
Really enjoyed reading this and you can tell you worked really hard on it from the beginning scenes with Ben Judd and Munroe to the part with Ralph's mental banter about all that had happened with his daughter's death to the tender and sexxy scenes at the end with the twins.
Ralph is just so sinister here in his thinking and I believe would gladly off his wife for her money. I loved how you put everything together with how evil Melissa was but everything just kept pushing her farther and farther into her dad's hands as far as how he was going to have her offed. Oh, and the scenes with Munroe and Judd were kinda hilarious if you have my sick sense of humor, I guess. Ralph would be smart to destroy his phone but luckily David was smart and so is Ms. Munroe to have a recorded copy of David and Ralph's conversation. But Ralph knows something's up with that. I wish I could write my part of Gordon as well as you've written Ralph's character, but you just have this flow with your writing, Helen, one that I really look up to and strive to get myself.
The nurse, again, was pretty funny and so were the twin's once they got passed the shock that someone was actually in there room and that Sean may or may not have gotten the device. What a great way to build suspense!!! But, through all that those naughty little twins still managed to fondle each other while their room was being swept for the bug!! And, oh, was sexxy time sexxxxy!!! The end scenes really got me how Tom and Bill curled and folded into each other like two little kittens, well, two very naughty little sex kittens, I might add.
Needless to say, my love, I cannot wait for more of this and even if you don't wrap it up in a chapter or two, it just proves that it wasn't meant to end so soon. The show must go on and I MUST KNOW WHAT HAPPENS WITH THAT TAPE!! That's all Imma say, kluvubye!!! Can't wait for the next installment, Dear! Fabulous, as always!
Date: 03/08/12 11:02 am Title: Chapter 29
I really the twins part.
Author's Response: Glad you liked it. Thank you for reviewing.
Date: 03/08/12 12:39 am Title: Chapter 29
That last part with the twins was so cute and sexy at the same time, the perfect mix! Incredible chapter as always! Its always exciting to read more of this fic. Thank you for this update and I can't wait to see how it all ends...
Author's Response: Thank you for such a lovely review. I was quite pleased with this chapter and especially the twins bit so I'm really happy you liked it too. Next chapter has already been started so I hope its not too long before I can post it.
Date: 03/07/12 07:39 pm Title: Chapter 29
really looking forward to more
please update soon
Author's Response: Happy that you enjoyed this chapter. Next one is about halfway written, though I'm not too pleased with it so may have to pull it apart and rewrite chunks. Hopefully it won't be too long before it's ready for posting. Thank you for reading and reviewing.
Date: 03/01/12 02:41 pm Title: Chapter 28
Great chapter once again. You make your readers go through so many emotions and I really admire that! Thanks for this update !
Date: 02/29/12 03:49 pm Title: Chapter 28
AMAZING!!!!!!! Totally loved this amazing update!!!!!!!!
Author's Response: Wow! What a great review. Thank you so much. Glad you're enjoying it. Hopefully not too long until the next chapter.
Date: 02/28/12 07:01 pm Title: Chapter 28
cant wait for more
please update soon
love this
Author's Response: I'm working on the next one right now. I'm on a bit of a roll at the moment so hopefully the next chapter will be posted quite soon. No promises, but it's tripping off the ends of my fingers at an amazing rate. Thank you for your continued support. I'm so happy that you've followed my story from the start. And thanks for reviewing regularly. It means so much to me.
Date: 02/28/12 06:01 pm Title: Chapter 28
That was a really awesome idea. Video for bugged recordings. This was an awesome way to get the recording device out of the twin's room, though I do pity poor Georg.
Oh God, and when David had to tell of his relationship with Ralph in front of the G's, my heart just melted at how understanding and greatful they were to him. Lisa should be quite thankful that they are giving her the opportunity to catch the murderer and just lay off the twins just to have another case.
Gustav was awesome here, so fierce and protective of his bandmembers. I loved the part where you compared him to a werewolf, that was really creative. I just hope she backs off and everything works out in the favor of the twins and the band. Great work, Helen. There's so many twists and turns to this story, yet you're right on track, as always. I can't wait until your next chapter, when Ben Judd wakes up to Officer Munroe with her big, nosy-er, uh...nose in his face to have him questioned about the murder case. I hope Ralph and his pet get exactly what's coming to them. Okay, so I liked this chapter a bit too much maybe, because it's gettin' intense in my brain now. Geez!!! See what the fuck you do to me??? See? SEEEEEEE???? Need next chapter now!!! J/K, take as long as you need, but this is proving to be one helluva murder mystery!!!
Author's Response: Oh, sweetie, video in exchange for the recording equipment, if only it was that easy. There's a little twist coming in that scheme. I'm so happy you liked Gustav, I'm enjoying writing him with those hidden depths. Because he's the quiet one in public it's nice to portray him as someone with intelligence and with a fierce loyalty to his friends in private. I'm well into writing the next chapter. Not a 100% sure how it's going to play out but lots of ideas so I might have to play around with more than one version before I decide exactly how its going to go. But I can't seem to put it down at the moment so hopefully the next update will be quite soon. Thanks again for your wonderful reviews. Sorry if I get you too involved in the story...no, I'm not, it's great that I can affect someone that way. It makes all the hard work worthwhile.