Date: 11/02/11 01:47 pm Title: 13. The confidant
Loved it! Can't wait to see what will happen next!
Date: 11/02/11 06:26 am Title: 11. What friends are really for
Loved it!
Date: 11/02/11 04:56 am Title: 10. A little competition is good for you
Loved it!
Date: 11/02/11 04:19 am Title: 9. Shades of grey
Loved it!
Date: 11/02/11 03:53 am Title: 8. Something beautiful
Loved it!
Date: 11/02/11 03:24 am Title: 7. If love is blind
Loved it!
Date: 11/02/11 02:59 am Title: 6. One heart beat, lost in the crowd
Loved it!
Date: 11/02/11 02:41 am Title: 5. Timing is everything
Loved it!
Date: 11/02/11 01:35 am Title: 3. Love is worth the fall
Loved it!
Date: 11/02/11 12:49 am Title: 1. I must be dreaming
Loved it!
Date: 08/01/11 08:13 pm Title: 6. One heart beat, lost in the crowd
i wasnt sure about this when i first started it, but i really like it now. thank you
Date: 08/01/11 04:57 am Title: 5. Timing is everything
Oops! Are they really going to run away? Why hadn't Bill showed up at all? So many questions that need an answer...please write more!
Author's Response: You'll just have to wait, won't you? All will be revealed in good time my dear ;)
Date: 07/27/11 09:55 am Title: 4. War paint
This is also how I'd picture Bill be at his first date with Carrie. Half formal, but in the end, going for his real childish self. She is insecure, sure she is, anyone would. But he is so good at making her feel perfectly happy...Girls like her deserve boys like him...PS: I'd so love to get to call him a nerd, a cute nerd that needs love lol.
Author's Response: Oh God I know! I would love to be able to talk to him, just for a few moments...but I'm one of those girls that would get all panicky and maybe start talking gibberish to him. I saw him when I was on holiday once and froze on the spot...rnFor me, Bill is like Carrie's polar opposite: he's confident without being over the top, he's in control but still hiding secret heartaches...OH, I may have said too much ^-^ x
Date: 07/27/11 08:53 am Title: 3. Love is worth the fall
I can relate perfectly with this Carrie, with her doubts, her fears, as well as with her happiness after that night. I can also understand why she feared Bill would like Rachel more, and I adore Bill for being constant and patient with Carrie, and I admire her courage of confessing him her doubts so openly (I know I would have been too proud to do that, but she was so sincere, it melted my heart...)If you love writing this, I certainly love reading it, so don't stop!
Author's Response: There is no way that I can leave this fic until it's finished now...I've even started to write backwards (the last chapter is already written and awaiting its time)and I'm so glad that there is someone out there that I know has actually read this, someone that can actually relate to the slightly darker sides of my pysche x
Date: 07/27/11 08:20 am Title: 2. Tuned in
To tell you the truth, I've never understood that "love at first sight" thing.I 've always doubted i'd be able to trust someone from the first moment, enough to fall in love. But I have neither denied it can happen to other people, so I'll give Bill and Carrie a chance, they must be very confident in their instincts to do that. Some authors think that sex doesn't matter (well, at least in the story)but it is important how, when and why it happens, don't you think? What I mean is that their first night together, no matter how rushed it may seem, had its part in the complicated thing called fate.I loved everything about this chap, including Bill, Carrie and even Tom's few final words. I guess everything falls right into place in this story...
Author's Response: I really enjoy getting feedack from you...and i totally agree about the whole sex thing, I mean, Tom teases Bill about "breaking his rule" about one night stands but it just sets the entire tone for the following chapters. He sees Carrie as something different, an excuse to play by a different rule book (forgive me for quoting my fic). But...I'm five chapters in now...things can change x
Date: 07/27/11 06:06 am Title: 1. I must be dreaming
To my shame, I started reading this story with the last chapter, which I usually never do. But it was enough to make me want to start properly, which I did. And I'm not sorry, your story is written all so naturally and warmly, I write here too, but this honest unforced breath you're bringing here is what I have always been looking for. This is so close to a real situation and her feelings, as well as his are so well described, that all I can say it was a pleasure reading. I don't expect you to have many comments though, not because you write badly, but just as this is a rare treat, the ones enjoying it are rare too. I wouldn't mind that if I were you though, because the quality matters, not the quantity. I hope you'll keep that in mind and keep posting as soon as you can! Now let me get to the second chap...
Author's Response: I'm not going to lie, my heart skipped a beat when I read your comment because you have pretty much the same idea as me: It doesn't matter how many people read it, as long as the people that do, enjoy it. I've always thought like that and always will do. I find solace in my writing and I'm glad that there are people out there that can share that feeling with me. Thank you SO much x
Date: 07/26/11 11:40 am Title: 3. Love is worth the fall
I love it! Lol! I'm wondering if she's really obsessed...or just paranoid--but there's a reason right? Lol! Nothing medical...
Lol! JK --I have a twisted humor so bear with me as I type this....
But don't let it stop you! Lol! Continue--you have something here
Author's Response: Oh just you wait, if you love this you're going to love what's coming...although, I'm starting to worry about my own psyche when writing this. I mean, it's terrifying how easily the ideas for later chapters came to me...but you'll just have to look out for those ^-^