Date: 02/23/15 06:34 pm Title: Chapter 2
This is so fucking good, you can't just stop there! You have to write more to this, pleeeeease!
That bit in the club where Bill reaches out for the lights and then Fler grabs his hand. That's brilliant. Like, this is so original- like i said, it's a storyline that i see around but you've made it so original, unlike the others. Come on man, pleeeeeeeeease write more!
Date: 02/23/15 04:46 pm Title: Chapter 1
I loved the metaphor of the butterfly and spiderweb and how you brought it back to that in the end.
This was so good! I've read loads of this kind of story, but none of them stood out like this did and had me sticking around for the whole thing. I can't decide what exactly about it but it was really well written and not too fast and all over the place like a lot are! And i'm a fan of longer chapters, so maybe that's why. Anyway, i'm excited to see what the next chapter has in store!
Date: 08/13/12 09:46 pm Title: Chapter 1
TBC,ONLY IF BILL IS BEATEN TO WITHIN AN INCH OF HIS LIFE.... THEN SAVED!
Date: 05/18/12 06:47 pm Title: Chapter 2
this is whoa o.o I hope you keep it goin!
Date: 03/08/12 04:21 pm Title: Chapter 2
I'm so in love with this story!
I really hope you'll continue it :D
Date: 11/13/11 12:08 am Title: Chapter 2
I like this story. It's so a guilty pleasure for me. :)
Date: 11/12/11 06:30 pm Title: Chapter 2
*sigh* This is reallöy hard. I'm having very mixed feelings about this, not sure how to feel. While I do like to read twins getting treated roughly at times, evenm raped, and all kind of twisted shit is welcomed, I just can'ty cope withy Bill and Tom treating each other badly. It breaks my heart. Anyopne else but them.
The first scene was surprisingly hot, I was surpsised. I've never befopre found self-sucking hot, but this made exception. The last scene left me really sad. Tom should have cared, he should have intervened. Jesus. *sigh*
You are really messing with my mind. :D
Date: 11/11/11 05:51 am Title: Chapter 2
that last scene makes me sad ;_;
anyhow, this is one of the best. usually stories with a lot of sex scene don't make much effort with grammars, writing style and good plot but you have it all, finely. I'm looking forward for your update :D
Date: 11/10/11 11:44 am Title: Chapter 1
Brilliantly sordid. Looking forward to reading more.
Date: 11/10/11 04:57 am Title: Chapter 2
It was awsome *-* I wanna read sooo much more of it.
Date: 11/10/11 03:41 am Title: Chapter 2
Flashback was painful to read DX
Mm, there *were* some spelling errors..
Why do I keep reading this tragedy of woe? Tell me why, woman! :O
Date: 11/10/11 02:25 am Title: Chapter 2
he. sucked. himself o_o seems so odd, something that I had ever seen in Scary Movie, but it is unimaginable if Bill who did it...
btw, the touch of jealousy makes it more interesting :)
Date: 11/09/11 11:57 pm Title: Chapter 2
oh god...wonderful chapter. And thanks for clearing the 'rule' up.
Date: 11/09/11 11:29 pm Title: Chapter 2
They´re going to have a threesome or sorts right? hahahahaha
Damnit, I´m tired, nothing interesting is coming out of my mind right now. I better go
Read you soon :)
Date: 11/09/11 11:17 pm Title: Chapter 2
You must've know that I reread this yesterday and hoped for an update! :D
Date: 11/08/11 07:42 pm Title: Chapter 1
Oh god yes I want some more ... so much more. New chapter, please!!!
Date: 08/28/11 10:11 pm Title: Chapter 1
MOREMOREMOREMOREMORE I've had a prostitute/customer story idea in my head for months and I just don't know enough about hookers and stuff so after I read this, it really helped and you're awesome at writing 8)
Date: 08/16/11 03:58 pm Title: Chapter 1
Ho my god..
I just want to read more more more...
I love this story *_*
Date: 07/31/11 02:18 pm Title: Chapter 1
I shouldn't like this...I shouldn't like this...oh hell! I like this! More please!
Date: 07/27/11 06:25 am Title: Chapter 1
yes pliz continue <3 its so awesome!